First poem is very niceβ€οΈ
First poem is very niceβ€οΈ
wow 1st one so nice and so very realistic - beautiful
do continue what youβve started.
Enjoyed reading
edit add:
fab title
Thanks a lot for the endless support dear π
Thanks for accepting this too π
I will try my best to justify my works ππ
Thank you on regards to title π
Originally posted by: Lazybird_Silpa
First poem is very niceβ€οΈ
Thank you dear π
The poem is really beautiful.
This idea is amazing. We should cherish all the good memories of him. And somewhere he will also be happy so see his fans happy.β€οΈ
The title is so correct. We would love to read his untold story.
Will love to read more from you.
Originally posted by: Disha2712
The poem is really beautiful.
This idea is amazing. We should cherish all the good memories of him. And somewhere he will also be happy so see his fans happy.β€οΈ
The title is so correct. We would love to read his untold story.
Will love to read more from you.
Thank you so much dear π
It's just a small try from my side π
If this can make things easier and brings out some sort of positivity I will really be happy π
Ideas and suggestions are warmly welcomed π
Together we can create something better π
Thanks again for the support and good words π
Beginnings
It's been an year now
From my ma's womb
To her lap now
Always pampered
The very first moment I stepped out
A sudden fear did engulf me
Droplets of water ran
Down my cheeks
I was very soon wrapped
By a big..a big ..blanket
A white blanket
The coldness I felt subsidued
I felt warm
I was still missing my mother
Someone was holding me
But it was not my angel
I knew her , I knew her warmth
I was taken away
I felt lonely , missing the warmth
But very soon I was brought back
To my place ; where I belonged
There laid my angel
I was placed near her
I wanted to express my joy
I didn't know what do I do
She wanted to see me
She was waiting for me
But now she was there laying
Closing her eyes and not seeing me
I tried to turn and touch
But I could not really do that
Yet, My Angel knew it
She opened her eyes
She turned to look at me
Those eyes ; the look
The emotions they carried
I couldn't express myself
Nonetheless my eyes started wetting
My eyes brimmed with tears
Expressing all my joy I cried
She managed herself to wake up
And carried me in her arms
Trying to compose me
Her eyes averted away from me
I followed her eyes
Unknown feelings deluged me
I knew them, my world
The first man I saw
Was my king - He held me
In his arms protecting me
Very soon many other happy faces
Were excited on looking upon me
Then on my life started
Day and night my angel would
Check upon me - Feed me
Bath me and tell many stories
She feeds me showing the moon
The stars shining above us
The dark sky and the illuminating
moon - fascinated me
From crawling to walking
They did enjoy every moment of me
They stood by me - held me
So I wouldn't fall down
Every minute they encouraged me
Walked along and ran behind
But never away from me
Making everything all about Love
Now I am here
Playing with my blanket
Playing with balloons and balls
Waiting for my angel to come
and carry me out - As it was our
family time to play with mud
"Ma........", I started my cry
( There comes my fam π€ )
- RPSS -
"The moment you know the limit,
You are limitless "
- SSR -
PLEASE DO REFER TO THE NEXT POST -
Hello everyone π
Hope you are enjoying my works π
Your suggestions are most welcomed π€
I just want a small favour from you all
:):
If possible do share your memories with Sushanth
OR
Things you know about SSR
OR
Things you admired about SSR
OR
Things you wished were a part of SSR life
OR
Anything you want me to be added in my imagination of his life π
Also you can suggest titles for my upcoming works
As you know I'm planning to write a poem with regards to a year
You can suggest me headings for each year π
In case once I've updated my work and you can think of a better topic for it , you can suggest me too π
Waiting to hear from you all π€
Thanks for the immense support π
One more thing π
I know it is hard for you to know whether I have updated my work or not.
So regarding it I have updated in Pg. 01
Look into it πππ
Beautiful 2nd poem
And the picsβ€οΈ
Thank you dear ππ
Beautiful 2nd poem - easy to picture it as we are reading π€
As for what we remember:
Off screen Iβve followed insta and tw and have read his updates or interaction.
We are fans from Kis Desh and treated him as a Kis Desh fans family. He played a youngest brother who worshiped his oldest brother Prem.
His scenes in that show 95% fun filled.
He said in intws - his scenes were not all in script 80% spontaneous actions.
off screen intws with his teams or friends were absolutely fun. As soon as ppl see Preet they smile and laugh.
There were emotional scenes which he performed extremely well.
In that show - fans never felt anyone is acting - everyone gelled with characters there.
Also in this show he grew up from a playful son/ brother to a responsible son/ brother / Devar / husband / father.
His pranks with his father/ siblings / bhabi / wife / mom and kids on show nieces and nephews so fun π
Once he pretend to be a woman to trick his brother π on his wedding night - dressed like his bhabi - the entire family was hiding and watching as they all planned it.
He played vid games non stop and party with family and friends first.
Then he suddenly had to become responsible to save his family due to tragic incidents -
Then he was a big support to whole family finally gets killed in a bomb blast.
It was typical Indian tv show with unfortunate masala and stupidity created time to time.
But fans cherish the show / characters / scenes and actors and creatives who made this possible for us to enjoy.
* it has become difficult to remember Cz right now it makes fans sad immediately emotional thinking or seeing pics or vids.
what makes fans remember him is his style / dance / comic sense / always opt to cheer anyone who is in the vicinity.
later after he came to movies ppl start to only discuss his intellectual side - whatever reason.
When he was in tv industry he was very relaxed so easily he smiled and had fun.
He was the life of KDMHMD show - Cz of the way he performed in there and off screen also he was same.
He gelled with each character - our friend Fatima used to say like a black shoes we have in closet - the pair of shoes goes with everything.!
min ZNKD season 2 - he participated boys vs girls team was made. Many of his friends and co worker of prev show was there.
When one of them was dropped - Cz channel wanted trp - as she was leaving - He stood up and gave standing ovation. He was very respectful.
Heβs a well trained dancer and she was not but did her best to support her team. He acknowledged that in an intw.
After getting into movies - itβs lot more serious type of interviews.
I used to make edits of his work as one of the fan Fatima ( sheβs a creative writer in our forum and fun like our Preet) is crazy fan π€ she made me edit and others too.
I happen to watch some off screen or promo of movies.
I could simply go on if I can keep a calm mind πCz it gets emotional time to time.
I do not think I answered your Question at all - itβs just tiny bit of what we grasped of Sushant - heβs always the Joyful Preet canβt take off that image.
Cool Cute filled with excitement energy - ready to party with anyone or play with anyone at any age - this how Kis Desh fans see him - of course his tremendous contribution for social, educational, environmental, scientific research - his creative side - reading habits and building a hospital in memory of his mother in Delhi And many more that fans appreciate him for.β€οΈ
* if you have any specific question I may try to answer of what little I know.
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