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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

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If u think that u have idea but not being able to write it in a form of story u just can post it as # Idea Kalyani is growing up # My thought .i will attach it as a separate thread.You can add any reference of film too.write ur ideaz . Link is given .mention ur name.

got it....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Titu di idea given just check and tell me ki correct he ya nahi 

I am going to bed in next 10 mts

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Titu di idea given just check and tell me ki correct he ya nahi 

I am going to bed in next 10 mts

ok tu so ja meine batati  hun ! no worries

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Posted: 4 years ago

explanation


bhagu - write how kallu fall into the pool . elaborate the situation


gayu -write elaborately how language became a problem and why it is bold . kuch aisa bol diya galti se jiska meaning  sunke hal behal  ho jata hai  ...

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Posted: 4 years ago

KALMA007 (riya i guess) - tera idea vi accha hai bas situation ko AN KE Bahar rakh do and make it long . ideas ko elaborate karo !!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

explanation


bhagu - write how kallu fall into the pool . elaborate the situation


gayu -write elaborately how language became a problem and why it is bold . kuch aisa bol diya galti se jiska meaning  sunke hal behal  ho jata hai  ...

elaborated it di

abhi itna hi sujh raha hai

bye

Good night

Edited by Bacillusbadius - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

elaborated it di

abhi itna hi sujh raha hai

bye

Good night

OK KEEP WRITING MEIN JUDTE JAYUNGI.BOHOT KAM AATE HAI IDEAS.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

KALMA007 (riya i guess) - tera idea vi accha hai bas situation ko AN KE Bahar rakh do and make it long . ideas ko elaborate karo !!


Simple, Malhar should say that he's giving back AN to AS as he won't be able to live there with Kalma's memories everywhere when she's about to marry someone else, sells his old house where he lived with Sampu (don't like the idea of KalMa romancing in the same place he did it many times with that witch) and rents a place for himself and his son... everyone else from the Rane family remains there because they know about his plan and they do it on the basis of being Kaka's and Anu's family and since the latter's health isn't good, AS doesn't protest and celebrates just having ousted Malhar from her house and,soon, Kalyanis life.

Basically, Kalyani will be at Malhars new home everyday and every chance she has with the excuse to see Pillu and KalMa will end up getting romantic in spite of their decisions... and with no one else in the house,it won't be awkward as it'd be if they were in AN, Malhars old house or Trilok's home.

Sorry for the extra long posts.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalma007


Simple, Malhar should say that he's giving back AN to AS as he won't be able to live there with Kalma's memories everywhere when she's about to marry someone else, sells his old house where he lived with Sampu (don't like the idea of KalMa romancing in the same place he did it many times with that witch) and rents a place for himself and his son... everyone else from the Rane family remains there because they know about his plan and they do it on the basis of being Kaka's and Anu's family and since the latter's health isn't good, AS doesn't protest and celebrates just having ousted Malhar from her house and,soon, Kalyanis life.

Basically, Kalyani will be at Malhars new home everyday and every chance she has with the excuse to see Pillu and KalMa will end up getting romantic in spite of their decisions... and with no one else in the house,it won't be awkward as it'd be if they were in AN, Malhars old house or Trilok's home.

Sorry for the extra long posts.

Extra long post hi chahiye . Ruk i am copying it to the idea thread! I am loving this. Kitna accha response mila ! 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Where are my story writers .