Arakshi SS : Woh Ajnabi Lage Apna Sa ! (Updated Part 8B and 9 on Page

Hey Every one

This is the first time I am attempting to write something on Arakshi. I do have a plot in mind, but has no clue how to end them. Suggestions are welcome through PM.

Prologue

A marriage is taking place in a Temple. Grooms parents, Brides Father, Priest, Groom and the Bride are the only ones present there in the marriage. The absence of Marriage excitement and happiness is visible . The situation is very intense. None had even a smile on their faces.

 Groom seems to be least interested in the marriage where as tears were flowing continuously from the Brides eyes. As the Bride has adourned a Ghoonghat bcoz of which her face is not even visible.

The varmala is done . Now the Kanyadaan time, Groom was thinking why was he here in the first place. He is feeling suffocated. He remembers his past and gets lost in it. He jerks out from his past as he hears the Priest saying to stand up for the Pheres. The Groom and the Bride gets up and does the Pheres. Then the Groom ties the Mangalsutra around the Brides neck in a harsh way. When the Priest asked the Groom to apply Sindoor, he takes and handful of Sindoor and smashes it on her forehead without even looking at his Brides face. Then the Priest announces the Marriage rituals are now completed and the newly married couple could seek blessing from their Elders.

All except the Priest and Brides Father reaches the Grooms house. Grooms mother rushes to the house and prepare everything for Grihapravesh. Grooms Mother carrying Thali and Kalash comes towards the Newly wedded couple. She places the Kalash filled with rice on the Floor in front of the Bride. 

She does the pooja of the couple and then says to the Bride " Sakshi Beta, just push the Kalash with ur right leg and tilt it, then step inside the house."

Sakshi does as her MIL said and steps inside her house . Through her ghoonghat she looks around  her new home. Her checking out stops when a vase crashes on the floor.

Sakshi's MIL " Arjun, what have u done"Arjun glares at his mother  and then turns around and walk out of the house.Before anyone could stop him, he had gotten into his SUV and zoomed out of the gates.

Let me know how is the plot. Also let me know if there is any similar plot already written by someone. I don't want to plagiarise even unintentionally as I strictly oppose the act.

Character Sketch

Rawte Mansion

Arjun Suryakant Rawte: a very jolly character, but after his first wife, Roshni's death he was shattered and became stone hearted, arrogant and highly shot tempered. A brilliant Cop. Left the house due to clash with his father. Loves his parents and Roshni. Very close with Sameer Rathod, his friend. Sometimes calls his mother. Second Marriage to Sakshi

Suryakant Rawte: Loves his wife and his son, Arjun. Best Friends with Vishwanand and Brijj Singh Rathore. Angry with Arjun ,hence broke ties with him. Secretly he keeps tab on Arjun.

Mathili Suryakant Rawte: Loves her Husband and Son, Arjun. Considers Sameer like her own son. Friends with Vedanashi Singh Rathore and Akshara Malhothra. Secretly in contact with Arjun.

Sakshi Malhothra/ Rawte: Married to Arjun. Has been Friends with him since childhood. Lost contact with him when she and her father shifted to Malaysia. Crime Journalist , well trained in Martial Arts, Bold character.

Vishwanand Malhothra: Father of Sakshi. Wife is Akshara, who died when Sakshi was 5 years old. Loved his wife a lot. After his wife's death he shifted to Malaysia along with Sakshi. Have a friendly relation with his daughter.

ETF TEAM

Sameer Jay Singh Rathod: ETF Chief. Best Friend of Arjun. Have a soft corner towards Ayesha.

Ayesha Kapoor: Narcotics and Ammunition Expert. Have feelings for Sameer.

Riya Mukherjee: Research Analyst. Have feelings for Arjun.

Sreekanth Sen (Shree): Technical Expert. Loves Liza secretly.

Chandrakant Patil(Chotu): Commando

Gaurav Shrivastav : Encounter Specialist. Knows to deal with bombs. Jolly Character. An orphan brought up in Orphanage.

Liza D'Cruz: Forensic Expert. Loves Shree secretly.

Shikha Anand: Investigative Reporter. Sharp Shooter and Well trained in Martial Arts. Has special permission to Shoot in case of Emergency, Self Defence, Shoot out etc. Joins ETF, a year after Riya dies during x-zora virus case.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of these characters. The extra characters are only my imagination and nothing to do with the real people or places.

I STRONGLY OPPOSE PLAGIARISM. Hence I expect my story not to be copied anywhere by anyone.

Links to Chapters

Part 1: Page 3

Part 2: Page 4

Part 3: Page 7

Part 4: Page 8

Part 5: Page 9 

Part 6: Page 12

Part 7: Page 14

Part 8: Page 21

Part 8 B: Page 23

Part 9: Page 23

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Firstly  thank you so much for arakshi new yeyeyeyeyeye 💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃

Starting is very interesting 🤓🤓🤓🤓 

So eagerly waiting for next ❤❤❤❤❤

Hello

First of all thank you very much for writing ARAKSHI story😊

So happy for new arakshi story...

Starting is really very nice...loved it👍🏼

Waiting for next update....contine soon

If possible please PM me whenever you give update😳

Hii

Thank u for new Arakshi story 

Prologue is awesome 

Waiting for the next 

Welcome to forum

Thanks for new arakshi story

Interesting start

Want to know Why arakshi marrying if they are not happy with that

About similar plot, plot can be similar but story  and writing style will be different 

So don't worry about that

Continue soon 

Thank u everyone for your Comments, Likes and helps. It means a lot. 

Do u want me to write in Hindi, English or Mix of both. I prefer Mix. 

Just let me know

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