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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

Nice. Prerna taking care of hubby and he is clueless why she is so worried for him and she is always around him. Her guilt which came out as tears and his worry for their unborn child. His way of recording the video to free Veena from jail is good and rational. Waiting for sasumaa-damaad scene now.

He is bound to feel weird with the sudden change in her behavior, isn't he? Thank you. Good, rational and most importantly, practical. He can't really be taking a walk to court right now. πŸ˜† 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

That gesture was really monumental in building a bond and I loved how she was just there for him throughout the ordeal to ensure his recovery. 

I love the fact that you made it sensible. Postoperative care. Things like these makes me happy to stumble upon pieces like these because these stories take logic into account, despite us being fed complete hogwash on our screens... 

Thank you. Medical issues are handled very roughly and in an insensitive manner in daily shows. Sigh. I am glad you enjoyed the read. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: siarocks007

I love Mr Bajaj. I love this story.

You do? πŸ˜³

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: komlika

Prerna taking care of Bajaj 

Bajaj helped veena 

I like how you kept it realistic regarding postoperative care πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thank you πŸ€—

Thank you. πŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Are you by chance Updating😊

No. I haven't even started writing yet. πŸ˜†

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing....LOVED ITT......❀️

Bajaj helping Veena and Prerna  worried for him....

Do write more dear....πŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is nice! Though, I am not even liking this current jail track, it's damn stupid, the accident wasn't even fatal, they are stalling his recovery and irritating the hell out of everyone. πŸ˜΅ Sorry, I began ranting in your OS thread, my bad. I like what you have written, but can't relate coz I don't like the way they are going about it. β€οΈ Also, don't you have an index too for your stories? Or at least give the links on this thread or something? Coz, there are like loads of stories now and I am sure I have lost some of yours. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice and realistic. Thanks πŸ™ 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely. Your approach is better than our so called onscreen cvs😊