Eye My Girl, will Eye U - My SuKor The Miracle did happen ...an OS Pg - Page 8

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Fab update 😍😍👏👏👏👍

Right from chakors concern for him❤❤ to getting the truth from raam singh to KN smelling something fishy to suraj getting frustrated on not being able to reach her to she dominating him and he agreeing🤭🤭everything is so so perfect😍😍

Not to forget the kite flying and the marathon...fab description.... flustered KN something I really like 😍😍

The pink sneakers and she finding time to message him from the stage all is just awwwww😍

And of course the end is laajawab👏👏👏

Now to my usual question....update????

Thanks Niki 🤗

you summarised it in just three lines... 😉

Your neverending quest for update..... well I am thinking

PART IX

The revelation …the realisation……………………..

SHE is HIS and HE HER EVERYTHING……………………..

The Young Girl held the mike and spoke clearly…………….

My Name is Chakor Bhuvan Lal and I am a Bandhuva from Amarpura the little village in the interior of Rajasthan ..Hum Hamara Maalik ka Bandhuva….. Hamara Maalik ka Naam KamalNarayan Rajvanshi…………………

The CM, KN and the whole Amarpura froze hearing it……………………….Suraj was looking without showing any emotions….

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The ugly truth…………….

What ????? bandhuva?? ????

The media was shocked.. Bonded labour in 21st century?? But how ?? that too the MLA of Shahpura constituency who has been ruling unparalled. Yes he got into problem during last election. He is such a revered person who cares about his societal image that he wanted to kill himself as he could not fulfill the promise to educate a needy girl only to lose his wife.  He has taken care of his village and the import is flooded with the handicrafts from his village.  How can we believe you they said.....Why did you take so long to tell?

Keshav reached the venue, gave the tape to his media friend, and slid in the crowd. Dhrona was standing and watching her.

She spoke clear, I was just three days old when I was stamped as Bandhuva… I was pledged for a meagre sum of Rs.500 to cover the funeral expense of my grandfather.  Since then I stand as bandhuva of the evil Kamal Narayanji.  If a child has to be pledged for a meagre sum of Rs.500/- one should think about the condition of the village people.  Every right wrist is stamped with this bandhuva stamp. He has done many crimes and unfortunately with power all his crimes were covered and he ensured there was no proof.  I am the living proof for the murder of Kaushal… All were shocked….

Yes six years back during the kite flying festival, I was promised to be educated by KN but did he do that..??No he would not want anyone to study and gain knowledge to question him.  He killed that journalist Kaushal, He was stabbed to death and I saw that with my eyes but I was too young and they chased me.  I ran to save myself as no one would have listened to me then. 

One from the media asked… How do we trust you?

She said good question.. How did you trust him when he said the journalist fell down the woods? How did you believe him when he said the girl who promised to be educated ran away? Why is that except for few media which supports the ruling party none are allowed inside the village? If Import is flooded with the handicrafts why is that Amarpura is declared as underdeveloped and if the MLA himself is there and if he is taking care of his villages well why is that there is no development in their livelihoods.

Suraj was astonished the way she has thought so much though too young she has kept her updated of the news about Amarpura over the years when she was hiding… He wanted to be beside her…Knowing KN he was sure he will try to locate and create problems for her. 

The villagers at Amarpura were shocked and mainly her parents… they cried in silence.  They were mute spectators as they feared that KN would harm them.

The media present there turned their questions to CM and KN when CM said we know about KNji but as somebody has publicly pointed fingers at him, an inquiry will be set and investigated.  

He took leave but said in his ears, train your Son soon!

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Amarpura

KN was raging up and down his room with Suraj equally putting up his act. But, within himself he just wanted to throttle him and just run to her….

How will she be, this Ram is also not reachable… too many thoughts. Its becoming difficult without talking or seeing her..its now nearly close to three months but I feel like three decades without seeing my little girl. She will start her school too.  I am unable to reach her and KN is always watching me. Is she planning to come to Amarpura before going to High School?He was restless.

Suraj… KN called… we need to do something, find out where she lives and also need to get a proper picture of her.  She was all painted.  Bring her here she said. 

We need to meet the  Minister  next week he said.

Suraj said yes papa I will find out but what’s about the journalist… hope there is nothing behind it as the opposition may try to trigger this he said just to add fuel to the fire.

In the evening, there was a flash news on the TV that the press has said they have received in anonymity a tape though the video is not clear but the audio reveals glaring information about KN.

KN face turned red.  He yelled for Raam Singh.

He turned to Suraj and said you don’t worry, you go you need to meet those political leaders with regards to be active in the youth wing as elections are coming within two years and we need to work around.

Raam Singh came running… he hit him… did you hear that.. they have some proof go find out and get it.  It should not get into the hands of the opposition or played in the news channels. Do anything.

Raam Singh said Maalik… our men found that she is somewhere in Jaipur… shall we kill her. One hard hit on his face.  Hey fool…. Don’t try to add fuel… you want to see your Maalik in Jail… all the media will be watching her.  She is a national celebrity.  Be careful… we have to watch out and also take care that Suraj does not know this as this will lead to him knowing other things. Do you understand he told.  Just find her out and watch out he said.

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Jaipur

She decided to go meet KN at his den and Keshav said he will escort her when she said, bhaiya if you come with me you will be in trouble.  I don’t want any of you to get into trouble.  I will go alone I will be protected she said, while Suraj came to her thoughts.  Hope he does not jump guns,hey bagwan please keep him calm she said.

Keshav said he will inform his friend Chetan in the media so that he will watch out though he will not reveal himself.  She said fine and she planned to go the next few days to Amarpura.

She was walking down to the ground…. It was dark …Chakor, Keshav called her when Dhrona stopped him.. let her go.. when is in her extreme emotions she prefers to be alone…and  her practice ground is her abode. Just watch out he said….

She had so many thoughts.. how her village will be, would her parents seen her on TV, what sort of problem will she have, will the media be able to decipher anything from the tape.

Deep in thoughts she crossed the road and went to the Ground.  She was trying to call him…  His line was not responding… Why is he not taking the calls?. Did KN find out about Suraj Babu? is he in any danger??? She was lost in her thoughts and tripped over something awwwwh when a strong hand held her and pulled her… she closed her eyes.. it was dark. 

Thinking about me???? came a voice, she quickly opened her eyes… to see the eyes through the helmet… Youuuu, excitement, smile, tears in her face…there was only a small street light and the other light was flickering in the ground.. holding her, he removed his helmet… mmmm its me…. She quickly pulled him to the corner of the Ground and moved to the small room which had a wash and a store. It was locked..Dhrona keeps it locked to avoid any malpractices by miscreants.

How did you come? Are you ok?Nothing happened to you na? I was trying to call you? Does your father know you are coming here? I got scared you know… she was non stop….

Shhhhh.. he said Congrats My Little Girl with a smile.  The light was dim..

Thanks…. She said…. how is the village, did they see the race?  what was the effect… I am planning to come in few days…. Did you see my parents? how are they…… her voice choked. 

Shshshsh please allow me to talk he said.. come here.. he very gently held her hands….  they both sat on the bench in the corner… my father, well he is shocked… your parents too… what is your plan he asked.

I don’t know but for sure I will come to meet him and by that time the media will check on the tape and create some rukus.

She looked up to him, but Suraj Babu please you be careful na…. her eyes were worrying…. And haaan most important…. When I come there you should act as though you don’t know me…

He was just listening to her,looking at the various facial expression… though the light was dim..

A sudden breeze….. the lamp which was flickering above the bench glew bright, he saw her face with those strands covering… he very very gently pushed it when his fingers touched her cheek unintentionally… both had a spark….. He felt new…..he could see her under the bright light.  She looked very different…infact glowing and beautiful… just three months but the little girl is looking like a young lady…he could not understand what was the sudden magic… the natures blossom indeed brought out the subtle changes in her… he was just looking at her…. Lost in her..

Her phone rang… Keshav bhaiya…Haan bhaiyaa… will come in some time she said… I am safe she said looking at Suraj, don’t worry about me…

She clasped her finger and said Suraj Babu what happened… he came to his sense… nothing .. you are looking very bea......... hmmm... pretty…. You have changed he said… lowering her eyes… she said nai, am the same…and you have not seen me much too… we met only recently….. but she felt within her I feel I have been with you for years together…. Hmmm you are right he said… but I don’t feel it that way.. I feel …………….. he stopped himself……something in him made him feel she is not the same… I need to protect her… she is MINE.

Ok… bhaiyaa is calling me…. I need to go…. I will message you when I start for the village.  She stood up to leave …. When he felt his heart cringing…. He kept quiet..

She left his hands and walked a few yards… he felt very very lonely the moment she left….

She went up to the gate.  She turned to see him just looking at her,eyes glistening…

Seeing him like that she felt hard…. She ran to him and stood close to him.. looked up…

You are too tall she said with a smile.. he bent his head down when she stood on his feet and rose and hugged his neck ….a friendly hug… he held her softly maintaining the distance between them.

Thank you Suraj Babu for believing me, Thank you for coming to wish me… thank you for the sneakers…

He teared…. … why are you crying she asked…

I never had anyone to worry about my safety but thank you for worrying for me… she just said shhh… please be safe and message me on reaching she said. 

He smiled nodding yes! You too take care….  She turned to go…

Chakor… he called… she turned…I wanted to tell you something…

She looked up to him, he said I wanted to say you are…… my best friend and you are just Mine…. meaning my friend he said…

She smiled… haan .. You are everything… and I just want to study she said….

I promise I will ensure your studies will never get disturbed.

She walked to her house and he rode behind her very very slowly at a distance till he saw her go inside the house.   She went up to her room and looked at him through her window till he faded away… Keshav was looking at them..

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She left for Amarpura… She promised to Dhrona and Anjali that she will come back and be with them to complete the +2 as they were very worried that she would leave them. 

She took the bus……………. Keshav informed Chetan who went with his team and also he created a buzz within the media so the media was going ahead of Chakor.

She got down from the bus and put her feet down….

AMARPURA

Welcome Chakor, the Marathon Champion, Amarpura ki shaan… hamara jaan.

She laughed to herself as she was aware KN was not leaving any stone unturned to add to his political stunts.

He was at the entrance with the villagers… the media was there… with a big garland… Suraj was behind him…..

KN was infact shocked to see her… the tiny little girl who asked his age and answered the puzzle… the one who wanted to study whom he thought had vanished is standing in front of him with full attitude as a celebrity with the whole nation looking at her with pride.

He looked at Suraj who was standing there in full attitude saying papa look at her.. shall I just shoot her away with my pistol? No No Suraj keep quiet… the media will watch every move of ours he said. He was wondering why the media has not divulged any information about the tape. He was getting restless too.

She walked looking around her village when she saw her parents standing in the crowd with tears in their eyes.  An emotional union of the trio when KN intervened and invited her and the media to the bungalow. Suraj you please bring her KN said…. both lost for few seconds, he took his jeep, and she got into it with attitude… Suraj Rajvanshi.... he said extending his hands when she said I am Chakor, Namaste ….. little girl what an attitude he smiled within himself. She just smirked.

KN spoke all sugary words saying he searched for her to give her the education but she suddenly vanished so his promise of her education still holds good.  He said there are no bandhuvas and all free. The media person said, KNji now that she has come will you ensure her studies is taken care of till her college… KN was going red wanting to throttle that guy but Suraj said yes yes papa always lives to his promise….KN smiled. The media disbursed saying the tape has given away vital information but yet to be telecasted.

Chakor was alone when KN came to her. 

His anger rose to such a level that he shouted at her… You little urchin, how dare you say that I killed the journalist and how dare you run away.  In no time I can squeeze you like a wasp. She looked into his eyes and said KNji stop your dirty antics. I am not a wasp but a bumble bee who will come near your ears to bumble and make you go insane and accept your crimes and ensure you are punished.

He laughed what an audacity,he said media cant do anything to me and also I know to handle the media… And mind you your end is in my hands.

She laughed and said I know you cannot do anything to me for a scratch on me you will be marred terribly.

The media brought out the essence of the tape stating the tape is quite old and the video is not very clear though we can see images of KN and his aide talking about their misdeeds and killings.  The inquiry will be conducted.

He said I care a dam about inquiry as I have seen many it will take 6 months to one year and people will forget so by the time the election comes everything will be forgotten and the few notes I throw at all will vote for me.

Once the inquiry is done I will end your game he said.

Suraj was holding himself as KN spoke to Chakor.

Chakor stayed there for a month, but both could not meet in person but one day he could not contain and masked himself and pulled her in the middle of the night to a far off place…

Suraj Babu whats this she shouted… if anyone sees… he just pulled her close and said I don’t care… You are Mine and I cannot be away without meeting you… she just held his shoulders as he was holding her tight… please leave me she said…. in a days time I will go back and you will also be back to your college. I know we cannot meet as your father will be watching.  He just banged his feet… I am getting irritated with this acting.  I just cannot… He is scheming with the media to fizzle out the tape.. I heard it and I just don’t want this politics he said. he shook her vigorously do you get me…. I just want to kill him he said.

She said you cannot and I will not allow you to.. we have to be patient… he will not do anything till election..yes it is far still but we have to wait patiently. If he fizzle out the tapes we have to keep the fire burning through the media so that he gets irritated and blurts out himself. 

But how long…. when will he do that he asked.

We have to wait…. It may be within, two days or two months or two years too she said… I waited for this moment for 6 years.

He grabbed her…but I cannot wait…. I cannot stay away from you…. Not seeing you and not talking to you he raged. 

But .............. she said….

He looked into her eyes.  You don’t understand, you just don’t ….. you are Mine and I just Lo…………………. he turned himself and broke the glass of his jeep.

Suraj Babu she jumped….what are you doing…..please try to understand and I can’t see you hurt… it pains me…. You are my everything… please she cried…

Nooo …..I am nothing for you …..just nothing for you ….he said and drove away…

She sat there and cried, he returned back and stopped. She quietly got in and sat in the front..

I am sorry he said…I feel lonely if you are not with me …and I worry if anything might happen to you...

I too feel safe when I am with you but please ..KN will definitely play dark soon she said.

He said ok but promise me that we will meet when we are in Jaipur.  She promised…

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Jaipur --- Stepping into her next stones.

She stepped into the school and he stepped into the college.

As expected the media took it to debates and other channels for a six month and slowly KN tried to bribe to shut the mouth but Chetan was keeping the fire alive.

Two years passed KN continuously tried to create indirect problems for Chakor but Suraj was the guardian angel who was protecting her through his vices.

He and Rahul always had tiffs at the college level as Rahul wanted to compete from the opposition and Suraj was growing strong in the youth politics completely fooling KN.  The dude was growing more and more handsome making the college girls drool over him but he gave a hoot to anyone.  As promised he never went ahead though he was piling his feelings for Chakor. Chakor did reveal to Dhrona who once found them talking and she shared with him and Anjali about their friendship.  Anjali could sense it was not only friendship looking at Suraj as he visited them, that it was something more to it.  

It was two years and Chakor passed her 12th in flying colours….. All the colleges were ready to give her the seat she wanted but she did not want to join the same college as Suraj was in but chose Jamanlal Bajaj Engg not realizing it was the same.  She was still competing in various marathons and was winning laurels which made it all the more difficult for KN to even touch her shadow.

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She stepped into the college it was new she was not aware of the college atmosphere..

(please refer the Eye my girl post I don’t want to repeat it)

Reena asked her are you  both in Love????

Love ….. she could not understand but she realised he was her everything.

Gundaaaa.

He just walked to his hayabusa turned and fisted towards her and kept it close to his heart.

One was indeed finding the almost safeguarded secret and it went to the Devil’s ears.

The Devil Raged........................looking at the picture....

She ran behind...................... 

The car turned Boooooooommmmm went up in flames...

Surajjjjjj  Babu................ she fainted down

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the final part tomorrow with that my pen down

Fantafab update👏👏👏👏👏👍 

I am only visualizing VJ, Meera and Sai Ballal in all the scenes.... it is a treat,  the way you have described everything....and hats off for the flow of the story....it is amazing....suraj has reached the point of saying I lo....💃💃💃😍😍😍 missing those sukor days!!!

So last part is going to be today... generally reminding😜😜

And what is with resting the pen😡😡you have to keep writing short stories atleast off and on...pleaseeeee 

Thanks Smita. Those words mean a lot 🙏

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Part 9:

Wow... What a wonderful update Sumi, very heart touching but engaging too 👍👍👌. Chakor's exposure of all the truth in front of all, revealing the terrifying & cruel face of KN, hidden behind his benevolent & kind personality. Her counter questioning in reply to the journalists questions 👏👏. Suraj's being amazed, wanted to be beside her as her safeguard but unable to speak to her & to reach her made him restless & worried, KN's getting furious, ordering to watch over Chakor, were quite obvious👍👍. It was lovely that Chakor wanted to meet KN & thinking of Suraj, assured everyone that she would be protected😊😊. Sukor meeting was soooooo beautiful 😍😍, SR's sudden arrival to congratulate her while she was in deep thought of him & on seeing him, her various emotions in one single moment ❤❤😍 her nonstop queries 😁😁 his getting lost in her innocent beauty, discovering the subtle changes in her 😉😉 admiring her 😍😍, but his eyes moistening to see her go, their friendly hug, thanking each other for everything they did, very touching moment . His following her silently, her looking him through window, so beautiful👌👌😍😍. 

Chakor's return to Amarpura, her birthplace, KN's being wondered to see her celebrity status, Suraj's pretending to hate her , then  KN-Chakor face off, so entertaining, I just visualized the entire scenario 👌👌. Then Sukor midnight meet was so amazing, he was being inpatients, getting desperate for her, losing his cool, his anger, frustration were so evident that he loved her but couldn't make her understand. Uffff.... that scene was just mind-blowing 👌👌👏👏, I could visualized Meejay in that scene ❤❤😍😍. Loved that Anjali could sense that it's not a simple friendship but something more but alas both SR & Chakor were unaware of their love to each other 😔 . It's a fabulous update, can't wait to know what will happen in their lives, how & when they will confess. And pls Sumi, don't say that you will stop writing, as you know we always look forward to reading your stories. Pls keep writing while you'll get free 🙏🙏. Thank you.

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The Final Chapter…………………..

The final shock ……………………. His Mine and Her Sabkuch

She stepped into the college it was new she was not aware of the college atmosphere..

(please refer the Eye my girl post I don’t want to repeat it)

Reena asked her are you both in Love????

Love ….. she could not understand but she realised he was her everything.

Gundaaaa.

He just walked to his hayabusa turned and fisted towards her and kept it close to his heart.

One was indeed finding the almost safeguarded secret and it went to the Devil’s ears.

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Elections were nearing, the tape was surfacing again..

All hell were loose again….Chakor gave her testimony and the opposition was leaving no chance to beat down KN.. The party HQ was quite upset with him and was setting fire on his tail.

KN just could not believe that Suraj was meeting Chakor and they are friendly… it came as a rude shock to him.

Are you sure he asked… he was shown the pic taken at the college with he holding her waist….

Such a big cheat….. he shouted…. I can’t take this…. His eyes raged in anger, fire…

Raam Singh….. he shouted…………….

Bring Suraj here tell him we have to meet the party leader. He and Chakor….. He just blew his table off.

Raam Singh infact realised very late that Suraj was friendly with Chakor and he was acting but soon he realised that he had blabbered to Suraj about Maalkin’s death he was so scared about his life as if known KN would kill him and if he told about SuKor to KN, Suraj will kill him with one bullet, so he remained quiet.

KN’s friend who was the partner of the college saw Suraj along with Chakor and was surprised and sent the pic to KN.

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Suraj called Chakor who was in a camp near Jaipur and told her that KN called him and that he was going to Amarpura as KN was terribly upset about the tape surfacing again and the channels again debating about it.

They had planned to meet the party leaders who were staying in Nagaur a hilly region close to Amarpura as the party leaders were also putting pressure on him to act.

He said he would come soon …An unknown worry, fear came within her… Suraj babu please take care.  Check with somebody if everything is fine. He said he had checked with Raam Singh and nothing was to be worried about.

He said that he was fed up of this act and was just waiting for the election and then he will break off everything.

He went to Amarpura……………..

KN was in tears when Suraj walked in…. Matching to him he said what happened and that if everything was alright or is Chakor creating problems.

KN was raging inside but he kept cool and asked him to get ready to leave to meet the party leaders.

They got into the jeep, Suraj and KN were at the back while Raam Singh was driving.

They were driving through and KN was talking to Suraj about various plans of how to appease the party leaders while Raam Singh was quiet driving.

The road was hilly …. Nagaur was bit closer to Jaipur too…

KN suddenly saw his phone and told Suraj that he has got a message asking him to meet the minister who is visiting a nearby village as a Chief Guest for a camp and it was few km before to Nagaur and he was asked to get down and wait at the same place so that the Ministers guards will pick up while Suraj can go ahead and meet the party leaders.  KN said he has already spoken to the leaders and Suraj just need to go for formality sake. He got down and after a km Raam Singh said he was having stomach bug and he got off the jeep stating he will run to the close by village and Suraj can go ahead as he is finding it very difficult to drive and he would find some means to reach Amarpura.

Suraj was happy that they both got down and he could get some time to speak to Chakor while driving as it was going through a hilly road and through a burial ground too.

He called Chakor, how is your camp he asked…… where are you? she asked… he told that he was driving to Nagaur and KN had got down to meet the minister at the camp and Raam Singh has some bug.

She was confused, she was in the same camp but there was no Minister.  The Camp was closer to the high way through which Suraj was driving.  She could see the jeep and she started running towards the jeep. She quickly called Dhrona and Keshav…

Suraj saw her from far away running towards his jeep through the rear window… .he was surprised.. She was speaking to him while running.  She said while Naguar is close to Jaipur why did he ask you to come to Amarpura and when there is no Minister why did they get down. I feel something fishy…………  the jeep turned towards the burial ground and went up high in flames in the air BOOOOOOOOMMMMMM

Surajjjjjjjj Babuuuuuuuu ……………………she shouted jittering herself not able to understand what has happened….

She fell down fainting………………………

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She woke up in midst of a darkroom…her head was heavy…. It was dizzy and she realised she was tied to a pillar. It was near some hilly area…

KN was standing in front of her….. she shouted…. You devil… what did you do to Suraj babu…  you killed Suraj Babu…. You monster… god will never forgive you… she cried and she shouted.

Your bad luck and my goodluck.. See I got you….. where is your media…… ??? laughed the evil KN

He said yes I am a monster…..and you little urchin always act like an ant inside the elephants brain.  Who asked you to come back…. And Your that SurajBabu… a cheater he had befriended you and had cheated upon me.. cheated  Me…. Me the great Kamal Narayan Rajvanshi.  I don’t care about any relationship.

Yes do you? she shouted… if you had then you would not have killed your wife..

He was shocked oh so you know that… Wah you are indeed brilliant.. Yes I killed her… no no no she was a good patni and pativrata so she drank the left over of mine and got mukthi…

She shouted No you purposely drank the juice without stirring and made her drink the dissolved one.

You killed the journalist too…you are a blood sucker she shouted.

Yes yes I am a blood sucker I need power,  money position.

You turned my son against me,yes I killed my wife who was against me as I had an affair so I made her to kill herself and during that time too because of you I was troubled by the media.  I had no option but to kill her and get the sympathy stating because of you I went into depression.

But what you did again….. its because of you, my son is dead…KN acted with crocodile tears…joining his hands and looking up... Oh god the opposition planned this and when I got down they killed my son and my able aide … its all political vendetta … so again I will play this to win the sympathy votes he said.

She cried terribly…. Of god it is because of me he died today…. How is that you are allowing the evil to win … Suraj Babu…. she cried her heart out….

Cry Cry your heart out as I am going to kill you too…. once you go away from my life everything will be fine..I will have power, money, position and the whole of Rajasthan districts will be under my control.

You cant kill me for the media will come hounding for you…. How can you be heartless to kill your own son.

My son, he cheated me… so I myself kept the bomb in the jeep and to avoid the media I went along with him and got down so that everybody believes about this.

Now pray god well for its your turn now he said.. raising the guns. This is a hilly region and nearby is the burial ground  so even if I kill and burn you none will know.

The news would spread slowly and I will by then go and sit crying beside my beloved son and my able aide’s dead body.. god knows if their corpse can be found or they are charred to death….

He raised the gun pointing towards Chakor. When a strong voice came from behind…. Don’t worry as God is kind and has found your son…My beloved PAPPA sorry, sorry….Kamal Narayan Rajvanshi JI.

A hard kick on his hand the gun went flying up in the air to be caught behind. 

KN turned around to see Suraj coming in along with Dhrona and Chetan and Keshav who were holding Raam Singh…along with the police.

KN was shocked to the core…. You are alive…. How is it possible…. I had set the bomb how how he raged like a mad person…

He then realised that the police were there..

Suraj quickly ran to Chakor and removed her ropes…He hugged her and she just hugged him looking up to him eyes frozen…

The police said Chatur Chakor suspected something fishy so she called Dhrona and Keshav and shared her location.  Keshav quickly contacted Chetan and informed the media and the police who came through here and they heard all from KN’s mouth… The Police Inspector showed the video recording.. Its all inhere Kamal Narayan Rajvanshi… You have no escape…

But Suraj….. how did he escape??? KN asked…

He looked at Chakor…. She saved me again….. Chakor could not understand anything..She was just frozen at Suraj’s face… The police took away KN and Raam Singh leaving them alone.

Chakorr… he called her… she came out of her trance and just clung to him hugging him tight… she was jittering…..everything because of me… You went to meet death …. Because you supported me you were to be  killed.  She was crying… clinging on to him…. Suraj Babu….. if anything had happened to you how will I live…. I cannot live without you….. but …. But….how did you get saved she asked….I saw your jeep go up inflames…

He held her tight…. Calming her….. Chakor even I cannot live without you he said…. How I got saved?? With you beside me nothing can happen to me he said…. The little baby saved me from the ants when she was just few days old, the little girl saved me again at the school from the thugs and now My Girl saved me again from death. ….

But How?? I saw the car go up in flamesss….she asked crying. 

Chakor, When you called me and said that there was no minister in the camp, I realised something was fishy and Ram Sigh was quiet and got down so I knew there was danger but when I saw you running behind I quickly got off the jeep and rolled away to see the jeep go inflames.

I quickly ran behind and caught hold of Raam Singh who spilled the beans and by then Keshav,  Chetan and Dhrona had come with the police and rest you know.  We located you with the GPS and here I am in front of you he said..

Wiping her tears he said, in a way I am happy too as I could hear those words which I wanted to hear from you..

She lowered her eyes and went into him hugging him tighter… what words….

I want you to repeat he said..

I don’t remember ….whats it…she said

oh ok I shall remind you…. You said that you like me…

No No I did not say that I said I cannot live without you… she bit her tongue….closing her eyes in shy…

Suraj Babu…. She said…..

No babu only Suraj Your Suraj….

Hmm My Suraj… My sabkuch….My everything..

Yes and you are just Mine…My Chakor… My Girl….

Cupping her face…………

He said I love you Chakor….I want to spend my life only with you…

Looking up to him with full of emotions ……….She said I too love you but…….

My promise is a promise  I will not disturb till you complete your studies… but.. he winked

But what?? she said.

You cannot stop me from loving you…

He held her tight for the first time and said you are so beautiful lifting her chin.. she could feel his breath on her lips.

She closed her eyes and said but Suraj I want to study and I have no strength to stop you too….

He smiled kissing her forehead…

I know sabkuch about Mine……………….

Shall we go he asked…. She said she has to go to the camp as her things are there and she had to be in a theme celebration..

Achcha!!! what theme he asked.. she said the final part of the camp and being inside the desert region they have created an Arabic theme so they will be having music and dance in Arabian outfit…

That’s sound interesting…. They both started walking down the highway….He said but how do we get there.  She said don’t worry the police would have informed my camp by then they heard a car coming towards them.  Arey Wah!!! He exclaimed….. She said Gundaaa!!! Celebrity hai hum with an attitude…

They both reached the camp which was set in the Arabian theme with sand dunes and tents with Hookah and special dance arena with live music band….

She went in to dress in an Arabian attire with a transparent veil around her. She was wearing a sequined blouse with a Patiala pant and her toned abs were so seductive…   He was also made to wear the special pathan doti with a sleeveless coat which was revealing his toned packs.He was talking to the band.

He turned around when the lights dimmed and brightened and was mesmerized looking at her… They looked at each other and were lost. ..She felt for the first time shy to the core…. Her cheeks were blushing at the gaze of his and she was awed at the most handsome guy with his toned packs and strong biceps.

The band started when he pulled her to him and twined his right hand with her left and his left around her bare waist slightly lifting her close to him.  Sensations indeed flared….Not leaving their eyes..they swirled together when she asked ….. what were you talking to the band…. Do you know the song?? He said I don’t know the song but asked them the meaning…… and I loved it… you want to know he asked going near her ears…. She closed her eyes as his breath was fanning her and she was terribly heaving…

The song was playing…. Soothingly… they danced to the music… she unknowingly rested her head on his chest.. her small frame was fitting into him perfectly.

The songgggg………………..

Albibeyemshi waraki

my heart follows you

Aktarmenni beyhwaki

my heart loves you more than me

beyensaaniwe ma beyensaaki

My heart forgets me but doesn't forget you

Albinaar

My heart (is on) fire

meendallek meen alye

Who guided you to me

ambetdoori walye

You're roaming around me

Taarelaael elli feye

My mind flew away

We aaeli taar and

My mind flew

yallayalla habibi let's go, let's go baby

yalla yalla let's go, let's go

He spoke those words in her ears swirling with her…. … they swirled to the corner of the tent…. The hurricane lamp at the side made her face glow…

He slowly lifted her chin towards him.. holding her preciously… he said My Girl you are mine and I love you loads.

She could not speak anything, her heart was pounding and her lips were trembling as it was new… emotions rippling within her…. She held him tight, eyes half closed…

His breath was heating.. holding her cheeks he said Chakor please look at me… she slowly opened her eyes to see his eyes full of love…

His face was very close to her just a few inches to bliss…. She shivered…. His heart was pounding too for it was new for him too…..

With much hesitation but fighting his urge he slanted her and reached her lips and asked very softly….I Love You Chakorrrr.....please... shall I …his eyes were pleading….she could not move a muscle as she was in a different trance…she lifted herself trusting him as he is her everything….

My heart is on fire he said… so is mine she said feebly.

He placed his lips very very softly on hers…. A beautiful kiss… their first kiss….. For their minds flew away.

They both kissed very very softly… he was worried that he would hurt her….. she parted her lips when he soothed pressing hers… it was not erotic but was subtle ….a stamping of each other with their love.  She held his neck tight….few minutes passed….

He held her and slowly moved back, she lowered her head in shy…. He kissed her head which rested on his chest. Hugging her he said…. thank you My Love for sealing me with your Love. I love you they both said in one voice..  Winking he thumbed her luscious lips. You taste awesome he said…

Hmmm...But……….. Suraj……………. I………… he smiled… trust me a promise is a promise till you finish your studies.. Smiling she hugged him tight lowering her head….relishing his kiss licking her lips…

She is so beautiful, she is so fragile like a flower…. She is precious to me for she is MINE… He promised within himself to shower all his love and protect her always…..

He is so protective and he has been alone… He needs to be loved for he is MY SABKUCH .  She promised within herself to shower all her love that he had missed over the years…..

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KN was arrested and all the cases were tried, he was sent to the Tihar Jail.  

Suraj completed his engineering while Chakor was in her second year. With her persuasion, he went ahead to enroll in MBA course as one she wanted him to support her once she completes her Computer Design Engineering and second and the honest fact was that Suraj Babu could not be in Amarpura without her so he had no option but to study Masters in the same University…. The growing years made them understand each other's flaws and priorities also.  Lokmatha went into her other world when not with him but Gunda made every way to make her come to his world as true to the fact he was just loving her more and more... 

He called in for experts and import specialists to improvise the livelihood of the village craftsmen and indeed paved way for economic development.  He did not want to get into active politics but acted as a kingpin in the developmental activities of his constituency as per the advice of his Chatur Chakoria… 

As promised the true gentleman he was, waited for her to complete her engineering and then within few months took their relationship to their next level.  The exchanged their marriage vows to be with each other and spend their lives together.

They both overpowered each other with their love….

The Gunda never got satiated with his Girl and he was never taking his Eyes off her as….

She is HIS and He is Her EVERYTHING

At the outset thank you for the patience in reading through.  While Niki stands next to Divya for my writings in the Forum as being the great pusher…. nevertheless I dedicate this story to Mai and Smita who wanted me to write ahead of Eye My Girl. I enjoyed it especially about KN the one we loved to hate.... and reminiscing our very own old Udaan. Nostalgia.... 

My special thanks to Niki for the Arabian song and Mai for the translation and permitting me to use it here.

Hope I made justice…….

I rest my pen..

Whoa!!!! A grand and awesome final update👌👌👌👏👏👏❤❤

Action , romance,  full masala entertainment..

Especially suraj ki entry where chakor is tied.....I can absolutely visualize that kick and then his expressions😍😍😍👍loved it

And what to say about the theme dance and whatever follows....I am drooling....love the song too💃💃💃💃..... not only their heart... even my heart is on fire😜😜

His mine and her sabkuch is just 😍😍😍❤❤❤

Thank you for the lovely story...I know what effort goes into it.... especially while posting it on the forum.... so a big round of applause to you 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Whoa!!!! A grand and awesome final update👌👌👌👏👏👏❤❤

Action , romance,  full masala entertainment..

Especially suraj ki entry where chakor is tied.....I can absolutely visualize that kick and then his expressions😍😍😍👍loved it

And what to say about the theme dance and whatever follows....I am drooling....love the song too💃💃💃💃..... not only their heart... even my heart is on fire😜😜

His mine and her sabkuch is just 😍😍😍❤❤❤

Thank you for the lovely story...I know what effort goes into it.... especially while posting it on the forum.... so a big round of applause to you 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thanks so much Niki🤗🤗🤗

🙈 🙈 🙈 Drool haha ♥ on 🔥 

Happy you liked it. 

Taankuu 🤗😍😍😘😘😘😘

Thanks Smita for the lovely words dear 🙏 🙏 

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Final part :

So now we came to the end of this wonderful story. Although it is very sad that this great story is over but we know that all good things have an end & what a fantabulous finale part of the superb sukor story Sumi 👏👏👏👏. It couldn't have been a better ending, there was thrill, action, suspense & most importantly Sukor romance ❤❤😍😍😍, all kinds of materials were in it. Thoroughly enjoyed it right from KN being aware of the truth of sukor friendship, his conspiracy to kill suraj, the whole thing seemed suspicious to Chakor, the car blast, so breath of excitement, KN kidnapped Chakor with the opportunity to become unconscious, the explosive KN-Chakor face off once again👏👏, what a great entry of SR at the perfect time👏👏👏👏, his raging, the dialogues, the kick all were just mind-blowing👌👌, I can visualize Vj in the scene💘💘😍😍 I wish we could have got more as SR's action sequences is always a treat to watch & read👍👍👌👌. Then the beautiful sukor confession 😍😍😍😍 having no control over their feelings, so pleasant ❤❤he's remembering & disclosing how she saved him every time & loved his saying her no babu, only Suraj, your Suraj 😉😉😍😍😍  The Arabic theme party, their tempting attire made them fascinated to each other, sensuous dance ,the way he translated the song was just wow.. 👌👌😍😍The promise to always love, protect & be with each other. Loved KN got arrested, Suraj enrolled in MBA course to stay close to Chakor 😁😁 & their marriage & started new life, all were so perfect 👌👌💘💘. All in all a fantastic update & an great story,  sometimes made me nostalgic, reminisce the actual show & no words to praise your writing, you are always outstanding, so adept 👏👏. Hope you keep writing. Thank you.

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A beautiful end to the story ❤️ although I think you could've dedicated a part to their college life and how they avoided KN eyes to meet 😃

Their first meeting after 3 months ❤️❤️ and how he walked behind her to see that she reaches home safely ❤️❤️.

Their secret meeting in the village was beautiful, their love and care for each other and he almost confessed ❤️.

I could imagine how Suraj was while visiting her family, of course Anjali would know they're more than just friends 😆

KN's so cruel, ready to sacrifice his son for his own ambitions, but smart Sukor foiled his plans.

Their confession was bliss 

Great use of the song and their dance 🔥🔥, thank you for using it for their first kiss.

Thanks Sumi for taking us through this beautiful journey 🤗

Originally posted by: nemo316

A beautiful end to the story ❤️ although I think you could've dedicated a part to their college life and how they avoided KN eyes to meet 😃

Their first meeting after 3 months ❤️❤️ and how he walked behind her to see that she reaches home safely ❤️❤️.

Their secret meeting in the village was beautiful, their love and care for each other and he almost confessed ❤️.

I could imagine how Suraj was while visiting her family, of course Anjali would know they're more than just friends 😆

KN's so cruel, ready to sacrifice his son for his own ambitions, but smart Sukor foiled his plans.

Their confession was bliss 

Great use of the song and their dance 🔥🔥, thank you for using it for their first kiss.

Thanks Sumi for taking us through this beautiful journey 🤗

Thanks Mai so much 

@ Bold Black... oh so sorry for not living up to that wish of yours🤪.  do you mean from 11th to the second year of her college as during that time I felt she was bit young and while he had the feelings they had not confessed...

Secondly, I felt the chapters were going on and on and it would lead to bit boredom... 

@ BOld red.. happy you liked it. to be honest I had completed the story but when i heard and read the translation i just wanted to bring it in and so just tweeked it into the story and used it for their first kiss

thank you for journeying with me.........