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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 3:

Nice update🤗

You keep on building suspense, now you added drugs and all, hope pari and Raj stay safe and you donot make them a leader behind all this🤓

Loved the bonding between father and daughter, where she can share anything with him. ❤️

So Raj met Pari😳 and he left a great influence on her. 

She dint like him placing an order for her, which shows their dominant personalities, waiting to see how they will be able to adjust with each other😉

Ajit is an acquaintance of Prithvi, loved when Prithvi gave him a knowing look saying, you cannot impress my daughter just like that😆

Even Ajit is scared of the agendas of his son.

I know Gayatri loves Pari,  God knows when she will be able to show it to her😔

Update soon

Waiting to read further😊

Sorry for late reply, was busy taking care of 2 month old niece😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

»» How can i hold when my horse is without Reins " Be-lagam "smiley37,  It can run as it wishes Cause you keep on creating Suspence n it is getting Unbearable for it...smiley36

Oh my 😆 but to enjoy the story you have to control😊 or else you will end up unrevealing all the mystery on own 😎through the little clue I provided in story updates and comments 🤣 beside there are lot of mystery in story ahead😉 


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Will be waiting ...

"I am updating soon😊 just got busy a bit 😳thanks for your paitence and understanding😃

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Originally posted by: Tatianabhardwaj

Chapter 3:

Nice update🤗

Thank you 🤗 I am glad to know😃 you enjoy 😳


You keep on building suspense, now you added drugs and all, hope pari and Raj stay safe and you donot make them a leader behind all this🤓

"Honestly the genre should be thrilling😉 cause I am very much fond of action and suspense 😆 there are lot of mystery 😎 but presently I will say like I shown Pari mom a cop and her friend Ajay as cop to"! So such a cases are ought to be seen in story 😊 and no they're no leader of this 😆 they're just in bussiness and Law field 😉

But keep them safe  I Cannot give assurance on that but I will try 😳


Loved the bonding between father and daughter, where she can share anything with him. ❤️

"The bond of daughter😳 and father😎 is always  I just wanted to show the transparency in relation through Pari Prithvi 😳  which made them gain success and peace  I am glad you liked it 😊


So Raj met Pari😳 and he left a great influence on her. 

She dint like him placing an order for her, which shows their dominant personalities, waiting to see how they will be able to adjust with each other😉

"Soon you will 😆 honestly their relation is going to be like clash of 🔥 and ice ❄️  they're truly very open minded and as well powerful in own way 😉 so their first meeting left heavy impact on each other   it will be fun to see their journey however the story is very short perhaps there will be ten or only 20 chapters 😊


Ajit is an acquaintance of Prithvi, loved when Prithvi gave him a knowing look saying, you cannot impress my daughter just like that😆

"And he was right then and there wasn't he"? After all she indeed doesn't get charm by him"! 😉But sure got affected by his shrewdness but good or bad"? Time will tell 😉 honestly I want all the important character to get good space so people could like other to 😊 so that my leads who could flawed doesn't push the readers away 😆


Even Ajit is scared of the agendas of his son.

"A father can understand the intend of his son way more better than anyone 😳 Ajit did 


I know Gayatri loves Pari,  God knows when she will be able to show it to her😔

"Yeah she do loves her daughter lot 😳like any parent would 😊 but Pari is very close to her dad beside she doesn't get to give her time cause of her profession"!  besides their reason behind the cold equation"! 


Update soon

Waiting to read further😊

Sorry for late reply, was busy taking care of 2 month old niece😊

"No worries 😳even I got busy in my life here😊 there was so much to do 😆 but I am glad at least you take your time out to give a reply here 😳


Thank you 🤗 so much for such a beautiful long  review  stay safe 🙏 stay bless🌹 tanya sis 🤗take care 😳convey my❤️ love to your niece what's her name though"? 

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Chapter 4 


(Cautiously a person clad in black hoodie, black shoe black Mask, raise his gloved hands which were holding Binoculars, he sighted at front, The people at front were double in number, making the eyes of person cold, "They're more"! Perhaps cause they Gets caught recently lot"!.  Yet they hadn't learn their lesson"! Gripping on Binocular tightly, as the person spoke in firm calm voice).


"They're more than we were informed"!..I am going in"!.. it's seems there's more  Surveillance than presented"!..


(The voice were femine which made it clear like before it's girl, on mission to win against evil. Getting yes. from other side, through the bluetooth stuck in ear, the girl released a sigh put the Binocular down, picking the special Needle gun, she sneaked in the Ship's, from where little lamp and joy of many house , was going to be sailed and sold in many dark world. Cautiously concentrating on every noise and clue. Entering inside the eyes of person moisten up, at the sight before many kids huddled together tied up their mouths gagged crying their eyes out in fear. Some were unconscious from Exhaustion. ground of battlefield aren't place to get sway by emotion lose focus, the person did hence paid with price of getting hit on the back of head. A whimper escape in femine voice. Stunning the person who hit the person from back).


"A women"?.. a women was leading us to our doom"?.. unbelievable I can't believe it"!..we plan to kill the wolf destroying us"! But you're little vixen we can use for ourselves"!..


(The girl winch in pain, as her head shoot up , listening the words her eyes turned cold, her hand was on head where she got hit, mouth twitch in sheer disgust "bloody coward will slice you painfully"! Thought she inwardly. A dark chuckled escape from the mouth of men behind her holding the rod he made his way before her).


"It's time to see the face of little Vixen"!..


(He laughed maniacally feeling a surge of joy evoking in heart, at his success of finally getting hand on the person, who is destroying them. Their spy from cop team informed them the consignment are caught by someone else, the operation aren't lead by cops but someone else. Putting their chief in alert, since months they failed to carry on single illegal task in this area, either they caught by cop or the little vixen leaning on wall clutching her head in pain. He raised his hand to get off the mask, but his hand held by the Girl, stunned by the iron grip on his hand he was about to struggle but she flip him around, twisting his hand in process. His mouth open to Yelp in pain she out her other hand in his mouth holding white powder. As his eyes widened in sheer panic realizing what is it. He try to struggle not to get the contain inside but failed to do so, she kicked on his spine, his body went limp. Pushing him on ground she dusted her hoodie, the glance around time to use the gun was gone, the men had surrounded her, it's time for hand to hand combat. If they play fairly, they weren't her problem, the problem was cops who will be here in while, annoyed at the lack of time in hand, and huge task before, few men moved their way to her, Attacked on her together, she kick one on the Knee so hard with her sharp high boot, almost breaking his knee as he fall on ground yelling in pain, held hand of other men twisting it around, then kicking ok his Chest by her foot. Shoving him on the other men attacking on her from behind. The push was such both fall back the one got hit on the back by sharp Big nail tucked on wall. Her teammates stepped in started helping her, but finding the gloved blood soaked they realise their boss is hurt and need first aid. Even though they work together even they never saw the face or know real name. Their boss trust with cautious they were about to rush to her help but she motion them to free the kids And take a proof. Which they did as she move out of the place, Within short span of time. Reaching upon her Van she raise her head up and murmured. "Thank God"! "For another success"!).

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"Raj I hope you're not having any evil idea"!...


"About what dad"?..


(Hearing question instead of Answer Ajit clench his fist, as he stared at his son it's been ten minute since they arrive at home. But not only he get's chance to truly conduct a conversation with him. A question against question is always an ideal way to manipulate the conversation was his opinion always. Now watching his own son doing the same he was ready to explode in anger however getting firm squeeze on tight hand by his wife he calmed himself then spoke).


"You know what I am talking about"! I raise you better don't disappoint me by gaining defeat from your own elephant sieze ego"!...


(Rajat just looked at his father then at his mom who just gave him a look, stating stay calm. Making him rolled his eyes as he look elsewhere, so finally his dad did caught some bad vibe from his act. No wonder he's his dad, but fortunately not on right track).


"Don't worry dad I won't"!..


"Good but what you think about her now"?


"The life going to be intriguing if I got her as life partner"!..But presently I thought nothing about her"!...


"You sure didn't"!..


(Spoke his mother this time with grin on face, making him stare up at her, then shrugging his shoulder he walked away to his room leaving thoughtful parents behind. Nothing can escape parents eye specially mother same happen here, Raj even wanted then to fail to hid his real self from them. Not only his father doubting him, but his mother know he's very much effected by Pari at their first meet only. Reaching upon his room freshening up within short span of time he stood near the terrace side. Leaning on wall stared up at sky scene of his meeting with Pari flash in mind, and unknowingly he murmured to himself"I wish you weren't the one"! To become target of my plans"!..).


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"Suck the life out of me I won't reveal anything"!


(Yelled the men, handcuffed laying on floor, Two wooden bench, chair , and Water pot at side was present there, he was injured badly, bleeding from various places, his face was badly bruise,The Place was illuminating in one tube light, revealing the sight of Iron Bar's making it clear it's Prisoner cell).


"Will see about it"!..


(Replied another Men standing there, holding a Fat Stick in hand raising it almost, going to hit him, but stopped by Women coming there. Watching her stepping in the room, the men stepped back from there while turning the laying men back to his front so he could see the people present there. And straighten up on his position, The women coming there first dragged the Wooden chair, Near the foot of Laying men then sat on it, watching him leaning on Wall, with his foot spread front lazily).


"We found a Body again"! your boss doesn't care about your Life"! why you're showing your Loyalty Khalid"?


"Ask who"? you ACP as if you guy are very valuable"! Seizing small fish like me to gain proof could do nothing against bigger and real mastermind"! Tell me ACP if I told you then to what you will do caught him"? Present him at court"? what next"?


(The mocking smile, the Smirk didn't escape nor the taunting manner, or his word's they were like salt on sour wound's. She said nothing just stared at him, he do have point he's doing his Job he's loyal to his master, she's doing her job she's loyal to her nation her own Job. Blame the System blame the Law procedure blame the Corrupt officer's blame and just blame, but it will solve"? question and do protest"? will everything get well"? her job isn't to question that's media's Job. or go on protest that's Public's Job. or blame the Department That's Jury's Job. her job is to investigate, caught the culprit ,present him at court. Maintain the law and order even if it mean's to risk own life sacrifice homely comfort. Silence engulf the Prisoner cell as Khalid stared at the women sitting before him he knows her, who won't when she's always on Daily time newspaper"? with her success her fierce Sincere Persona. He won't admit or let it become oblivious he's scared of her she's Former encounter specialist to. "will she kill me"? is this my last"? he didn't gets to think much as she spoke again).


"Wow you sure pity us don't you"? Khalid"! then why don't you help us"?


"Cause it's non-profitable eventually a costly bargain"! "ACP you have Beautiful Daughter are you really void of emotion"? Don't you care about her"? All this tormenting and shed blood won't go in vain there's consequence"! 


"You're saying as if only i am family person here"? you're not"? in my knowledge you have Young sister"! Don't you Khalid"? 


"Don't drag her in this"! it's me and my Boss you're having grudge with"!


"Don't provoke me to do then"! And reveal everything you know"!


(The men let out a defeated sigh, the week of torment didn't break him, but mention of his own sister did, Foolish move it was on his part to mention about her daughter. when she have his nerve on hand close enough to break, What will happen"? If i didn't tell her she will kill me eventually, what about my sister"? Boss will ruin her won't he"? ask his scared heart, which he had no answer about. "I smuggle thing's, Govt doesn't permit.."Not of those, that Conscience Doesn't permit. The word's of his boss echo's in his brain as he realized no matter how scary he's he won't ruin an innocent life. The men who could pick a fight with his partner for smuggling thing,s made to ruin present and future of many. without second thought cannot spoil the Life of his own men's family).


"The consignment are seized by your team"! but Boss Kill the men who are master of entire Consignment"!.. he doesn't take failure besides they're not his men either"!..


"Not his men"? whom they work for"? if not his men then why they carry out his task"? or why he even get to kill them"?


"the king of Black world"!. "Resides in Dubai"! he had a deal with Boss"! he will let his business flourished here such as Human trafficking"! "Smuggling of drug's human organ's Skin's of Animal's"! but in return he won't dare to mangle with his territory"! Smuggling of Gem's and Land of Mines"!..because of him if his men get caught"! he will surely kill the one they assign the task to carry out"!


(Khalid continue revealing about his boss and his partner's, Where's Gayatri get lost in her thought's. Impressive what a deal"! in a way acting as friend but the real foe"! we just caught his men who get bailed way sooner then any VIP person"! but he killed the men of Underworld king"!. Sound pretty much an ally of Department though"! But what's his intention"? want's to be the only one to rule Black-world"? with Conscience"? or something else"? what if the mastermind behind the seizing of Consignment is he only"? Targeting his Opponent by keeping gun on our Shoulder"? if this continue surely the leader will try to get back to India, a risky moment, but they have to be ready for that, analyzing entire situation, she rose from chair and walked out of the Prisoner cell).


"Mam I beg your pardon but"!.. why you always stop on this"?... 


"He's isn't our real Enemy"! that's why Ajay"! 


(Gaining the not so satifictory reply from Gayatri, he just let out a sigh surely they were having same thoughts about entire case. But Unlike Gayatri he was kneen on revealing the Mask men who is helping them more like bossing them around. If anything Ajay hates then "it's getting credited for someone else achievement"! He glanced back at Gayatri she was now sitting on chair taking sip of water from glass. He sigh inwardly it's been five years since he left, yet she didn't get over with the loss of her son. A son who had been apple of her eye, a son who was everything she ever wanted from her own blood. On whom she rely mostly cause of sharing similar interest. A son whose sight lit her mood like none can,now even the mention of very son set her on fire. His chain of thoughts broke by Gayatri words).


"What are you looking at Ajay"?...


"You know Mam we can investigate about him even now"!..


(Gayatri needn't to ask whom he's mentioning about the look was obliviously conveying the same to Ajay, that she know however he gained his answer from her curt nod of denial. She change the topic by instructing him about plan to which he listened carefully. To proceed in the matter of caughting the right hand men of black world leader. Who could be arriving soon or he already did"?).


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"You're my Friend and as much i want's to help you"! you should know i can do nothing unless he's ready"! 


(Spoke the Girl Annoyingly, dressed in Silk white shirt and black skirt, Sitting on Couch, staring right at the two girl one mem sitting opposite to her. Her profession  was such, that she often had to repeat and reply the provoking Queries, but today she wasn't in control). 


"I know and that's why I want's you to talk to him"! Anaya Ranvijay Please Say something something to her"!


"What's there to Listen"? he's isn't ready to file case against his Boss"! Why cause he's ashamed of being a victim"? 


"Pari"! Calm down"!


"You're asking me to calm down"?. As if you're not aware Anaya"? I already have bussiness to manage"! and in all this you want's me to meet a guy"! preach him"! why it's important for him to fight for justice"?


(Hissed Paridhi showing her insensitivity towards the gravity of situation, but Anaya and Ranvijay who work with her knew her from UNI days was well aware what she's trying to do, But today they can see the disapproval in her eyes , inhaling sharp intakes of breath she spoke again, this time in tender tone trying to be little more considerate, to girl who is now ready to burst out crying hard).


"Look Kritika"! As Lawyer I can fight for your Brother"! but he need's to step up first get ready for the war"! This isn't Simple you know"? Like you even he's aware"! The biggest hurdle is when no one Even Believe a men could be victim of"!...


(Her words trailed off as Kritika's cell buzzed notifying her about a call, glancing at the cell laying on table she pick it up, the caller ID made her little cautious. She glance back at Anaya who was looking up at her curiously, she spoke in low tone informing them about the call).


"It's from office"!


(Anaya and Ranvijay nodded in understanding, where's Pari just rolled her eyes, on the fact Kritika needs to leave now hence Anaya spoke to gave her friend assurance. Staring at her held her hand giving a firm squeeze she convey her own decision to her).


"Kritika don't worry"! we will meet Karthik soon"! And I promise we won't let his Culprit escape"! 


"Thank you Anaya"! I had lost all hopes"! thank you so much for your faith and support"! 


(Spoke Kritika back wiping her tears, staring up at Anaya and Ranvijay, then Pari as she got up to leave. she come to visit her Friend Anaya and Ranvijay who are lawyer, to seek help for her Brother. She knew they cannot do anything if Her own brother is not ready to step up and fight for justice.  However they suggested to meet Pari , Any other lawyer wasn't ready to hear her out as well, cause for them it's a lose battle, yet they were ready to make best out of victim's situation and sensitive case. Kritika to get up from couch to leave from Pari Law firm Office. Ranvijay's heart went out for the Girl who is his friend to, everytime he had met family of rape survivor, he never Gets to keep his heart void from Emotion. It's devasted him everytime, the way he fight or The way his battlefield are shape up for justice isn't place to get over power by emotion of heart. But shrewdness of mind, fierceness of warrior to win with facts with proof most importantly knowledge. But today the scenario was different for him, infact situation was no different for Pari and Anaya as well. the Law they believed so religiously in had failed  someone and refused justice to many. They had always known it, but seeing it from the naked eye, was more hurtful then knowing. They knows from little experience they gained in four year of Law profession. Law and justice doesn't go hand in hand not always. For many reason power , money, Biasedness are main hurdles, Slow long expensive procedure or another, there are more hurdles depend on the complications of case. Sighing inwardly as they  thought how they could convince the victim to fight for justice get his culprit punish"?. As if reading each other thoughts Anaya spoke).


"Truth will prevail guys"!.. good will win over evil"!.. 


"Sure it will"! We will win"! But this case I am not sure Anaya"! 


"Why Ranvijay"?...


"I think it's better if Pari or you take this case to fight"!..not me"!..


(Anaya stared at Ranvijay it's first time when he's being truly choosy in picking up a case to fight. But as soon he mentioned Paridhi name she sigh glance at Pari who was now playing with paper weight, he's right men fighting case for men isn't new. But women fighting for men"?. Sure create difference over the decades men are known to provide protection to female, in return they gain emotional comfort moral support, fortune of health and wisdom. But time has changed and now both equally need protection and ally to fight the battle of life).


"I cannot"!.. "better Anaya do"!..


"Why not Pari"?.. is cause you don't believe a men could be victim of"!..


"Ranvijay you know what I believe what I don't so don't twist my intention behind denial"!..


"I won't if you reveal the reason"!.. 


"I am busy did you forget I recently gotten Mr Desai as my ally"! and got deal From Mr Mittal"!...


"You had gotten more deal and ally yet you never back from picking up case to fight"!..  bussiness is your profession"!.. but fighting for justice is your passion"!.. how can you"?...


"Wait"! Ranvijay don't you think"? she look different today"!.. 


(Spoke Anaya making Both of them halt on their words as they shared a observing glance at each other. Pari made a face as soon she realised what Anaya mean, by glancing at herself in cell glass, at same time Ranvijay grinned at the realization to. Then gave her look stating spill it now, Making her annoy she leaned back on chair making Ranvijay spoke).


"What got you sleep Deprived Pari"? 


"Work"!.. "leave that"! as you guys promise Kritika"!. so answer me"! when you plan to meet him"?..


"Today"!.. 


"Want me to join"?...


"No because you have meeting with certain someone today"! ..


(Pari rolled her eyes realising they're already aware, about her plan of day, watching them grinning silly at her, she glared at them but didn't said much. Making them stop grinning as they clear throat then change the topic by discussing  about case like she did previously).


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"Why you lead the mission on own"?...already he's after me"? And you you're risking your life"!..


(Echo's the voice of young men, stepping in room sighting the girl laying on bed, getting her wound inspected by doctor. The girl winch at the sudden yelling but didn't said anything, her eyes were cold and void of Emotion, where's face was hidden behind the black mask, like the face of men which was secured by the mask to. However the annoyance and anger was clearly express through the voice of men).


"Yelling won't stop me"! from doing what I am trained to do"!...


"Ofcourse it won't"!.. but remember you little Rabble-Rouser if you killed my chance to prove my innocence"!..through your reckless leading mission"! Then I will ruin you"!...


"Hadn't you done it already"?...


"So did you"! "Cause of you I lost my identity"! my family"! their love respect and faith for myself"!..


"We are on same boat"!.. why you just don't give up on your claim of hating me"! 


"Cause that will satisfy you"! Which I don't want"! And don't try to provoke me"!..if I see single scratch on you swear you won't like the consequence"!...


(The conversation was getting heated up, both weren't ready to back however one already shown it's submissive side through the silence, the men was about to speak further but a knock on door stop him he tilted his head then nodded motion the person to go ahead with what he comes for).


"Sir they met first time"!..


(A gasp escape from the men, where's the girl eyes reflect fear, both glance at each other. THEY MET FIRST TIME"? they needn't to ask who cause they know very well, because they expected this to happen. But this soon they weren't ready not when they're so close to achieving their own goal of life. Personal conflict could get the worse out of them. They cannot take risk on but now they have no choice a minute of deadly silence later the men spoke up).


"Did he found me"?..


"Not yet"!.. "no one can trace us"!..


"But he's an expectation in the no one category"!... Keep eye on both of them"! And provide me update on each move of Rathor heir and Rajput heiress"! 


(Ordered the men in Authoritive tone, but his voice end up trembling in last, which the girl sense it to be the concern and fear. Concern for their well-being fear of anticipated ploy of their fate).


"He won't harm her even if he know you"!..


"You sure on that"?... "I doubt though"!..


(Giving a mocking reply, he walk out of the room like he arrived. Leaving a very distress girl behind).


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"Unbelievable the guy isn't punctual"!


(Spoke Girl letting out her annoyance, on the cell screen with girl having video chat. after giving curt glance around checking her wrist watch for time. Surely waiting for someone is never been her style, that's why five minute delay is making her feel like it's been five hours. Knowing the situation of her pal). 


"So now you know how I feel when you people come late"!..


"Shut up Naina"!. I have plenty of important task to dealt with instead waiting for someone who I have to interact only for hour"!.


"Chill Pari we don't want you to chase the lad away through your anger"! Do we"? No right"! so Keep calm"!..


(Paridhi was about to object when low sound of throat clearing, a way to gain attention come from left side. She immidately pulled the cell aside and taking deep sigh tilted her head left side to see the person. Immidately her eyes widened in surprise watching the very familiar face which had been hunting her from evening. "How he could be here"? So many men boys around and leaving all of them. "My friend fix my date with him"? Is he really that free to accept such a thing"?. Thought Paridhi inwardly when snap of finger's click brought her out of her thoughts).


"Mind"! sharing the table with me"?..


"No I don't"!..


(Before she could speak further, he made himself comfortable on seat opposite to her, making Pari rolled her eyes at his audacity. However this made her realised he's isn't the one she comes to meet. Sighing inwardly at the relief of him not being the one she to lean back on chair and stared at him. Which he was doing for her while time or longer then before she saw him. Like previously today to he was sight to behold for her, dressed in Dark blue shirt black pant with blazer over it, two top button opened. Glancing around here and there obviously to not net eye with her and get caught by her. However his look was urging her to compliment him once, but at same time it's remind her the person hadn't compliment her even for once not at the party, neither now nor he thanked her. This annoy her more and she scoffed inwardly glancing at right side).


"It's seem you're here for quite long time"!.. yet you didn't ordered anything"?...


"Yes cause I am waiting for certain someone"!..


("Unlike others I care about my partner's choice"!. She wanted to add further but held on her words inwardly, she was annoyed and it was very oblivious by her body language as well her expression. First the delay of men she's supposed to meet, then the person who invaded her mind from the moment he met, come before her and effortlessly annoying her more. By his I don't give a damn attitude"!. She just pick up her cold water glass, to calm her ragging nerves which she believes could make her explode soon either on the person sitting before her, or someone else which she don't wants to. The water which was cold while back gotten warm by now. Taking a small sip put it back, Then focus back on her cell when she received a message on her cell which made her throw her cell back on table quite harshly folding her hands up she glared at the right side).


"Is there something wrong"?.. "you can share if you want"!..


"Who are you Mr Rathor"?.. my friend"? my colleague"? my Business partner"?.. 


"Presently No one"! but I can be"! Ofcourse in future who knows"!.. 


"Aren't you little to hopeful"?.. "and no not future"! I will dictate who will be mine and what"!.. 


"Miss Rajput you don't believe in fate"! do you"?...what if our meeting at moment is ploy of Destiny"?


"Yes I don't"!.. "And why should I"? When it's pretty oblivious our future depend on our deed"!.. "what you want"?.. 


(ask pari straightly without twisting or stretching btue conversation, when Rajat gave her look of confusion, she smirk then glanced around to the five vacant place then her own table, as if telling him "leaving all the five vacant tables you comes to mine"!.. surely it's not ploy of Destiny but yours"!...so spill out your intention"!.. making Rajat stunned for seconds but then he smirk inwardly as he let out amused smile. "No wonder you rule bussiness world"!.. glancing down at her he take a look at her appearance. Dressed in Blue color v cut top, Black pant high heel black sandal Open hair. For while time he sat mesemrized by the sight of her, so many things happening so many things he wants to do, yet when he finally get's ready to execute his plans he find himself. Dumbfounded by the mere look he thought for second what to reply back but then smirking inwardly he spoke with tight smile on face).


"I wanted to conduct a conversation with you"!.. I believe at evening our meet didn't went well"!. "I made you uncomfortable"!


(Sure it didn't went well cause you pissed me off"! But uncomfortable"? God this men is truly shrewd won't say yes, to prove he made me uncomfortable cause this could be taken in other way by him , like he effect me"!. I cannot say no either, damn him"! cause that's a lie. Gulping in audibly she tilted her head sideways, trying not to embarassed herself further by not speaking anything to kill the awakeward silence. But fortunately for her and Rajat the waiter arrived there).


"Will you like to order now"?...


(As soon the question put forth by Waiter, Unknowingly Paridhi look at Rajat which made him very amused, he just stayed silent, where's Paridhi herself shrugging her shoulders, order for herself completely ignoring him. Making him more amused then ever, "It won't take long when you will be rely on me"! Today my presence mattered soon I will be the only to matter for you"!. Thought he inwardly as waited for waiter to leave. When a thought crossed his mind, that she given credit of her success only to her dad at award function. Unlike other who will appreciate both their parents. Perhaps doesn't share warm equation"?.. but then he decided to speak again after all he know very well the certain someone won't be coming anymore).


"You're not leaving the certain someone isn't coming"! surely we can entertain each other presently"!..


(Paridhi let out a gasp listening his words, not only he's shrewd but he's manipulative as well bluntly straightforward"! Oh no worded he get me so cautious now what"? I shouldn't have ordered anything"! I should have left right away"! But if I leave now instead of expressing my displeasure about his presence. It will make him assume I am uncomfortable cause of him"?. After all who make decisions of leaving after ordering for themselves"?. Damn damn damn him"! Cursing him in mind she lost her paitence).


"I am waiting to know the other side"!.. 


("Tricky reply even in anger very good control on emotion not bad"! This one question mean various things, first could be waiting for that certain someone to know his side of being late. Second could be waiting for my side to explain mean my intention to come on her table"!..or conducting such a conversation with her. Surely I cannot stop myself from making a fool out of me by silence or random reply. Where's Paridhi was looking at him at last minute the change of line got her satifictory reaction. the wiped smile off from his face the fraction of troublesome thoughts in his eye got her very happy. "Serves him right"! How dare he to get me so worked up"! Now keep thinking"!.. both were judging and toying with each other. Not knowing about people who are keeping tab on them).

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update
so much mystery 

😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: James12


Oh my smiley36 but to enjoy the story you have to controlsmiley1 or else you will end up unrevealing all the mystery on own smiley16through the little clue I provided in story updates and comments smiley37 beside there are lot of mystery in story aheadsmiley2 


You make it run by your not so soon ending suspenses and want me to control it which i cant do even if i try😆


Loved the update...⭐️


Will you mind if i endup putting my assupmtions in comment😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Nice update
so much mystery 

😊

Thank you 🤗Divya ♥️ I am glad😳

you liked it 🤗 thanks lot stay safe 🙏 stay bless 🌹 take care 🤗 thanks for comment 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishu.R

You make it run by your not so soon ending suspenses and want me to control itsmiley29 which i cant do even if i trysmiley36

"Awe I can so relate to your feeling 😳 but that's plan  cause this is what will keep you guys hook to story 😉 


Loved the update...smiley10

Thank you 🤗 I am try thrilled 😃to see you enjoy the update 😳 


Will you mind if i endup putting my assupmtions in commentsmiley9

"Ofcourse not 😊I am eager to see 😃what you can smartly figure out on own   thanks 🤗 for taking your time out😳 to put forth your view 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: James12


Thank you 🤗 I am try thrilled smiley4to see you enjoy the update smiley9 

🤗


"Ofcourse not smiley1I am eager to see smiley4what you can smartly figure out on own smiley14  thanks 🤗 for taking your time outsmiley9 to put forth your view 😍

Then Will comment soon...😉


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishu.R


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>>>>>😳❤️

Then Will comment soon...smiley2

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