ARJUN FF: HUM SAATH SAATH HAI(Update part 6 on page 14)

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HUM SATH SATH HAI



Hey guys


Story “hum sath sath hai” has two authors.


Before we start anything we want to say something. We want to share story behind this story.

 

             We “Butterfly09” and “Cutie2804” personally started this story in year 2014. We were around 16 years old that time. We didn’t have mobile phones or laptop at that time so used to wrote in notebooks. This story is our very first story and very special to us. This story made us feel that we are capable to write something new except from home works, journals, essays and all. Then after many years when we joined India Forums We think to rewrite this story. As “Arakshi234” is our cutest sister and we are very close we just share this with her. Before 2 days all of a sudden she asks to post it on Forums. We were very confused as this story is not like other stories on Forum. It’s so different and consist many characters and like combo of many different plots. We were afraid; we don’t know how you people react on this. “Arakshi234” requests and encourage us to post. We couldn’t deny her wish so here we are. We are still scared. Guys it totally up to you... We are ready for any kind of review. Also for jooties and tomatoes...😃If you like it and want to read, only and only then we will continue this otherwise this part would be a first and last part of this story. Your review will decide the future of this Story on this forum.

 

Sorry! We bored you with this lecture but we just want to clear all this before we start this story here.

So guys, here is the prologue and Character sketch and small part just for you so that you can know how it is and take your decision on this story that we should continue or not.

 

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Here is the prologue. 


                         “FAMILY” is the Center of life and it is a key to eternal happiness.


                       Having a family is the bliss of life. Family is our strength. Without family it’s difficult to survive in world. Family word sunte hi Hume yaad aata hai Parent’s Love and Care, brother and Sister’s Fights, Masti, Roothna Manana aur phir ekdusre ke liye dher saara pyaar!!! Unhmm...not love “Unconditional Love”

                        True family is where father teach us what is responsibility. He teaches us how to fight and survive in this cruel world. Mother teaches us how to give love without any condition.She teaches us morals and ethics. Brother who is there when you need him, who picks you when you fall and sticks with you when no one else will. Sister is someone who is caring and loving. Sister can understand things you never said,a shoulder to cry and someone to laugh with.    

                        It is a story based on Family. Yaha sab sirf masti aur fights hi nahi karte...yaha zarurat padne par sab ekdusre ke liye jaan tak dene ke liye taiyar rehte hai. Ek dusre ki happiness ke liye apni happiness kurbaan kar dete hai...Family aisi honi chahiye Jaha Insaan khud se pehle Apno ke liye sochta ho. And yeh family kuch aisi hi hai...           

                We always saw our ETF in a professional way but this story is different. It’s kind of filmy story. It is dramatic, romantic and traumatic. Yaa there is some action also...On some point you have to think like “it’s a story and yaha kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai”... It’s not specific Arakshi or Samyesha or shriza story. Here every person has his/her own importance and story. But yes this story mostly will roaming around Aisha Sameer and Sakshi Arjun. How they fight with difficult situation of their life and how they handle their family. How they stand with each other to fight with enemies but with love...


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Here is the CS...


CHARACTER SKETCH


KAUL FAMILY: living at Kashmir. Well known family of City. Wonderful happy family. Antra, Mayank and Chotu are child of Ashok’s younger brother. Due to some reasons (reveal in story when time comes) Ashok legally adopted them and give his name to them. After adoption he strictly tell everyone to never mention about this adoption and consider them as own child.Even all sisters and brothers also treat each-other like own brother and sisters. As they become young they almost forget that they are cousins.

MEMBERS:


Ashok kaul: Father. He is a doctor and very famous and respected person in Srinagar.

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Geeta Kaul: mother. Very caring and loving. Loved her family so much.

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Mayank Kaul: elder. Live in US. He Has his own company there. Very much protective especially for sisters.

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Antra Kaul: on 2nd number. Mature but bubbly girl. Music is her passion. She completed her studies and now focusing on music.

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Sakshi Kaul: on 3rd number. Very bubbly chirpy girl. Innocent and beautiful. She is brave and handle every situation in efficient manner. She love her family so much especially her Papa. She is papa's favorite. She loved to spend time with him. She is fun loving by nature so has so many friends. She is popular in college also. Dancing is her hobby. She won so many trophies in dance programs at school and college. other person for her is Aisha. She can live without food for day but can't live without Aisha. She just completed her masters and now thinking to help her father. 

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Aisha kaul: on 4th number. Very naughty and bubbly girl. Doing masters and in college’s 2nd year. Sakshi’s ladli. People used to say that aisha is sakshi’s Parchayi. No matter what happen both sisters never leave each other’s side. They do fights but at the end of the day they did patch up and start doing masti again

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Liza kaul: on 5th number. Cute innocent girl. Doing graduation and in college’s 3rd year. sakshi and aisha love her.

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Chotu (Ketan) kaul: On 6th number. Very soft and kind hearted. Very possessive about family and especially sisters. Doing graduation and in college’s 1st year.

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Ishan Kaul: 6 yr old kid. Younger in all brother and sisters. Studying in 1st standard.

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MALHOTRA FAMILY:


MEMBERS:


Kirti malhotra: elder. She is helping Raghu in his business. Innocent and mature girl. Live in Mumbai. Cousin of Arjun sameer and shree.

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Raghunath malhotra: On 2nd number. Has own business. Successful businessman. Very possessive brother and loved his family so much. Live in Mumbai. Kirti and Riya’s own brother and cousin brother of Arjun sameer and shree.

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Arjun Malhotra: On 3rd Number. Very Loving and happy go nature boy. Etf’s second in command. Love his family so much. Sameer is most special person for him.

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Sameer Malhotra: on 4th number. Etf’s chief but very bubbly chirpy nature boy. Very naughty and love to play prank with others. Love his family but for him Arjun is most important person in his life.

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Shreekant malhotra: On 5th number. Tech expert of Etf. Very sensitive and innocent Boy. Younger so pamper by everyone.

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Riya Malhotra: On 6th number. Working in Etf as research expert. Bubbly chirpy girl. Love her family so much. Caring and loving. Kirti and Raghu’s sister.

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OK Guys we know After seeing CS so many of readers thinks that there are so many characters...before posting it we thought 4-5 times about it... we think to reduce some too, but when we did and try to write again somehow our heart not convinced with that decision... So at the end we decide to take all characters we selected very first time when we originally started this. 


For First part scroll down...


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PART: 1


                    “KASHMIR” known as “paradise on earth”. Nature has endowed Kashmir with implausible beauty. Kashmir is resplendent with stunning Chinar trees that turn the entire valley yellow and red when the autumn arrives, silver lakes that turn golden at the crack of dawn, and crystal blue rivers that are sourced from the icy mountains. 

                One of the beautiful cities of this paradise is Srinagar.

                One elegant Mansion. Big wooden gate which is locked from inside. One wooden name plate on which “DR. KAUL” is mentioned. As you enter in, there is a big garden. So many different plants are there. There are only tulip plants in one corner. In left corner of garden 3 cars are parked. Other side of garden in right corner some wooden benches and chairs are placed.


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                It’s almost 6 in the morning; Lady in her late 40 is still struggling to believe it’s the time to wake-up as you won’t give anything for the cozy warmth of the blanket on chilly winter morning in Kashmir. She got up and takes a quick peek at the window & it’s snowing, the whole porch is covered with fresh & soft now. She smiles and looked at her husband who is still sleeping. She gets ready and comes in temple area. She lit diya and Incense stick. The whole room is filled with fragrance. She did quick prayer. Her husband comes running there. She looked at him and nods negatively. She goes near him and stops him.

GEETA: Rukiye...

                Man in his late 45 stops and looked at her. She gives him Aarti and Prasad.

ASHOK: Ho Gaya? Ab jaau?

GEETA: Mere kehne se Aap kaha rukne wale hai Doctor Sahab...

ASHOK: Haan vo bhi hai...

                She narrowed her eyes and he smiles.

ASHOK: Emergency hai jaa raha hoon...

                She smiles and He run towards door. She shouted,

GEETA: Accha suniye concert pe waqut se aa jaiiyega

                He didn’t turn back but before exit from main door shouted back,

ASHOK: haan theek hai...aa jaunga... Infect Apse phele pohch jaunga

                He quickly started his car and soon car become invisible. She smiles and gets busy with her morning household works.


OTHER SIDE THOUSAND MILES AWAY


                        “MUMBAI” known as “CITY OF DREAMS”. Its early morning air is cold and sound of sea waves which hitting stone is audible. Birds start chirping.

                        One beautiful bungalow. Iron gate is open. There is driveway. Both the side of driveway there is garden. At left side in middle there is a grass lawn and around it there are so many plants.At right side there are some benches and chairs in middle and at corners there are some plants.


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                        Girl comes in living room holding pooja thaal. One boy is sitting on sofa and reading news paper.

KIRTI: Good Morning Raghu

RAGHU: Good Morning Di

                        Boy looks up and smiles.he gets up from sofa and takes Aarti. She gives him Prasad. One more beautifu lgirl comes there.

RIYA: Good Morning Di... Good Morning Bhai...

                        Kirti raised her hand to give laddu to Riya, but before riya takes it, one boy comes there running and snatch it from Kirti. Riya gives hard look to him.

RIYA: Shree ke bacche... Phir se mera laddu le liya tune...

                        Shree shows her tongue which makes riya more irritate. Shree looked at Raghu and Kirti.

SHREE: Good Morning

RIYA: Abhi tujhe Good Morning dikhati hoon...

                She looks around and takes pillow from sofa and start throwing it on shree. Riya hold other pillow and run towards shree to hit him. Shree start running here and there in whole room. Kirti take initiative to stop their fight.

KIRTI: Stop guys... Stop running...

                Shree comes there running and hide himself behind Kirti. Riya also comes there.

RIYA: Di isse samja do...

SHREE: Di Prasad khana galat thodi hota hai...

RIYA: Toh dusra laddu nahi le sakta... Di mujhe jo dene wale hote hai vahi le leta hai

SHREE: Tum bhi to dusra le sakti ho naa...

KIRTI: Okay Okay stop fighting... Riya chalo breakfast bhi banana hai and you shree... Kal ka File kar diya tumne? Yaad hai naa Tumhare pyaare bosses ne tumhe kya kaha tha...

                Shree gulped.

SHREE: Thoda baki hai abhi kar deta hoon... accha hua Di apne yaad karva diya warna Sam Bhai toh meri jaan le lete... aur Arjun Bhai ka SYS... (imagining Arjun giving SYS and makes scared face) nahi nahi...

RIYA: haan jaauo kaam karo...

                        Shree gives her look. This time riya tease him by showing him tongue. Shree start going towards his room but not before giving slight slap on Riya’s head.

RIYA: Shree...

                        Shree runs upwards towards his room.

RIYA: Aaj office mein isse dekhti hoon... Arjun Bhai ka SYS na khilvaya toh mera naam bhi Riya nahi...

RAGHU: Aree par dono hai kaha?

KIRTI: Aur kaha? Jogging pe gaye hai...

                        Raghu nods.

RIYA: Chalo di breakfast bana lete hai... Aaj case ek bohat important case discuss karna hai... DIG sir bhi aayenge shayad

KIRTI: Okay mujhe bhi aaj ek meeting attend karni hai... jaldi se sab kaam khatam kar denge

                        They went into kitchen.


[AFTER SOME HOURS]


 [SRINAGAR]


[KAUL HOUSE]

                        It’s around 9:30. Geeta comes in living room.

GEETA: He Bhagwaan yeh bacche bhi naa... abhi tak koi nahi aaya...

                She start calling everyone.

GEETA: ishu, chotu...chalo sab der ho rahi hai...

               Ishu and Chotu comes downstairs.

CHOTU: Lo mumma aa gaye...

MUMMY: Tumhari tino behne kaha hai.

                Liza comes there hurriedly.

LIZA: Mein yaha hoon mumma... Sorry thoda late ho gaya.

CHOTU: Kon si badi baat hai...roz ka hai...

                Liza glared at him.

MUMMY: Tum sab toh aa gaye... vo dono kaha hai?

LIZA: Ohho mumma... aap bhool gayi meri dono behne direct aayegi...

MUMMY: Aree haan...bhul hi gayi thi main toh...sorry...

             Ishu hasta hai...

ISHU: Mumma ko badam ka halwa khilauo taaki mumma ki yaaddast kamzor naa pade....

                Chotu,Liza and Ishu laughs and shared hi-fi. Geeta glared at them.

MUMMY: Chup kar ishu...maar khayega...Yeh sab Doctor sahab ne hi sikha rakha hai tum sab ko... mein sab janti hoon...aur Yeh noor... (she looks around) Noor kaha reh gayi.... noor...noor...

                 Noor Aapa enter in house.

NOOR: Hum yaha hai bhabhi...

MUMMY: Kaha gayi thi...subah subah...

AAPA: Dargaah ho kar aa rahi hoon...aaj humari beti ka itna bada din hai toh socha dua maang loon... taaki sab acche se ho jaaye...

MUMMY: Accha kiya...toh sab aa gaye hai naa?

AAPA: haan bhabhi sab aa gaye...ab chale? warna pata chala ki humari beti ke concert mein hum hi late hai.

MUMMY: haan chalo chalo...

            Mummy goes to parking and start car. She comes near gate.

MUMMY: Chalo aa jaauo

                Liza sits first on passenger seat then makes Ishan sits on her lap. Backside Chotu open door for Aapa. Aapa sits first and then Ishu also sit in car. They left for place where concert is held.


[OTHER SIDE]


[CONCERT PLACE]


                There are so many people. One side there is a pass counter and other side there are van of media. Some reporters are covering whole area. One of them,

1st REPORTER: Mere piche aap dekh rahe hai pari mehal...Kashmir ke Itihaas mein pehli baar all girls band perform karne jaa rahi hai...

                Other reporter,

2nd REPORTER: Iss band ko kai logon ne dhamkiyan di hai...yaha police protection toh aap dekh hi rahe hai... Ab dekhna yeh hai ki jeet kis ki hoti hai... nayi generation ki umeed ki yaa phir khof ki...

                         Inside“pari mehal”, there are some girls which are checking their instruments.

1st GIRL: Mujhe toh bohat dar lag raha hai... Naa jaane kya hoga...

2nd GIRL: Haan yaar... Antra Tumhe kya lagta hai?

                  Girl is checking her guitar. She looked at them.

ANTRA: Iss mein Dar kaisa...Hume bas humara 100% dena hai... Baaki sab uppar waale pe chod do... Jo hoga sahi hi hoga...

                        Other girls nods.

ANTRA: Chalo pray karte hai.

                        They stand together in round and hold each other’s hand and did quick prayer.

 

[NEAR STAGE]


                       Kaul family is standing near stage. There are so many people. Place is very noisy. Mummy looks around.

ISHU: Kya hua Mumma?

MUMMY: Dekh naa Ishu waqut hone ko aaya hai aur un dono ka kuch aata pata nahi hai...

                        Same time voice comes,

TWO GIRL: Hum toh yahi pe hai Mumma...

                        All turns towards them.


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Okay That's It for now.

tell us how it is.

I know you want to see SAMYESHA and ARAKSHI but vo tab hoga jab iss pe review milega... 

Do comment to inform us we will continue it or not.

Bye Friends


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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful start dear 

Awesome part

I really enjoyed the bantering of parents specially 

I must appreciate that you have taken 2 adverse places together Kashmir & Mumbai

Well I hope concert will be rocking

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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Originally posted by: GOLDPEN30

Beautiful start dear 

Awesome part

I really enjoyed the bantering of parents specially 

I must appreciate that you have taken 2 adverse places together Kashmir & Mumbai

Well I hope concert will be rocking

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂


Thank you... Thank you very much dear. 😊

This comment means a lot to Us. 

You don't even know how relax we are feeling after reading this... 

Thank you very much...🤗


Love, 

Butterfly09 & cutie2804

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice start. Thnx for pm dear 

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We “Butterfly09” and “Cutie2804” personally started this story in year 2014. We were around 16 years old that time. We didn’t have mobile phones or laptop at that time so used to wrote in notebooks. This story is our very first story and very special to us. This story made us feel that we are capable to write something new except from home works, journals, essays and all. 

.....That's way i ask you both post in i.f I it will  be memorable after all it's your both are fist story .....


As “Arakshi234” is our cutest sister and we are very close we just share this with her. Before 2 days all of a sudden she asks to post it on Forums. We were very confused as this story is not like other stories on Forum. It’s so different and consist many characters and like combo of many different plots. We were afraid; we don’t know how you people react on this. “Arakshi234” requests and encourage us to post. We couldn’t deny her wish so here we are. 

.....Awwwww you make me cry 😭😭😍😍 my lovely sisters and thank you so much for acpet my request yeah it's different story but awesome story also no nor awesome it's beautiful amazing story beautiful family values story ....


We are still scared. Guys it totally up to you... We are ready for any kind of review. Also for jooties and tomatoes...If you like it and want to read, only and only then we will continue this otherwise this part would be a first and last part of this story. Your review will decide the future of this Story on this forum

....Hahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣 No way it's nothing happened I know very well bcoz I read 2 part of this story I confidently saying readers love this story  it's only first update not will be last update can't.....


Character introduction was nice pretty clear 

Waiting for

kaul family 

Malhotra family 

Journey 

  journey of life 

Two beautiful family's Journey 


Again thank you  thank you so much di ayesha for this start love you guys 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimarahman

Nice start. Thnx for pm dear 

Hii

we are glad that you like the story

Hope you enjoy it

Please keep stay tuned with us and please like comment on it

Thank you

Love,

Butterfly09,Cutie2804

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Posted: 4 years ago

its an awesome story line

please continue further 

and the characters are also awesome 

thanks for the pm 

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Originally posted by: Arakshi234

We “Butterfly09” and “Cutie2804” personally started this story in year 2014. We were around 16 years old that time. We didn’t have mobile phones or laptop at that time so used to wrote in notebooks. This story is our very first story and very special to us. This story made us feel that we are capable to write something new except from home works, journals, essays and all. 

.....That's way i ask you both post in i.f I it will  be memorable after all it's your both are fist story .....


As “Arakshi234” is our cutest sister and we are very close we just share this with her. Before 2 days all of a sudden she asks to post it on Forums. We were very confused as this story is not like other stories on Forum. It’s so different and consist many characters and like combo of many different plots. We were afraid; we don’t know how you people react on this. “Arakshi234” requests and encourage us to post. We couldn’t deny her wish so here we are. 

.....Awwwww you make me cry 😭😭😍😍 my lovely sisters and thank you so much for acpet my request yeah it's different story but awesome story also no nor awesome it's beautiful amazing story beautiful family values story ....


We are still scared. Guys it totally up to you... We are ready for any kind of review. Also for jooties and tomatoes...If you like it and want to read, only and only then we will continue this otherwise this part would be a first and last part of this story. Your review will decide the future of this Story on this forum

....Hahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣 No way it's nothing happened I know very well bcoz I read 2 part of this story I confidently saying readers love this story  it's only first update not will be last update can't.....


Character introduction was nice pretty clear 

Waiting for

kaul family 

Malhotra family 

Journey 

  journey of life 

Two beautiful family's Journey 


Again thank you  thank you so much di ayesha for this start love you guys 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Hey Pari

Thank you so much dear

That's way i ask you both post in i.f I it will  be memorable after all it's your both are fist story... "ya you Right... Hume encourage karne ke liye again Thank you so much"

Awwwww you make me cry 😭😭😍😍 my lovely sisters and thank you so much for acpet my request yeah it's different story but awesome story also no nor awesome it's beautiful amazing story beautiful family values story ....

"Don't cry pari... We hate tears pari😉Sister ki Request to accept karni hi padti hai.... ya you right it's different story... and yes yeh story family value based hai..."

.Hahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣 No way it's nothing happened I know very well bcoz I read 2 part of this story I confidently saying readers love this story  it's only first update not will be last update can't.....

"Thank you so much... Hope so it's not last update"

ya it's journey of two family life

Again thank you  thank you so much di ayesha for this start love you guys 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

"WE LOVE YOU PARI❤️❤️"p

Please stay tuned with us and comment and like on it.

Thank you once Again Pari

Love,

Butterfly09,Cutie2804