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Posted: 5 years ago
Chapter 2
Night jindal mension

Akshat come to home he has a busy day in restaurant something bothering him savitri ji seating in the hall akshat greet her and went to his room 

Savitri ji sense something wrong with akshat but then thought may be something related to  restaurant akshat get fresh and change to his night clothes just then his phone rang a smile appear on his face he pick the call and hear lot of sorry from other side

Caller- sorry sorry please maf kar dijiye pata nahi yeh kaise ho gaya 

A- jaan relax itna tension kyu le rahi ho main naraj nahi hoon 

C- pakka aap naraj nahi ho

A- ha baba promise

C- thank God pata hai main kitni tension main thi sab sahi kehete hum se na ho payega

Akshat sigh and said

A- guddan jaan main kitni baar kaha he ki aisa kabhi mat bolna 

( Yes the caller is non other than guddan those who gusse both are in relationship are right and why akshat didn't recognize guddan as leela because guddan only said him about the audition she didn't told him about her fake profile as he hate lies and remember guddan text him about the audition so he thought guddan will be on audition now le go back to story)

A- tumse sab ho payega bas apne aap par bharosa rakho 

G- thik hai sorry par meri ek galti ki bajhe se firse apki teeno bhau humse naraj ho gayi

A- are wo to sirf ek misunderstanding thi aur kuch nahi and sorry to mujhe kehna chahiye main ne tumse rudely baat ki na

G- akshat aap kyu sorry kehe rahe ho mujhe pata hai wo logo he jyada insult na kar paye iss liye apne wo sab kaha 

A- main tumari insult hote kaise dekh pata

G- ach aab wo sab chodiye ye batayiye ye batayiye aap kese kiss ladki se milne keliye ha kardi thi wo to shukar hai main thi 

A- are jaan main to vas unka maan rakhane ke liye milne ke liye raazi ho gaya shadi ke liye mana to karna hi tha

G- acha thik hai par aab kya kare apki family ko impress karna tha par humne usse bigad diya

A- tension mat lo ma tumse impressed lagti hai baas teeno bhau ko mana na hai kal milte hai phir baat karenge kya karna hai 

G- thik hai good night love you

A- love you too good night

 Both hung the call with a smile on their faces they don't think that they will fall in love with each other six months back both can't stand with each other whenever they meet tom and Jerry fight will started between them and now both can't leave without each other 

Akshat went near to antra pic lit the diya and give white flower to her and smile

A- antar tum humsa se meri jindagi ka important hiss rahi ho tumhari jaga koi nahi le sakta par yeh bhi sach hai ki guddan ne mere dil main apni ek nayi jaga banayi hai mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki main dobara kis se itna pyaar kar sakta hoon wo bhi uss ladki se jisse pehle main dekhna tak pasand nahi karta tha 

On the other hand guddan standing infront of her mother's portrait 

G- yakeen nahi hota ma main kissse itna pyaar kar sakti hoon akshat phele mere liye khadoos uncle the par aab mere akshat hai janti hoon ke antra di humasa unke pehle pyar rahegi par ye bhi sach hai humne unke dil main apni alag jaga banaya hai kisne socha tha jinse hum dekhna tak pasand nahi karte the unse itna pyaar karenge

Both their thought drift back to 6 month before where start their journey of love

Will guddan able to impress the 
 trideviyan ???stay toon for Akshan chori chori chori romance

Meri exams ane wali hai so update karne main der hojayegi 
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Ohooo 
Mera shak sahi tha...6 months me  heart connection πŸ˜†

Update soon SanviπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Raglak_akshan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Hi sanu finally got the time to comment. 

First of alll loved the promo. Hay  πŸ˜‰
Kya BAAT hai.

Secondly part one was awsm but I guess ki agar Akshat babu Shimla me the or unko mohabbat ho chuki h to itna anjanapan Kaisa ki unko pata hi Nahi Chala ki wo Leela Jo unki apni Leela hai Jo un k sath ram-leela Kar chuki haiπŸ˜†


But when he again did πŸ˜‰nmy dear guddu blush πŸ˜³ I was like 

Dil Diya hai ab Jaan b de de kya tumhare os ko πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Thank you kavya kabse tumhri hi comment ka wait kar rahi thi and aab 2 part update kar di hai sabki doubt clear ho jayegiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful update dear
Loved it 
So Shimla mein donom ki Dil mil Gaye hai 
I really excited to know 6months pehle kya huva he did they fall in love this deeply 
Waiseh AJ Ka mood off kyom tha 
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Superb update 
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Ohoo AJ toh bade chupe Rustom nikle
6 months mein Apne liye heroine dhund li
Awesome update
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Beautiful update dear

Loved it 
So Shimla mein donom ki Dil mil Gaye hai 
I really excited to know 6months pehle kya huva he did they fall in love this deeply 
Waiseh AJ Ka mood off kyom tha 
Please do continue soon


Thank you dear 

Akshat ka mood off tha kyun ki usne guddan se rudely baat ki thi
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Superb update 

Love it
Continue soon


Thanks
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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks
Angelsanvika08 thumbnail
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Ohoo AJ toh bade chupe Rustom nikle

6 months mein Apne liye heroine dhund li
Awesome update


Thank you πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†