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Pride & Prej with a twist

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Deep desires & Dark Rooms


“Baat baat par argue mat karo, please” Anubha put away somefreshly laundered sheets in the hallway cupboard

She had taken the day off today, she was a EngineeringProgram Manager at a large German Industrial conglomerate

 

“I have to hit submit Ma” Viveka Mathur grabbed her mother’spallu and wandered right behind her

“To mat karo submit”

Anubha went inside the kitchen and started stacking the drydishes back into the shelves

 

“That’s Papa’s job, aap kyon kar rahe ho?”

 

“Papa ka aaj koi talent acquisition meeting hai” she saidlooking at her watch thoughtfully

 

Akash Mathur worked for a famous  nationalized bank, as a Regional Manager

His wife made more money than him and he was delighted aboutthat

They had 4 daughters

 

Viveka  28

Naina  26

Diya and Karuna Mathur (twins) 19

 

“The twins are not half as excited as you, THEY are bothsupposed to be taking more and more classes”

 

“that’s fine… don’t insult them Ma, are you going to  at least let me apply?”

 

“Papa se baat karo beta… he will not let you”

 

“HOW do u know…. AHAAA! YOU already brain washed him DIDN’T YOU”Viveka’s hands went to her hips as she challenged

 

“nahi to” Anubha tried to save face, turning away towardsthe sink “Yeh isne teesri baar stain chhoda karahi mein” she cursed as she scrubbed breathlessly

 

“This is so rude… I am asking you for the 4thtime today” Viveka shouted

 

Anubha shut off the water and turned to her

Viveka was tall… and gangly… her hair come down to her waistin messy unbrushed curls, forcefully tied with a old scuncie

Her glasses were too big for her eyes, there was not a speckof make up on that face… the acne scars on her left cheek visible when sheturned towards the sunlight in the well lit kitchen

She was wearing  blue jeansand a bagru print top in magenta that had clearly seen better days

“You are following me everyday… all the time… beta” Anubhashook off her trance and walked out of the kitchen

 

“I haven’t”

“You have… last Friday bhi tum mere peechhe peeche ghoomrahi thi asking to go to to that Philippines conference on Law Language and EconomicProgress”

 

“Oh well I realized you were right”

 

“NO… jhoothi ho tum, MAINE kaha, you don’t have an invite, Idon’t want you shacking up with strangers in Manila” Anubha waved her fingerwarningly

“I was NOT going to do that… but whatever” Viveka pushed herglasses back on her bridge

 

“Now its THIS… let you enroll for a Public Economics &Policy Research Program at IIT Kharagpur”

 

“I HAVE BEEN INVITED” Viveka was hopping mad

 

“Invitation to tumhe 10 universities se aate hain har saal…how can you go beta?”

 

“WHY cant I?”

 

“I am sorry I am not having this talk with you. Go pick upyour sisters from college JAO”

 

“Sorry… I am headed to JNU for a lecture series” she saidcoldly

 

“I will tell your Dad”

“Discipline is choosing between what you want NOW and whatyou want most” Viveka quoted Abe Lincoln

 

“You want Research now, you want lecture series now, youwant a Ph D You want to be an author” Anubha mumbled under her breath returningto the office/ extra bedroom of the 1st  5 bedroom floor Rohini apartment

“TIDY your room”

 

“Sorry I am late”

 

“Are you wearing THAT?” Anubha was shocked

 

“Its in the auditorium at 7 PM… its not some Bollywood awardshow”

 

Naina Mathur returned from her nails appointment, she hadtaken half the day off too… just so she could get her nails done

“TA DAAA” she showed off

 

“Can u go pick up sis… plural?” Anubha begged

 

“Maaaa” Naina went into her room

Viveka left too… she drove to Keshav Mahavidyalaya, to pickup her sisters

 

“We get to ride home in Ma’s nice car” the girls relaxed inthe comfy Toyota Corolla

“Don’t fall in love… Naina lekar ja rahi hai shaam ko”Viveka lied

 

“KIDHARRRR”

“Who knows” Viveka’s eyes twinkled as she stared at Karunathru the rear view mirror

 

“If YOU had a job… aap khareed sakte the”

 

“Ya right!” Viveka mumbled shaking her head

 

She was hoping to ask many questions tonight and she had notread the 4 journal articles she had put away

“Viveka can we PLEEEEEEZ stop for cold coffee?” the girlsusually spoke in unison

Viveka laughed out loud

 


“Bahar 40C hai”

 

“Its OK no… pleez pleez”

 

“I live on an allowance from Papa… you brats” she scolded

She pulled over by a café… and squished her body to get out,the twins got out like queens

The spent 30 minutes deciding what toppings they wanted,Viveka scanned the sheaf of papers she was holding

She had left the last page of an article back in the car

 

“Here pay for it” she ordered and ran out

 

“Madam kahan hai? Bulao unko… who gave her a license? “Are ufreaking kidding me?”

 

A (gorgeous) man wearing sunglasses in clothes Viveka didn’treally look at, was almost pounding on her mother’s car

“Kya chahiye?”

 

He did that key turning thing with his hand

 

“BEHRI nahi hoon” she yelled

 

“Madam kidhar hain?” he shouted back

 

“KAUN madam?”

 

“The f----- car you…” umm”

 

Viveka leaned on the car without clicking on the remote to unlock

 

 

 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nisha! 
pride and Prejudice was first names as “First Impressions” before they changed it. Maybe you could keep that? 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Viveka meets a handsome stranger who is unhappy with her parking.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Why is her mom unhappy with her applying to IIT? IS it because she keeps changing her mind?

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Posted: 3 years ago

First Impressions it is....


THANK YOU 🤗👏

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congrats for the new story...... nice start........ waiting  daily for ur updates..............

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Slaughter House

“Main apni gaadi nahi nikal pa raha hoon is this your car?”

 

“Jee” she nodded

 

“AAPKI hai?” he looked shocked and quickly composed himselfafter letting his eyes scan her body for “’Is she entitled to drive a niceRs.20 lakh Toyota Corolla”

 

“Hmm” she nodded

 

“Aap… apne… jo bhi hain…” he waved at the glass doors… “Mainwait kar leta hoon” he said coolly

 

She walked to the car and unlocked it and quietly pulled out

 

Her sisters ran out screaming with their drinks in theirhand

 

“EK SECOND” they both squealed

Raanav Parashar turned to look at who it was, the fashionablydressed young girls hopped in the back giggling as their drink spilled over onthe window glass dripping down

They drove home, Anubha was pacing the living room anxiously

 

“What happened?” Viveka threw the keys on the coffee table

 

“Didn’t you have some interview with some NGO?” “Phone bhinahi uthaati tum” her mother smacked her

Viveka ran inside panting and sat down at her desk and spentthe next couple hours talking on Skype

 

Akash the Dad returned home and stretched out on his favoriterecliner with business news on TV and a periodical in his hand

 

“Kala ap le rahe hain na chhutthi?”

 

“Hmm” he smiled

 

“Can we atleast talk to Viveka again?”

 

“Usne mana kar diya, leave her alone”

 

“How can her younger sister get married and not her”

 

“Just like I got married and then my brother Kushal did”Akash did not look up from his book

“I know, but do u think she feels bad?”

 

“You think she is shy?” Akash looked up chuckling

 

“haha… I know”

 

“She texted me about applying to IIT Kharagpur, agar grantmili hai usko UGC se she should try”

“she loves her job”

“U know… JNU… they will never hire her, bas kitaabein likhtirahegi” Akash yawned

 

“she is a smart cookie, I hope she pursues a PhD fromColumbia or something”

“Yahan usko Banaras nahi bhej pa rahi ho, Kharagpur nahi jasakti” Akash coughed

 

“Chai banoon aur?”

 

“Umm.. no… khaana kya scene hai?”

 

“Your sister said we should go over this weekend, they arethrowing a big thing for their 30th Akash”

“Tum jao… mujhe baqsho”

“Aur Didi mujhe sunaye? No way” Anubha got up wincing as herknees hurt

 

“Ghar par kya kiya aaj saara din Viveka ne? “

“she is a serial applier if I can say that… she did that”

Viveka stepped out

Wearing a different bagru pint kurti with jeans… her glassesmatched the blouse atleast… it was both orange”

 

“Enjoy beta” Akash yawned

 

“Dad its Dr Ahluwalia from NCAER, u shud go to”

“I do enough policy all day… no thanku”

Viveka walked out

“Takes guts” he nodded to Anubha with pride

 

“In Delhi to step out out without a speck of make up?” she chuckled

“YES” he nodded “Aur chashma aur who 1990s ke style kiKURTIyan” he laughed

“I told her she looked like me”

“Wah wah” he smiled agreeing, going back to his book

His sister  Savitacalled

 

“Bhayya subah aa jaayen aap log”

“Main soch raha hoon Friday night ko hi aa jaata hoon” helaughed

“Not funny”

“Kitni partiyan dogi bhai saal mein”

“Business waalon keg har aapne karwayi shaadi” she laughed

“I agree”

“Kamal ke koi naye dost hain… who aayenge… Bhabhi can talkto the”

“All your guests are worth a 100 times what we are worth”Akash laughed putting the phone on speaker

 

“Yeh family kuch, aapse aur HUMSE bhi 1000 guna ameer hain”Savita giggled

“wah wah”

“Main mili nahi hoon, bus chhoti hogi gathering 50 loghongey mushkil se”

“Mushkil se” Anubha whispered inaudibly laughinguncontrollably

“Chalo theek hai selfie le leta hoon, kal ko tum bhi famousho gayi to?”

“Ma ja rahe hain na?” the twins gushed and giggled and spunaround in the living room whispering

Bua’s house was a gold mine for “cute boys”

Bua had two boys, and there were usually atleast 20 “buddies”hanging around the pool

“Bhayya PLEEEZ aana” “Bhabhiiii pleeez”

“Theek” Anubha said softly

“Bhabhi hum jaante hain aapki tarah intellectual crowd nahihogi… par pleez Bhabhi”

“Hamare yahan to EK hai intellectual” Anubha spoke proudly

 

“Kidhar hai who?” Bua was very fond of her

“Gayi hai Dr Ahluwalia ka lecture sun ne JNU, Poverty andsocial justice kuch”

“USKO pakka laayen”

“Kyon?”

“Kya pata in naye logon mein se hi koi mil jaaye uske liye?”

 

Anubha and Akash laughed hysterically

 

“That would be like walking a lamb to a slaughter house… My sincere condolence to your new friends” Anubha gasped wiping laugh-tears

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Posted: 3 years ago

Your stories and their characters are so beautiful di👍🏼...Every story instantly connects us with it👏😛

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Posted: 3 years ago

I love the camaraderie. The instant connection with the characters you write.... Nisha you are just too brilliant! 😍