Abhiya ss : A love arranged marriage (part 12 & 13 on pg 11) - Page 5

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Wow real cool if people you posted my rant but not my next part huh!!!

Well anyways it's letting me do right now so I m updating next part now

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Will be waiting dear 

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Huh!!! I m trying to post here the update but every time they show 505 error! 


Is it happening with every one?

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Part 8

@   next day..

.Abhay and Kabir are near  piya's house and deciding whether to go her house or not.    

..Kabir- dekh mein abhai keh Raha hoon hum doophar Ko aate hai.. ya phir Shaam Ko aate hai...Aise bin bulaate jaayenge  toh acha nahi hota..usske mom dad tumhare baare mein kya sochenge ..areee mere baare mein kya sochenge  

Abhay- oh shut up Kabir tu kabse itna tensed hone lagaa hai..tujeh konsi tension hai...mujeh in Sab ki tension honi chahiye but see I m cool hum kuch galat nahi kar rahe aur nahi Piya Ko bhaagane aaye hai okay 

kabir-Abhay yaar Subha Subha tu  pitwaane laaya hai ..sach mein areee kya Patah agar  Piya ke mom dad Ko Bura lag Gaya toh 

Abhay- shsss!! Kabir agar tujeh nahi aana tha bol deta 

Kabir-what!! You dragged me in this ..and  aaj toh tu pakka nahi Jaa paayega Piya ke saath morning walk pe Mujeh intuition aa raha hai 

abhay- okay..we will see . so now I guess yahi ghar hai Piya ka .

Kabir- Haan ..address ke hisaab se toh yahi hai...

.Abhay -chal ...hey mein thik lag Raha hoon Na..

Kabir -( teasingly) Hmm yes tumhare kapde  bilkul bhi ache nahi hai and tumhara face Aisa lag Raha hai maano nind se uth ke aaye ho...



Abhay starts  to  check his face in  car mirror.. 

Kabir starts  to laugh and rushes out of car..Abhay realises Kabir's mischief and runs after him. .

Kabir  rushes towards piya's house and rings the door bell.. in order to save himself .from Abhay..

 Kabir-(laughs) Abhay ..catch me if you can..aur Haan dhyaan rakhna  thoda Kahi look na bigad jaaye warna Piya darwaaze hi ta ta ta bye bye bol degi...

 Abhay- oh yeah! Mujeh lagta hai Mujeh nahi tujeh bolegi ....tu bhi kuch  khaas nahi dikh Raha hai tera face thoda thik karne de phir dekhte hai... 

 Before   Kabir can reply Madhu opens door..

.Madhu- ji...(she looks at Abhay and recognises him) areee Abhay beta tum..aao Na ander aao.. 

 Abhay - namaste auntyji. 

 Madhu- areee beta...yeh Sab Koi jaroorat nahi hai.....ander aao Na bahar kyu khade ho dono..baitho mein chai leke aati hoon.. 

 

Madhu  serves them tea and snacks...Abhay & Kabir chit chats with Madhu... 

 While Abhay is looking here and their..kabir is busy in chatting with Madhu. 

Kabir- Madhu aunty  uncle kaha hai  dikhaayi nahi de Rahe ? 

 Madhu- beta woh toh Abhi woh  America Gaye hai . Abhi pichle  hafte hi Gaye hai aur kaam mein itna busy   bas pucho mat ...Arnab Ko  Abhay se baat karni thi but business aur kaam ke chakkar mein bhul hi Gaye.. 


Madhu and Kabir notices Abhay who busy looking here and there... 

 Madhu- kya hua Abhay? Kya dhoondh rahe ho? 

 Abhay-huh!! Kuch nahi kuch nahi aunty mein toh bas woh trophy and painting dekh Raha tha ... Kisne Jeeti hai itni saari trophies 

 Madhu- oooo beta..woh Piya aur Misha ne milke jite hai.

..Kabir- wow!! Cool Haan 

Meanwhile Misha comes downstairs 

..in kitchen 

 Misha-(yawns)(stretching arms) mama itni awaaz kyu hai..Kon itni Subha Subha aaya hai..I swear agar woh shaantiji hui na aur kisi ka rishte leke  aaye hai..toh aaj  unhe chai bhi nahi doongi..ek toh waise bhi woh Kabir ne puri raat dimaag kharab Kiya hai  Apne lame jokes sunnake ..

 At this moment Madhu and abhay looks at kabir...

 Misha sees Kabir and Abhay .

 Misha- Tum dono ?? Subha Subha kyu aaye ho??

 Here on piya's roomPiya has wake up and was  in her  thoughts...She looks at her and abhay's photo which she has taken yesterday  in mall

 Piya- (looking at photo) Kon ho tum Abhay? Who are you??   I don't know   but tum se milke lagta hai maano bas tumhare saath hi baat Karti Rahi hoon.. what have you done?  Your smiles your eyes..everything has started to  effect(blushes) .issshhh what am I thinking? 

Madhu calls Piya ...from downstairs...

.Piya - coming mama..Piya comes downstairs 

..Piya-  good morning mama... 

 Madhu- goodmorning beta

 Abhay - good morning Piya..

 Piya turnaround  to see Abhay standing behind her.. 

 For a moment  Piya is shocked to see him..she thinks that it's a dream .. but when Madhu interrupts them ..she believes that in real Abhay is their.

 Piya- good...good morning Abhay...kaise ho? 

Abhay- I m good... Madhu senses the situation of abhiay as they were uncomfortable  to talk in first of everyone... 

 Madhu- areee yeh SAB baate toh Hoti rahegi..chalo  breakfast ke liye aajao...Soon after few days at arnab is back .. 

 Arnab- lo bolo  yaha mein yeh soch ke jaldi se wapas aaya hoon ke mere biwi aur dono betiyaan  kush hongi meri...palkhe bichaaye raah dekh Rahi hogi...aur kya milta hai..toh koi welcome nahi..ulta aate hi Sunna pada... 

 Misha - oh come on papa..dramatic mat hojaaye...aapki galati hai..areee phone  kharab hogaya tha toh dusra  nahi le sakte the..?

 Piya- Haan ...ya phir atleast inform toh karte AAP.....

 Arnab- sorry sorry ..mein bhul Gaya tha aur Jo publishers ke saath meeting thi  uski date  bhi change hogayi.... 

 Madhu- par phir bhi AAP atleast inform toh kar sakte the...

 Arnab- I know..but meeting and business deal ke bich mein Sab bhul Gaya..but yeh Sab chodo  good news is we got deal ...and pure India mein hamari  library  mein  Sab se pehle   aayegi.. I hope with this hame aur deals  milenge aur hum apni library Ke digitisation   mein help hogi 

 Misha - wow dad!!! I think hame promotion type rakhna chahiye you know..yeh author  Ki books toh within seconds stock out hojaati hai..

 Arnab- hmmm good.misha Piya that's job for you both promotion kaise karna hai and uske ideas Mujeh de Dena.. 


 Misha - okay boss!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

awesome update

awe abhay so desperate to meet pia 😉

loll kabir tease abhay 😉

oops both misha & pia thought abt kabir & abhay 😊

it's just pia blush while thinking abt abhay 😍

oops abhiya couldn't talk in front of everyone but pia's mom understood 

awe pia''s families moment was so cute ❤

continue plz

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Part -9


Madhu- AAP tension mat lijiye I m sure hamre library Ko aur bhi deals milenge..i m positive about it.

Arnab- well yeh..Sab baat Baad mein ..Mujeh abhay aur Kabir  ke baare mein batao!! Yeh dono hai Kon?Abhi Abhi guptaji raaste mein mile bol Rahe the ki piya aur Misha ki dono ki shaadi tey hogayi  hai mithai bhi nahi khilaayi..

Madhu- kya??? Yeh Sab gulatiji Ko kisne kaha.? Aur Piya aur Misha ki shaadi ?? Aree Abhi toh sirf  baat chal Rahi hai Piya aur Abhay ki...aur Misha aur Kabir  ka rishta?? Yeh Sab afwaa Kon faila Raha..hai..this is too much Arnab..

Arnab- hmmm but atleast Mujeh toh batao ab sahi matter kya hai..taaki dusri Baar mein jawaab de sakun..

Madhu tells Arnab about abhiya's rishta..

Madhu- so what do you think Arnab ..Mujeh toh Abhay achaa ladka lagaa.piya ke liye issue beggar aur koi rishta nahi aa Sakta 

Arnab- hmmm.. let's see.mein Abhay  se milna chahta hoon..

Madhu- okay ..waise bhi aaj Shaam Ko mein Abhay aur uski family Ko dinner pe bulaaya hai...

Arnab- acha hai..but tumne hamari woh do Toofan Ko bataya ki aaj Shaam Ko aa rahe hai woh log . Warna Patah chala ki dono ne Toofan macha diya hai dinner ke waqt..

Madhu- arnab!!! Kya kuch bhi .. aapne hi undono Ko Sar Chadha Rakha hai!

Arnab- areee kyu  na Rakhi areee meri princess hai dono...

Madhu- princess?? Areee dono maha shaitaan hai..shaitaan bhi tauba kar le dono se..

Arnab laughs...

@ in evening...

Misha- what??? Yaha !!! mama aapne  pehle kyu nahi Bataya yaar!!! Pehle batade dinner pe aa rahe woh log?

Piya- Haan mama !!! Aur ghar pe kyu bahaar chale jaate... Ghar ki halat bhaut kharab..yeh dekho kamre  ki halat...Misha ne  kamre ka kabad khaana Bana diya hai

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Misha-hawww.chill Piya Kamra thik hai..tum kyu tense ho Rahi ho ..woh log yaha dinner nahi kar rahe..

Piya - but phir bhi itne short time Sab kaise hogaa..

Madhu- offo tum dono chup Rahoge 2 min. Mein ne helpers Ko bulaa Liya hai..tum dono Ko  sirf taiyaar honaa hai..aur achi tarah se okay..chalo ab hatoo  dekhne do tum dono kya pehnogi..Piya tum kya pehn Rahi ho..

Piya- hmmm decide nahi Kiya mom...but kya yeh jaroori ..hai.. I mean normal clothes will do good.

Madhu- no ..tum dono Ko presentable dikhna aur Junglee nahi...ab chup chap mein jaisa keh Rahi hoon woh karo. Dresses nikaalo mein dekhti hoon..aur Mishaa..

Misha cuts in..

Misha- no mom no..not happening..mein Christmas tree nahi banne waali mein yehi kapde pehnugi...

Madhu- no..! 

Misha stops Madhu from looking inner cupboard but Madhu doesn't listen to her .she opens Misha's cupboard and all clothes falls down..

Madhu- mishaaaa!!!!! What's this..

Madhu shouts Misha's name..

Even Arnab and some helpers come inside in hearing the shout..

Arnab- Madhu!!. Kya....

Arnab starts laughing..Madhu glares at him and Arnab stops laughing...

Madhu is about to scold Misha but  Raichand family arrives so she and Arnab leaves to attend them.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing chapter 

Uff that Gupta ji is too much he paired misha with kabir

If misha hear that she will chop him for sure😂

Loll both misha & pia tufan🤣

Both their parents love them a lot❤️

Loll misha & her adorable cupboard🤣

Oops raichand arrived before misha & pia could get ready 

Continue plz 

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Part 10



Madhu- ab dono jaldi se  niche aajaao aur please koi shaitaani mat karna dono...

Arnab and Madhu leaves..

Misha  gets ready in traditional dress which Madhu gave her ..but Piya stops her..

Piya- mish!!! Tu pagal hai!!  Yeh kya traditonal dress pehen Liya..

Misha-dude I think you have lost it mom ne kaha na Abhi ke yeh hi kapde pehna..

Piya-(facepalms herself) you know what jab tujeh jab akal chalani Hoti hai waha use nahi Karti

Misha- hey I m intelligent okay..!now tell me yeh achanak tujeh kya hua..

Piya- areee buddhu yeh sochna ki   dekh mein puri zindagi aise  dress up home toh nahi rehne waali Abhay ke saath if I say yes to him..so he and his family likes as who am I . Samjhi??

Misha- samjh gayi..waise ab mere saath reh ke finally tera dimaag chalne lagaa hai...phew!!!  Finally meri mehant rang laayi.

Piya punches on her shoulder!!!!!

Misha-ouch!!!

Piya and Misha freshen ups and comes downstairs.

They take blessings.. and then  sits down to talk with them..

Haseena- kaise ho beta 

Piya- JEE thik hoon aunty AAP Sab kaise hai?

Haseena- hum Sab ache hai... 

Siddharth- well AAP Sab  aise puraane  filmo ki tarah official introduction kyu de rahe hai..just chill hum Sab family dinner pe aaye hai.. right...

All glares towards towards Siddharth and then suddenly all bursts into laughter....

Chand- sahi kaha Siddharth  we are here for normal dinner ..

Arnab- sahi kaha  AAP ne let's just talk normally..mein ne aapke business ke baare mein  Sunna hai  mr. Raichand.. aapke business plans   and development baHut ache  hai...

Chand- Haan woh toh hai but saara credit mera nahi hai mere employees ka bhi hai...

 Soon Arnab and Chand are talking about business talks while Piya and Misha shows   their house to Abhay Kabir and Siddharth...

Meanwhile here Madhu and Haseena are in the garden relaxing..

Here Abhay and Piya are sitting in the garden

Abhay-  Piya  Mujeh tumhara ghar bahut pasand aaya ..and seriously  I m jealous now. .

Piya - kyu??

Abhay- tumhara  ghar itna pyaara hai but it's really cool  mein hamesha wish Karta  hoon and  it's near to the  mountains..I mean look at the view tumhare ghar ke piche hi it's beautiful picture perfect view

Piya- oh!! Toh ek kaam karo kal se tum mere yaha shift hojaao

Abhay- done!!aaj hi mom Ko inform kar Raha hoon mein yaha shift ho Raha hoon

Both abhiya laughs..

For a moment  they both are silent

Abhay- Piya ...you know in a way it's an official meeting and ..see  don't about your feelings..but ..

Abhay gets down on his one knee

Piya- Abhay...tum

Abhay- please let me complete..see i will come to the point.. pehle mein tumhe jaanta nahi tha. Hum dono bhale hi ek dusre Ko library mein dekhte the but we didn't know each other..and jab se  tumhe jaane lagaa hoon I don't know.. but feels good and at the same strange I think I have fallen in love with you...Piya dobriyal..tumhare saath bitaya hua har ek special hai mere liye and with you by my side... I  can solve any problems and speak my heart out.. be my self I know this journey it won't be easy but we will work out everything.. Ms. Piya dobriyal will you marry me?

Piya was in tears she couldn't speak for  few minutes.

Piya-(wipes her tears) yes! A thousand and millions times yes..Mr.abhay Raichand..(takes Abhay hands) I don't know  Abhay but I m hundred times sure.. Mujeh nahi Patah how but yes we will work out..and sach kahu toh tumhare saath baat karke hamesha Mujeh acha lagta hai ..Aisa lagta hai maano koi missing puzzle que ab mil Gaya... Yes..  i will marry you

Abhay jumps in joy and them suddenly hugs Piya...

Meanwhile here Misha and Kabir were hiding behind  the wall  so that abhiya couldn't see them and 

Misha  and Kabir both gets happy and in excitment both hug each other...

Misha also kisses on kabir's cheek.

After these they both realise the situation and breaks the hug

Misha- woh...woh... I m sorry excitement .mein..

Kabir- no.,.. no I  m sorry mein bhi excitement ..well let's go inside warna Abhay and Piya dekh Liya toh tumhara Patah Mujeh aaj Abhay Mujeh pit dega...

Misha laughs...

Kabir- tumhe hasi aa Rahi hai?

Misha- no no mein kaha has..Rahi hoon..mein toh dusre reason ki wajah se has Rahi hoon...

Kabir and Misha leaves.

Here in dobriyal mansion abhiya reveals their decision which is followed  by blessings and small celebration..between  both the families.

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Wonderful update dear

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Beautiful chapter 

Wow abhiya families meet for dinner 

Awe pia want raichand know her real self❤️

Loll siddarth is really funny😂

Everyone got along with each other 

Pia show abhay kabir & siddarth her home

Abhay really love pia home😀

OMG abhay propose pia which she happily accepted💕

It was really beautiful & heart touching proposal🥰

Loll misha & kabir hug & kiss in their excitement😉

Abhiya families got overwhelmed with the news of abhiya😀

Continue plz