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Punar Vivaah...Remarriage....Part 7

Soumya joined a call centre.She interacted with many people on the phone.

She turned back.She was surprised to see the person who was sitting behind her and attending a call.

Her face blossomed:Rudra!

Rudra was busy talking.She was lost in her facial expressions.

After talking Rudra saw her.He was surprised:Soumya!I mean..Sumo...

Soumya:Ya...

Rudra:How come you are here?

Soumya:I just joined here.

Rudra:Cool.Welcome welcome.

She smiled.

After the work they removed their head phones and chatted.

Rudra:So..whats up?

Soumya:Boring yaar.Life is becoming boring.

Rudra:Don't think like that.Life is fun.

Soumya:May be for you.

Rudra:I will tell you how to be fresh and cool.Join me to the gym.

Soumya:Gym and me?No match.

Rudra:Seeing you itself I understood that you have no interest in gym.

She stared at him.

Rudra giggled:Just joking ok.Anyways you are coming with me to the gym.

Soumya:But...

Rudra:No excuse.

Soumya went to the gym with Rudra.

Rudra was engrossed in his exercise.

Rudra started panting:I can't do it anymore.

Soumya laughed:This is your capacity?Hearing you advise me to join the gym I thought that you are a King of stamina.But you have no stamina at all.

Rudra was embarrassed.

Soumya:Don't worry.If you have some cool drink you will be better.

Rudra:You are not tired?

Soumya:I did'nt do any exercise like you.Then how can I get tired?

They both laughed.

Rudra Soumya went to juice shop.Soumya ordered for a cool drink.She opened the bottle for him.

Rudra was lost in her.

She looked at him:What?

He smiled:Nothing.

She gave him the bottle.He took a few sips.

Soumya:Feeling cool?

Rudra:Ya.

She took the bottle from her and took sips from it.

He blushed seeing her drink from the bottle he drank.

Ayaan just came back from school with Anjali.

Preeta hugged them.

Preeta:How was today's class?

Ayaan:It was nice mumma.

Anjali:We studied a lot today.

Preeta:Really?

Ayaan:Yes mumma.

Anjali:The English teacher taught us a poem.It was so nice.

Preeta:That's so good.

Preeta:Anjali...I will bath you.After that Ayaan...I will bath you.

Anjali:Ok mumma.

Ayaan:Ok.

Preeta gave a bath to Anjali.But Ayaan saw the cycle on the ground and tried to ride it.The cycle was shaking and Ayaan was going to fall down.Preeta who came out saw this with a shock.She ran towards Ayaan screaming:Ayaannnnnnnnnn..

Suddenly Karan caught Ayaan before he fell down.Preeta was relieved.

Preeta:Thank you Karan for saving Ayaan.

Karan:Why are you thanking me Preeta?I just saved my son.

Preeta smiled looking at him deeply.

Sajda tera sajda
Din reain karoon na
Hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Rak vaar karoon


Preeta stared at Ayaan.

Preeta:Ayaan..you don't know cycling properly.Then why did you ride it?If papa had'nt caught you at the right time you would have been badly injured.

Ayaan:Sorry mumma.

 

Preeta:What sorry?I don't want to hear your sorry.

Karan:Preeta...don't shout at him.He is a small child.

Preeta:But see what he did.

Ayaan:I wanted to ride he cycle very badly.That's why I lost my control seeing the cycle.

Karan:Don't worry Ayaan.Papa is there with you.I will fulfill your wish.I will teach you how to do cycling.

Ayaan was excited:Really?

Karan:Yes.

Ayaan:Thank you so much papa.

He hugged Karan.

Ayaan:Mumma...now that papa is going to teach me to ride the cycle will you allow me to do cycling once I learn it?

Preeta:If papa is sure that you can do cycling independently mumma won't object.

Ayaan:Thank you so much mumma.I promise that I will learn it well from papa.

Ayaan kissed Preeta.

Karan started teaching him how to ride the cycle.

After a month Ayaan started riding the cycling confidently. Karan and Preeta smiled seeing it.

Preeta:Karan..you filled the gap caused by the loss of Anshuman in Ayaan's life.No one will say that you are not his real father.

Karan:I am his real father Preeta.A relationship can be on the basis of love also,it's not always based on blood.Right?That's why you and Anjali are also inseparable.

Preeta smiled emotionally nodding:Yes.I can't believe that Anjali is not born in my womb.

Karan:What if Anjali is not born in your womb?No one can deny that Anjali is your daughter.

Preeta smiled emotionally.

After 5 months....

Soumya prepared soup for all.

Karan Preeta returned home late from their work place.

Sameer:Karan bhai..Soumya made yummy soup.Mushroom soup.

Preeta:Wow..it's my favourite.I want it.

Karan:I also want it.

Soumya:But unfortunately you both came back late.So only a little soup is left.Just one bowl.

Preeta:Then I will have it.

Karan:No baby doll.I want it.

Preeta:No..I want it.

They started arguing.

Shobha:Relax guys.Why don't you guys share it?I mean you both have it from the same bowl.

Karan and Preeta were stunned.

Preeta:How can we have it from the same bowl?

Shobha:Why not?You both are husband and wife.

Sameer:Karan bhai..feed Preeta bhabhi just like I feed Shrishti.

Shrishti blushed.

Karan glared at him,

Shrishti:Exactly.Have it from the same bowl.So that you both can have your favourite soup.

Preeta:No no.

Ayaan:Mumma..you only told me that sharing is  very good habit.Then why don't you share the soup with papa?

Preeta became embarrassed.Karan took the bowl of soup without understanding what to do with it.

Anjali:Papa...are you going to eat it alone?Very bad.Share it with mumma.

Karan was embarrassed.Slowly Karan extended the bowl to Preeta going near her.

Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek hue din reain hamare
Hum se hum hi chiin gaye hai
Jab se dekhe hai nainn deewane
Sajda

They both started having the soup from the same bowl.Both were shy.

Teri kaali ankhiyon
Se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudu
Sapno se aagey
Ab jaan lutt jaaye
Ye jahaan chhut jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe
Main rahun na rahun
Sajda tera sajda
Din reain karoon na
Hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda
Rak vaar karoon
Meri jaan lut doon

All were smiling.

Karan was in the bathroom.But water was not coming out of the shower.

Karan:Damn it..why no water?Preetaaaaaaaaa..

Preeta came:Yes Karan...

Karan:No water here.

Preeta:Oh..I forgot to switch on the pump.I will switch it on now.

Preeta went and switched on the pump.

Preeta:Now water will come.

Karan:Still water has not come.

Preeta:Oh ho..let me check.

Preeta got inside the bathroom and went near Karan.

Preeta noticed small drops coming from the shower.

Preeta:Just now only I switched on the pump.Within 2 seconds water won't come na.That's why it's taking time.But see...water has started flowing slowly.It will come in full flow now.

Suddenly water came out in full force.Both Karan and Preeta were drenched.

Preeta:Oh no...I forgot to move away fro the shower.So I also got wet.It's all because of you Karan..your impatience brought me here.

Suddenly he closed her mouth with his hand.

Karan and Preeta stared at each other's eyes for some time.


Ranjhana naino ke teer chalgaye
Saajna saanson se dil silgaye
Palkon mein chupa loon, o tera sajda karoon
Seeney mein sama loon, o din rain karoon

Slowly he took his hand off.

Karan:In college you were a sherni.But after marriage I saw a calm and soft Preeta.

Preeta:Painful experiences in my life made me like that.


Palkon mein chupa loon, seeney mein sama loon
Tere ang ang rang mera bole
Ab jaan lut jaaye, ye jahaan choot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

Karan:But now I feel that the college sherni Preeta who used to fight with me has come back.

Slowly Preeta smiled.

Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Din rain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon

Preeta:You brought the real Preeta out of me.My inner self is reflecting me because you are with me.

He smiled.

Veliya kya hua jo dil khogaya
Mahiya ishq mein khuda milgaya
Zara ankh se pilade, o tera sajda karoon
Zara khwaab sajade, o din rain karoon

Preeta went out of the bathroom.

Karan changed his dress and came out.He saw that Preeta has changed her wet dress.She was drying her hair.He was lost in her.

Zara ankh se pilade, zara khwaab sajade
Mere honthon pe mann tera bole
O ab jaan lut jaaye, ye jahaan choot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

Suddenly he came back to senses.

He thought:Why I am not able to take my eyes off Preeta?


Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Din rain karoon na hi chain karoon

Water drops which fell down from Preeta's hair and dress made her slip.Preeta slipped and fell upon Karan.Thus both lost balance falling down.Preeta was on top of Karan.

Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon

Her wet hair fell on his face.Karan felt nice when her wet strands fell on his face.

O teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
O dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey

He moved her hair strands from her face and tucked them behind her earlobe.Preeta was lost when his fingers touched her skin.


Ab jaan lut jaaye, ye jahaan choot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

Their eyes got stuck to each others.A passionate eye lock took place.

Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Din rain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon, sajda.   ♥

They both came into senses and got up from the floor.

Preeta thought:Why I feel different when Karan is close to me?

Karan thought:What kind of feeling is this?

Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Din rain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon, sajda.   ♥
(My name is Khan).

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Superb update 

Preeta-anjali and karan-ayaan bond is my favourite 

Wow they shared soup in same bowl😳

Continue soon 

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Awesome Update !  👏

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Thank u very much friends


Punar Vivaah...Remarriage....Part 8

Karan picked up Preeta from her office.They both were in the car.Karan was driving carelessly while talking.

Preeta:Karan...your driving has not changed at all.In college also you were a careless driver.Jerky driving.

Karan:Baby doll...that's a fun.Right?

Preeta:I am happy that after marriage for the first time I am seeing the same mischief in you which was there during college days.But this is not funny.

Karan:Cool down Baby doll.This is the thrill.

He started driving faster carelessly just to scare her.

Preeta was scared:Stop it Karan...

Karan continued driving laughing.Suddenly they saw a truck coming.Karan got panicked...so as Preeta.Preeta's eyes fell on her mangalsuthra.She held it while a fear haunted her.

Suddenly Preeta held the steering and drove the car to a corner.The truck went it's way.Both Karan and Preeta were relieved.

Karan:Today you are the saviour Preeta.

Preeta:I don't need your compliment Karan.I told you many times not to find fun in careless driving.It's dangerous.Because of your carelessness there could have been a terrible accident today.Is it fun for you?

Karan:I am sorry Preeta.

Preeta became emotional:Karan...I lost my Anshuman in an accident caused by someone's careless driving.So I know the consequences of careless driving.I am scared Karan.I lost Anshuman.Now I don't want to lose you also.After losing Anshuman,after a long time I have started smiling ...and feel happiness.I don't want to lose happiness again.

Rom rom tera naam pukare
Ek hue din rain hamare
Humse hum hi chin gaye hain
Jabse dekhe nain diwane, sajda

Karan caressed her face:I understand your feelings Preeta.It's my fault.I promise you Preeta...that I will never repeat it.

Teri kaali ankhiyon se jind meri jaage
Dhadkan se tej daudu, sapno se aagey
Ab jaan lut jaaye, ye jahaan choot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

They shared an emotional eye lock.


Sajda tera sajda, din rain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda, lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon

Dust got into Preeta's eyes and she felt irritation in her eyes.She started rubbing her eyes.

Karan:Are you alright Preeta?

Preeta:Actually some dust fell into my eyes.

Karan:I will make your eyes alright.

He went near her .He held her face and started blowing air into her eyes.Preeta got strange sensation feeling him so close to her n feeling his hot breath on her skin.She was lost in him.


Sajda tera sajda, din rain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda, lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon

Karan:Are you alright now?

Preeta who was lost in Karan did'nt even realize when her eyes became alright.

She smiled:Thank you Karan.Now my eyes are alright.

He smiled.

Preeta:Karan...I have to go out.I have to buy some books for children.

Karan:Get ready.I will take you to the book store.

Preeta:It's ok.I will go alone.

Karan:When I am there why should you go alone?I will be with you Preeta.

They smiled sweetly at each other.

Preeta down from the car.

Preeta:I will buy the books and come in a few minutes.You wait in the car.

Karan:Ok.

Preeta started walking towards the book store.

Suddenly it started raining.

Preeta:Oh no...the umbrella is in the car.

Suddenly she saw a hand holding umbrella above her.She looked at that person.She was surprised to see that it was Karan.Her face blossomed.


O ab jaan lut jaaye, ye jahaan choot jaaye
Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

Preeta:Karan..you?You were in the car..

Karan:Yes.But how can I let you drench in the rain when I have the umbrella?

She smiled.


Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Din rain karoon, na hi chain karoon

They shared a sweet eye lock.


Sajda tera sajda, karoon mein tera sajda
Lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon

Suddenly the umbrella started blowing in the heavy wind.They both held the umbrella tight to prevent it from flying away.Their fingers rubbed each others.They felt a strange feeling.


Sajda tera sajda, din rain karoon na hi chain karoon
Sajda tera sajda, lakvaar karoon meri jaan lut doon…(My name is Khan).

They both felt awkward to face each other.

They bought books and got inside the car.While driving the car they both viewed the rain and went to an imaginary world.

Karan-Preeta were dancing in a filmy style.

Arey arey arey na na na...
Aaj rapat jaaye toh hame naa uthaiyyo
Aaj fisal jaaye toh hame na uthaiyyo
Hame jo uthaiyyo toh -2, khud bhee rapat jaiyyo
Ha khud bhee fisal jaiyyo
Aaj rapat ha ha, aaj rapat jaiyyo toh hame na uthaiyyo



They were romancing.

Barsaat me thee kaha baat aisee pehlee bar barsee barsat aisee - (2)
Kaisee yeh hawa chalee, panee me aag lagee, jaane kya pyaas jaagee re
Bhiga yeh tera badan, jagaaye mithee chubhan
Nashe me jhume yeh mann re, kaha hu mai mujhe bhee yeh hosh nahee
Ha ha ho ho - (2)
Aaj behak jaaye toh hosh na dilaiyyo - (2)
Hosh jo dilaiyyo toh -2, khud bhee behak jaiyyo
Aaj rapat ha ha, aaj rapat jaiyyo toh hame na uthaiyyo

Suddenly it started raining.Karan held the umbrella for Preeta.


(Badal me bijalee baar baar chamke
Dil me mere aaj pehlee baar chamke) - (2)
Hasina daree daree, baaho me simat gayee, sine se lipat gayee re
Tujhe toh aya maja, tujhe toh sooji hasin, meree toh jaan fasee re

They both romanced under the umbrella.

Janejigar kidhar chalee najar churake
Ha ha ho ho - (2)
Bat ulajh jaiyyo toh aaj na suljhaiyyo - (2)
Bat jo suljhaiyyo toh -2 khud bhee ulajh jaiyyo
Aaj rapat ha ha aaj rapat jaiyyo toh hame na uthaiyyo


They danced holding the umbrella.


Badal se chham chham sharab barse sawaree ghata se shabab barse - (2)
Bundon kee bajee payal, ghata ne chhedee gajal, yeh rat gayee machal re
Dilon ke raj khule, fija me rang ghule, jawa dil khulke mile re
Hona tha jo hua wahi abb darana kya
Ha ha ho ho - (2)
Aaj dub jaye toh hame na bachaiyyo - (2)
(Hame jo bachaiyyo toh -2, khud bhee dub jaiyyo
Aaj rapat ha ha aaj rapat jaiyyo toh hame na uthaiyyo
Aaj fisal jayen toh hame na uthaiyyo
Ha ha ho ho - (2)
Namak Halaal

Karan Preeta got out of their dream rain scene.

Both were blushing.

Karan thought:What a strange dream did I saw with Preeta!What will Preeta think about me if she comes to know this?How could I be so shameless?

Preeta thought:How could I dream like this about Karan?

Soumya and Rudra were chatting while walking.Sddenly Soumya slipped and Rudra caight her on time.They shared a romantic eye lock.

They both came back to senses.

Rudra to Soumya:Sumo...why don't we go for disco?After all we first met there only.

Soumya:Sure.When we were strangers we danced together there.Now since we are friends we need to go there together and chill.

Rudra:Exactly.

Soumya got ready in a white frock.Rudra was mesmerized by her beauty.

Rudra:You look so pretty Sumo.Were you hiding your beauty all these days?

She giggled:Rudy...you will say anything.

Rudra looked at her deeply:I am saying seriously.You really look stunning.

She became shy.

Sumo:You are also looking handsome.

Rudra:That's something which I know.All the girls say that when they see me.

Sumo:What an attitude!

They both chuckled.

They went for disco and started dancing together.


Fana
Fana
Fana
Fana
Fana
Fana
Hone do dil ko fana fana
Hone do dil ko tabah tabah
Udne do har ek wo tamanna
Udne do har ek wo tamanna
Hone do dil ko fana fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana
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Ulfat ka hai dariya
Ye jaa ek qatra
Dariya mein hai qatra
Ya katra mein hai dariya

Saaya hai badan ka
Ya tan me chhupa saaya

Dono mil gaye to
Kya tan kya kya saaya

Hone do dil ko fana fana
Hone do dil ko tabah tabah
Udne do har ek wo tamanna
Udne do har ek wo tamanna
Hone do dil ko fana fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana
Aao na aao na aao na
Hona hai fana.

(Fanaa).

While dancing they came closer and closer forgetting themselves.They leaned towards each other for a kiss.

Suddenly they both came back into senses.They looked at each other emotionally.Soumya ran out crying.

Rudra:Sumo...

Soumya did not turn back.

Rudra:Oh no...how could I try to kiss her?But she also tried to kiss me.Does that mean unknowingly we both have feelings for each other?

Rishab and Vishaka met each other.

Vish:Tell Rishab.What do you want to tell me?

Rishab:This is something which I hid in my heart for many years.I don't know how you will react hearing what I am going to say.But a request.Even if you are not happy with what I say,please don't let it affect our beautiful friendship.

Vish:First you tell me what did you hide in your heart from me for many years.

Rishab:My love for you.I love you Vish.

Vishaka was shocked.

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Karan & Preeta's driving scenes are very much passionate and emotional. Preeta telling Karan that she lost Anshuman because of someone else's careless driving & does not want to lose him is emotional. The song sequences are romantic. Rudra holding Soumya and stopping her from falling is emotional. Waiting to see will vishaka accept rishab's love.

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Awesome and so Fabulous Chapter