Abhiya ss : A love arranged marriage (part 12 & 13 on pg 11) - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
I couldn't stop my laugh while reading kabir misha part
They didn't know each other 
They were fighting like dog & cat
Glad abhiya got to know abt each other so now there won't be any misunderstanding 
Loll siddarth couldn't stop his laugh when he got to know abhay plan backfired 
All 3 abhay siddarth & kabir were fighting 
Wow abhay like pia but still not sure abt marriage but like to know her
Loll siddarth mom gave really funny comment to him on being kidnap
On the other hand misha also told their mom pia like abhay which made her so happy 
Even pia agreed to meet abhay to know him that really good process between abhiya 
Continue plz 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Will update today..two  updates coming very much soonish
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Uff where is all the fans of abhiya?
Many people left this forum it's really heartbreaking 
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Hmmm sorry I feel bad too ..though I told earlier that I will tr y to eb online but  right now with job and  study I m super busy so it becomes impossible for me to come online..
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Part 6

Piya  and Abhay decides to go to nearest mall much against Kabir and Misha's protest.

@ next day...



Piya is  extra  nervous ..where as tracker is giving her tips...

Tracker- aur sunn Piya hamare hone waale Jijaji ke saath na ache se behave..karna

Piya- tracker chup!! Teh kya Jijaji Jijaji lagaa Rakha hai...mein sirf uske saath bahaar ghumne Jaa Rahi hoon shaadi karne  nahi...

Misha- kya ..Piya kyu daant Rahi hai tracker Ko  (winks at tracker) sahi toh key Rahi hai..

Piya- mishaaa tu bhi!!!!

Piya tries to hit mishaaa..but misha stops her...
 Saying that her make will be ruined and Abhay will get scared  on seeing her...

At that moment Abhay and Kabir enters...


Piya - hiii Abhay.!! Hiii Kabir 

Kabir- hii piya...hiii Misha

Kabir greets Piya and misha


Abhay- . Well mein aur Piya bahaar Jaa Rahe hai

Misha- (pushing abhiya towards edit door) cool ab jaao   aur pura dehradhoon ghum  ke aaana okay...bye...bye...


Misha sees Kabir still standing their and checking out books

Misha- oh hello tum yaha kya kare raho jaao ..yaha se Abhay Ko see off karne aaye the na..

Kabir - no... Mein nahi haa Raha mein...yaha aaj library mein ghumne aaya hoon...


Misha- (drags Kabir towards  exit ) yeh bagicha  nahi hai okay...jaao yaha se...

Kabir-mein nahi Jaa Raha hoon..okay waise bhi iss seher mein Naya Naya hoon. yaha tumhare guest hoon ...so .. guest Bhagwan ka roop hota hai toh tum mujhe aise treat nahi kar sakti 


Misha- agar naye ho seher mein toh  teh tumhari problem hai...aur aise treat nahi kar sakti  matalb?

Kabir- matalb ki rudely see I m sorry jo bhi iss din cafe mein hua and his tarah mein ne behave Kiya uske liye bhi  I m sorry   (sighs) ..dekho..please  let's start again I know hum dono   ki mulaakat galat waqt par Hui hai..but we can be friends na aise enemies banke kya faayad hai... 

Kabir sweetly smiles at her..

Misha - (sighs) okay..I m sorry too I guess mein kuch zyaada gusse mein thi... Well you know I was angry tum jhut bol Rahe the .but I guess I was too worried ke agar meri jagah Piya aayi Hoti and tum as Abhay aaye hote and  woh sach mein Tum Abhay maanke Haan bolti and jab sachai Patah chalti toh..and I guess we were wrong too.we were both trying help our siblings...


Kabir- yes.. 


..  misha- let's start all over again...I m Misha,
 Misha dobriyal. .

Kabir - (shakes hand) aur mein Kabir.  Kabir Singh Rathore ...


Misha shows him library also introduces her to tracker..who  is now drooling over .and Misha shoos her away .


Misha- ... Well  chalo mein tumhe library ghumaati hoon ..and iss boring library ki sabse coolest place bhi dekhaati..hoon but it should be a secret between us okay?

Kabir - oh yes definitely mujeh nahi Patah tha ki iss library mein koi coolest place bhi hogi...

Misha- (laughs) sahi kaha library mein...

Misha is about to speak but  she gets interrupted by sudden commotion outside.. the office..

Misha sees a girl.. who looked like a walking  Maybelline shop  as per  Misha  ..that girl was asking for someone or rather shouting...

Kabir sees that girl and gets shocked...

Kabir - hey Bhagwan isse kaise Patah chala hum yaha hai..hey bhagwan yeh Abhay ki  kismat na bahut  kharab hai

Misha- kya !!!tum iss chalti phirti  make shop Ko jaante ho?aur iska Abhay ka kya connection hai?

Kabir - Haan jaanta hoon yeh iska Naam tanushree urf T hai ...aur bahut hi chipku aur pyscho type ladki hai.  Misha ..isse yaha se bhagaao ...please..agar ussne mujeh dekh Kiya toh usse Patah chala jaayega ki Abhay yaha hai...

Misha - okay...okay... But chup jaao . 

T  is coming towards their direction and she gets a glance of Kabir...

T-kabir ...Kabir ..tum yaha ho! Iss tacky place mein ..Kabir ...Kabir...

Misha-  damn!!chupo chupo jaldi ..Kabir...

Kabir sees  a mob and bucket..he immediately takes that and starts act like a worker..

T - Kabir ..Kabir...

Misha stops. Her..

Misha - excuse me.!! How may I help you?

T- ya please bich raasterse hat jaao wohi bahut badi help hogi    hato            ab mujeh
irabir se baat karni hai.

Misha-(snaps at her ) hello!! First of all mein yaha ki owner hoon and secondly yeh library hai koi market nahi ki AAP iss tarah se chilaate chilaate aa  Rahi hai...

T -okay okay mujeh Kabir se milna hai (pointing towards Kabir) okay hating ab Saamne se.. 

T tries to move aside Misha but Misha doesn't moves from her place..

Misha - tumhe sunnai deta kya!!! Yeh library hai okay! Aur agar tumhe  kuch Jaana hai toh pehle tamiz se dhire bolna sikho tab jawab milega!!

T gets irritated but on seeing Misha being firm she controls her anger.. 

T- okay...look woh Kabir hai aur mujeh usse mil a hai it's important...

Misha - hmmm good..but woh kabir  nahi  hai..woh yaha work karta hai...

T- Aisa kaisa hi Sakta hai..woh Kabir hi hai... I saw him..

Misha- tum  shayad Galt Femi Hui hai...woh Kabir nahi chottu hai...

T- (whispers) how is it possible I saw him woh Kabir hi tha.

Misha- oh and mein bhi sure hoon ki aapne jisse dekha woh Kabir nahi chottu tha...

Tanshree leaves...

Misha sighs  a relief..and asks Kabir to come out...

Kabir- woh hai kya???

Misha- Haan Haan woh hai but  tum usse itna dar kyu Rahe ho?

Kabir yaar mein dar nahi Raha hoon woh ek bahut hi badi Bala hai...

Misha- hmmm ab Mujeh batao matter kya hai...

Kabir- okay




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Edited by Krish58 - 5 years ago
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Part 7


Here abhiya  have gone for window shopping  in mall...

Piya-  hmm (checking out clothes on racks) so Abhay agar tumhara  family business itna bada hai... Then yaha kyu ?

Abhay- meaning??

Piya -matalb ki I mean as per business ..I guess tumhe zyada profit and business Ko expand  ke chances  Mumbai ya phir koi aur bade seher mein nahi hota?

Abhay- yes hota  absolutely business Ko   acha  but I guess papa Ko yaha aur pasand tha rather than big cities...and I guess small city  ki  charm kuch aur  hi hai...and I love that...no doubt mein kai bade seher mein reh chukka hoon but still never felt like I was in home...

  So..yaha kaisa mehsoos ho Raha hai..yeh  seher bhi ajneebi lag Raha ya apna sa.?

Piya asks Abhay while she was  trying on some dresses..
She was confused over a pastel green  dress and light purple dress..

Where as Abhay notices and was lost in his thought while he was speaking with her...he thought light purple colour dress would suit her...

Hmmm ajnabi tha par ab nahi hai..!ab apna sa lagne Laga hai...Abhay said absent mindely...

Piya is surprised plus  she is a bit blushing ...on hearing it...

Abhay- wo...woh..mera matlab hai ki I love this town so ab ghar jaisa lagne lagaa hai...

Piya- areee try it I m sure it will suit...you yeh fashion hai aajkal come on  jab tak tum try nahi karoge colour Patah kaise chalega ki colour suit hota hai ya nahi! And yeh kya suit aur jacket pehn Rakha hai !! Spring season aagaya hai..toh jacket Ko cupboard ke ander rakhdo..aur yeh try karo...(she hands him some  T shirts  and jeans )(she also make sure that they are not black in colour)

Abhay- no way Piya...mein bilkul joker  lagunga...

Piya- yaar!!! Tum aur Misha impossible ho fashion sense mein zero ho !!!Misha sahi kehti  ki tum mr.black ho...

Piya then realises what she spoke...
She immediately asks for apology from Abhay ..but he stops her saying that it's okay..infact he felt happy when she scolded..him...it's like his mom scolded him...

Piya- hawww !!! Piya tries to run behind him but stops as she realises  they were in mall..

Abhay goes to change his clothes  while Piya is waiting for him...

After he comes out of changing room

Abhay- how do I look?

Piya -(stammers a bit)wow...tum...bahut..bahut ache lag Rahe ho..dekha mein ne kaha tha na yeh colour suit karega ...

Abhay- (looks him self  in the mirror) hmmm yes...

Soon abhiya are talking about their likes and dislikes   and both makes fun of each other...

Piya- no way tumne  class bunk Kiya tha?? Omg!!! Phir tumhare parents Ko Patah chala tha ki tum aur tumhara bhai school bunk karke  fair mein Gaye ho?

Abhay-(laughs) almost!! We were about to get caught  but Siddharth ne baccha Liya tha but woh baat chupaane ke liye Mujeh ek week tak Siddarth ka room clean karna pada tha...no doubt mom Ko Shaq hogaya tha but we managed. I guess tum na star student Rahi hogi...no bunk and no pranks right?

Piya- (punches him playfully) hey!! That was rude Haan! Maana ki mein star student thi but pranks mein ne bhi  kiye hai..

Abhay- seriously?? No way!..

In cafe...

Abhay and Piya are   having snacks and tea..

Abhay- hmm waah!!!isse achi coffee toh mein aur Kahi nahi taste ki hai..

Piya- hmm .kaha tha ..na yaha ki coffee ki baat hi kuch aur hai...waise I don't like it at all..

Abhay-(coughs) what??? How can you not like it? Taste it !!! Ek min..ek min..ISS mein thoda sugar add karo aur phir taste karo..

Piya - no no no  !!mein nahi taste karungi.

Abhay- please ek Baar taste karo I m sure you will like it..please mere liye!!!

Abhay makes a cute face which Piya could not resist..

Piya - okay...

She takes a little sip from abhay's coffee.

Piya-(coughs) no no take it Mujeh nahi Pina ...bahut hi bitter taste hai. M

Abhay- haww how can you not like it..itna acha taste hai.(murmmurs)  and here I thought my life partner would like black coffee...!

Piya - no no tum hi piyo yeh bitter coffee mein Apne tea se khush hoon.

After some time...

Piya- Abhay ek sawaal puchu?

Abhay- Haan pucho

Piya- kya tum pehle kabhi koi relationship mein the? I mean girlfriend koi Rahi ho?

Abhay- (smirks) hmmm  yes ...after all don't you think mein hero se Kam  thodi na lagta hoon .? I had so many admirers ? Haroz mere liye ghar ke bahaar roses and bouquet  ki line lagti thi..

Piya's eyes go wide...she didn't know what to think...

Piya- kya??sac...sach mein?

Abhay sees piya's expression and starts to laugh..

Piya is more confused...

o... But ek ladki thi jisse Mujeh par crush tha  meri classmate hi  thi ...but  let's just say it was for a small time...

Piya- hmmm how was she?what was her name?

Abhay- she was beautiful..matalb ki woh model type ..bilkul hamesha  trendy and  Kabir toh usse chalti phirti  make up ki dukaan bolta tha..her name was Tanushree Sab usse 'T' kehne bulaate the...

Piya- hmmm what about you? Did you liked her?

Abhay- -hmmm no .she was very much rude with others hamesha dusro ki insult Karti thi..infact  woh toh hamesha kisi aur Ko mere paas aane nahi deti thi..I knew her feelings for me..

Piya- hmmm.then? Tumne usse na nahi bola ...

Abhay-  mein  ne bahut baar bola but woh kuch Sunna hi nahi chahti thi .finally phir mom dad Ko  bich mein aana pada but  uske Baad bhi woh nahi maani...and finally jab hum shift hue from Mumbai tab se Shanti hai

Piya- my god!! It must be terrible for you..har jagah koi stalk  kare it becomes impossible to live normal life..

Abhay- hmm yes.. I wish woh wapas kabhi na aaye meri life..
Piya- I cross my heart and hope to die..

Abhay- tum batao. what about you?

Piya-  hmmm yes college ke first year mein tha.jay Khurana .. but then I dumped him.

Abhay- hmmm so what happened?

Piya - long story... To cut to the short hewas cheating on me.trust me he was a total casinova type guy.  And I was blind not to see that . But then when  Mujeh doubt  hua he might be cheating I spyed on him and then my doubt became true.. so I slapped him,punched him  and dumped  him.

Abhay- cool ! Acha hai Aisa karna chahiye ..

They spend time by talking about their memories and family...

@   next day...

Abhay and Kabir are near  piya's house and deciding whether to go her houSe Or   Not



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Posted: 5 years ago
Amazing chapter 
Awe both misha & tracker tease pia as she was going out with abhay 
Oops misha tried to send kabir away
But he wanted to fresh start with misha 
At least both became friends & misha showed him entire library 
Ouch that t after kabir glad misha saved kabir from her
On the other hand abhiya getting to know each other much better 
Both talk abt their like dislike 
Awe pia even select cloth for abhay 
Oops pia didn't like black coffee but abhay wanted his partner to like black coffee 
Glad abhiya told each other abt their past
So that t is after abhay she is not ready to understand abhay doesn't like her
On the other hand pia was in relationship with jay who cheated on her & good to know pia beats him
Now after knowing each other this much what abhiya will decide?
Continue plz 
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Superb update
Update soon
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Nice updates

kabir scared of T lol


Abhiya plus mishka 



I am enjoying this sweet updates





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Anyone facing problem? I m trying to post the next update but it doesn't let me do it