AKSHAN SS -love chori chori part 13update ( 8 may 2019) - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

20th Jan or Feb?

Btw ALL THE BEST  ๐Ÿ˜ƒ




Thanks 

20th jan ke baad
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08


Thanks 

20th jan ke baad


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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter -4
Flash back

Guddan's puphaji come Indore then take revati and guddan with him to manali 
Other side akshat was busy in his work unware of the Strom name guddan coming their๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Guddan revati and her puphaji reached manali and they went to the colony where her phupa and bua living 

Their taxi stop out side the house all come out and start to unload their luggage gauri come out of the house guddan went to her hug her tightly

G- bua main ne apko kitna miss kiya

Ga- main ne bhi tumhe bahot miss kiya meri bachi 

Then someone said from behind 

P- are lagta hai mujhe kisi ne miss nahi kiya

G- are aisa ho sakta hai main apne jee ko bhul jau 

Guddan hug him too he is suresh's younger brother jeevan he is a gay suresh's father mother leave him as he is not a man but suresh keep his brother with him guddan is also very close to him fondly call him jee 

J- darling I know tum jhoot bol rahi ho varna 3 saal ho gaye tum yaha nahi yahi

G- sorry jee par kya karti mummy hum dono ko jyada bahar nahi bheja ti na

R- jee sara pyar di ko mujhe kuch nahi

Jeevan smile and hug revati 

Ga- acha aab andar chalo sari baate yahi karni hai kya chal tumhe bhook lagi hogi na

G- ha bua chalo mere pet ke chuhe dinosaur ban gaye hai 

Guddan's eye then fall on the house next to her bua's house it's windows are open like someone living their

G- puphaji wo ghar ke owner rehene aye hai kya khidki khuli hai 

Su- ha beta abhi 2 din pehle hi aye hai 

Guddan whenever come their see saw that house locked as the owner rarely visit it her bua and puphaji have a nice relationship with the owner whenever he visit it 

All went inside just then akshat come out of the house to went back to his work as he come for lunch and saw a taxi just leave from the house next to his he thought may be some guest come to the house 
( And yes guddan's bua's mysterious neighbour is non other than Akshat as he come rarely their and guddan come only for vacation so they don't meet each other their)

Guddan and revati settled down in their room yes they have a room their after fresh up they come to have their launch guddan saw her bua made her and revati's favorite dishes 

G- bua I just love you humesa mere pasand ka kahana banti ho 

Ga- love you too bache beth ja aab bhook lagi thi na tujhe 

Ga pov- pata hai mujhe guddan geeta bhabi ki jane ke baad kaushalya bhabi ne tujhe kabhi apna nahi mana to wo tere liye yeh sab nahi banati hogi

Three days passed by both are busy in their respective work on the fourth day at evening akshat come little earlier he come out of the cab and was going inside when someone bump into him before the person can fall he hold her and saw it is non other than guddan

Revati who was cheesing guddan come their stood still seeing them she get panicked as these both whenever meet world war 3 will surely happen 

Here akshan are lost in each other then both come out of their land and said together 
A/g- tum aap

G -aap yaha kya kar rahe ho mere picha karte karte yahan bhi pahunch gaye

A- pagal ho kya kehe kya rahi ho mere paas aur koi kaam nahi hai kya ke main tumahara picha karoonga aur yeh baat main bhi keh sakta hoon ki tum mere piche ayi ho

G- uncle hume kya koi pagal kutte ne kata hai ki hum apka picha karien

Just then suresh gauri and jeevan also come out hearing the noise 

Su- are yeh kaya ho raha hai are akshat ji aap

A- namaste suresh ji

J- hello hottie kya laga rahe ho aaj

Jeevan have a crush on akshat so he always flirts with akshat

Hearing jeevan's talk guddan just try to control her laugh 

G- puphaji aap inhe jante hai

Su- ha beta yeh ghar inhika hai 

A- yeh apki bhateji hai 

G- hey lord krishna in uncle ko aab har din dekhna padega 

A- jaise mujhe acha lage ga tumhe dekha ke 

Before both can start their dog cat fight revati signal gauri to drag guddan from their so gauri drag guddan from their to home after some talk with suresh and jeevan's flirt akshat went inside his house

Here suresh and gauri ask guddan why she is fighting with Akshat revati then narrate them about akshan fight all laugh at it

G- aap hasa kyun rahe hai it's not funny

J-oo come on darling hottie itna bhai bura nahi hai

Guddan just stick out her toung at him and thought she again don't have to meet him
Other side akshat also pray he doesn't again bump to guddan 
 (Unhe kya pata upar wale ne unhe milane ki plan bana chuke hai๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰)

That's it friend 

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And thanks for all your response to my stories ๐Ÿ˜Š


Kajal21 thumbnail
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice one 
Shandar meeting tha dono ka
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Posted: 5 years ago
Amazing update 
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it 
Soh AJ and guddan were fighting like Tom and Jerry back there so how love blossom between them
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter - 5
Flash back-

3 month passed by akshat and guddan always bump to each even they try to not to come infront of each other and then the tom and Jerry fight will must happen  if jeevan and revati didn't interfere then both definitely end up killing each other


It was a Sunday akshat gave his cook leave on Sundays as he himself cook so some time guddan's bua sent some dishes for him 

So like always she also make some aalu puri and sent guddan to akshat house to give it as jeevan and suresh went to buy some grocerie and revati was talking with kaushalya 

Guddan unwantedly went to akshat home she went inside and call him but get no response she start to search him

G- yeh uncle kahi apne kaam pe nahi chale gaye nahi nahi ghar ki khula chodke kahan jayenge 

She thought to check on his bedroom she search almost all room but most of them are locked atlast she reach near a room and it was not Locked so she thought it must be his room she knock for some time but get no response so she went inside and saw akshat sleeping she thought akshat is always punctual how come he sleeping so late

G- hye bhagwan uncle kahi sote waqt upar to nahi kat liye

She went to check him when her hand toch his forehead she realize akshat having high fever akshat's sleep broke due to the contact

A- tum tum yaha kya kar rahi ho wo bhi mere bed room main

He try to get up but can't due to the high fever and headache 

G- chup chap lete rhai ye baad main hume daat lijiyega hum apko aalu puri dene aye the bua ne bheja hai aab yeh bataiye apka first aid box kanha hai

A- first aid box kyun tum aaloo puri dene ayi thi na de diya aab jao

G-oofo ziddi insaan kanhike bukhar main tap rahe hai aur hum madad kar rahe hai wo bhi nahi lena chu chupa bataye 

Akshat didn't argue much he told her guddan went and come with the box she take out thermometer and place it on his mouth after some time when she take it out it was reading 104 

G- hey bhagwan itna bukhar aap yaha kisi doctor ko jante hai number dijiye

Akshat give her the number guddan call the doctor the doctor said he will be reach their in five minutes guddan hung up the call she went to the kitchen pour some water in a bowl then went to akshat's room with the water bowl and a clothe 

She sat beside him start to put the wet cloth in his head akshat just admiring guddan the girl he always insult was taking care of him 

Soon the doctor come and check akshat he give an injection to akshat he then prescribed some medicine akshat thanks him he went from their guddan take the chit went to her home tell her bua everything till then jeevan was come back he went and bring the medicine gauri made some soup guddan take the medicine and soup and went back to akshat 

He was sleeping guddan wake him up give him his medicine and then feed him the soup akshat then sleep due to the medicine effect

At evening guddan come akshat was awake and doing something on his laptop guddan saw this

G- yeh aap kya kar rahe hai 

A- kaam kar raha hoon

G- bukhar main bhi apko kaam karna hai apki medicine ka time ho gaya hai 

She give him his medicine then she give him a bowl of khichdi akshat have it as he feeling hungry guddan then take the bowl and about to go when akshat said 

A-guddan thanks

G- aap hume thanks keh rahe hai ye chamatkar kaise hua

A- guddan please aab argue karna thik hai kya

G-ok ok u welcome

A- guddan hum humesha ladhte rehete hai issme kisika bhi fayada nhai vaise main ne realize kiya hai ki tum itni bhi buri nahi ho

G- aap baat to sahi keh rahe hai aap bhi itne bure nahi hai to ek kaam karte hum friend ban jate hai

Akshat thought for some times then agree both shake hand guddan smile at him

G- acha uncle hum chalte hai

A- aab hum friend ban gaye hai na to mujhe tum Akshat bula sakti ho

G- ok unc oops ok akshat 

Guddan went from their smile remembering their friendship 

Two days passed by akshat become alright due to guddan's care they now didn't argue much 

Akshat start to change after his friendship with guddan now some time he also hang out with jeevan revati guddan some time he do crazy things with them come out of his khadoos avtar 

As the day start to pass guddan realize her love for akshat but she try to suppress as she know akshat love antra only she just a mere friend for him

On the other hand akshat too feeling something towards guddan but he denieing it as he thought he only love antra

That day one of akshat's friend  kabir who is in manali come to meet akshat he can see the old akshat the Happy and full of life

Then guddan call akshat he smile looking at the phone he talk to her she ask him to come with them for visit some temple but akshat denied saying he was with his friend kabir saw all this

K-kya baat hai bhai kaun hai

A- meri friend hai guddan

K- sirf friend ya aur

A- kabir wo mujhse 14 ya 15 saal choti hai kuch bhi mat bol

K- choti hai fir bhi tumne usse se dosti aur mujhe keh raha hai kuch nahi

Akshat get up from his chair went and stand near Window

A- aise nahi ho sakta kabir main antra ki jagha kiss aur ko nahi de sakta uper se hum dono bahot alag hai wo purab hai to main paschim mujhe santi pasand hai aur wo chatter box hai 

K - tujhe pata hai opposite always attract aur rhai baat antra bhabi ki to usane unki jagah kabhi nahi li usne apna ek alga jagha bana liya hai usse bata de iss pehele ki der hojaye

Kabir went from their leaving akshat in thought
 
At night guddan in her room settings thinking about akshat just then revati and jeevan come

R- di kya socha rhai ho

G- kuch nahi chutki baaas aise hi

J- darling humse jhoot mat bolo

R- kis ke baare main soch rahi ho na

G- nahi hum akshat ke baare main nahi soch rahe

R-hum ne unka naam kab liya

J- darling tum hottie se pyar karti ho na

Guddan can't take it she brust into tears revati jeevan immediately hug her from both side

G- ha hum pyar karte hai unse paar wo kbhi nahi manege wo sirf apni pehele patni antra se pyar karte hai humara pehla pyar adhura reh gaya chutki

J- nahi darling himmat mat haro tumse jyada duniya dekhi hai main ne hottie bhi tumse pyar karta hai par usse realize nahi kar raha sabar karo sab thik ho jayega

They make guddan sleep then went from their other side sleep was far away from akshat all the moment with guddan just flying infront of him

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Note- hello friends tomorrow I am going to attend some of my relatives wedding so will update my other stories after Wednesday till then bye take care love youโค๏ธ



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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update
Loved it waiting for the nxt part
Edited by KajalTiwari - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Loved akshan friendship
Wanna see how both of them will confess their love 
Please do continue soon
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Fantastic update 
Love it
Continue soon