ShaKhi OS: The Torment (1/04) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Akshu🤗

Thank you so much to inform me about your OS😳

It's short and beautiful👏❤️

I really liked the way he is trying to calm himself and figuring out his emotions👍🏼

After the disaster I have undergone from my previous and favourite male lead I have decided never to get attached emotionally with any of the male leads evenif so , I would never discuss about it in any forum...to save myself from heartbreaks🤣...so I won't comment about the leads here too especially shaurya🤣

 But I honestly felt bad when he felt that only anokhi can erase all his torments💔

I hope you write more and more such beautiful OS😳

Whenever you write it,please send me link too okay😳

Love you❤️

Krishna 🤗

Thank you so much for making time for this comment!! I know you have been occupied... Sabka wahi haal hai Krishna!! Waha toh everyone is heartbroken! We are trying mend our 💔

I will write ASAP and send u links for sure!! 

Originally posted by: wamavasant

It is beautifully written ❤️

I loved reading it 

The shaurya of your OS gave me real SS vibes...

Heart break ho gya uski condition pe but he always behaves like douche in jealousy huhh 

Anokhi needs to punch him hard 😡

Anyway loved it 🤗

Thank you Wama ❤️❤️

Tumko real SS wali vibe aayi, isse bada compliment mere liye kuch nahi ho sakta!! Thank you so much!! 😃 Anokhi ek din thappad jad hi degi agar aise zidd karta raha toh 😆 Aaj dekha na kaise chup kara diya 🤣 

Originally posted by: Gurveen

😆 
love this jealous shaurya 

Thank you for reading and commenting!! 😃

Originally posted by: Cherrydreamsxx

You have so beautifully written his thoughts and angst. The fear of losing his Anokhi. ❤️

Thanks a lot!! I am glad to know you liked it!! 😛

Originally posted by: anamika365

Lovely ❤️

The best part of the OS --- The constant fear that she might not want me? That she likes him? Fear that I cannot be by her side forever?

He will be a whole new person when he is deeply in love and secure in his relationship.

He hated how it brought out these hideous feelings he did not want. --- If Shaurya even remotely understands this sentiment, he will actively try to be a better person and specifically treat her far better.

Keep writing 🤗

Thank you, Anamika! ❤️

Absolutely!!! I think the moment he has some sort of assurance that his feelings are returned equally, he will stabilize. And he is work in progress when it comes to his anger!! He has started to realize that he needs to calm down before talking to her 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Res

Aa na.. 

Aa bhi jaa na

Intezaari hai teri 

🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: AK_2010

When a reader says that they felt the character, nothing else can be more relieving for a writer! Thank you so much! ❤️❤️ I will write asap and until then u can read my other works if you haven't  😊

I have read all of your works and I loved them all, as I was a newbie then and I was allowed to do limited post so I could not appreciate your works in comments but know that I have loved them all, and I have written one os as well and all of you guys who writes os, ts or ff gave me inspiration to try my hands on writing, so thank you for motivating me to finally start writing, mine is still mediocre but I hope I will improve day by day, love ❤

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Yeh night beet ke kafi din ho gaye nahi? 😆😆

Koi na... Tum rest karo hum wait karte hai 🤗

😆

Haa 

Bohot der Ki lekin Unres kar hi diya 😳😆

You blessed me with so many one shots that  I got lost in them 

Thank you 🤗

I’m feeling better now 😳

Totally up for reading OS I left on  RES 🙈🤣

Wonderfully written👌👌

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Res 🙊

P.S I Will unres all the reserved posts 🙈

Wait till night 😅 

thank you 🤗😅😭🤣

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Found my res 

Meri night 5 days  late hui 🙈

😭🤣

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Jealous Shaurya pe OS 

Yay 

I love reading OS on Jealous MLs ☺️idk why 😆

Shaurya here was totally in character 

Over thinking about Ahir and Anokhi’s actions and intentions but not his  this guy🤔

Kanchan nahi hoti toh yeh tubelight bhi late flicker hoti 😅🤣

Instead of usual couple  fights and Mls aggression  I loved how you described his inner turmoil 💯

My favourite line : 

The one who had become Salve to his Wounds. 

So many feels 🥰✨

Maine aaj dekha yeh 🤣

Chalo tune padha toh sahi! Thank you god! 

I think Shaurya is a drama queen! He overthinks everything 😆

Kanchan ke pati ko vapas lao kyuki she does not know about privacy at all  Jab dekho loudspeaker ki tarah chalu ho jati hai 

Thank you for reading Sakshi ❤️