Sampatra/ Sairat FF- Najwa (Heartburn). Chapter 11 UPDATED on page 18 - Page 2

I am so delighted to read the way Pakhi has started to untangle her feelings and kick off the devil sitting on her shoulder ❤️

I hope we get more on SaiRat's relationship status 😆

Such a great update

So heartwarming 

Your ff is making me love patralekha a lot

Now I can't wait for samrat's return

I hope everyone is going to have an happy ending in this

I so love you ff

I am getting addicted to your writing

Please do update soon

Love the concept 🤩🤩

True n heart touching 

Pakhi ka aisa nazariya kitna sahi h 

Uska samrat ke bare me , sai ki situation  ke bare me sochna bhot sahi lgaa 

Beautiful story👍👍💯💯

Cont soon 

Want to see this patralekha samrat salunke🥰

Oh my gawwddd love love love it mannn

Never been a fan of pakhi. But this ff is soo good. Would love to know sai and virats perspectives too.  Enjoyed reading this story so much. U have a way with words. Thank u for this awesome story. Please continue. Eagerly waiting for next update❤

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This is soo heart-warming❤️the way you have arched Pakhi's character is just so touching... there's nothing wrong when you have wronged someone and are guilty of it and hence are trying to take efforts to make those wrong things alright and this what Pakhi is doing...she is genuinely sorry for her actions...her redemption from here on would truly be phenomenal... eager to see more of her development with her husband and MIL and our beloved SaiRat's too

Edited: sorry...didn't see the part 2😛...above comments are solely for part 1...let me read the part 2 

This is a great ff. A redemption arc for patralekha. Lot more realistic than the show. It is terrible that on the show she is not once shown introspecting on her actions and feeling guilty. They have made her an out n out selfish, manipulative and plain evil character who only thinks about herself. And that too by wallowing in self pity. Atleast if she had put herself first by staying strong about going home to her parents, working and fulfing her career goals that would have been good. 

Oh myyyy I love this version of Pakhi man! You are such an awesome author!

This is a such a beautiful piece of work❤️

I swear I am falling in love with pakhi here ❤️❤️❤️

I just can't explain what I feel....... So so heartwarming

If only writers can take this way ❤️

The show will soar new heights if they follow this 

I really don't have words to explain my love for this one

I have shared this with all my friends and on twitter too ❤️

I can't wait for next part 

Thankyou dil se for writing this for us