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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

What a Fab Update Ananya πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ

Oh Jealous Aladdin was such a treat to us ❀️ . I could very well imagine Sid giving those Jealous expressions . Loveddd the update .

Update soon Plzz

Thanks moni, I am glad that you like the jealous part and was able to imagine our Sid Reaction .. Thanks again for reading and commenting...
Will update next part soon ..
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: 1973deepak


Thanks dear for reading and commenting... I am glad that you like the jealous part,I was not sure whether you all will like the part or not but glad to see that you all liked it...
Greedy!!! No way...Will update soon...


Oh loved jealous Aladdin 😊
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 5 years ago
Part 8


At Soheb Ali's house


Mirza was showing yasmine the small rooms that they have for rent...


Mirza-Sana ji aapko kaisa laga humaara Aashiyana...


Before Yasmine could say anything about the house Aladdin interrupted...


Aladdin - Bekaar, Kuch bhi khaas nahi...


Sana hit him hard by her elbow...


Sana-Iski toh mazaak karne ki aadad hai... Hume bohot pasanad ayaa aapka Aashiyana...


Sana trued to keep a fake smile on her face...


Mirza-sirf mera nahi... Humara Aashiyana...


Sana was trying to blush but as expected from a warrior princess she could not...


Aladdin clenched his fist tightly now it was becoming unbearable for him.. Yasmine noticed and decided to continue the act as she wanted him to burn in the fire of jealousy as she had been when he was with meher...


Yasmine - Humaara gala na jaane kyu sookh raha hai...


Mirza literally ran towards the kitchen to bring a glass of water


Mirza- sana ji yeh lijiye paani...


Yasmine- Mirza ji aap bhi na kitne acche hai jo humaara itna dhyaan rakhte hai...


Mirza - apke iss andaaz par humaare pyaase dil ne kuch kaha hai bole toh arz kare...


Aladdin - nahi... Koi zaroorat nahi hai... Aapki bakwaas shayari meri samajh mein nahi aati...


Mirza-ji aapko samjhne keh bhi kon raha hai mia.. Hum toh iss husn ki pari ko puch rahe the..


Aladdin was about to argue but Yasmine interrupted in between..


Yasmine - maine kaha tha na inhe mazak karne ki aadat hai.. Aap inki baat par dhyan nahi dijiye...Hume sunayiye...


Mirza-Arz kiya hai..

Husn tumhaara jaise ek shabnam ka

Katara gulaab par bikhara hua sa

Husn tumhaara jaise ek shabnam ka

Katara gulaab par bikhara hua sa

Labo par naam tumhaara jaise

pyaasa baadal samundar par lipta hua sa...


Yasmine - waah aapka hunar kaabiletaarif hai... Haina Aladdin..


Aladdin left the room...


Aladdin - jao usi ke saath raho aur main kyu jal raha hoon usse... Sana jisse chaahe usse mile... mein toh vaise bhi uska sirf dost hoon na... Nahi dost nahi jo bhi hoon mujhe usse kya..


Aladdin soon remembered their beautiful kiss... And all the special moments that they have spent together...


Aladdin - Nahi.. Aladdin tu sana ko nahi kho sakta... Tu uss mirza ke bacche se nahi haar sakta... Sana sirf meri hai... sirf meri...


Aladdin soon came back to room...


Mirza - Toh aap dono ke liye maine do kamre khaali kara diye hai... Aap dono ka kul jama kiraya...


Aladdin interrupted Mirza in between..


Aladdin - Do kamre... Kisliye..


Mirza-ek tum jaise ke liye aur doosra iss husn ki malika ke liye...


Aladdin laughed at him..


Aladdin - tum bhi na mirza bohot nadaan ho... Bhala mehboob aur maashooka alag alag kamre mein rahenge...


Aladdin pulled Yasmine towards him and held his hand behind her waist tightly... She tried to move away but his grip was compelling...


Mirza- Maashooka!!! Sana ji aap inki...


Yasmine smiled weirdly and stared at Aladdin...


Aladdin - Chalo Jaaneman!!


Yasmine was so furious that she could burn him with her eyes

Yasmine went inside the room with Aladdin...


Aladdin - mia!!! Yeh lijiye kiraya... Subah milte hai..


Mirza was still as if he had seen a snake dancing in front of him...


Aladdin intentionally close the door with a bang so as to bring Mirza out of his horrific dream...


In the room


As soon as Aladdin turned around he could see Yasmine was burning in fire of anger as her plan was a total flop

Yasmine pushed Aladdin on a small bed placed in the room...


Aladdin - Nachidii!! Yeh kya kar rahi ho... Haan maine kaha ki hum ek doosre se mohabbat karte hai aur mana ki hum chor hai par iska yeh mat lab nahi ki tum meri izzat lootogi...


Yasmine - Kaalechor!!! Aaj hum tumhe nahi chodenge... Tumhaari himmat kaisi hui hume vo kehne ki...


Aladdin - kya kehne ki??


Yasmine-vo hi jo tumne hume mirza ke saamne kaha...


Aladdin comfortably sitting on the bad started teasing her..


Aladdin - kya kaha tha maine tumhe... Mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha...


Yasmine - tum zyada bano mat... Tumne kaha nahi tha ki hum..


Aladdin - ki hum..


Yasmine - ki hum tumhaari...


Aladdin - ki hum tumhaari kya...


Yasmine - maashooka hai...


Yasmine turned around in frustration.. Aladdin pulled her and she landed on him... Yasmine's anger was vanished due to their closeness... Aladdin looked in her eyes and said...


Aladdin - Haan sach kaha ki tum meri mashooka aur main tumhaara mehboob hoon...

Aur hum dono ek dusre se sirf mohabbat... Sacchi mohabbat karte hai...

Hope you all will enjoy reading this part.. Do like, comment and tell your opinion about it... Next part will definitely have an intense romantic scenes..
Edited by 1973deepak - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow !!!!!!!!! I loved itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Plzz update super soon
Can't wait more
Plz update soon or i will die of curiosity πŸ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Wow !!!!!!!!! I loved itπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Plzz update super soon
Can't wait more
Plz update soon or i will die of curiosity πŸ˜†

Thanks Shirin, Will update next part of both the stories ASAP I will not let you die so soon just because of the curiosity.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks Shirin, Will update next part of both the stories ASAP I will not let you die so soon just because of the curiosity.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks Shirin, Will update next part of both the stories ASAP I will not let you die so soon just because of the curiosity.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Thank god!!!!!
It means i will stay alive and won't have to die!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago
Thanks for updating it soon dear .
Wow such a Nice cute update ❀️. It was short one . Can't wait for ur next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
I was just chuckling reading the update. Aladdin bahut naughty hai. The shyari. U write beautiful shayaris πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
This was such a cute update
And yes!!!! Aladdin finally realized what Yasmine means to him...I hope he never leaves her again
Update the next part soon
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