SS: FIGMENTS UNTIL FRAGMENTS [IF-NC_ENTRY] Chapter 10 Upd - Page 3

Originally posted by: faz28

Big question who might be Khushi's father by reading ur story I think the way u have introduced khushi's birth we can speculate story will be somewhat revolved on that as well. Nice writing skills so Akash, NK, Lavanya and Khushi are already friends will see how Khushi and Arnav equation is. By the sound of it I don't think they have already met. Can't wait to read more.

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

So, Khushi's mom is Gargi, but who is the dad ? I hope it's Shashi. Does Khushi know that she was conceived by AI ? How it would affect the dynamics between the characters later ?

Originally posted by: chinnulu

Interesting Prologue

Nice start

Loved the introduction of the characters and mystery behind Khushi's birth.

Looking forward for the updates to start.

Thanks for the PM

So Khushi's mom knew about the donor or she was just coming to share the mishap of the hospital?? Seems like Khushi doesn't know about her real mother or does she??...

wow, unique concept, it is interesting and I would love to read more to find out

Originally posted by: labi

From the diary, it is obvious that Khushi's mother Gargi knows the father of her child and I think he is someone whom she knows well. Is that Shashi or is it someone else? 

Looks like Garima comes to know about the truth after reading the diary only.

The sisters' banter was so cute. So Payal works at AR and Khushi is still studying.

I think you are very much in love with Frangipani, remember the same thoughts in Fragrance too.😉

So Akash, NK and Lavanya are Khushi's friends. Their group message was so cute, full of teasing and fun.😆

Arnav, as usual workaholic and Anjali, the caring sister.

Amazing start dear, a story with some secrets.👏 All the best for you for the contest too!👍🏼

Loved the title...quite catchy and intriguing!👏

Edited by coolie001 - 5 years ago

Amazing prologue! Very intriguing plot. Why do I get a feeling that it was shashi's sample and gargee wanted to tell her sister about it!? Can't wait for you to proceed with next chapters to reveal the figments!

Originally posted by: Siri007

Amazing prologue! Very intriguing plot. Why do I get a feeling that it was shashi's sample and gargee wanted to tell her sister about it!? Can't wait for you to proceed with next chapters to reveal the figments!

awesome start.. please update soon