PARt 47
Humerous update 👏👏👏
Geet’s self -talks are so entertaining 😆
Who is she arguing with?? Herself ? 😆
She has been pining for maan for 6 mos but now when he is in front of her showing interest in her , following her in fb 😆 , complimenting her ...,..... she is still clueless?? & giving him the cold shoulder
She is still upset he did not contact her but did she try to contact via social media ??
It seems like she is taking out all her frustration of her internal struggles of battling her feelings for maan towards him .........now it is not maan’s fault that he is irresistible 😆
Geet needs to stop overthinking things & rest her pretty little brain & go with the flow , & take things one step at a time
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Part 48
He whispers
M-Stay back. I will drop you
G-I will go with them
Still whispering, huh? Stand up and talk to me in open. Ask me how I am. Tell me why you didn't my contact me! This type of behavior of yours makes me feel like I am some dirty secret of yours and I want none of that thank you!
Geet is thinking in her mind
She feels she made the right choice not dating him
He is like how she imagined a rich brat to be
Geet apne friends ke saath chali jaati hai
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In the hotel room she is aggressively taking off her makeup while her eyes eyes welling up
She thinks she is an idiot ki wo yahan aayi
This stupid seminar!
She hates every moment of everything
She knows the seminar is as useful as doing a typing course
Who is she fooling?
Why should she get over anybody?
As if they had a relationship!
She just had a relationship with Piyush
There is nothing to get over
She is here for herself
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Next day
She goes for her seminar
Friends ke saath city ghumne bhi nahi jaati
She retrieves back to her room
Bekaar kapde, no makeup, normal tied hair
Ye toh reverse makeover ho gaya; the friends thought
Geet bahar khaane bhi nhi gai
Room mein jo fruits pade the wohi khaa liye
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Maan was in his thoughts after seeing Geet
It had been 6 months since he had seen Geet
No, precisely: 6 months 10 days and 23 hours
He corrected himself
He goes back to those difficult 6 months in his thoughts
He was in the rehab for 6 whole months
Alone
No communication with the outside world
He didn’t even have his mobile, no internet, no telephone…nothing
He spent the initial few days struggling, trying to convince the rehab people to let him use his phone or at least allow a call or a message
But slowly he accepted his fate
He introspected
Geet had said that she is afraid of heartbreak
Can he promise her otherwise?
No
Did he have any serious relationships?
No
Is he confident he won’t mess this up?
No
Then why is he pursuing Geet?
Is it just because she said she won’t date him?
Does he like her?
Yes
Is it enough?
No
If he likes her then how can he possibly do something which can take her closer to her worst fears
And she is right in her logic and he should respect that
So, he decided not to contact Geet anymore, no matter how matter he wants to
That’s why he never came back to India nor contacted her
He felt with time both of them will forget and move on
Geet is a practical woman
Now, it was almost a physical effort to not contact her; knowing she is in the same city, not going speaking to her , not meeting her
He knows she must be thinking of him as the villain; “the bad guy”
But it's ok, that will hurt her less
He is okay with Geet thinking like that about him
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agohi appreciate the update
Part 47
Remarkable update.... incredibly written.
well Geet is peeved with Maan
great that she goes out....
wow she is in the pub owned by Maan
looks like they were destined to meet---well more like, as i mentioned in the part Geet made the suggestion to go to this pub and it happened to be Maan's which was maybe well-researched by Geet so it was an intentional co-incidence
glad that Maan is also there
at least he saw her
not surprised that she ignores him
liked that he sent a message to her via the waiter
finally they meet and speak
of cos Maan Maan is fflg on the FB
Geet's anger with Maan is understandable
loved that he compliments her
Geet ignores him
so he wants to drop her
why is Maan whispering?
she takes it incorretly
sad that she thinks her choice was right in not dating him
will Maan be able to her opinion?
Dono ki mu hi khatam hone ka nam nahi lay rahi tu inn ki story kab start ho gi
Geet ka angry hona jaiz hai usse geet ka add pata tha kahan kam karti hai
Inki story toh chal hi rahi hai dear
Well, Geet ne research kiya phir she just convinced her friends to go to the pub jo Maan hai hai aur uss time pe jab Maan wahan ho (wo bhi researched by Geet)
Part 45
No geet you are not a just bad influence you are “walking talking disaster “😆
Wherever you go , whatever you do trouble follows....... suprised that she is a doctor & that she actually heals people but then again a lot of doctors that I have met lacked interpersonal skills .
However I did like that she put forth her thoughts toward maan re: their relationship & a possible future. She let him know about her fears & even maan did not know if he could commit ..... he thinks he is not good enough for her & geet thinks she is not good enough for him b/c he is rich . Oh boy these two both have their insecurities.......
I can’t believe maan actually left for London & geet can already feel like a part of her is missing ..... possibly your heart silly girl 😝
I was almost hoping geet would secretly kidnap him ....... now that would of been extremely interesting 😆
Thank you
Sorry again for late response 😊
“walking talking disaster “- so true🤣
a lot of doctors that I have met lacked interpersonal skills - so true
Missed your comments so so sos very much
PARt 47
Humerous update 👏👏👏
Geet’s self -talks are so entertaining 😆
Who is she arguing with?? Herself ? 😆
She has been pining for maan for 6 mos but now when he is in front of her showing interest in her , following her in fb 😆 , complimenting her ...,..... she is still clueless?? & giving him the cold shoulder
She is still upset he did not contact her but did she try to contact via social media ?? ---well she did message him, that went unread
It seems like she is taking out all her frustration of her internal struggles of battling her feelings for maan towards him .........now it is not maan’s fault that he is irresistible 😆--hahhahah true
Geet needs to stop overthinking things & rest her pretty little brain & go with the flow , & take things one step at a time -true
Thank you for pm & update 🤗
Here we go again its not like we had a relationship like no duh sherlock there was just a surfacing feeling that you would not admit. My heart goes out to Maan like he went to rehab and begged for some kind of communication but was not successful. Like his actions show he wants her but at the same time the commitment worries him but he needs to take the leap of faith maybe it will boost her confidence as well.
Part 48 👏👏
Would it have killed geet to stay & talk to maan?
She could have aired out all her grievances & confessed how she felt .
Maan could of explained the rehab situation & his inability to contact anyone
So sweet how maan counted to the hour the last time he saw her Awww 🥰
Reminded me of my husband who calculated the months, days, hours & seconds to our wedding ......😆 I was flabbergasted by his calculations but it just reminded me how sweet he truly is . If maan was counting then he truly missed her & geet missed him, hence she has not been enjoying her single days & independence.
Maan Is afraid of commitment, geet is afraid of being hurt . They both don’t think they are good enough for each other . ...... but if they have not stopped thinking about each other for 6 mos then these submerged feelings will not disappear anytime soon.
So true they never really had a true relationship but they spent a lot of time together where they started to grow feelings for each other which I believe has progressed into love ❤️.
Since both of them are pig-headed 🐷they need someone to give them a good kick in the butt to give each other a chance. 😆
Thank you di 🤗
Curious where you will lead us next with the story
48
both are living in assumption world
both neet to talk n express their feels n mind to each other
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