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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 44

Well geet brings socially awkward to a whole new level đŸ˜† hahahahha true...she is a unique peace...but I am glad I could create a character with its unique traits and you like the character

A suprise visit to maan’s house & she was suprised that maan’s mom did not welcome her with open arms đŸ˜• ..... let’s add slightly delusional to her list of flaws as well hahahhaha I love how we are gossiping about the heroine of the story, she is not typical mary sue but we all still love her, isnt it? ....,. What did she expect a pat on the back after telling his mom that her son is an addict .??? 

Then she waltzs into maan’s room acting like nothing happened & that she did not rat maan out to his mom. hehhehee udte huye aa gai She is so busy noticing the interior design of the house but she doesn’t notice the train wreck that she made of maan’s life by noticing his dishevelled appearance & the chaos in his room . 

She is suprised that maan is being hauled off to London & that her mom does not like her ........ is she for real ??? Maybe she is the one taking some sort of substance b/c apparently her mind isn’t working properly đŸ¤ŞđŸ¤ŁI burst out laughing at this...well dont blame her...her mind works differently...but jo bhi h apna Maan still likes her...Tedha hai par mera hai

Thank you for update 

& sorry for the late response đŸ˜ƒ


Every line is gold here...pure gold❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet continuously missing maan and when she ready to go London she found out from business news that maan is out of rehab 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh ho her thoughts,no one can compete in that,

Now when will they meet,

Looking forward to further...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Very nice update dear

Geet is missing maan

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the regular updates


Part 46

lovely update..... excellently written

sad that two months have passed and there is no contact between them

at least she searching for info on rehabs in London

ah its Valentine's Day

of cos she thinks about Maan

she is restless without him

so she went to the cliff where he took her 

well she moved into another apartment 

she is love with Maan

Geet's thoughts eloquently portrayed

hmm so she applied to be part of a 2 week seminar in London

this just shows that she wants to meet Maan

liked how she justifies her trip

wow she is on her way to UK

great that Maan is out of Rehab

why didn't he tell Geet?

she is upset.....

wonder where Maan is?

imagine if he is in India!!

update soon 

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Posted: 3 years ago

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geet is missing maan 

geet dint get any news or information about maan 

geet is cursing maan as after meeting him she is not comfortable being alone  

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 46)

Winner: Kkiran, Alamelu

Runner-ups: UmaDevi97, Khwaishfan

Special Mention:  akkub.92

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):Kkiran,Alamelu,akkub.92

 

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 

 

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Part 47

 

Geet was about to board her flight

 

Going through news and all on her phone

 

Business ki news mein ki, new deal ye wo...she skimmed through it

 

But nazar padi ki Maan ka naam ki koi deal crack ki hai Maanne and something

 

Her eyes widen

 

That jerk!

 

He is out of the rehab and didn’t even inform her

 

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Geet pohoncti hai London

 

Hotel jaake rest karti hai

 

Next day seminar karti hai

 

Seminar mein kuch friend bhi bante hain

 

Seminar ke friends plan banaate hain ki chalo seminar kebaad chalo chalo city ghumne chalte hain

 

Geet says ok

 

Full babes banke jaati hai unke saath in black leather pant,sequin blouse, wavy hair&  dark lips

 

Pub mein jaate hain

 

The pub happens to be owned by Maan

 

But Geet had just casually suggested a place

 

Aisa nahi ki she calculated ki Maan ki deal uske office meinsign hogi toh he will take his clients to this pub for drinks

 

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Maan was with his clients in the pub

 

He was fiddling with his phone when his eyes catch something at makes him lose his interest in his client's blabbering

 

He gets up, looking around

 

He locates Geet in a booth with her friends

 

He is hovering around it, not sure whether to approach ornot as she is with a group

 

She notices him but chooses to ignore

 

Ab Geet dekh nahi rahi

 

Maan kya kare

 

Waiter ko bulwaake Geet ko tissue paper pe message likh ke send karta hai ki ‘come aside’

 

Geet uthke booth se nikalti hai, but side mein nahi hoti

 

She is in clear view of her friends and his clients

 

“Why are you hear?”  

 

They say simultaneously but in varying tones

 

As Geet doesn’t answer so Maan replies-

 

M- I am here with my clients....I saw your fb post

 

She frowns

 

G-You are not in my fb

 

He looks down

 

She rolls her eyes, while folding her arms to her chest realizing that he had been stalking her social media

 

G-Jerk!

 

She is mad at him for not contacting but she is also trying to analyze if he is really ok

 

And secondly why should she get angry on him, he doesn’t matter to her

 

She argues with herself

 

Uska mann nahi contact karne ka Mujhko naa kare. I give a damn!

 

Usko koi aur mil gai hogi rehab mein

 

She turns to walk towards her booth

 

M-You…you look ravishing

 

She doesn’t reply and walks over to her booth

 

Geet baith gai apne friends ke saath

 

Kuch der baad ,Maan bhi clients ke saath side wale booth mein aa gaya

 

Geet ne kuch aur hi socha tha, his not contacting her has now pissed her off

 

Maan was giving side glances to her while they were on side-by-side booths

 

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Geet ke friends uthke khade hote hain nikalne ke liye

 

Geet Maan ke table se lag ke khadi hai, as sab nikal rahe hain...jackets pehen rahe hain baatein kar rahe hain

 

He whispers

 

M-Stay back. I will drop you

 

G-I will go with them

 

Still whispering, huh? Stand up and talk to me in open. Ask me how I am. Tell me why you didn't my contact me! This type of behavior of yours makes me feel like I am some dirty secret of yours and I want none of that thank you!

 

Geet is thinking in her mind

 

She feels she made the right choice not dating him

 

He is like how she imagined a rich brat to be

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
aparna3011 thumbnail
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Posted: 3 years ago

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nice update

geet is angery on maan as he dint tell her that he is out of rehab now 

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Posted: 3 years ago

I can't with them,they both are something else😂,Their story always makes us laugh..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update..

Continue soon..