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Punar Vivaah...Remarriage...Part 1

Luthra Mansion...

A small little girl was crying.She is Anjali Luthra,the daughter of Karan Luthra and late Simar Luthra.The whole family loves her and was trying to console her.Still she was in tears.

Her father Karan's heart pained seeing his dearest daughter in pain.

Karan caressed Anjali's face:Anjali...don't cry...tell me what the matter is...Papa promise you that your problem will be solved.

 

Shobha Luthra caressed her face:Anjali beta...tell your dadi what upsets you.

Vikram:Your dadu is there with you na.Did anyone hit you?I will scold that child.

Rishab Luthra gave her a doll:See what your bade papa brought for you.

Anjali:I don't want any toy.

He became dull.

Sameer:Chachu has brought many cartoon CDs for you.We will watch them together.

Anjali:I don't want to watch any cartoon.

Shrishti:Chachi will tell you lots of lovely fairy tales.

Anjali:I don't want to hear any story.

Soumya:Bua has made your favourite chocolate shake.

Anjali:But your chocolate milk shake is not like mumma's milk shake.Right?

Everyone including including Soumya was upset.

Karan:What are you saying to bua Anjali?

Anjali:Sorry papa.But I miss mumma very much.In school all are having mumma and they are teasing me that I don't have mumma.

Karan's heart was pricked.Everyone became upset.

Karan:Anjali..here you have so many people to love you.Then why are you upset?

Anjali:But mumma is mumma.Right?

Everyone became upset.

Karan:Yes..mumma is mumma and she won't return from heaven.

Anjali:Papa..but why don't you bring another loving mumma for me?

Karan was shocked.

Karan:What are you saying Anjali?

Anjali:My friend Sunaina's mother left her as she was angry with her and her dad.But her dad married a nice mumma.So Sunaina has mumma.So if you marry again she will be my mumma.Right?

Karan became upset and hugged her silently.

 Karan:Maa...please take care of Anjali.

She handed over Anjali to Shobha and went out of the room.

Anjali:Why papa left without replying?

Shobha caressed her:Papa has some work.That's why.

Anjali:Won't he bring a sweet mumma for me?

Shobha nodded painfully.

Sameer:Where did bhai go suddenly?

Shobha:To talk to Simar.

They all became upset.

Karan looked at Simar's photograph on the wall and shed tears.

Karan:Why did you leave Simar?See..our Anjali is so upset.You left me and Anjali alone.

Soumya came near him.

Soumya:Bhaiyya...why don't you fulfil Anjali's wish by marryinga nice lady?

Karan stared at her and got himself engaged in arranging Anjali's toys to divert attention.Soumya sat near him.

Soumya:Think bhaiyya...Anjali will get a mother's love.

Karan:What is the guarantee that she will love Anjali like her own daughter?

All others came.

Shobha:We will find only a nice lady for you who can love Anjali.

Rishab:You get remarried Karan.

Karan:Really Rishab bhai?You are advising me to get remarried?You loved Vishaka silently.But she married somebody else.Still you love her and so you did'nt even get married.You could'nt forget Vishaka or stop loving her.But you want me to forget Simar and move on?

Rishab became dull.

Rishab:I did'nt ask you to forget Simar.My case is different.I am alone.But you have a delicate daughter.For Anjali please get married Karan.She is longing for a mother.

Vikram:If Anjali's tears have touched your heart please agree for remarriage.

Karan was silent.

Karan was driving the car.His mind was full of his moments with Simar and their family moments.He was in tears.

The next day...

Karan was tying Anjali's hair.

Anjali:Papa..not like this.You don't know to tie hair.If mumma is there she would have tied my hair in different styles.Please papa...bring me a mumma.

Karan became upset seeing her innocence.

Karan went to the main hall where all were sitting.

Karan:I am ready for remarriage.

All were surprised.

Soumya:Really?

Karan:Yes.

Shobha:Very good decision Karan.

Karan:But if I see that the lady I marry is not giving love to Anjali,I will not think even for a minute to throw her out.

Shobha:No Karan.Nothing like that will happen.

Vikram:We will make sure that you will marry a woman who is ready to accept Anjali as her own daughter.

Karan was silent.

Luthras enquired a lot about different girls and finally they chose a girl.

Karan carried Anjali to the room and looked at Simar's photograph.

Karan:Simar...now we are going to meet the girl as everyone wishes.I know that she can never replace you in Anjali's life.Still expecting that she will give motherly affection to Anjali which can give her happiness.

Anjali:Mumma...will you send a sweet mumma for me?

Karan felt sad and walked away from the photograph.

They were on the way to the girl's house.

Vikram:She is also a widow like you Karan.And she has a son who is like Anjali.

Shobha:Like you the only demand she has is ..you should give a father's love to her son.Like you she is marrying only for her son to have a father .

Karan:I don't have any objection in accepting her son as mine if she can accept my Anjali.

Sameer:She has no objection in accepting Anjali.

They all smiled.

They reached Khurana Mansion.The Khuranas welcomed them.The Khuranas Rohit Khurana and Antara Khurana interacted with Karan and got impressed by his personality.

Anjali:Where is mumma?

Karan whispered:Anjali...we are not sure whether the one who is in this house is your mumma or not.

Anjali:But everyone said that we came here to see mumma.

Karan was in a dilemma.

Mrs.Antara Khurana:Mumma will come soon beta.

Vikram:Anjali beta..first let papa and mumma talk to each other alone for some time.Then mumma will come to see you.

Anjali nodded.

Mr.Rohit Khurana:You can go and talk to our daughter.

Karan was hesitant.

Sameer:Why are you hesitating Karan bhai?

Karan:Is there any need to talk to her alone?This is not a normal marriage.We both are marrying only for our children.

Sameer:But without even seeing the girl and talking how can you be ready for marriage?After marriage you should not feel that you took the wrong decision to marry the wrong girl.So talk to her and make sure that she is best for Anjali.

Karan:You are right Sameer.I will go and talk to her.

They led him to the girl's room.

Karan saw the woman facing the window.

Karan:Excuse me.

She turned back and looked at him.Both were shocked to see each other and were not able to believe their eyes.

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Ah another good concept; I used to watch the show Punar vivah and i loved season 1 very much ðŸ˜Š
Karan's little daughter Anjali ðŸ˜­ missing her mother so sad; KKHH part type. Starting itself is so painful to read for me. She wants new mother for her and make her dad remarry. Loved Soumya trying to console him and convince. Good everybody is trying to convince him but sadly he is not ready for second marriage but he is right at his own place. Flashbacks were good. Surprisingly Karan agreed for marriage. Interesting whole family went to meet the girl. What happened at the end why were they shocked? 

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Punar Vivaah...Remarriage...Part 2


Thanks a lot 4 the comments friends

This chapter may be boring for most of you because of the flash back scenes and less PreeRan scenes.Please forgive me.But next part onwards it will be full of PreeRan scenes.



Karan:Preeta...
Preeta:Karan...


Flash back...

A basket ball ground is arranged.
Karan:are you ready baby doll?
Preeta came from behind:Yes Karan.I am ready.

Karan:Good girl.
Preeta:I am always a good girl.That's why I am your baby doll.
Karan:That's true.
They did high five.
Karan and Preeta were in the same team.
They played with the rival team and won the game.
Karan-Preeta and their team jumped with joy:Hey..
Karan-Preeta showed funny face to the rival team to tease them.

They won the trophy.
Preeta:Karan...I am really tired.
Karan:Ok.Let's go and drink something cool.
Preeta:Yes,that's what i also wanted.
They went to a restaurant and ordered cool drinks and snacks.
Karan:They will take time to bring it.In the mean time let us take some selfies to get rid of boredom.
Preeta:That's a good idea.
Karan-Preeta put their tongue out in a funny manner and clicked selfie.


Seeing them others who sat near by murmured:Today's generation is crazy.See,what crazy expressions are they giving while taking photos.
Karan-Preeta heard it.They looked at each other in embarrassment and burst into laughter.
Karan:By the way baby doll...since our team won we need a celebration.
Preeta:Celebration is a must Karan.
Karan:Done.

Karan-Preeta's team,their coach Mahesh,Rishab,Sameer partied with a lot of joy.


They cut cake.Karan and Preeta fed the cake to each other.






 Present...
Karan-Preeta looked at each other in disbelief.
Karan:It means you are the one...
Preeta:I can't believe that it's you who came to see me.
Karan:Ya..After college now only we are seeing each ther.
Preeta:Yes.I was really nervous to know hat someone is coming to meet me.But after seeing you I am really relieved that it's my dearest friend who has come to meet me.
He smiled:Even I am relieved Preeta.I was also tensed when my family insisted that I should come and meet the person they chose for me.But now after seeing you I am alright.
Preeta:Karan...you were married.Right?You have a daughter too.Right?
Karan:Yes.
Preeta:Then how?I mean you got divorced or..?
Karan:I could never think of divorce even for a joke as my wife was my life.

Preeta:Then what happened?

Flash back...

Karan extended flowers towards Simar:Simar...I love you.
She blushed receiving flowers from him.

Simar:I love you too Karan.
He smiled.
That was just the beginning of Karan Simar's love story.
Their courtship started from there with lots of romantic moments.

Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon
Hawaa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon
Ho ho...
Meri nazar ka safar
Tujhpe hi aake ruke
Kehne ko baaqi hai kya
Kehna tha jo keh chuke
Meri nigaahein hain
Teri nigahon pe
Tujhe khabar kya be-khabar
Main tujhse hi chhup chhup kar
Teri aankhen padhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon
Ho ho...
Tu jo mujhe aa mila
Sapne hue sirphire
Hathon mein aate nahi
Udte hain lamhe mere
Meri hansi tujhse
Meri khushi tujhse
Tujhe khabar kya be-qadar
Jis din tujhko na dekhun
Pagal pagal phirti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon
Ho ho...(MS Dhoni The Untold Story)



Finally they got married.


At night Karan did not find Simar in their bedroom.
Karan:Where did this Simar go on our wedding night?
Slowly she came from behind the curtain.She was glowing in a stylish violet saree.Karan was mesmerized by her beauty.
Simar:You expected me to wait here like a shy bride.Right?For a change I dressed up like this.
Seeing him silent she asked him:You did'nt like it?
Suddenly he pulled her closer looking at her passionately:I loved it.You look gorgeous.
She blushed:And you look handsome like ever.
They both smiled.
They danced and romanced passionately becoming one.

Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambi kahin, dil ki yeh daastaan
Kaise kahoon
Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambi kahin dil ki yeh dastaan
Kaise kahoon... kaise kahoon...
Tumse mujhe yeh kehna tha woh keh raha tha hum-dum
Ho saamne toh kya kahoon, kya kehna tha hum-dum
Kaise yeh, jazbat hai
Iss dil mein toh, din-raat hain
Honthon pe kyun aane se yeh sharmate hain
Aankhon mein kyun yeh har ghadi aa jate hai
Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Aa aa aa...

Hum kyun kahe, joban kahe, ik baat hai jana
Dhadkan kahe, dhadkan sune, woh raat hai jana
Dil bole bin, hai bolta
Sab raaz hai, yeh kholta
Jab khwaab hai, jazbaat hai, ehsaas hai
Toh kehna kya, toh sun.na kya, awaaz hai
Chahoon bhi toh main kaise kahoon
Saari jo baatein dil kehta hai
Lehar sapno ki kaise ginu
Dariya behta hi rehta hai
Keh rahi hai kya yeh suno, meri khamoshiyan
Raat se hai lambi kahin, dil ki yeh daastaan
Kaise kahoon(Force).





Months passed...

Karan:Simar...now you are glowing.What is the matter?
Simar was shy.
Simar:Actually Karan...
Karan:Say Simar.
Simar caught his hand and kept it on her belly.
Simar:The symbol of love has already arrived Karan.
Karan was surprised:Really?
She nodded shyly.
Karan cupped her face:You gave me the biggest surprise of life Simar.Our child will spread our love everywhere.
She smiled.
Karan carried her in his arms and twirled around happily.

Karan brought Simar before everyone


and said:We want to share a happy news with all of you.


Shoba:What happy news?
Vikram:Tell fast.
Karan Simar blushed.They exchanged glances shyly.Then Karan looked at them.


Karan:Simar is expecting.We are becoming parents.
All were surprised.
Shoba:Means we are becoming grand parents.
Vikram:Our first grand child is going to come.
Rishab:Congratulations guys.
Sameer:I am going to be a chachu.

Soumya:I will be a bua.Wow.
Karan Simar blushed.Karan cupped her face romantically.


Shoba went near them.They turned towards her shyly.
Shoba caressed Simar.Everyone hugged Karan Simar.

All of them pampered Simar a lot.Finally she gave birth to a baby girl.
The family welcomed them with a lamp when Karan Simar arrived home from the hospital.

They named the baby Anjali.Anjali was the pet of the family.

Simar used to have head ache very often.But she ignored it.

Anjali's birthday was celebrated in a grand manner.


During the party when all were enjoying shockingly Simar fainted.
Karan screamed:Simar...
He rushed towards her and made her lie on her lap.
Karan:Simar..open your eyes.What happened?
All were worried.
Vikram:Don't waste time.Take Simar to the hospital.
Shoba:We will manage Anjali.
Rishab:Yes.I will take the car.
Rishab drove the car while Karan was sitting behind with Simar on his lap.
They reached the hospital.The doctor arrived.


Rishab was stunned to see Simar's doctor.
His lips shivered:Vishaka...
Vishaka:Rishab..what a surprise!
Rishab smiled.Suddenly Vishaka's husband Dr.Ajitabh came.
Rishab became dull.Rishab met Vishaka through some mutual friends and eventually they became friends.He always loved Vishaka silently.His heart broke when Vishaka fell in love with Ajitabh who was her classmate in medical college.After that purposefully Rishab kept a distance with her.
Rishab:Vish..please check my sister in law Simar.She fainted all of a sudden.

Vishaka:Sure.
Vishaka and Ajitabh did some tests.
The test result came.
Karan:Is my Simar alright?Please say.
Vish:Now she has gained consciousness.
Karan was relieved.
Vish:But the test result is not pleasant.
Ajitabh:Simar is having brain tumour.

Karan was shocked.
Karan:Simar will be alight.Right?

Vish:If it was first stage we could have cured her disease.But now...

Karan was shattered:No..nothing can happen to my Simar.
Rishab held Karan and tried to console him tearfully.

They all entered Simar's room.
Simar:Karan..what's wrong with me?I am fine.Right?
Vishaka:You are having brain tumour Simar.
Simar was shocked:No..it can't be true.Karan..it's false report.Right?
Simar was really panicked.
Karan tried to hide his pain to not hurt her more.He held her hand:Simar...
Simar:Karan..tell them that they are having misunderstandings.
Karan:Simar..please handle yourself.

Simar burst into tears and embraced him.Both were in tears.

The Luthra family was in pain.
Simar's treatment started.

Simar:Karan...what is the need of this treatment when there is no hope for my survival?
Karan:Simar..how can you talk like this?This treatment will cure you for sure.Have faith.
Simar:Please don't live in dreams.When it breaks you will get hurt so much that it will be difficult to heal you.

Karan:No Simar.Don't say like that.
He embraced her crying.

Simar lost all her beautiful hair.But to boost her confidence he made her wear wig.But Simar had no hope.
Simar:After my death please marry a nice woman who will love you and Anjali.
Karan was shocked:How could you even ask me to marry someone else Simar?
Simar:Karan...for your good future only I asked you to..
Karan:Stop it Simar.
He held her hand and kept it on his head:Promise me that you will never tell me to marry someone else.
Tears rolled down her cheeks:Please be practical Karan.You have to move on.
Karan:Close your mouth.Just promise me that you will never talk like this again.


She nodded tearfully.
Karan wiped her tears:Simar...no one can take your place in my heart.
They shared a teary eye lock.

Karan Simar attended the puja which Lutras conducted for Simar's recovery.


Simar's treatment continued for some years.

One morning Karan saw Simar in deep sleep.

He caressed her:Simar...wake up.It's getting late.

She did not respond.He shook her in nervousness.He realized with a shock that Simar is breathless.He screamed:Simar...
He embraced her crying.

Simar was dressed up as a bride for her cremation.

Anjali tried to wake her up without knowing what happened.
Anjali:Maa...

Karan cried hugging Anjali.

Present...

Karan was becoming very emotional.
Karan:Thus Anjali and I lost my Simar.Though we prayed a lot God did'nt hear our prayer.
Preeta felt sad hearing his story.
Preeta:I really feel sad for you.What happened to Simar was very unfortunate.

Preeta wiped his tears.Karan looked at her deeply.
Karan:Now I am reminded of my best friend Preeta who always consoled me when I was sad in college.
Preeta:Your best friend Preeta is still the same Karan.I will always be with you to erase your pain.
They shared an emotional eye lock.

Karan:What happened to your married life?
Preeta became gloomy.
Preeta:Our life was perfect like a fairy tale till that day.



It was during Maha Sankranti that Abhimanyu and I met each other for the first time.


We interacted with each other flying kites together and in the first meeting itself we loved each other's company.


We became friends.We talked for hours on the phone even if we did'nt see each other.

Unknowingly we fell in love with each other.
We did'nt confess our love to each other through words.But our eyes spoke our love for each other.


Flash back...

Anshuman:Preeta...we are already good friends.But I feel my soul and heart are lost to you.When my soul and heart are with you I need to be with you for survival.Can I stay near you always?
Preeta was stunned:What are you saying Anshuman?

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain
Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain



Anshuman:Preeta...I  have fallen in love with you.
Unknowingly a beautiful smile appeared on her already beautiful face.

Khamosh si hai zameeen hairaan sa falak hai
Ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai


Anshuman:Preeta...
Preeta:Yes,it's true that your heart and soul are with me.Do you know how you lost them?
Anshuman:How?
Preeta:Because I stole them as i wanted your heart and soul.
Anshuman smiled:Why you stole them?
Preeta:Because I felt that our souls and hearts are connected.So I need them close to my heart and soul.
He smiled.

Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein



Anshuman:I know that you are my soul mate.Because I love you.
Preeta:I love you too Anshuman.

Oo..nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein


She pecked his cheek with pure love.

His face blossomed.

Kaise yeh ishq hai
Kaisa yeh khwaab hai
Kaise jazbaat ka umda sailab hai



Anshuman:Will you marry me?
Preeta blushed embracing him:Yes...marry me fast Anshuman.I don't want to live even a second with you.


He smiled caressing her:Yes.

Kaise yeh ishq hai
Kaisa yeh khwaab hai
Kaise jazbaat ka umda sailab hai
Din badle raatein badli
Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain



Anshuman and Preeta got married.

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain



Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain


Wedding night...

Anshuman sat near Preeta.
Anshuman:Preeta..As you know I am an orphan.You are the only person  have in this life.
Preeta:Don't say that you are an orphan.Now onwards you are not an orphan.You have me.
He looked at her emotionally:Promise me that you will never leave me.
Preeta:I will not leave you ever Anshuman.You also promise me that you will not leave me and go anywhere.
Anshuman held her hand:I swear..I will not leave you and go anywhere.Because my life starts and ends with you.

Samay ne yeh kya kiya
Badal di hai kaya
Tumhein mene paa liye
Mujhe tumne paya



They shared a romantic eye lock.

Mile dekho aise hai hum
Ke do sur ho jaise madham
Koi jyada na koi kaam
Kise aag mein ke prem aag mein



They talked a lot and slept in each other's arms.

Jalte dono hi the tan bhi maan bhi
Maan bhi hai tan bhi



The next morning Preeta got dressed in a beautiful saree.
Anshuman came near her and filled her hairline with vermilion.She smiled.

Mere khwaabon ke is gulistaan mein
Tumse hi tum bahar chai hai
Phoolon mein rang nahi the lekin
Dil mein khusboon tumhi se aai hai


Anshuman:Now you look very beautiful.
Preeta:Yes ..as your wife I am very beautiful.
They smiled at each other romantically.

Kyon hai yeh arzoo
Kyon hai yeh zustzu
Kyon dil bechain hai
Kyon dil betaab hai



Anshuman Preeta went for honeymoon.They enjoyed sight seeing.

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain



Koi kalma mohabat ka



Dohrate farishte hain

They stayed in a honeymoon resort.Seeing rain they went out and stood in the rain.
Anshuman was lost in Preeta's sizzling wet look.He pulled her closer passionately.
Anshuman and Preeta looked at each other with burning passion.

Kyon hai yeh arzoo
Kyon hai yeh zustzu
Kyon dil bechain hai
Kyon dil betaab hai
Din badle raatein badli baatien badli
Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain



They broke the eye lock shyly.
They both jumped into the swimming pool in rain.They both giggled together when the water splashed on them as they jumped into the pool.

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain
Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain

Slowly their eyes thirsted for each other and so their eyes got locked onto each other.

Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein.


They moved closer to each other.. craving for each other.


They had sensual romance in the swimming pool.


Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein.




They both went to their room.Anshuman changed his clothes.He saw Preeta coming out of the dressing room wearing a beautiful saree.He could not take hi eyes off her.She looked that beautiful.She blushed.

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain
Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain


He moved closer to her rubbing her soft cheeks with his nose.She closed her yes feeling his touch.

Khamosh si hai zameeen hairaan sa falak hai
Ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai
Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein



He lifted her up and placed her on the bed.He showered lots of love upon her.

Oo..nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein



Kaise yeh ishq hai
Kaisa yeh khwaab hai
Kaise jazbaat ka umda sailab hai

Kaise yeh ishq hai
Kaisa yeh khwaab hai
Kaise jazbaat ka umda sailab hai
Din badle raatein badli
Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain


In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain
Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain(Jodha Akbar).



Anshuman-Preeta were on cloud nine when a on was born to them...their Ayaan.
Anshuman and Preeta were the best parents to Ayaan.They found happiness in small moments of life.
They celebrated every festival with unity.

They dressed up Ayaan together to send him to school.


Suddenly Preeta slipped only to be caught by Anshuman.
He lifted her up in his arms.


They shared a sweet eye lock.
Preeta was shy.She whispered:Put me down Anshuman.Ayaan is next to us.

Anshuman:When I carried you in my arms taking this situation as an opportunity to romance you are asking me to put down.No way.

Preeta:Anshuman...try to understand.Ayaan is watching us.
Ayaan:Mumma..no problem.I will close my eyes.
Preeta was embarrassed.Anshuman laughed.
Preeta:This generation is unbelievable.
Anshuman:The kids are more romantic than us.Since Ayaan permitted us to romance let us romance.
Preeta was shy.She beat his shoulder in a funny manner:Stop it Anshuman.
They giggled.
Anshuman released her.
Anshuman:Now I am leaving you.But in the evening get ready.We are going out.A family date with Ayaan.
She smiled:Ok.

That day evening Preeta wore a beautiful saree and jewellery to go for the date.But Anshuman did not reach home.Preeta was nervous.Suddenly she got a phone call.
"Mrs.Anshuman?"
Preeta:Yes.
"Anshuman met with an accident.He is in City hospital.Some people on the way brought him here".
Preeta was shocked and shattered.She rushed to the hospital leaving Ayaan with her parents.
"Sorry...Anshuman is no more".
Preeta was shattered:No...it can't happen.
She was led to his body.
She cried standing near him:Anshuman..get up.Get up.

She stood near him:You liar!You promised me that you will never leave me and go.But you broke your promise though I kept my promise and stayed by you always.


How could you break your promise and leave me and Ayaan alone?

She cried embracing his body.

Present...

Preeta shed tears:My Anshuman left me without even bidding good-bye to me.
Karan felt sad.


He wiped her tears.
Karan:I can't bring your Anshuman back to stop your tears.But I can wipe your tears with my pure friendship.
Preeta smiled emotionally:I feel blessed to have my dearest friend back.I can share my pain with you and release my mental agony.
Karan nodded emotionally.

Flash back...

Preeta's parents took her and Ayaan to their house.For Ayaan, Preeta pretended to be strong.
Ayaan:Missing dad mumma..
Preeta wiped Ayaan's tears controlling her tears.
Preeta:Don't cry if you love your dad.Because your dad can still see you from the heaven and he will feel sad if you see him cry.

Ayaan:I promise mumma..I will never cry.I don't want dad to be upset.
Preeta smiled emotionally.

Time passed..
Ayaan too moved on.
Once he told Preeta:Mumma...I want my father.
Preeta was stunned:Ayaan..you know everything.You dad cannot come back.

Ayaan:Nani said that if you marry someone he will be my father.



Preeta was stunned.
Preeta's mom Antara came.
Preeta:Maa...what have you filled Ayaan's mind with?
Antara:Did I tell anything wrong?Ayaan was sad that he has no father.So I told him this.
Preeta:But I can't think of remarriage.I can't think of marrying anyone else.
Antara:Won't you do that at least for your son's happiness?For a mother her child's happiness is most important.Right?

Preeta's heart was pricked.
Preeta:But what is the guarantee that he will love Ayaan like his own?
Antara:But it can be the other way around too.What if he will give Ayaan the fatherly love he misses the most?Think Preeta..think...at least meet the guy we choose for you.
Preeta:Ok...I will meet him.But i will marry him only if I genuinely feel that he will love Ayaan sincerely.
Antara:Ok...Meet the guy when we chose him.I am sure that you will agree to marry him as your dad and I will choose only the best person for you.

Present...

Preeta:That is how I agreed to meet you.But now I am glad that I agreed to meet you.That's why I got my dearest friend back.
Karan and Preeta smiled at each other.
Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Okay first this was too long to read ðŸ˜Š but I did it 
You mixed our DD and SA's most romantic love show in this ff 
Wow Preeta Karan besties in college. loved their friendship but how come they didn't fall in love with each other. Reminds me of KKHH now, how love is realized later 
Anyway back to your story flashbacks of both couples were romantic, passionate and intense. But don't know why i felt Simar's death was too much painful and emotional to handle. Anshuman death was painful as well, ayaan craving for father ðŸ˜­. Preeta and Karan sharing their past with each other was touchy. Now they won't have too much formal relation during marriage but i guess it will hard for their children little bit. Lets see what happens ðŸ˜Š
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Interesting Update !  
For me it is a combination of KKHH and Baabul ... 
Keep Writing !

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Thanks a lot.PreeRan were best friends in college.But there is nothing like love is realized later or one sided love like KKHH in this SS.Here PreeRan r not at all in love.It's pure friendship.After remarriage they have to fall in love
This content was originally posted by: abhiya23

Okay first this was too long to read ðŸ˜Š but I did it 

You mixed our DD and SA's most romantic love show in this ff 
Wow Preeta Karan besties in college. loved their friendship but how come they didn't fall in love with each other. Reminds me of KKHH now, how love is realized later 
Anyway back to your story flashbacks of both couples were romantic, passionate and intense. But don't know why i felt Simar's death was too much painful and emotional to handle. Anshuman death was painful as well, ayaan craving for father ðŸ˜­. Preeta and Karan sharing their past with each other was touchy. Now they won't have too much formal relation during marriage but i guess it will hard for their children little bit. Lets see what happens ðŸ˜Š