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Originally posted by: AASUS

Wonder and waiting eagerly for next phase of this Life growing up in the form of  Series of poems. 😎

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I'm happy that you are really enjoying my small work 🤗

edit add:

wow 3rd one on Life journey already up👏

beautiful - the last two verses are fab about who gets to do what at what time 😆

Yeah 😁😁😁

Thank you 🤗

pics that were added so far certainly enhance the beauty of creations.

I'm happy it does 😊

At times I feel nostalgic too ,may be I could have tried something as such when he was there 💔

On the creative side - you’re absolutely very observant  it’s great to meet someone who is so creative and sensitive to the situation as well being very focused on topic.

Thank you , thank you so much. You have no idea how much these words mean to me dear 😊

I'm just a starter and I'm trying my best to give you all the best 😊😊



Weekend is here ah well - will try our best to smile 🤗

For sure. Never let the smile fade away.

No matter what. That's what our charm did.

We appreciate this sincere effort - I’m sure there are silent readers too.

If many read it , I'll be happy 😊

I have shared your link (w/o your permission :P) to other Social media In excitement the 1st day 1st poem you shared with us. But I think fans are too emotional to may be read about him.

That's really a sweet gesture from you dear ☺ No need of permission 🤗 I have already given the full authority of my work for my readers dear 😊😊 You can edit, criticise and share them too 🤗🤗

Many need time to digest this and be away. As at times it may pull them back hard again. Let them have their space 😊

I hope you will not let this slow response to this creative effort to stop your work 🤗

Love you for this ty kindly 

Never dear. I usually write for my happiness and self content. Comments do give me some hope but even not I will not stop my work 🤗🤗

Especially even I have one reader , I will make sure I justify my work 🤗🤗

Thanks again for your love and support 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Renee.Clare

It broke my heart.💔 It's beautiful. Keep writing 🤗

It's indeed hard to intake 🤗

But just be strong dear 😊

Thank you dear for the kind words 🤗

The very First poem is so beautiful...👍🏼

Loved it❤️

Perceptions of Baby in Mother's Womb...

Sorry for late...

Do continue writing, will love to read more...

🤗

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

The very First poem is so beautiful...👍🏼

Loved it❤️

Perceptions of Baby in Mother's Womb...

Sorry for late...

Do continue writing, will love to read more...

🤗

Thank you so much dear 🤗

I'm happy you liked them 😁

I have updated 2 more too 🤗

You are never late 😊

Originally posted by: ehaab

keep posting more.

For sure 😊

I am three years

You've got it already

I am an year older

My Angel wouldn't

Stop pulling my cheeks

As I've grown bit chubby now

Not so often but they do visit

Our relations - I would not show

Myself I prefer hiding behind

My sisters - they would hold me by them

I would say them rhymes and 

At times sing small songs too

Because they admored me for it

Then I would go and hide

I did feel discomfort

Away from my small world

But again ma would support me

And make me more comfortable

This year was another learning year

I started learning more

Alphabets and numbers

Interested me more

At night sitting under the open sky

My angel would keep on saying

That our ancestors were the stars

Shining so bright in the sky

Seeing us and guiding us

Whenever I am bored being alone

I would sit by my sisters

They would make dough for chappathi 

and I would make small crafts- 

not crafts but small toys

Playing with puzzles

Walking around our home

Doodling with smelling markers

Fasicinated me a lot

More than anything

I started reading

I did even play eye spy

With my books

Whenever I heard music

I would make some movements

Mama did call them as the

Best dance moments

More or less it was all about us

Mama and Papa would bring

Photo albums of them

And sisters - I was not there

The very first time I saw it 

I cried For myself not being there

Papa told me that I was with ma

And would not even leave her

So they didn't have much

Later I had many photos

Of mine added on to them

We also took many crazy

Pictures and added them to it

As days passed by I was taken to

A new place - My preschool

There were many as me

We were the same

Morning packing my stuffs

In my small bag

Papa would take me there

I initially didn't like going there

But then I had to

As I wanted to learn more

I found many fascinating stuffs

Which drove me to my preschool

Started a new journey

With my first set of strangers...

-RPSS-

" The way you learn is what you learn ! "

-SSR-

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

I am three years

You've got it already

I am an year older

My Angel wouldn't

Stop pulling my cheeks

As I've grown bit chubby now

Not so often but they do visit

Our relations - I would not show

Myself I prefer hiding behind

My sisters - they would hold me by them

I would say them rhymes and 

At times sing small songs too

Because they admored me for it

Then I would go and hide

I did feel discomfort

Away from my small world

But again ma would support me

And make me more comfortable

This year was another learning year

I started learning more

Alphabets and numbers

Interested me more

At night sitting under the open sky

My angel would keep on saying

That our ancestors were the stars

Shining so bright in the sky

Seeing us and guiding us

Whenever I am bored being alone

I would sit by my sisters

They would make dough for chappathi 

and I would make small crafts- 

not crafts but small toys

Playing with puzzles

Walking around our home

Doodling with smelling markers

Fasicinated me a lot

More than anything

I started reading

I did even play eye spy

With my books

Whenever I heard music

I would make some movements

Mama did call them as the

Best dance moments

More or less it was all about us

Mama and Papa would bring

Photo albums of them

And sisters - I was not there

The very first time I saw it 

I cried For myself not being there

Papa told me that I was with ma

And would not even leave her

So they didn't have much

Later I had many photos

Of mine added on to them

We also took many crazy

Pictures and added them to it

As days passed by I was taken to

A new place - My preschool

There were many as me

We were the same

Morning packing my stuffs

In my small bag

Papa would take me there

I initially didn't like going there

But then I had to

As I wanted to learn more

I found many fascinating stuffs

Which drove me to my preschool

Started a new journey

With my first set of strangers...

-RPSS-

" The way you learn is what you learn ! "

-SSR-

Its so beautiful.❤️❤️

How he's growing up and his love for his family is also growing. 

Now stepping into the new world with all the support and love from his family. 

It feels like I can see all this happening in front of me.❤️

Great job. ❤️

Originally posted by: Disha2712

Its so beautiful.❤️❤️

How he's growing up and his love for his family is also growing. 

Now stepping into the new world with all the support and love from his family. 

It feels like I can see all this happening in front of me.❤️

Great job. ❤️

Thank you so much dear 🤗

His love and bond with his family is just magical 

I'm just trying my best to put it in the right way without any exaggerations or over doing 😇😇

For the first time he is facing something out of his world 🤗

I'm happy that you find it better 😁

Hi 🤗 me checked this space frequently to see if there was update 😆 and finally it’s here yay 🥳

page 6 poem # 4

we can picture this as we read the lines. 
Sound very sophisticated in the was things were expressed,

May be it is apt as he is very observant and articulate - it must have been a childhood habit.

Thank you 🙏 so much enjoyed the creation and pic added aptly with awesome caption too 😎

Love this effort and keep rocking !

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hi 🤗 me checked this space frequently to see if there was update 😆 and finally it’s here yay 🥳

Thank you . Thank you for that check up 😆 I was planning to send PMs just after updating at least 3 of them. So sorry about that 😇

page 6 poem # 4

we can picture this as we read the lines. 
Sound very sophisticated in the was things were expressed,

That's good 😊

Small kids are really sophisticated 😁

Sorry if it was over added at any points 🤗

May be it is apt as he is very observant and articulate - it must have been a childhood habit.

I've just interpreted from the shades I've across in his interviews 😊😊

Thank you 🙏 so much enjoyed the creation and pic added aptly with awesome caption too 😎

I'm much thank ful and pleasure is all mine 🤗

Love this effort and keep rocking !

For sure 🤗

Thanks for the love and support 😇

I'll try to do my best 🤗