SS: FIGMENTS UNTIL FRAGMENTS [IF-NC_ENTRY] Chapter 10 Upd - Page 2

Very nice prologue. Looking forward to it.

Originally posted by: dv19

Gargee - Khushis Mom.. was conceived by artifical insemination.. nice plot.

The donor is known person...nice twist..

i liked the title Figments to fragments. 

liked the equation of all friends.

protective garima and shashi... 

Is it the complete pieces of a broken heart or the broken pieces of a complete heart that shapes  life?

Complete to broken.. The life changes with truth. The truth to shatter and become numb, lifeless later how will you join them, glue them and learn agian to live or vice versa.. 

Im loving the whole theory behind the title.

Im loving you more because of yr title selections.. 

and the book cover is awesome.

Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

interesting :)

Big question who might be Khushi's father by reading ur story I think the way u have introduced khushi's birth we can speculate story will be somewhat revolved on that as well. Nice writing skills so Akash, NK, Lavanya and Khushi are already friends will see how Khushi and Arnav equation is. By the sound of it I don't think they have already met. Can't wait to read more.Edited by faz28 - 5 years ago

So, Khushi's mom is Gargi, but who is the dad ? I hope it's Shashi. Does Khushi know that she was conceived by AI ? How it would affect the dynamics between the characters later ?

Coolie ...

Interesting & different from usual story . Waiting to see how story unfolds

Another story by you.

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Coolie ...

It's not ur usual style,yaar..

The start is Promising a serious dilemma in future..

If Shashi is the father,it's not a problem at all as he's already a father figure to Khushi.. But if ... #horror

If it's Arnav's father ... Oh no ...  Or even Akash's father ..  There is no cousin marriage in Hinduism ...

Let's see what is in ur mind n how do u deal with this difficult situation in my dear Heroine's life ... 

Khushi n the gang r very sweet .. They must visit this house..

Now the big mystery is who is Khushi's father and how it will impact her life.