The Sinister - a Virat Chavan TS(Chapter 3 updated on page 9) - Page 2

Nicely written!!!

Everything we go through leaves a mark on us.... Virat is no different.... Poor child.... Being part of so much not positive environment does damage your thinking process....

Hopefully sai returns back to him in the next part....

You wrote it soo well that it made me kinda sad...

Continue soon!!!

Woow that was so sad. Virat's awful childhood. 😭 

This was so beautifully written that I actually felt bad. 😒

I would love to see how he gets his Sai back and what's his current dynamic with the family. 

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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Won't forgive you for making me cry.😭 

Thank you for tagging me. But please don't tag me for the next update. Some of this is personal for me.

@bold

I am so sorry, didn't mean to, I am really sorry, please forgive me. 

Your welcome. Don't worry I won't, I understand 🙂

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Nicely written!!!

Everything we go through leaves a mark on us.... Virat is no different.... Poor child.... Being part of so much not positive environment does damage your thinking process....

Hopefully sai returns back to him in the next part....

You wrote it soo well that it made me kinda sad...

Continue soon!!!

Thank you very much. ❤

Yeah, that is just I wanted to show, non supportive environment itself can cause much damage. 

Will do continue. 

Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion

Woow that was so sad. Virat's awful childhood. 😭 

This was so beautifully written that I actually felt bad. 😒

I would love to see how he gets his Sai back and what's his current dynamic with the family. 

Thank you very much❤

Will do try to bring in Sai and show the dynamics🙂

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

@bold

I am so sorry, didn't mean to, I am really sorry, please forgive me. 

Your welcome. Don't worry I won't, I understand 🙂

And you are a brilliant writer. Sorry again. ❤️

Nice!!!!I I always wanted to know why Virat is like this & how was his childhood the backstory of Jeeva & Sheeva....does Virat feel inferior to Samrat or are they considered equal in Chavaan Niwas.....so many questions I have but luckily you are writing a TS so looking forward to read your creativity & perspective on Virat baby❤️This forum really fascinates me tbh....getting to read something new every day💞

loved it. you have captured essence of chavan nivas perfectly. please continue soon.❤️❤️❤️

It is so beautiful. So heart touching and I really felt bad for Virat!!!! Please do continue soon

Great job dear!!!👍🏻👍🏻