Preeran SS - Unconditional Love (Chapter 21 updated on Page 8) - Page 3

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Chapter 6 Part 2

Karan drops Preeta home after the movie

Karan: Ghar aa gaya hai

Preeta was lost in her thoughts thinking about the whole movie experience. Karan notices that she is distracted.

Karan: Hello? Doctor dumbo?

Preeta: Haan? Kya hua?

Karan: Ghar aa gaya

Preeta: Oh haan. Chalo andar chalo. Main chai banati hoon

Karan: Main gaadi park karke aata hoon

Preeta goes inside

Shrishti: Aare di aap kahan the?

Preeta: Woh Karan ke saath thi

Shrishti: Mujhe Karan sir se baat karni thi (slaps her forehead)

Preeta: Andar hi aa raha hai. Bahar gaadi park karr raha hai

Shrishti: Yay (gets excited like a little kid)

Preeta: Karan ka naam sunke tu itna khush kyun ho rahi hai?

Shrishti: Woh...woh... main Karan sir se itna pyaar karti hoon na

Preeta gets shocked

Preeta: Kya tu Karan se pyaar karti hai?

Karan: Babydoll mujhse sab pyaar karte hai

Both Preeta and Shrishti turn towards the door to see him standing

Karan: Aur Shrishti meri sabse badi fan hai

Shrishti: Ofcourse sir. Your one and only (gives him a wide excited smile)

Karan: Kareli jao mere liye chai banao. Aaj main Shrshti ke saath baith ke gup shup karunga

Preeta looks at Karan and Shrishti and gives an irritated look and storms off towards the kitchen

In the kitchen:

Preeta was constantly looking at Karan and Shrishti while the tea was on the gas. She saw that both were animatedly discussing something.

Preeta: (In her head) Inn donno ko beech kya khichadi pakk rahi hai

In the living room:

Shrishti: Karan sir wahan chalet hai. Pooja ka address mill gaya hai and fortunately she lives in Mumbai now. Infact she is married

Karan: Tu sahi bol rahi hai. Let's go and meet her. Pata toh chale ki hua kyat ha

Shrishti notices Preeta staring at them

Shrishti: Karan sir di ka kta karenge? Humein ghoor rahi hai

Karan: Stress matt le. Main jo bolunga tu bass agree karte jaa

Shrishti: Done sir

Preeta gets tea for the three of them and sits on the couch

Karan: Toh Shrishti main keh raha tha, tum mere saath chalo. Main wahin jaa raha hoon

Shrishti: Ok sir

Preeta: Kahan jaa rahe ho tum donno?

Karan: Shrishti ko kuch flowers ke samples dekhne hai. Main Bandra hi jaa raha hoon, toh isse chodh dunga

Preeta looks at him suspiciously

Shrishti: chalo sir main ready hoon

Karan: Accha chalo bye. Hum chalte hai

Preeta: Chai toh pee lo

Karan and Shrishti together: Baad mein

Both Karan and Shrishti leave in a haste and Preeta gets curious as to what's cooking between them

Preeta: (in her head) I hope Shrishti ko sach mein Karan se pyaar naa ho  gaya ho (typical tensed Preeta expression)

Karan and Shrishti reach the address that Shrishti gt from the NGO. They ring the door bell. A young woman opens the door

Pooja: Ji?

Karan: Pooja?

Pooja: Haan. Aap Karan Luthra hon a?

Karan and Shrishti look at each other

Karan: Haan aur Dr Natasha Malhotra ka bhai

Pooja: Oh my god aap Natasha ke bhai ho? Please come inside. Sumeet, Sumeet bahar aao

Sumeet (Pooja's husband): Kya hua?

Pooja: Yeh Karan Luthra hai aur Dr Natasha ke bhai

Sumeet: Sir aap se milke bahut accha laga

Just then a toddler come crawling towards Pooja

Pooja: Yeh mera beta hai. I wanted Natasha to see him. Aaj yeh jo meri life hai woh Natasha ki wajah se hi hai. Agar woh nahin hoti, toh yeh sab nahin hota. Mujhe himmat di usne. Sahi raasta dikhaya. Warna ek rape survivor ki life kitni mushkil ho sakti hai

Pooja looks at Sumeet

Shrishti: Ek minute. Kya kaha aapne? Rape survivor?

Karan and Shrishti look shocked

Sumeet: Haan. Dr Natasha ne Pooja ki bahut madad ki hai. Aur main unse milna chahta hoon

Karan: Matlab Natasha ne tumhara abortion kiya nahin tha?

Pooja: Abortion? Nahin.

Karan and Shrishti look at each other

Karan: Pooja, Sumeet humein aap donno ki madad chahiye. Lekin uske pehle mujhe poori kahani sunni hai. Delhi mein uss din hua kya tha?

Precap: Karan and Shrishti hatch a plan to bring Natasha, Preeta and Pooja face to face to reveal the truth

 

Edited by Nirvana15 - 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Karanpreeta

Until now i was a silent reader of ur story bcoz of some account issues but yrrr howw greatt u writee👏 really in love with ur story preeta getting jealous was soo cutee and precap😲 but actually i am excited to see preeran fight😃 conntinue soon😉

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Preeta is so jealous about Tania & Karan bond😆

Loved Preeran's moment😳

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: abhiya23

Great update again 👏

I am loving Tashu Preeta more than Preeran 😆 

Preeta madam is jealous to heights 

Does Tania love Karan? 

I can't wait for next please update soon 😉

Haeee howw cuteee😳 read both parts in one go...our jealous "chothi fail" and her karela.❤️..nice precap do update soon😊

Chapter 7 (part 1)

Prithvi who was lying low after the whole Monisha expose decided to go and meet Preeta

At Arora House

Preeta was constantly checking her phone for any update from Karan or Shrishti. She was getting restless as she thought that Shrishti is falling for Karan

Preeta: (to herself) Shrishti ko Karan se pyaar nahin ho sakta. Woh toh shayad Sameer ko pasand karti hai. Aur Karan bhi toh use bacchi ki tarah treat karta hai. Hey bhagwaan main pagal ho jaungi

Prithvi enters

Prithvi: Preeta ji

Preeta: Prithvi ji aap? Aaiye. Maa

Sarla comes out and greets Prithvi

Sarla: Prithvi ji baithiye na. Aapki mummy ji kaisi hai?

Prithvi: Ji woh theek hai. Aap sab ko yaad karr rahi thi

Prithvi spends some time with the Aroras and leaves

Prithvi: Accha main chalta hoon. Preeta ji main aap ko kal pick karr lunga lunch ke liye

Preeta nods uncomfortably.

Preeta: (in her mind) Yeh Karan aur Shrishti abhi tak kyun nahin aaye

Just then Karan and Shrishti walk in laughing. Preeta stares at them.

Karan: Tu sach mein pagal hai

Shrishti: Kya Karan sir aap bhi

Karan: Nahin yaar tere jaisi jhalli aaj tak nahin milli mujhe

Shrishti: Ab toh main mill gayee hoon na

Preeta glares at Shrishti after listening to that comment

Preeta: Kisko milli ho tum?

Shrishti: Huh?

Preeta: Mera matlab hai kisko milke aa rahe ho tum donno? Itna chahek rahe ho?

Karan: Woh hamara secret hai. Tumein kyun bataye?

Preeta gives him a angry stare.

Karan: Accha main chalta hoon. Preeta kal hum log movie ka plan bana rahe hai. Tum bhi chalo. Sammy bhi aa raha hai

Preeta: Main nahin aa rahi tumhare saath kahin. Waise bhi main kal Prithvi ji ke saath lunch pe jaa rahi hoon

Karan and Shrishti stare at each other. Shrishti winks at Karan.

Srishti: Haan toh theek hai na. Actually Karan sir aap Sameer ko mana karr do. Aap aur main chalenge movie ke liye

Karan gives her a confused look.

Preeta: (in her mind) Karan aur Shrishti akele movie ke liye? Kabhi nahin.

Preeta imagines Karan and Shristi taking corner seats in a theatre and smiling at each other. She then imagines herself come in between them and asks Shrishti to move to another seat. Preeta comes back to her senses

Preeta: Woh actually main aa rahi hoon movie ke liye. Main Prithvi ji ko mana karr dungi

Karan looks at Shrishti and smiles

Karan: Toh fir done hai. Main aur Sammy tum donno ko pick karr lenge

Shrishti: Yayieee

Shrishti hugs Karan in excitement and Karan also laughs out loud looking at her antics. Preeta on the other hand was worried sick thinking that Shrishti is actualy in love with Karan. Just then...

Shrishti: Love you Karan sir (claps her hands like a small kid)

Karan: Pagal! Love you too. Accha main chalta hoon (looks at Preeta)

Preeta: Bye (she walks him out to his car)

Preeta: Accha bye

Karan: Bye (looks at her suspiciously). Kya hua? Itni baar bye kyun bol rahi ho? Kuch kehna hai?

Preeta: Kuch nahin. Ab jao bhi

Karan smiles and leaves in his car

Preeta: (to herself) Mujhe kabhi hug nahin kiya aur kabhi I love you bhi nahin bola. Kya Karan bhi Shrishti se. Nahin nahin aisa thodi ho sakta hai. Karan toh sabko I love you bol deta hai... but mujhe kabhi kyun nahin bola? Mazak mein bhi nahin bola kabhi? Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai. Ek kaam karti hoon, Shrishti ko directly pooch leti hoon. Haan yeh sahi rahega

Preeta decides to ask Shrishti about her feelings for Karan and goes inside.

 

Finally an update of my favt storyyy...yeahhh🤗.. So Preeta is Jealousss but now it has resulted in a misundrstnding😲..hope it will be sorted out soonn do update next part soon😊

Chapter 7 (Part 2)

Preeta enters the bedroom where she sees Shrishti sitting on the bed

Preeta: (casually) Accha sunn. Tere aur Karan ke beech kya chal raha hai?

Shrishti: Huh? Matlab?

Preeta: I mean tu uski fan hai, but yeh I love you and hug karna? Thoda over nahin ho raha hai?

Shrishti: Ek minute ek minute di! Kahan aapko yeh toh nahin lag raha hai ki main Karan sir se pyaar karti hoon?

Preeta: (fumbles) Nahin toh! Aur agar karti bhi ho toh mujhe koi farak nahin padta

Shrishti eyes her suspiciously and notices her jealousy. She decides to mess with her.

Shrishti: Aap ne toh meri tension hi khatam kardi di!

Preeta: (shocked) Kya?

Shrishti: Haan matlab ab main Karan sir se pyaar karti hoon yeh toh kisise chupa nahin hai. Ab toh aapko bhi use problem nahin hai. Main soch rahi hoon Karan sir ko call karke propose karr hi doon

Preeta: Tu pagal ho gayee hai? Tu aisa kuch nahin karegi!

Shrishti picks up her phone and dials a number

Shrishti: Hello Karan sir? Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai. I love you!

Preeta snatches the phone from her and realises that Shrishti had not dialled any number

Preeta: Tu! Badmaash! Tu rukk ja!

Preeta chases Shrishti around their room and finally catches up with her

Preeta: Ab kahaan jaayegi?

Shishti: Arre di main Mazak karr rahi thi. Waise bhi Karan sir toh kisi aur ko apna dil de chuke hai

Preeta: (worries and curious) Kisko?

Shrishti: Aapko kyun jaanna hai? Aapko toh koi farak nahin padta na?

Preeta: Nahin padta

Preeta storms out of the room in anger

Preeta: (to herself) Kisi aur ko apna dil de chuka hai? Aise kaise? Mazak hai kya? Mujhe kyun nahin bataya? Aur hai kaun yeh ladki?

Next Day at the Aroras

Karan and Sammy reach to pick up Preeta and Shrishti

Karan enters the girls room and sees Preeta applying kajal

Karan: Hello baby doll!

Preeta gets startled because of him and smudges the kajal on her nose. Karan sees that and laughs.

Karan: Oh god kareli! Kajal lagana nahin aata toh lagati kyun ho?

Preeta: Aaarrrggghhh! Yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai! Tum knock nahin karr sakte kya?

Preeta goes to the washroom to clean up her face and comes back

Preeta: Chalo ab

Preeta, Karan, Shrishti and Sameer leave in the car

Preeta: Hum kaunsi movie jaa rahe hai?

Karan: Movie nahin lunch pe jaa rahe hai

Preeta: kyun?

Karan: Bass yun hi. Problem hai?

Preeta: Nahin

Shrishti: Arre di chodo na. Waise bhi koi acchi movie nahin lagi hai

Preeta: Woh bhi hai

Just then Karan gets a call. He switches on his Bluetooth speaker on the car and everyone can overhear the conversation

Tania: Baby tum kahan ho?

Karan: Sweetheart  phone speaker par hai

Preeta makes a face when Karan calls Tania sweetheart. Sameer and Shrishti giggle in the backseat when they notice her

Tania: Oh ok. Kahan ho tum? Hum wait karr rahe hai

Karan: Ok. We will be there in 30 minutes. Natasha kahan hai?

Tania: Mere saath

Karan: Theek hai hum pohoch rahe hai

Karan cuts the call and notices Preeta glaring at him

Karan: Kya hai?

Preeta: Yeh baby baby kya hai? Rakhi aunty ne tumhe itna accha naam diya hai Karan'. You should ask people to address you by your name

Karan: Ok babydoll. Main apni saari girlfriends k obol dunga ki woh mujhe sirf Karan bulaye. Ok?

Preeta: Saari girlfriends matlab? Tania tumhari girlfriend hai? (worried expression)

Shrishti notices Preeta's worry and smiles

Karan: Nahin toh!

Preeta: (mutters) Good

Karan: Kya kaha tumne?

Preeta: Kuch nahin. Gaadi chalao tum

Karan: (makes a face) Whatever

The gang reaches the restaurant. Karan asks Preeta, Shrsihti and Sameer to go inside while he parks the car. Karan calls up Pooja and Sumeet.

Karan: Tum log pohoch gaye ho na?

Pooja: Haan Karan ji. Aap jab ishara karoge hum andar aa jaayenge

Karan: Superb

Karan cuts the call and smiles to himself

Karan: (to himself) Ab saari misunderstandings door ho jaayegi

Precap: Preeta meets Pooja and Sumeet and their son. Pooja reveals the truth to her.

Edited by Nirvana15 - 5 years ago

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