Mini's outburst was good . Very nicely written and she stopped herself last minute😆 good. Thanks for ending isha character 🤪
Looking forward to next .
So Neil ne pehli baar naeembi pe itna gussa kiya
Itna restless ho gaya tha
Neil ko bhi kuch to hua h kuch ho gaya h 😆
Ab tera bachna h muskill Neil 😆
Mini ko samajh gaya h ab
thanks
ye neil ko kuch kuch ho raha hai par uski tubelight jalne mein time hai abhi😆
Hey Anjali, when can we expect next part...
Now iam waiting for your write-up daily....
Originally posted by: Mistress.of.pen
Fantabulous.... eagerly waiting for the nxt update...
thanks
Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil
Excellent work anjali. Ek hi part me isha ka kaam khatam. 👏👏..
Agar show continue hota toh we had requested, isha aur haddi ko patiala se delhi ke raaste me hi swah kar do. Na divorce ki jhanjhat na court case ki. Ph house ka hi paisa bachta.
Anyway good emotional moment u added in part.
Waiting for the further update.
thanks
i always wondered ye hamesha hero heroine hi kyu road accident mein marte hain villain kyu nahi🤣
Originally posted by: sou-miya
Anjali
I just want to say thank you... And can't express my feelings in words
You are making Mineil and us alive...after all these
Pls do continue to write...
thank you so much yaar
glad you like it this much
Rosy ki job Bach gai 😆
Or isha Ki jaan gai
Isbaar Neil ka copy mechanism fail ho gaya
Mini ko sahi time pe hosh aa gaya 😆
Per dono ke bich ye duri 😔
Kya hoga ab 😔
Bina precap ke
Next update tak sochne ki h majburi 😆
Jaldi update karna 🤗
thanks
tumne toh rhyming mein comment kiya hai😆 nice
yes is bar mini ne rok liya khud ko neil ka kaala jadu nahi chal paaya is bar🤣
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Neil's mechanism failed 🤣what will he do now ? MiNeil conversations was good . Looking forward for this Miniel journey now .😉
thanks
is bar neil babu fail ho gaye
kaala jadu didnt work🤣
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