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Posted: 3 years ago

Slowly but surely he's starting to grow on her. He's beginning to have his presence felt even when he is absent from her radar. Charging electrons and bonding is going to take some time but the classic atom is making its moves .

Whether you are Dadu, bua savita , Smrita or Anubha or viveka, social media, no social media , this generation ,that generation , PhD , no PhD the first instinct you see someone with a  girl, oh it's the girlfriend!!! Ha Ha Ha!😆

He's absolutely not going to mind it though coz he's starting to get some footage! She's has started to think about his looks folks😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh I am so waiting to see viveka unravel and Raanav starting making his move guys.... stalking this page repeatedly inspite of being super busy.......

Nisha you have made me an addict 🥰 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Viveka is known for her equanimity. Her emotional stability, her calmness and temperament when things are trying for her is her strength and gift.

That said, the biggest battles, biggest conflicts  are internal, the ones you fight with yourself within. The choices that you make for your growth ....personal and otherwise are also yours. 


It's a double whammy for Viveka. It's not for one minute about Abhishek that's her battle.For me it's utmost a temporary conflict.  Her biggest battle is her life with Raanav in the future. 


A socialist crusader's conflict with  her personal beliefs, growth and happiness while staying married to a life of opulence in the near and foreseeable future fighting against income Inequality when her future partner is the guy who believes entrepreneurial creativity has to have enough incentive to thrive and sustain which by nature is an inequality driven concept.


 

Edited by Errrantnomad - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

happy dussehra to you all 

Wating for up date

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wealth & Philanthropy

 

When she found her sister and almost dragged her by her pony tail out of the store, Diya squealed at Kalyani around the corner, at the nook of the marbled corridor near a Fendi store

“SO did you buy it?” diya jumped up and down

She always did that Viveka cringed

“Umm.. yeah… bhai said I should get whatever I like” Kalyani held Raanav’s wrist and jumped up and down like she was some mirror image of Diya

Viveka avoided looking up at Raanav for the first time ever as the young girls gushed over each others’ shopping whispering and giggling

If he thought she was going to apologize…she wasn’t quite there yet… now…

“Hasty generalization” he muttered

She didn’t look at him but her face flamed recognizing the jab

“I know … it’s a logical fallacy” she nodded eating humble pie

She had mocked him about it at their first meeting now it was her turn

“I am sure you trust the guy you are dating” he flashed a mocking smile

“that’s none of your business… but yes I do”

“He could use some hasty generalization IMO” he smiled again unfazed by her discomfiture

“I know… you cant seem to stand him… but you should be delighted he is poor and will forever remain lower social class” she looked up at him to respond looking straight into his eye

“And you assume again that’s the only thing that bothers me about him” he muttered through almost closed lips

“Pray what else could it be?” she clasped her hands dramatically

“If you bothered to look”

“I shouldn’t be taking life advice from someone that judges people based on their wealth”

“You should when it is objective” he said silkily

“Everyone speaks from a social position and everyone has biases” “you do realize as an attorney your arguments willalways be received with mistrust, and also because of your wealth your concern for the unwashed masses might seem superficial?”

“no actually… the wealthiest in history have been the most philanthropic”

“So rescuing me from my paramour is an act of philanthropy?” she smiled mocking him

“You could say that” he nodded willing to spar endlessly with her

This was seductive and exhilarating for him

If she is going to defend Abhishek he was going to prove how terrible he was for her

Every f-----g time

“Dee can I have her over sometime?” Diya asked holding Kalyani’s hand

“YOUR SISTER?” Kalyani screeched… I too ka MACRO class from her  3 years ago”

“My sister is a nerd”

“Uff” Viveka scowled

“You just lost my permission” Viveka smiled gently

“Pleez Dee..”

“ma se baat karo chhotu” she turned to begin walking

His eyes were still on her

She looked up at him

“I am ready for a longer argument” he muttered

Something about that tone sent a weird sensation to her stomach

“You made your point and I made mine” she said exhaling to compose herself and pushed her glasses up her nose

“OMG… BHAI and your sister fought over sustainable wages at Uncle Tom’s Maggi Point”

“CRINGE ALERTTTT” Diya shouted

“”lets go… tum to marogi, mujhe bhi phasaogi” Viveka scolded Diya all the way to the car

Raanav and Kalyani were parked two rows down, a giant gas guzzling SUV

“Papa tumhe bahut pocket money dete hain…how much have you shopped… Ireland se bhi DHER saar a samaan laayin hain Ma..you two are truly spoilt”

“Oh you are just jealous you cant wear these cute skirts” Diya was sighing imagining herself in her skimpy skirts pulling it out of the Zara bags

“I am happy Ma is not going to cut off my legs from under those” Viveka turned the key in the ignition

It clicked a few times and acted like it didn’t want to leave the multi level parking lot

“Chalooo Dee”

“Boy you are patient” Viveka was a lil antsy, but she mocked her sister nevertheless

She hated Mall parking lots after 7 PM

It was a little after 9 PM,

She pulled it out and inserted it again…the battery came on but the fuel was not igniting

Unbeknownst to her Raanav waited for her to start her car, as his cousin scrolled thru her SM unaware her brother was being gallant…

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by Nisha0604 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Ahaaaa... the knight in shining armour gets his first opportunity to gallop forward in his gas guzzling suv 😀

Love their critical banter...hasty generalisation....logical fallacy 😊

can see endless cups of tea being consumed over continued arguments and spirited  discussions post marriage ...and poor Smrita unable to get a word in sideways
Would love to see these two jump the queue and marry !! How could we persuade you Nisha ?!!

And a final request....please don’t end the story with it’s logical conclusion...we are loving the warp and weft of it !! Please keep it going for a long while....waaaay long while !!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice title. Wealth and philanthropy are ideal patners. His nose might be up in the air always but his heart is in the right place where it matters 😳 

Some more food for thought ....this time from Raanav to veev. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Yes completely agree with you these two characters quick wit and I independent thoughts are going to make their interactions super interesting please keep it going.....

love that he is waiting in his gas guzzling chariot to rescue the damsel in distress....😘😘😘


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Posted: 3 years ago

@VeeIyer

Haha!! Like make it go on forevah? Shore!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Yes please! It's a feel good story like software symphonies. With so many characters there is so much to explore