The Sinister - a Virat Chavan TS(Chapter 3 updated on page 9)

Posted: 3 years ago

Ok ,so this is just a try. Sorry if turns out bad.

Sai and Virat have already separated.

Here it goes.

************

Crowd? Lots of people. What was he doing over here. What was this place. A shop. What is this. What was happening. He slowly entered into the shop infront of him. And the scene infront shocked Virat. It was...it was him. With his family. But he was very young over here. He may be 5 or 6 . But how can he be at two places at a time. What was happening over here? 

He observed something was going on over there, he decided to move and observe the scene. Most of the family was with Samrat ,pampering him,getting him whatever he was asking for. But him,his younger version,he was standing over there, alone, behind everyone,waiting for his turn to choose clothes. No one was paying him heed. Samrat got everything which he wanted. And everyone was about to leave and the younger Virat chirped in. 

(The following conversation will involve a younger Virat)

"Kaku mujhe?"he injected with a huge smile on his face.

To which kaku rolled her eyes and pulled out a ramdom shirt and thrust it in his hands.

"Ye lo,yeh tumhaare liye" said kaku. He looked at his shirt and replied "par kaku mujhe yeh pasand nahi aaya".

"Virat ,chup chap ise lo aur chalo yaha se,bahut der ho gaya" kaku replied a bit pissed.

"Par kaku,mujhe ye nahi pasand aaya, mujhe woh red waali chahiye,Samrat ko toh aapne sab kuch dilaaya"

THAP,the moment he said these words ,kaku slapped him on his mouth ,twice, infront of everyone.

"Bado se zabaan ladaata hai, aur teri himmat kaise hui apne bade bhai ke baare mein aise baat karne ki, apne laadle ko sambhaalo Ashwini,tameez bhool gaya hai yeh".

Kaku was about to slap him again, but aai came forward and shielded him. "Vaini ,baccha hai,woh bhi chota sa , jaane dijiye na" she said while hugging him.

"Mast a mast, dono maa bete milkar bas yahi karte raho",and she went from there blabbering something.

Ninad who was standing behind came forward and began to scold in a low voice ,"Mein tang aa gaya hun tum dono se , aur tumhara toh mein kya karu Virat, kab sudhroge, kuch karoge bhi zindagi mein ya aise hi har jagah meri naak katwaate rahoge".

"Par baba, mujhe toh bas woh red waala chahiye tha" he said with tears in his eyes while still hugging his aai. His baba was about to raise his hand and he closed his eyes in fear. But his aai interjected,

"Ninad ,tum jaao yaha se,mein Virat ko samjha lungi".

His baba went from there after giving an ugly look to him and aai. The moment his baba went away ,he began to sob.

"Aai, baba mujhse pyaar nahi karte hai kya?, woh kabhi mujhe kuch nahi dilaate".

Aai kneeled down and wiped his tears,"Aisa nahi bolte godu, tujhe woh laal waali pasand haina,mein agli baar dilaungi ha ,woh bhi do do,pakka, abhi yeh shirt haina,yeh bhi bahut aacha hai,ha ,bura mat maan na godu,mera pyaara baccha haina tu"

Virat looked at the short in his hand and then towards Samrat , he envied him,why was he getting everything,because he was older. He was thinking this,when his aai chirped in.

"Theek haina godu". 

"Aapne pichli baar bhi yahi kaha tha aai" ,he handed that shirt to aai and went away.

And suddenly everything dissappeared and only darkness was surrounding . He was confused now,where did his younger version go. And suddenly his younger version came on front of him,but his younger self began screaming at the top of his voice

"SAB TUMHAARI WAJAH SE HUA HAI,TUM HAMESHA CHUP THE,HUMESHA.."

And he was shocked ,he could not process ,what was happening?what is all this,his brain was going into a overdrive, ......

And suddenly Virat opened his eyes, he was in the car, travelling? It was a.... dream. He might have slept on his way back to Nagpur, as he had gone to Pune due to a case. Virat closed his eyes and leaned back on his seat again. This was becoming ridiculous now. It was only dreams of Sai leaving and accusing him in his dreams till today. 4 months had passed since Sai left him. But today it involved him,and it was not a dream ,it was more of a recollection of the past,cuz this was a past incident ,which had took place when he was 5 years . But why was he dreaming it now? Why this incident? . Was the guilt of not being able to stop Sai,bring Sai back enough. Was the pain that his own family betrayed him,and used him to separate Pulkit and tai ,how they sent Sai out of the house in his absense,not enough. Wasn't Samrat coming back and avoiding him, and Pakhi accusing him of her fate and pain ,her divorce with Samrat,not enough,when she herself had demanded it from Samrat in the first place,that his own painful past was coming back haunting him . What did he ever do?. And why did he not trust Sai ,and immediately went to bring her back when his family told him that they ousted his wife.Why didnt he dig in.? Why did Sai leave him? Why isn't his jeeva speaking to him? Virat Chavan was thinking of his life . He was alone. Irony,wasn't he always. And he smiled a mocking smile to himself. And as the drive continued,dont know again when he fell asleep.

(Dream)

Home. When did he reach home. Its already night. But when. He heard some noises from above. It was from his parents room . What happened now? He rushed upstairs. When he reached there,,he was dumb founded. These were not his parents , as in these were very young. They were bickering of something.

"Aai" Virat called. But she didnt even turn. She instead went out of the room.

Then he heard a voice, "Aaai,babaaaa,aap gaye,dekho mujhe kya mila hai" ,someone came in,his 8-year old version?

He(8 -year old) came running and bounced up and down on the bed.(the coming scenes will have the young Virat)

"Virat,tumhare manners kaha hai,kitni baar kaha hai, aise harkaten mat kiya karo,utro neeche" ,Ninad Chavan chided him.

"Par baba ,yeh dekhiye ,mujhe first prize mila hai" and he began to show off the trophy.

"Accha,kis mein?" asked Ninad getting a bit curious.

"Music competition mein baba,aapko pata Subodh bhaiya ne...."

"Kya kaha,music competition mein?" roared Ninad.

Little Virat suddenly got scared and became silent,

"Ha...haan baba,first prize" he said in a timid voice.

"Tumne music competition mein participate kiya tha,par kyu?" questioned Ninad sternly.

He stood silent.

"Kuch pucha hai,Virat?"

He shook a bit and answered, "Mujhe music bohot pasand hai baba"

Ninad became very angry at this . "Tumhare aai ne bigaad ke rakh diya hai tumhe, ye music waghera se kuch nahi hota hai Virat,apne jaise banana chahti hai tumhe. Chavan khaandan ke bete ho tum,mere beta aise ,chi. Music ,sachme. Arre Samrat ko dekho,hamesha sports aur studies mein first aata hain....."

Till then his Aai came in, and Ninad went and held her hand tightly and dragged her into the room pulling her.

"Ninad ,chodo,Virat hai,uske saamne ....."aai began to speak slowly.

"Kyu? Tumhare bete ko bhi pata chalne do ki nikambe logo ke saath kaisa sulu hota hai".

Aai struggled and freed herself,and gave an ugly look to Ninad. She turned towards Virat and smiled slightly,

"Kya hua hai bada?"

Virat slowly showed her the trophy.

"Arre waah,mere godu ko prize mila hai...."

"Music competition mein. Pata nahi iss ladke ka kya hoga,aur yeh prize..." Ninad Chavan snatched the trophy and put it in the dustbin. He then went and pulled a really frightened Virat down the bed and dragged him ,

"Sunlo Virat,aise prize ko iss ghar mein jagah aur zaroorat dono nahi hai,dhang ka prize laaye bina yaha dikhaane ke liye aane ke baare sochna bhi mat. Aise prizes mile bhi ho ,toh unhe raaste mein hi phek ke aana,samjhe"

Virat was very shocked.

"Samjhe" Ninad roared.

He nodded and went towards his room.

At some point of time in the night, his aai came in slowly to his room ,he was still awake.

"Godu,ye le..." his Aai forwarded  his trophy.He took it slowly. 

"Mujhe bohot accha laga hai godu ki tujhe music mein first place mila hai,tukhe pata hai tere nanaji ko bhi music pasand tha."his aai smiled at him.

Virat went to hold her hand and she hissed. Virat felt very bad.

"Sorry aai ,ye sab meri vajah se hua hai" ,and tears welled up in his eyes. 

"Arre nahi bada,ye toh koyi aur chot hai, chinta mat kar,yu thik hojaayega" and wiped his tears.

"Abhi chal ,mein chalti hu,sambhaalke rakh ise,theek hai,aur ab so ja" ,aai kissed his forehead and went from his room.

As soon as his Aai went away, he observed that trophy ,his aai was in pain because of this,his baba punished his aai as he had did a mistake. So ,he will rectify it. He took that trophy ,went towards the dustbin and threw it himself. 

His younger came to him (the older one,our Virat), "last time yeh trophy dekhoge,dekhlo"he told him,and went to bed.

Virat was shocked ,how could he speak to himself. 

Before he could contemplate, everything turned dark and he opened his eyes.

The dream broke,he again had fell asleep and again these horrendous dreams....no,recollection of the past,again,Virat thought painfully. But,why suddenly today?

He always loved music,but he was not permitted to love it. After a few days he had bought a new trophy,this time for sports ,in football, and suddenly everyone loved him. His baba too. He remembered that day,

"Dekha vaini,mera beta first aaya hai ,sports mein,I am proud of you Virat, Chalo isse tumhare room mein rakhte hain"

" Nahi baba,aap isse apne room mein rakhiye",he smiled .

"Kyun Virat?"kaku had questioned him.

"Yeh maine baba ke liye jeeta hain kaku"

"Mast a mast,waah ninad, tumhara beta kitna samjhdaar hai,kuch seekh Mohit apne bade bhai se"

"Theek hai,isse mere room mein rakhenge".

(Normal Virat in car)

Well,wasnt that the truth,all his trophies and medals were in his fathers room, cuz he had won them for his father,not for himself. So that his father stays satisfied and his mother.....safe.

He had understood the dynamics after that day. You want to stay happy,make them satisfied.  He forgot music and studied hard. He also began to win prizes, and in return got .....peace. Did he? Virat closed his eyes while thinking this.

Soon ,Samrat and he also got sorted and became jeeva and shiva.

His father was proud of him,for sure,and ....loved him,maybe. Did he love him,or his aai? People would question him than how he called his father his best friend. He remembered when all of this began.......

*********

Okay ,so had thought something ,involving some things,it was a random idea. 

So,pls bear with this crap.

Just for Viru.

Pls,share your honest opinions,I actually wanted it to be a OS, but something's are left. So maybe a TS. 

As I said,good or bad ,let me know. I am open to everything.😊

❤❤❤

Tagging a few, sorry if I couldn't for some. Pls,dont mind,do look through if you can and share your opinions. 😊

Posted: 3 years ago

Aww...My heart goes out to Virat....😢 I hope he realizes that with Sai, he can be what he wants to be. Be his inner child, the music lover, he can demand attention from her and be possessive too. Baaki koi usko ahmiyat na deh, Sai humesha degi, but he needs to bring her back... 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Shristhi2002


Ok ,so this is just a try. Sorry if turns out bad.

Sai and Virat have already separated.

Here it goes.

************

Crowd? Lots of people. What was he doing over here. What was this place. A shop. What is this. What was happening. He slowly entered into the shop infront of him. And the scene infront shocked Virat. It was...it was him. With his family. But he was very young over here. He may be 5 or 6 . But how can he be at two places at a time. What was happening over here? 

He observed something was going on over there, he decided to move and observe the scene. Most of the family was with Samrat ,pampering him,getting him whatever he was asking for. But him,his younger version,he was standing over there, alone, behind everyone,waiting for his turn to choose clothes. No one was paying him heed. Samrat got everything which he wanted. And everyone was about to leave and the younger Virat chirped in. 

(The following conversation will involve a younger Virat)

"Kaku mujhe?"he injected with a huge smile on his face.

To which kaku rolled her eyes and pulled out a ramdom shirt and thrust it in his hands.

"Ye lo,yeh tumhaare liye" said kaku. He looked at his shirt and replied "par kaku mujhe yeh pasand nahi aaya".

"Virat ,chup chap ise lo aur chalo yaha se,bahut der ho gaya" kaku replied a bit pissed.

"Par kaku,mujhe ye nahi pasand aaya, mujhe woh red waali chahiye,Samrat ko toh aapne sab kuch dilaaya"

THAP,the moment he said these words ,kaku slapped him on his mouth ,twice, infront of everyone.

"Bado se zabaan ladaata hai, aur teri himmat kaise hui apne bade bhai ke baare mein aise baat karne ki, apne laadle ko sambhaalo Ashwini,tameez bhool gaya hai yeh".

Kaku was about to slap him again, but aai came forward and shielded him. "Vaini ,baccha hai,woh bhi chota sa , jaane dijiye na" she said while hugging him.

"Mast a mast, dono maa bete milkar bas yahi karte raho",and she went from there blabbering something.

Ninad who was standing behind came forward and began to scold in a low voice ,"Mein tang aa gaya hun tum dono se , aur tumhara toh mein kya karu Virat, kab sudhroge, kuch karoge bhi zindagi mein ya aise hi har jagah meri naak katwaate rahoge".

"Par baba, mujhe toh bas woh red waala chahiye tha" he said with tears in his eyes while still hugging his aai. His baba was about to raise his hand and he closed his eyes in fear. But his aai interjected,

"Ninad ,tum jaao yaha se,mein Virat ko samjha lungi".

His baba went from there after giving an ugly look to him and aai. The moment his baba went away ,he began to sob.

"Aai, baba mujhse pyaar nahi karte hai kya?, woh kabhi mujhe kuch nahi dilaate".

Aai kneeled down and wiped his tears,"Aisa nahi bolte godu, tujhe woh laal waali pasand haina,mein agli baar dilaungi ha ,woh bhi do do,pakka, abhi yeh shirt haina,yeh bhi bahut aacha hai,ha ,bura mat maan na godu,mera pyaara baccha haina tu"

Virat looked at the short in his hand and then towards Samrat , he envied him,why was he getting everything,because he was older. He was thinking this,when his aai chirped in.

"Theek haina godu". 

"Aapne pichli baar bhi yahi kaha tha aai" ,he handed that shirt to aai and went away.

And suddenly everything dissappeared and only darkness was surrounding . He was confused now,where did his younger version go. And suddenly his younger version came on front of him,but his younger self began screaming at the top of his voice

"SAB TUMHAARI WAJAH SE HUA HAI,TUM HAMESHA CHUP THE,HUMESHA.."

And he was shocked ,he could not process ,what was happening?what is all this,his brain was going into a overdrive, ......

And suddenly Virat opened his eyes, he was in the car, travelling? It was a.... dream. He might have slept on his way back to Nagpur, as he had gone to Pune due to a case. Virat closed his eyes and leaned back on his seat again. This was becoming ridiculous now. It was only dreams of Sai leaving and accusing him in his dreams till today. 4 months had passed since Sai left him. But today it involved him,and it was not a dream ,it was more of a recollection of the past,cuz this was a past incident ,which had took place when he was 5 years . But why was he dreaming it now? Why this incident? . Was the guilt of not being able to stop Sai,bring Sai back enough. Was the pain that his own family betrayed him,and used him to separate Pulkit and tai ,how they sent Sai out of the house in his absense,not enough. Wasn't Samrat coming back and avoiding him, and Pakhi accusing him of her fate and pain ,her divorce with Samrat,not enough,when she herself had demanded it from Samrat in the first place,that his own painful past was coming back haunting him . What did he ever do?. And why did he not trust Sai ,and immediately went to bring her back when his family told him that they ousted his wife.Why didnt he dig in.? Why did Sai leave him? Why isn't his jeeva speaking to him? Virat Chavan was thinking of his life . He was alone. Irony,wasn't he always. And he smiled a mocking smile to himself. And as the drive continued,dont know again when he fell asleep.

(Dream)

Home. When did he reach home. Its already night. But when. He heard some noises from above. It was from his parents room . What happened now? He rushed upstairs. When he reached there,,he was dumb founded. These were not his parents , as in these were very young. They were bickering of something.

"Aai" Virat called. But she didnt even turn. She instead went out of the room.

Then he heard a voice, "Aaai,babaaaa,aap gaye,dekho mujhe kya mila hai" ,someone came in,his 8-year old version?

He(8 -year old) came running and bounced up and down on the bed.(the coming scenes will have the young Virat)

"Virat,tumhare manners kaha hai,kitni baar kaha hai, aise harkaten mat kiya karo,utro neeche" ,Ninad Chavan chided him.

"Par baba ,yeh dekhiye ,mujhe first prize mila hai" and he began to show off the trophy.

"Accha,kis mein?" asked Ninad getting a bit curious.

"Music competition mein baba,aapko pata Subodh bhaiya ne...."

"Kya kaha,music competition mein?" roared Ninad.

Little Virat suddenly got scared and became silent,

"Ha...haan baba,first prize" he said in a timid voice.

"Tumne music competition mein participate kiya tha,par kyu?" questioned Ninad sternly.

He stood silent.

"Kuch pucha hai,Virat?"

He shook a bit and answered, "Mujhe music bohot pasand hai baba"

Ninad became very angry at this . "Tumhare aai ne bigaad ke rakh diya hai tumhe, ye music waghera se kuch nahi hota hai Virat,apne jaise banana chahti hai tumhe. Chavan khaandan ke bete ho tum,mere beta aise ,chi. Music ,sachme. Arre Samrat ko dekho,hamesha sports aur studies mein first aata hain....."

Till then his Aai came in, and Ninad went and held her hand tightly and dragged her into the room pulling her.

"Ninad ,chodo,Virat hai,uske saamne ....."aai began to speak slowly.

"Kyu? Tumhare bete ko bhi pata chalne do ki nikambe logo ke saath kaisa sulu hota hai".

Aai struggled and freed herself,and gave an ugly look to Ninad. She turned towards Virat and smiled slightly,

"Kya hua hai bada?"

Virat slowly showed her the trophy.

"Arre waah,mere godu ko prize mila hai...."

"Music competition mein. Pata nahi iss ladke ka kya hoga,aur yeh prize..." Ninad Chavan snatched the trophy and put it in the dustbin. He then went and pulled a really frightened Virat down the bed and dragged him ,

"Sunlo Virat,aise prize ko iss ghar mein jagah aur zaroorat dono nahi hai,dhang ka prize laaye bina yaha dikhaane ke liye aane ke baare sochna bhi mat. Aise prizes mile bhi ho ,toh unhe raaste mein hi phek ke aana,samjhe"

Virat was very shocked.

"Samjhe" Ninad roared.

He nodded and went towards his room.

At some point of time in the night, his aai came in slowly to his room ,he was still awake.

"Godu,ye le..." his Aai forwarded  his trophy.He took it slowly. 

"Mujhe bohot accha laga hai godu ki tujhe music mein first place mila hai,tukhe pata hai tere nanaji ko bhi music pasand tha."his aai smiled at him.

Virat went to hold her hand and she hissed. Virat felt very bad.

"Sorry aai ,ye sab meri vajah se hua hai" ,and tears welled up in his eyes. 

"Arre nahi bada,ye toh koyi aur chot hai, chinta mat kar,yu thik hojaayega" and wiped his tears.

"Abhi chal ,mein chalti hu,sambhaalke rakh ise,theek hai,aur ab so ja" ,aai kissed his forehead and went from his room.

As soon as his Aai went away, he observed that trophy ,his aai was in pain because of this,his baba punished his aai as he had did a mistake. So ,he will rectify it. He took that trophy ,went towards the dustbin and threw it himself. 

His younger came to him (the older one,our Virat), "last time yeh trophy dekhoge,dekhlo"he told him,and went to bed.

Virat was shocked ,how could he speak to himself. 

Before he could contemplate, everything turned dark and he opened his eyes.

The dream broke,he again had fell asleep and again these horrendous dreams....no,recollection of the past,again,Virat thought painfully. But,why suddenly today?

He always loved music,but he was not permitted to love it. After a few days he had bought a new trophy,this time for sports ,in football, and suddenly everyone loved him. His baba too. He remembered that day,

"Dekha vaini,mera beta first aaya hai ,sports mein,I am proud of you Virat, Chalo isse tumhare room mein rakhte hain"

" Nahi baba,aap isse apne room mein rakhiye",he smiled .

"Kyun Virat?"kaku had questioned him.

"Yeh maine baba ke liye jeeta hain kaku"

"Mast a mast,waah ninad, tumhara beta kitna samjhdaar hai,kuch seekh Mohit apne bade bhai se"

"Theek hai,isse mere room mein rakhenge".

(Normal Virat in car)

Well,wasnt that the truth,all his trophies and medals were in his fathers room, cuz he had won them for his father,not for himself. So that his father stays satisfied and his mother.....safe.

He had understood the dynamics after that day. You want to stay happy,make them satisfied.  He forgot music and studied hard. He also began to win prizes, and in return got .....peace. Did he? Virat closed his eyes while thinking this.

Soon ,Samrat and he also got sorted and became jeeva and shiva.

His father was proud of him,for sure,and ....loved him,maybe. Did he love him,or his aai? People would question him than how he called his father his best friend. He remembered when all of this began.......

*********

Okay ,so had thought something ,involving some things,it was a random idea. 

So,pls bear with this crap.

Just for Viru.

Pls,share your honest opinions,I actually wanted it to be a OS, but something's are left. So maybe a TS. 

As I said,good or bad ,let me know. I am open to everything.😊

❤❤❤

Tagging a few, sorry if I couldn't for some. Pls,dont mind,do look through if you can and share your opinions. 😊



fab!! this is fab!! I had tears in my eyes... these scenes would make so much sense of why virat is the way he is!!! Do continue!! amazing shristhi!! ❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Fruitcustard_9


Very nicely written❤️


Keep writing more 

Thank you very much. Will do.❤

Maybe its next part will be after a day or two❤

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Svt611




fab!! this is fab!! I had tears in my eyes... these scenes would make so much sense of why virat is the way he is!!! Do continue!! amazing shristhi!! ❤️

Thank you so much yaar,random thought tha. Just wanted to know from his viewpoint once❤

@bold

Sorry,didnt intend to, but it is a compliment for sure🤗

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Shristhi2002


Thank you so much yaar,random thought tha. Just wanted to know from his viewpoint once❤

@bold

Sorry,didnt intend to, but it is a compliment for sure🤗


achche asun the!! 

Posted: 3 years ago

[QUOTE=neeraja91]

Aww...My heart goes out to Virat....😢 I hope he realizes that with Sai, he can be what he wants to be. Be his inner child, the music lover, he can demand attention from her and be possessive too. Baaki koi usko ahmiyat na deh, Sai humesha degi, but he needs to bring her back... 

[/QUOTE

Thankyou very much.

Yeah,he can be him with Sai,and the show itself shows it sometimes. Will try to bring in Sai for you❤

Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful OS, keep writing more❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Andy3456


Beautiful OS, keep writing more❤️

Thank you very much,will do❤



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