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Posted: 3 years ago

First poem is very nice❀️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

wow 1st one so nice and so very realistic - beautiful 

do continue what you’ve started.

Enjoyed reading 

edit add:

fab title 

Thanks a lot for the endless support dear 😊

Thanks for accepting this too πŸ˜‡

I will try my best to justify my works 😊😊

Thank you on regards to title πŸ˜‡

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Lazybird_Silpa

First poem is very nice❀️

Thank you dear 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

The poem is really beautiful. 

This idea is amazing. We should cherish all the good memories of him. And somewhere he will also be happy so see his fans happy.❀️

The title is so correct. We would love to read his untold story.

Will love to read more from you. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Disha2712

The poem is really beautiful. 

This idea is amazing. We should cherish all the good memories of him. And somewhere he will also be happy so see his fans happy.❀️

The title is so correct. We would love to read his untold story.

Will love to read more from you. 

Thank you so much dear 😊

It's just a small try from my side 😊

If this can make things easier and brings out some sort of positivity I will really be happy πŸ˜‡

Ideas and suggestions are warmly welcomed 😊

Together we can create something better 😊

Thanks again for the support and good words πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beginnings 


It's been an year now

From my ma's womb

To her lap now

Always pampered


The very first moment I stepped out

A sudden fear did engulf me

Droplets of water ran

Down my cheeks


I was very soon wrapped

By a big..a big ..blanket

A white blanket

The coldness I felt subsidued

I felt warm


I was still missing my mother

Someone was holding me

But it was not my angel

I knew her , I knew her warmth


I was taken away

I felt lonely , missing the warmth

But very soon I was brought back

To my place ; where I belonged


There laid my angel

I was placed near her

I wanted to express my joy

I didn't know what do I do


She wanted to see me

She was waiting for me

But now she was there laying

Closing her eyes and not seeing me


I tried to turn and touch

But I could not really do that

Yet, My Angel knew it

She opened her eyes

She turned to look at me


Those eyes ; the look

The emotions they carried

I couldn't express myself

Nonetheless my eyes started wetting


My eyes brimmed with tears

Expressing all my joy I cried

She managed herself to wake up

And carried me in her arms

Trying to compose me


Her eyes averted away from me

I followed her eyes

Unknown feelings deluged me

I knew them, my world


The first man I saw

Was my king - He held me

In his arms protecting me

Very soon many other happy faces

Were excited on looking upon me


Then on my life started

Day and night my angel would

Check upon me - Feed me

Bath me and tell many stories


She feeds me showing the moon

The stars shining above us

The dark sky and the illuminating 

moon - fascinated me


From crawling to walking

They did enjoy every moment of me

They stood by me - held me

So I wouldn't fall down


Every minute they encouraged me

Walked along and ran behind

But never away from me

Making everything all about Love


Now I am here

Playing with my blanket

Playing with balloons and balls

Waiting for my angel to come 

and carry me out - As it was our

family time to play with mud


"Ma........", I started my cry

( There comes my fam 🀭 )



- RPSS -




"The moment you know the limit,

You are limitless "

- SSR -




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Edited by Guruvishva - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Hello everyone 😊

Hope you are enjoying my works 😊

Your suggestions are most welcomed πŸ€—


I just want a small favour from you all 

:):


If possible do share your memories with Sushanth

OR 

Things you know about SSR

OR

Things you admired about SSR

OR

Things you wished were a part of SSR life

OR

Anything you want me to be added in my imagination of his life πŸ˜‡



Also you can suggest titles for my upcoming works 

As you know I'm planning to write a poem with regards to a year 

You can suggest me headings for each year 😊

In case once I've updated my work and you can think of a better topic for it , you can suggest me too 😊


Waiting to hear from you all πŸ€—



Thanks for the immense support πŸ˜‡



One more thing πŸ˜‡

I know it is hard for you to know whether I have updated my work or not. 


So regarding it I have updated in Pg. 01

Look into it πŸ‘‡πŸ‘‡πŸ‘‡


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Edited by Guruvishva - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful 2nd poem


And the pics❀️

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Originally posted by: Lazybird_Silpa

Beautiful 2nd poem


And the pics❀️

Thank you dear 😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful 2nd poem - easy to picture it as we are reading πŸ€—


As for what we remember: 

Off screen I’ve followed insta and tw and have read his updates or interaction.


We are fans from Kis Desh and treated him as a Kis Desh fans family. He played a youngest brother who worshiped his oldest brother Prem.

His scenes in that show 95% fun filled.

He said in intws - his scenes were not all in script 80% spontaneous actions.


off screen intws with his teams or friends were absolutely fun. As soon as ppl see Preet they smile and laugh.


There were emotional scenes which he performed extremely well. 


In that show - fans never felt anyone is acting - everyone gelled with characters there.

Also in this show he grew up from a playful son/ brother to a responsible son/ brother / Devar / husband / father.

His pranks with his father/ siblings / bhabi / wife / mom and kids on show nieces and nephews so fun πŸ˜†

Once he pretend to be a woman to trick his brother πŸ˜† on his wedding night - dressed like his bhabi - the entire family was hiding and watching as they all planned it. 

He played vid games non stop and party with family and friends first. 
Then he suddenly had to become responsible to save his family due to tragic incidents - 
Then he was a big support to whole family finally gets killed in a bomb blast. 

It was typical Indian tv show with unfortunate masala and stupidity created time to time.

But fans cherish the show / characters / scenes and actors and creatives who made this possible for us to enjoy.


* it has become difficult to remember Cz right now it makes fans sad immediately emotional thinking or seeing pics or vids.


what makes fans remember him is his style / dance / comic sense / always opt to cheer anyone who is in the vicinity.


later after he came to movies ppl start to only discuss his intellectual side - whatever reason.

When he was in tv industry he was very relaxed so easily he smiled and had fun.

He was the life of KDMHMD show - Cz of the way he performed in there and off screen also he was same.
He gelled with each character - our friend Fatima used to say like a black shoes we have in closet - the pair of shoes goes with everything.! 

min ZNKD season 2 - he participated boys vs girls team was made. Many of his friends and co worker of prev show was there.

When one of them was dropped - Cz channel wanted trp - as she was leaving - He stood up and gave standing ovation. He was very respectful.

He’s a well trained dancer and she was not but did her best to support her team. He acknowledged that in an intw.


After getting into movies - it’s lot more serious type of interviews. 
I used to make edits of his work as one of the fan Fatima ( she’s a creative writer in our forum and fun like our Preet) is crazy fan πŸ€— she made me edit and others too.

I happen to watch some off screen or promo of movies.


I could simply go on if I can keep a calm mind πŸ˜†Cz it gets emotional time to time.

I do not think I answered your Question at all - it’s just tiny bit of what we grasped of Sushant - he’s always the Joyful Preet can’t take off that image.

Cool Cute filled with excitement energy - ready to party with anyone or play with anyone at any age - this how Kis Desh fans see him - of course his tremendous contribution for social, educational, environmental, scientific research - his creative side - reading habits and building a hospital in memory of his mother in Delhi  And many more that fans appreciate him for.❀️

* if you have any specific question I may try to answer of what little I know. 



Edited by AASUS - 3 years ago