ARJUN FF: HUM SAATH SAATH HAI(Update part 6 on page 14) - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

114

Views

14818

Users

21

Likes

275

Frequent Posters

Butterfly09 thumbnail
Anniversary 5 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

emotional and sad update

but written very beautifully that my eyes got teary while reading it

poor kaul family had to go through all this on their parents anniversary

bobby is still in shock!

all description was very painful to read also!

so mama mami is coming 

is that means they all are shifting to mumbai?

sorry for late comment

Hey dear

yeah very emotional Update

our eyes also got teary while writing this and it's imagination is enough to pass shiver to spine!!!

Yup Bobby (Geeta) is in shock and her condition is very worst. She don't want to accept reality. She love her Mr. raj very much and now his death is worst truth she can't digest

Yes Mama and Mami are coming.

We are very glad to read comment!! If reader can feel the emotion of scene then it's victory of writer and we glad that we are on the way of improvement. 

We are going to update soon...may be today!!!

so keep commenting and keep loving

it means a lot and encourage us too!!!

thanks once again!


love,

Butterfly09 & Cutie2804

Butterfly09 thumbnail
Anniversary 5 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#92

Hey dear

Thank you very much!!!

glad that you like it.

keep loving and keep commenting


love,

Butterfly09 & Cutie2804

Cutie2804 thumbnail
Anniversary 5 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#93

Hey Guys.

We hope you all are taking care of yourselves and your family.

Please be careful and take necessary precautions. 

We know aap mein se kaafi log aise honge jo humari tarah ghar pe hi hai as some job sector and school colleges are closed... aise mein we guess update apka thoda time spend karne mein help karega😃

so here is the next update of story...


banner


name



PART::: 5


                As officer advice sakshi to not live at kaul house due to investigation, Noor Aapa decided to take family to her house for some days. There is no other option and Aapa is the only person on whom they can trust now at moment so all agreed. 

        Other side Antra Di calls Aisha and tell her about last rituals. Mummy’s condition is not well so there is no meaning to inform her about this. About Ishu, no one have enough strength to tell him so they decided to not make things more critical. Aapa takes Ishan and Mummy to her house and others left for last rituals.


[SONG IN BACKGROUND]

[MUSIC]

Chithi Na Koi Sandesh....
Hoooo,... Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye


Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye


                         All reached at burial site. Priest also reached there as Antra Di already inform him about death. Chotu starts doing all the rituals. Some friends of Brother and sisters also comes at funeral.


Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye


Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...


                          At the time of cremation all hold chotu’s hand and say good bye to their lovely father. They know that Ashok always want to see his children together so in this last moment they are here standing holding each other’s hand.


Ek Aah Bhari Hogi
Humne Na Suni Hogi
Jaate Jaate Tumne
Aawaz To Di Hogi
Har Waqt Yehi Hai Gham
Us Waqt Kahan The Hum
Kahan Tum Chale Gaye

 


Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye


Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...

[AT NIGHT]

[AAPA’S HOUSE]

                All are sitting outside on stairs. Ishu is with Aapa and mummy is in room. All are sitting together but all are quiet. No one is uttering a single word. All are remembering their best moment with papa. Papa’s voice keeps ringing in everyone’s ears.

 

 

Har Cheez Pe Ashkoon Se
Likha Hai Tumhara Naam
Ye Raste Ghar Galiyaan
Tumhe Kar Na Sake Salaam
Hai Dil Mein Reh Gaye Baat
Jaldi Se Chuda Kar Haath
Kahan Tum Chale Gaye


Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye


Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...

[MUMMY’S ROOM]

                        Mummy is sitting on bed holding pocket watch. She looks up and looks towards window. She gets up and looked outside.

MUMMY: Abhi tak nahi aaye...Itni raat ho gayi hai...aa jaana chahiye tha ab tak...Kuch samjte hi nahi... 

                She again look outside.

MUMMY: Raat ho chuki hai...ab tak to hospital ko bandh kar dena chahiye tha...kaha reh gaye...

                She goes near table which located near bed and sits on bed. She dials number on landline.

MUMMY: Phone kyun nahi lag raha...


[OUTSIDE]


                Aapa comes and looked at everyone.She feels bad seeing everyone. All are looking lost and upset. She goes near them.

AAPA: Suno

                This breaks everyone’s thoughts and all turn towards her.

SAKSHI: Kya hua Aapa?

AAPA (with sadness): Vo Ishu kab se doctor sahab ke baare mein puch raha hai...Maine baat taal ne ki bohat koshish ki lakin vo samj hi nahi raha... kya karu kuch samj nahi aa raha

CHOTU: Di I think hume usse sach bata dena chahiye

ANTRA DI: Chotu! Kya bol rahe ho?

SAKSHI: Kaise batayenge usse? Vo abhi baccha hai...kaise samjayenge usse...uske dil pe jo bitegi hum soch bhi nahi sakte...yeh sahi waqut nahi hai

AISHA: Haan...already situation theek nahi hai aise mein Ishu ko sach batana matlab situation ko aur bigadna

                Before they discussing about it further, Mummy gives call to Antra. Antra Di went towards Mummy’s room.

CHOTU: Me bhi jaata hoon

                Saying this he also went behind Antra Di.


[IN ROOM]

                Mummy is still trying to call Papa.

ANTRA DI: Mummy apne bulaya?

MUMMY: Haan Antra dekh naa...doctor sahab ka phone nahi lag raha...Raat ho chuki hai phir bhi nahi aaye...

                Chotu thinks something and sits near mummy. He takes phone from her hand and puts it on table.

MUMMY: Tune phone kyun rakh diya...Mujhe doctor sahab se baat karni hai...

CHOTU: Mummy mene baat kar li papa se...unho ne kaha ki unhe late ho jayega...Aap so jaauo

                Antra looked at chotu and give look like "yeh kya bol rahe ho tum?". chotu nods like “abhi yahi theek hai”.

MUMMY: Aise kaise late ho jayega...Unhe bol naa anniversary bhi to celebrate karna hai...

CHOTU: Nahi aayenge vo... Aap please abhi so jaauo...

                Chotu makes her lay down on bed. Mummy closes her eyes. Chotu and Di looks at each-other. Chotu goes near Di.

CHOTU: Di mujhe yahi sahi laga abhi ke liye... mummy ko aram ki zaroorat hai...

DI: Hmm Theek kiya tumne.

CHOTU: abhi toh theek hai Di lakin aage kya karenge?

DI: nahi pata chotu...Mumma to kuch samj hi nahi rahi hai... Vo to sunna hi nahi chahti ki papa nahi hai

                Suddenly mummy wakes up. Di and chotu see this and run towards her.

DI: Mumma kya hua?

MUMMY: Mein samj gayi vo kyun nahi aa rahe...meine apne lines nahi gaaye iss liye vo naraz ho gaye hai...Mujhe apne lines gaani hai

                Saying this she starts singing song “Abhi naa jaauo chodker”.

MUMMY:                      Sitaare jhilmila uthe
                                         Sitaare jhilmila uthe, 

                                 charag jagmaga uthe
                                         Bas ab naa mujhko tokna
                                         Bas ab naa mujhko tokna
                                         Na badh ke raah rokna
                                         Agar main ruk gayi abhi
                                         To jaana paaoongi kabhi
                                         Yehi kahoge tum sada ke dil abhi nahi bhara
                                         Jo khatm ho kisi jagah yeh aisa silsila nahi
                                         Abhi nahi, abhi nahi, nahi nahi nahi nahi
                                        Abhi naa jao chhod kar ke dil abhi bhara nahi

                       Hearing Mummy’s singing others come there. They saw mummy is singing. Mummy’s condition is vulnerable. Di and chotu comes out as now it’s unbearable for them.

[BACKGROUND MUSIC CONTINUES]

Abh Yaadon Ke Kaante
Is Dil Mein Chubhte Hain
Na Dard Thaherta Hai
Na Aansoon Rukte Hain
Tumhe Dhoondh Raha Hai Pyaar
Hum Kaise Karein Iqraar
Ke Haan Tum Chale Gaye

 

 


Chithi Na Koi Sandesh
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye


Is Dil Pe Lagaa Ke Thes
Jaane Woh Kaun Sa Desh
Jahan Tum Chale Gaye...


O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye
  O Kahan Tum Chale Gaye..
.


                    All comes in living room and wiped their tears.

AAPA: Tum log room mein jaauo... Bhabhi ko main dekhti hoon... Tum logon ko bhi aram ki zaroorat hai... abhi ke liye so jaauo... kal nayi subah hogi toh kuch naa kuch hal nikal aayega

                All nods.

LIZA: Aapa Ishu kaha hai?

ISHU: mein yaha hoon Di...kya hua? Mumma apni wali lines gaa rahi hai (with excitement) matlab papa aa gaye?

AISHA: Nahi vo bas aise hi gaa rahi hai...

ANTRA DI: Accha ab chalo sone ka waqut ho raha hai

ISHU: sone ka waqut? Lakin Didu aaj toh homework kiya hi nahi

CHOTU: homework ki zaroorat nahi hai

LIZA: Abhi kuch waqut tum school nahi jaauoge

                He jumped with joy.

ISHU: Wow great... kuch waqut ke liye holidays...maja aayega

ANTRA DI: Haan ab chalo Di ke saath jaake so jaauo...late ho chuka hai

ISHU: okay Good night

ALL: Good night

                Sakshi and Aisha take Ishu to room. Aapa goes to Mummy’s room and other went to other room to get some rest.


[IN ROOM]

                Sakshi,Aisha and Ishan enter in room. They help Ishu to change into his night suit. Ishu sleeps on bed and Aisha and Sakshi sits on both side of him. Sakshi cover him with blanket and Aisha put his “Spiderman” toy near him.

SAKSHI: Chalo ab so jaauo... dekho kitni raat ho gayi hai... abhi tak jaag rahe ho, galat baat hai naa...

ISHU: Di vo mujhe naa thoda darr lag raha hai.

AISHA: Darr? Kyun?

ISHU: Papa ghar nahi aa rahe hai aur mummy bhi kuch badli badli lag rahi hai...Maine kitni baar bulaya lakin theek se baat bhi nahikar rahi...

SAKSHI: Aisa kuch nahi hai Ishu. Papa ko ilaaj ki zarurat hai naa iss liye major chaudhary unhe apne sath UK leke gaye hai aur Mummy bhi theek hai

AISHA: Tu jaanta hai naa agar mummy ne sun liya toh mummy ka temperature high ho jayega...

                Ishu smiles.

SAKSHI: haan aur kyun lag rahi hai mummy badli hui? (hold his nose) Unki naak (nose) badi ho gayi hai yaa (put her hands on her head) unke sar pe seeng (horn) nikal aaye hai? Haan?

                Saying this she starts tickling him and he burst out into laugh.

AISHA: Chalo ab so jaauo... Spiderman ka dream dekhna hai naa apko?

ISHU: Haan aur mein Spiderman ko kahunga ki vo apne sath Papa ko bhi leke aaye sapne mein...Phir hum dream mein bohat masti karenge

SAKSHI: Haan phir chalo aankhe bandh karo aur so jaauo.

                Ishu closed his eyes. Sakshi starts patting his forehead and soon he drift into sleep.


[AFTER HOUR]

[OTHER ROOM]

                Antra is sitting on bed. Liza is sleeping putting her head in Antra’s lap. Chotu is sleeping on couch. Antra close her eyes and try to sleep. After couple of minutes Aapa enters in room.

AAPA: Antra...

                Antra Di open her eyes and looked at Aapa. Aapa is looking very tensed and restless.

ANTRA DI: Aapa kya hua?

AAPA: Antra vo Bhabhi...

ANTRA DI (tensed voice): Kya hua mumma ko...

AAPA: Bhabhi apne room mein nahi hai

ANTRA DI (shocked): Room mein nahi hai matlab? Aapa kisi aur room mein hogi dekho naa

AAPA: Meine sab jagah dekh liya...vo ghar mein kahi nahi hai

ANTRA DI: What?

                She makes Liza sleep on pillow and stands up.

ANTRA DI: Chalo bahar dekhte hai...mein sakshi aur Ayu ko bhi batati hoon

                Di went to sakshi and Aisha’s room. Both are sitting in balcony. Di tells them about mummy. They tell chotu and tell him to take care of Liza and Ishu. Aapa, Sakshi, Antra and Aisha went out to find mummy. They start searching. Other side mummy keep walking on some unknown road singing song and holding pocket watch without paying any attention to surroundings. She didn’t wear her sandals so her foot start bleeding. This side Aapa and sisters see everywhere but they fail to find mummy. They are getting tensed by each passing moment.


[MORNING 6 AM]

                Whole night spent but they didn’t find a single clue about Mummy.

SAKSHI: Subah ho gayi lakin mumma kahi nahi mili...pata nahi kaha hogi vo...

ANTRA DI: Mumma kaha chali gayi Aapa...

AAPA: Allah kare bhabhi jaha ho theek ho

                They reached in garden. Aisha saw mummy there. She is sitting on bench.

AISHA: Di, Aapa...vo dekho mumma

                They run towards bench. Mummy is still singing that song and looking at watch.

DI: Mumma...

MUMMY: Antra dekh naa...Maine song bhi finish kar diya lakin vo abhi tak nahi aaye...Har baar mein naraz hoti hoon aur vo gaana gaa kar mana lete hai.. Iss baar vo rooth gaye hai aur mein gaana gaa rahi hoon toh vo maan hi nahi rahe... Antra beta tu bula de naa unhe

ANTRA DI: mumma vo ab nahi aayenge... Vo nahi rahe...

MUMMY: teri baat nahi manenge.. Sakshi aur Aisha ki baat zaroor manenge... Tum do no bolo naa papa ko

SAKSHI: Mumma papa kisi ke bhi bulane se nahi aayenge

AISHA: haan mumma vo bohat dur jaa chuke humse...

MUMMY: vo zarur aayenge... Mein unhe phone kar ke daantungi to vo dodte hue aa jayenge apni bobby ko manane ke liye

ANTRA DI: nahi aayenge vo mumma... Please hosh mein aauo

MUMMY: tu nahi samjegi...abhi phone karungi mein unhe toh dodte hue aa jayenge...

               Saying this she stands up and starts walking. Antra holds her hand and makes her walk with her.


[AT AAPA’S HOME]

            Chotu, Liza and ishu are there. Chotu inform liza about Mummy. Ishu is playing outside the house.

ISHU (to toy): Spiderman tum mere dost ho naa.. Tum naa papa ko jaldi se theek kar do... Phir hum sab bohat masti karenge... Jaldi theek kar doge naa?

           Same moment mami and mama comes there.

MAMI (to mama): Ishu toh yaha hai...

          Mama looks the house. Mami comes near Ishu.

ISHU (happily): Aree mami Aap log yaha...kaise ho Aap? Hello Mamu...

MAMA: Hello beta...(To Mami) Reshma mein andar jaake dekhta hoon!

            Mama went in house.

MAMI: Kaha hai mummy?

ISHU: Mummy bahar gayi hai... Papa bhi nahi hai...Bhaiya aur liza Di hai ghar pe

MAMI: Apni mami ko gale nahi lagega... Aaja...

              Ishu hugs mami. Then both went inside house. Liza and chotu see mami and hugged her and start crying.

ISHU: Aap sab phir rone lage... Yeh sab ko ho kya gaya hai?

LIZA: kuch nahi ishu... Kitne waqut baad mami ko mile naa iss liye Khushi ke aansu aa gaye

ISHU: ohho Papa sahi kehte hai... Aap girls emotional fool hoti ho... Jab dekho tab rone lag jaati ho... Ab jab papa aayenge naa to mein unhe bataunga ki aap sab kaise ro rahe the phir dekhna vo aap sab ka kaise majak udaate hai...

                Mami gets emotional seeing Ishu.

MAMA: Chotu Didi kaha hai?

CHOTU: Vo mama

                Before chotu say something, Mummy comes there. Antra Di, Sakshi, Aisha and Aapa come there running behind Mummy.

MUMMY: mein abhi unhe phone kar ke daant lagati hoon

ANTRA DI: Mumma suno humari baat...

                Mummy is standing there looking at watch. Sakshi and Aisha see Mami and run towards her, Hug her and start crying. Antra also goes near her.

ANTRA DI: Mami...

                Mami see her and hugged her. Mama is looking at mummy and he is shocked seeing her condition. Mummy’s foot is injured. She is looking at pocket watch mindlessly. Her hair is massed up and her condition is very bad. Mami also see her and goes near her.

MAMI: Didi...Didi yeh apko kya ho gaya hai?

MUMMY: Yeh ghadi (watch) kharab ho gayi hai...Doctor sahab ko puri raat dhundha...apni lines bhi gaayi lakin vo aaye hi nahi abhi tak...

                Mami looks at others. Di nods in helplessness. Mami shakes mummy and say loudly...

MAMI: Didi...

                But mummy didn’t reply and again said,

MUMMY: meine gaana gaaya lakin vo aa hi nahi rahe...

                Mami again call her name loudly...

MAMI: Didi....

                But mummy’s condition is same. Mami hugs her. Sakshi looks at Mama. He is standing there numb. Mami parted and looks at mama.

MAMI: Hume Didi ko hospital le jaana chahiye

                Mama nods.

SAKSHI: Di Aap yaha ruko mein aur Ayu jaate hai...

                Sakshi,Aisha, Mama and Mami left for hospital.

LIZA: Di mumma theek to ho jayegi naa?

ANTRA DI: haan Liza...Tension mat le...vo jaldi theek ho jayegi bas ek baar vo yeh sach maan le ki Papa...

                Liza puts hand on her shoulder. Di gives hug to her. Chotu also hug both sisters.

ISHU: Aap tino akele pyaar jata rahe ho...mujhe koi nahi bulayega?

DI: Aree tujhe kaise bhul sakte hai? tu toh sab se chotu sa pyaara sa bhai hai naa humara...come...

                Ishu runs and trio include him in their hug.

AAPA (Thought): Allah kya kar diya tune...Baccho se unki Zindagi chin li...kaise sambhalenge yeh khud ko aur parivaar ko...Bhabhi bhi iss halat mein nahi hai ki baccho ko gale laga kar ghum baant (share)sake... bohat akele ho gaye hai bacche...


[IN HOSPITAL]

                Sakshi and Mama are with doctor in doctor’s cabin. Aisha and Mami are with mummy in other room where nurse applying bandage and medicines on mummy’s foot.


[IN CABIN]

DOCTOR: Bohat gehra shock laga hai Geeta ji ko...unki Zindagi bite hue dino mein kahi tham gayi hai...It happens...kai baar aisa hota hai ki insaan Zindagi mein hue incident ko accept nahi karna chahta...uss waqut unka dil aur dimag aise waqut mein ruk jaata hai jaha koi bhi incident nahi hua ho aur sab normal ho...

SAKSHI (With Sad Tone): jaise mumma aaj bhi wahi hai jaha Papa the...

                Mama puts hand on her shoulder and tries to calm her.

MAMA: But doctor aage kya? Didi theek toh ho jayegi naa?

DOCTOR: Dekhiye kabhi kabhi jagah badal ne se bhi bohat fark padta hai...I mean yaha rahegi to wahi jagah...wahi saari cheezein...unki health ke liye yeh problem ban sakta hai...Ho sakta hai vo puri Zindagi ke liye denial mein chali jaaye...vo wahi ussi waqut mein ruk jaaye aur I am sorry to say unki condition aur critical ho sakti hai...iss liye I suggest ki Aap unhe yaha se kahi aur...

SAKSHI: Yaha se kahi aur...Kaise? Yeh humara ghar hai...hum yeh chod ke kaise jaa sakte hai?

MAMA (bit sternly): Sakshi...abhi kyun aur kaise yeh discuss karne ka kya fayda hai? Kya hai ab uss ghar mein? Ab ghar ko chodo aur apni maa ke baare mein socho...

                Lone tear escaped from sakshi’s eyes.


[OTHER ROOM]

                Nurse is applying bandage.

MAMI: Zara dhyan se kijiyega...

NURSE: Ji

MAMI: Bas ho gaya hai Didi...

                Mummy hissed in pain.

NURSE: Bas 1 second.

                Nurse completes her work.

NURSE (To Ayu): Yeh socks inhe pehna dijiye

AISHA: ji

                Aisha puts socks in mummy’s leg. Mummy looks at Ayu and suddenly smiles.

MUMMY: Ayu beta...

                Aisha looks at mummy hearing her caring voice. Smile comes on her lips.

AISHA: Mumma...

                Mummy looks at Mami and she is shocked. Big smile comes on her lips seeing Mami there.

MUMMY: Aree Reshma....

MAMI: Apne mujhe pehchaan liya Didi?

                Mami smiles. Mummy hugs her. after few seconds both parted.

MUMMY: Pagal ho gayi ho? Mein tujhe nahi pehchaungi kya? Akhir aa hi gaye naa tum yaha...

                Mami and Aisha looks at each other and smiles. They thought finally Mummy comes out of shock and become normal.

MUMMY: Reshma Doctor sahab tumhe dekh ke bohat khush ho jayenge... Bulauo naa unko...Kaha hai doctor sahab?

                Mami and Aisha’s face again covered with sadness and both’s eyes again filled with tears.

MUMMY: Aisha papa ko bula de...dekh Mami aayi hai...Reshma dekhna ab jab vo aayenge tab bohat satayenge...Unhe pura yakin tha ki tum log aauoge iss liye to vo aap logon ko ticket bhejte the har saal...aur iss saal tum log aa gaye...Mein humesha kehti thi ki tum log nahi aauoge lakin vo jeet gaye. Ab dekhna pehle vo tum ko daatenge phir mera majak udayenge aur kehnge “dekha behen ne apne bhai ko nahi pehchaana lakin Jiju smart hai iss liye unho ne apne saale sahab ko pehchaan liya”

                Mummy looks at Aisha.

MUMMY: Tu abhi yahi khadi hai? Jaa naa bula naa doctor sahab ko unhe pata to chale ki mujhe pair mein dard ho raha hai... (she looks around) aur mein yaha kya kar rahi hoon? Log kya kahenge...mere pati doctor hai aur mein kisi aur hospital mein ilaaj karva rahi hoon?

                Aisha is still standing there. Mummy starts scolding her.

MUMMY: Aisha...sun rahi hai? jaa jakar doctor sahab ko leke aa...kab se keh rahi hoon samj nahi aa raha?

AISHA: haan mumma bulati hoon na...

MUMMY: Bulati hoon ka kya matlab hai? Jaa jaake leke aa...jaa jaldi...

                Aisha went towards door and start calling Nurse seeing mummy’s condition.

AISHA: Nurse...Nurse...

                Mummy hears this and stands up from her chair and comes near Aisha.

MUMMY: Tu nurse nurse kya kar rahi hai? Doctor sahab ko bulane ko kaha tha naa? Tu rehne de... ek kaam theek se nahi kar sakti...

                Mummy goes outside the room. Aisha tries to stop her.

AISHA: Mumma apke pair mein choat lagi hai...

MAMI: Didi ruko

                Mummy starts walking in corridor and shouting papa’s name. Mummy starts crying seeing Papa nowhere. She stops one ward boy.

MUMMY: Apne doctor sahab ko dekha? Dr. Raj...I mean dr. Ashok kaul?

                He nods in no.

MAMI (To Ayu): Mein tere mama ko batati hoon tu Didi ko dekh

                Aisha nods. Mami goes towards Doctor’s cabin.


[AT CABIN]

DOCTOR: yeh kuch medicines hai...Aap le lijiye aur...

                Mami comes there.

MAMI: Doctor aap please jaldi chaliye...Didi ko sambhalna ab possible nahi hai...vo out of control ho gayi hai

                They get up and went behind Mami. This side Ayu is unable to handle mummy. Mummy went in room where death body are kept. Mummy sees one body which has burn face.Blast scene comes in front of her eyes and she start shouting and crying.  Doctor, Sakshi, Aisha and Mama-Mami comes there and hold mummy but handle her is hard task. Doctor takes her in one room. All reached there. Doctor takes one injection. Other Nurses start tying mummy’s hand. Aisha see this, she runs near that nurse.

AISHA: yeh...yeh Aap kya kar rahe hai? Aap unhe aise bandh kyun rahe hai... Aap meri mumma ke sath aisa nahi kar sakte... doctor...

DOCTOR: please hume apne kaam karne dijiye

AISHA: lakin Aap yeh galat kar rahe hai... Aap aise kaise mummy ko bandh sakte hai...

                Mama comes near Aisha and put hand on her shoulder. Aisha looked at him and said,

AISHA: Mama yeh

MAMA: Aisha unhe apna kaam karne do

AISHA: lakin

                Sakshi goes near her and hold her hand and nods in No. They looked at Mummy. Doctor gives one injection and slowly she faints. Doctor looked at Mama and said,

DOCTOR: Aap please mere saath bahar aaiiye

                Mama nods. Doctor went out.

AISHA: Mama please Aap doctor ko kahiye naa mumma ko chodne ke liye... vo aise kaise mumma ko bandh sakte hai...

               This time Mama gets angry.

MAMA: yeh zaroori hai Aisha... Didi ki halat dekho phele...subah bahar aur ab yaha...accha hua Didi hospital se bahar nahi gayi...agar inhe kuch ho jaata toh?

MAMI: Aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai... Aap shant ho jaiiye...

MAMA: Dekho Aisha hum Didi ko abhi control nahi kar sakte iss liye inhe aise hi rakhna hoga bandh ke aur behoshi ki halat mein...yeh mera faisla hai

MAMI: Aap doctor se baat kijiye...Ayu ko mein samja dungi

                Mama left the room. Mami holds Aisha’s hand.

MAMI: Unki baat ka bura mat manna beta... Apni behen ki halat dekh nahi paa rahe iss liye gussa kar rahe hai...Lakin beta vo sahi keh rahe hai...hume halat ke according chalna hoga...hai naa?

AISHA: haan mami lakin...

SAKSHI: Aisha please...

                Aisha nods in yes. Sakshi looked at Mami.

SAKSHI: Mami hum mama ka haal samj sakte hai...Mummy ko dekh ke unpe kya bit rahi hogi hum soch bhi nahi sakte

MAMI: Mujhe khushi hai ki humare bacche itne samjdaar hai... aauo bethte hai

                They sits near Mummy.


[AFTER HOUR]

                Mama enters in room. Trio gets up and goes near Mama.

MAMA: Ghar chalo...mujhe sab se important baat karni hai.

SAKSHI: Ji mama lakin Mummy...

MAMA: Inko bhi hum ghar le jaa rahe hai...ek nurse aa rahi hai humare sath

                Sakshi nods.


[AT HOME]

                Nurse helps Mama and Mami with Mummy. She gives some advice and left from there. Mama and Mami comes in living room.

MAMA (To Aapa): Aap Ishaan ko room mein le jaiiye.

                Aapa nods and goes in room with Ishaan.

CHOTU: Kya baat hai mama?

                Mama take deep sigh and said,

MAMA: Meine ek faisla kiya hai

ANTRA DI: kaisa faisla?

MAMA: Sakshi ne tum sab ko Didi ki condition ke baare mein bata hi diya hoga...unki iss halat ko dekh ke meine faisla kiya hai ki "TUM SAB MERE SATH MUMBAI CHAL RAHE HO HUMESHA KE LIYE..."

                Brothers and sisters are hell shocked hearing this. For couple of second they didn’t understand that they hear right or not. Sakshi composed herself and then says,

SAKSHI: Mama yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? Doctor ne toh sirf mahol badal ne ke liye kaha hai...hum Kashmir chod ke kaise jaa sakte hai?

MAMA: Meine decision le liya hai...mein Didi ko yaha nahi chod sakta...Hum Mumbai mein unka ilaaj karvayenge...

ANTRA DI: lakin Mama...

MAMA: Nahi Antra...koi lakin nahi...

LIZA: Mama koi aur rasta hoga...hum Kashmir chod ke kahi nahi jaayenge

AISHA: Mama...Papa kabhi Kashmir nahi chodna chahte the...vo humesha kehte the ki yeh humara ghar hai...humara city....

MAMA: Jab ghar ki ek bhi diwaar toot jaaye naa to vo ghar ghar nahi rehta hai

CHOTU: Lakin Mumbai...Mama hum sab kaise...

                Mama takes deep breath.

MAMA: Kaise? Kyun? Kis liye? Yeh sab chodo aur packing start karo. Meine doctor se iss baare mein baat kar li hai... tickets bhi book kar li hai...Hum sham ko hi Mumbai ke liye nikal rahe hai...aur yeh faisla ab nahi badlega... (To mami) Reshma... mein kuch dawayi hai vo leaker aata hoon...tum sab ko samja do aur jaane ki taiyari karo

MAMI: Ji

                Mama went to buy medicines.

MAMI: Baccho mein samj sakti hoon ki Aap sab pe kya bit rahi hai lakin abhi yahi theek hai...Dekho jo chale jaate hai unke liye hum kuch nahi kar sakte lakin jo humare pass hai...humare sath hai hume unko sambhalna hai aur abhi ke liye Didi ka yeh baat accept karna bohat zaroori hai. tum sab samj rahe ho naa?

                All just nods like they are in trance.

MAMI: chalo sab bag pack karna start karo... Kaul house jaana hoga naa...

                Chotu and liza went to their respective room. Aisha Sakshi and Antra stay there with mami. Antra and Sakshi looked at each other and nods. Antra looked at Aisha and said,

ANTRA DI: Ayu jaa jaake paani le aa...

AISHA: Abhi leke aati hoon Di

                She went into kitchen to bring water. Antra and Sakshi goes near mami.

ANTRA DI: Mami mein samj rahi hoon mama ki baat lakin please mujhe thoda waqut de do...hum koshish karenge mumma ko sach batane ki...unhe samjane ki

MAMI: Didi ki halat bilkul bhi theek nahi hai Antra... Tum nahi samja paauogi unhe

SAKSHI: Mami thoda sa waqut...Mein aur Di milker mummy ko sambhal lenge

MAMI: Kis kis ko sambhalogi sakshi? Tum dono ne apni halat dekhi hai? Didi ki wajah se apne Papa ki moat par theek se ro tak nahi paayi ho...Ayu, Liza aur chotu ke baare mein socha hai tum dono ne...Unko dekha hai kaise ho gaye hai vo? Aur Ishu...tum ishu ko yeh tak nahi samja sakti ki uske papa nahi rahe

ANTRA DI: lakin Mami...

MAMI: Dekho Antra....tum aur sakshi bade ho....samjdaar ho aur tum do no ko hi sab ko sambhalna hai...Tum dono ko apni aur sab ki Zindagi phir se start karni hai...at least Mayank ke aane tak tum dono ko hi sab ka Sahara banna hai...agar mein aur tumhare mama tum logo ke sath rahenge to sab sambhal payenge aur phir Mama bhi to Papa ke jaise hai naa?

                Sakshi and Di nods. Aisha hear entire conversation.

AISHA (In mind): Di aur Sakshi Di akele kaise sab sambhalegi...Nahi Ayu tujhe ab strong banna hoga...Tujhe di ki himmat banna hoga...unke liye koi problem create nahi karni hai...unko bekaar si baat kar ke pareshan nahi karna hai...ab masti karne wali Aisha ko gayab hona hoga aur ek mature Aisha banke sab sambhalna hoga aur mein ab aisa hi karungi... Mein Di ko har tarah se help karungi

                She goes near Mami.

AISHA: mami Paani...

SAKSHI: Chal Ayu...bags pack karte hai...mein tumhe help kar deti hoon

ANTRA DI: haan tum dono sath jaauo aur packing karo.

                      All went to Kaul house and start doing packing in their respective room.


[AFTER 3 TO 4 HOURS]

[KAUL HOUSE]

[LIVING ROOM]

MAMA: Didi ko hosh aa gaya hai aur vo abhi shant hai... Doctor ne check up kar liya hai... unka abhi travel karna safe hai...Reshma aur Noor unko leke aate hi honge... Car bhi aa gayi hai... flight 4 hour baad ki hai... sab ki packing ho gayi?

ANTRA DI: Ji Mama...

MAMA: Theek hai... laauo apne bags mujhe de do...mein car mein rakhta hoon aur ek baar acche se sab cheezein check kar lena...kaam ki koi cheez reh naa jaaye...

                All nods.

CHOTU: Chaliye Mama mein apki help karta hoon

                Mama and Chotu start load luggage in car. All went to their room and looked at every corner. All are remembering their best moments. Every corner has beautiful memory. After sometime all comes in living room.

ANTRA DI: Kitchen dekh lete hai... Ishu ke kuch cookies and chocolates bhi le lete hai

                Antra,Liza, Sakshi and Aisha went into kitchen. They remember the day when Boy team were cooking “Modur Pulaav” for girls. Everything is running in front of their eyes. Antra take water bottle. Aisha take some chocolates for Ishu and Sakshi take some cookies. They went in living room. Everyone is there. All brother and sister went to temple area and do prayer. After that once again all comes in living room. Liza comes there holding thali and starts giving Prasad to everyone.

LIZA: Papa kehte hai ki naya kaam karna ho toh Bhagwaan ko yaad karna chahiye aur unka Prasad lena nahi bhulna chahiye

                All nods.

                After some more minutes Ishu comes there holding Antra’s guitar. He gave it to Antra.

ISHU: Di apka guitar... Aap isse bhi le lo naa...maja aayega... yeh toh apka best friend hai naa... Aap hi toh kehte ho iske bina reh sakte...

                Antra Di looked at her guitar and remember how papa always helps her in songs. How they together write new songs....how they play Antakshari and enjoy a lot. Di puts guitar on table. Chotu also comes there.

CHOTU: Di apne guitar kyun rakh diya? Aap guitar nahi bajauoge?

ANTRA DI: Nahi...Ab nahi...

                Same time mama comes there.

MAMA: Chalo sab...waqut ho gaya hai. Didi, Reshma aur noor bhi aa gaye hai

                All nods. All looked around house once. They see family picture on wall. Antra Di looks at everyone and wiped her tears.

DI: Chalo late ho jayega

LIZA: Di kaise...I mean papa aisa kabhi nahi chahte the... kya hum theek kar rahe hai?

DI: Abhi yahi sahi hai Lizu...aur koi rasta nahi hai...

                Liza looks her with teary eyes and Di gives her assurance that they all are together and all will fight with this situation together. All goes out. Ishu looked at Antra’s guitar. Sakshi goes there and looked at guitar.

ISHU: Sakshi Di... Yeh guitar toh Di ke liye kitna khass hai...

SAKSHI: Haan Ishu

ISHU: Phir Di ne isse yaha kyun rakh diya? Vo toh apna guitar saath rakhna pasand karti hai naa?

SAKSHI: hmmm...

                Sakshi think something and put guitar into bag.

SAKSHI: isse dhyan se car mein rakh do...

ISHU: yeh accha idea hai... Di ko batayenge hi nahi ki humne liya hai

                Sakshi smiles and nods in yes. Ishu run outside taking guitar. Sakshi once again looked at the whole room and then comes out.

          They saw garden and went there. Mama and Mami are standing near car and seeing them.

MAMA: Reshma unse kaho jaldi kare...flight miss ho jayega

MAMI: Nahi...Unhe apne ghar ke sath sirf kuch pal aur bita lene dijiye...Bohat mushqil hota hai apne ghar ko alvida kehna...Jab hum Kashmir se gaye the tab mujhe itna waqut nahi mil paaya tha ki jee bhar ke ek baar ghar ko dekh paau...yaadon ko jee paaun iss liye mein samj sakti hoon.


[THIS SIDE IN GARDEN]

                Due to blast garden is in bad condition. Aisha plucks one tulip. All see around garden and remembering their best moments they spend there. Playing different games, Chitchat during night, during winter they used to make snowman and enjoying snow fight. Every Sunday Ishu, Chotu and Papa wash their car and girls used to tease them sitting there on bench. Sakshi comes out of trance.

SAKSHI: Di chale?

AISHA: Ab koi aur Rasta bacha hai kya...jaana hi padega

ANTRA DI: aankhe bandh karke in saari yaadon ko apne andar samet lo ab bas acchi yaadon ko sath le jaate hai

                All nods.

MAMA: Ab chale? Flight miss ho jayegi....

                Once again all looked at House and then sits into car. Whole way all are looking outside. With each passing moment they are leaving their place. Place they all loved most. They used to call it their Home. All the street, shops, roads ice cream corner everything will going to become memory now. God knows if one can see this place again in life or not.

ISHU: Mami waha jo street hai naa...uske aage mera school aata hai.

MAMI: Accha?

ISHU: haan aur uske pass naa ek kulfi waala bethta hai uski kulfi bohat yummy hoti hai...Jab papa mujhe lene aate hai tab hum always 2-2 kulfi kha jaate hai (seeing another shop) aur vo dekho vo shop waha se humne anniversary ke din balloons liye the...Humne to sirf 6 maange the lakin unho ne hume 8 diye...2 free mein...vo uncle bohat acche hai kyun Didu?

ANTRA DI: haan

ISHU: Didu hum ab yaha wapas kab aayenge? Apne mere teacher ko bola ki mein abhi nahi aa paunga...

SAKSHI: Ishu tum tension mat lo...vo hum sab dekh lenge

ISHU: But kitne din ki chutti hai?

AISHA: Ishu apko to school nahi jaane ka bahana chahiye hota hai naa phir abhi aise kyun puch rahe ho?

ISHU: Bas aise hi Di...Hum Kashmir se bahar nahi jaate hai naa so mujhe bohat yaad aayegi yaha ki Iss liye...bolo naa hum wapas kab aayenge?

LIZA: Abhi to hum gaye bhi nahi hai aur wapas aane ki baat kar rahe ho....pehle hum trip start to karne do

ISHU: Vo bhi hai

CHOTU: Ishu yeh bat?

ISHU: Waha hum sab cricket bhi khelenge naa iss liye...aur yeh to papa ne mere liye laaya hai naa iss liye meine le liya...Papa bhi direct waha hi aayenge to phir khel ne ke liye bat to chahiye naa

           And then all become silent. All are looking outside to capture the image of this place.      


********************************************


Hope you like it!!!

we will update the next part soon!

We know this one is also bit emotional part but next one will be the nice one as soon Arakshi meeting will going to take place.

so stay tuned with Us

bye.


mama

[MAMA- SUMEET KAUL]

mami

[MAMI- RESHMA SUMEET KAUL]


DO NOT COPY THIS POST AS THIS IS EXCLUSIVE TO INDIA FORUMS


Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#94

Loved it dear 

Awesome part

I really felt hard seeing condition of the kids & mother 1 blow snatched everything

Hmm background song you used was awesome & one of my favorite😍💕

So finally they leave the place & it's necessary for their mother too 

Hmm so from now on their new life journey starts 

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

devikadevthosh thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 0 Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 0 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 4 years ago
#95

Nice update 

 kaul family is leaving Kashmir and going to start their new journey in Mumbai

Hope mummy will get well soon

Very excited for arakshi meeting 

Continue soon 

riduu thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 0 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 0 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 4 years ago
#96

Hai both of you 

Thank you for the update and pm 

I was getting bored all day setting at home🤔 

Thank you so giving update 

The update was emotional 😭

you have described so nicely 👍🏼

Finally kaul family is leaving shimla 

And I am very excited about Arakshi meeting soon

waiting  for their first meeting 

Continue soon  

mariawester002 thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#97

Hi dear,

Thank you so much for the PM

Update is very nice

but so much emotional and sadness part of the story

Continue soon 🙂🙂

Edited by mariawester002 - 4 years ago
Cutie2804 thumbnail
Anniversary 5 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: GOLDPEN30

Loved it dear 

Awesome part

I really felt hard seeing condition of the kids & mother 1 blow snatched everything

Hmm background song you used was awesome & one of my favorite😍💕

So finally they leave the place & it's necessary for their mother too 

Hmm so from now on their new life journey starts 

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

Hii 

Thank you so much

Hope u enjoy

we glad that you like 

Yaa right... life mein kabhi kabhi kuch aisa ho jata hai jise puri life change ho jati hai and yaha par bhi kuch aisa hi hua ek incidence ne sab ki life change kar di.. 

Thank you.. 😊

 Yes they leave the place and their life will also change

Please stay tune with us 

Do comment and like

Yaa we will soon update


Love,

Butterfly09, Cutie2804

Edited by Cutie2804 - 4 years ago
Cutie2804 thumbnail
Anniversary 5 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: devikadevthosh

Nice update 

 kaul family is leaving Kashmir and going to start their new journey in Mumbai

Hope mummy will get well soon

Very excited for arakshi meeting 

Continue soon 

Hey dear

Thank you so much

Hope you enjoy

We glad that you like 

Yaa they leave kashmir and going to start their new journey as well as new life in mumbai.

don't worry she will soon well and usske liye apko humare sath rehna padega

Yes Arakshi soon meet

Please stay tune with us

Do comment and like

We will try to update soon


Love,

Butterfly09, Cutie2804

 

Cutie2804 thumbnail
Anniversary 5 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sakijun

Hai both of you 

Thank you for the update and pm 

I was getting bored all day setting at home🤔 

Thank you so giving update 

The update was emotional 😭

you have described so nicely 👍🏼

Finally kaul family is leaving shimla 

And I am very excited about Arakshi meeting soon

waiting  for their first meeting 

Continue soon  


Hey dear

Thank you so much

Hope you enjoy 

we glad that you like

I was getting bored all day setting at homesmiley24 ...kya kare abhi situation hi kuch aise hai ki hum kuch nahi kar sakte sivay safe and ghar pe rehne ke...  

Thank you 😊

Yaa They leave Kashmir and start their new life towards mumbai

Arakshi meet soon

Please stay tune with us

Do comment and like

We will update soon  


Love,

Butterfly09, Cutie2804


Edited by Cutie2804 - 4 years ago