It makes me all emosh ...
Khushi ke anshoo actually 😭
Thank you so much dear and I am glad that in someway KP could really give you the recognition and love you very well deserve and perhaps you deserve much more for the love you have both for me and the story 😳.
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Hi Sur!🤗
Finally here. You must me some magician my dear.Leaving me spell bound and enchanted with each update.This story is a magnet and magic.It surely is a bliss reading it.Trust me! In days that seem low for me I turn to your stories.And this story specifically.Sameer recovering and stabling him in life casting an indifference somehow inspires.
Finally the revelation is done.And it was all logical.Sur! I think you would agree with me too that child out of wedlock is such a cliched topic.But do you know my master magician;what makes your story different and a piece of sheer artistic,aesthetic brilliance? The treatment.Logical and Chronological.There is no mad rush and gradual storytelling.
Naina and Sameer have been through numerous unprotected physical encounters and this logically backs the conception of Diya.Not those stories where just the leads share a single night and viola!the baby is conceived.I have read many stories on this topic but I am proudly declaring that none treated this sort of logical conception of child out out of wedlock.Kudos to you 👏
When each scene is so thoughtfully envisioned and crafted,its difficult to chose the best pick.With this another thought flashes by.You have treated Mr.A in one of best lights.Not the oppressive husbands types.And I bow down to your vision of story writing.Without any single character turning into a villain or antagonist ,the story enchants with emotions being the pivot joint.Needless to say,why this story has captured several hearts and has reached a glorious third thread.My lady! A big congratulations to you.This is an achievement in itself.🥳
And the way you are weaving the classics and contemporary novels in your writing.Thats no mean feat.It's difficult to draw parallels and taking care that your actual storyline is not distorted and that the original work of the other author is hampered as well.Balancing the two and yet retaining the essence of each s distinctively...I am not wrong in terming you the 'Lady Magician'..Oh well..It sounds somewhat like Lady Macbeth😆
Jokes Apart...The last update was such a riot.I mean Diya has totally inherited the 'mar-pit' genes from her father..And silky hair even..Sameer's dream and reality are no different rather blend of expectedly unexpected.Defining the title once more.
I love how both the father and daughter bonded so well and Naina being typical mother,ranting and self berating.I feel for the poor girl.So much she has endured and mothering a child is no easy feat.We are yet to be revealed how Arvind came into the frame and what transpired ..But yeah! there seems no smooth cakewalk of Naina Agarwal transforming into Reena Mittal..This is intriguing and I know you must have planned it really well.
Special mention to Naina's gaali to Diya..I loved that "Aye din maar-pit" 😆 Waiting for an oppurtunity to use it for some.Sur! You are so good with dialogues and symbolism.The references from Paradise..My words fail to conjure how brilliantly you have penned it down all.👏
No coming to the theory as spun by Sweety...Perhaps Diya's failing health or some ailment will match with Sameer..Juvenile diabetes? May be..and then Sameer would know he has fathered this child.May be then he can realise that Diya and him share 'genes ka rishta' along with 'dil ka rishta'..And since she is a daughter ,the probability of her carrying genes from her father is much more.Will wait to see if this theory stands correct or was it a khyali pulao.
And trust me I absolutely loved the father daughter interaction and how Sameer couldnot tolerate Diya's wish not getting fulfilled.There is nothing that moves a loving father's soul quite like his child's cry.And Sameer proved this,though he is unaware of Diya's parentage.
With Mr.A going away for 2 weeks,I smell some unexpected twists waiting our way to spring off.Can't wait to read the next update.
I am sorry dear for not being able to comment on time and regularly.And I know I have not reviewed the updates pretty well too.😳 Sorry.
Thank you for the PM and keep coming with your best.
With love-
Minu
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