AKSHAN SS -love chori chori part 13update ( 8 may 2019) - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you yashi😊😊
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#32
Beautiful update dear
Loved it
Bas ek hi shikayat yeah bahoot chotta sa update hai todi aur lambi Karo nah
Please do continue soon
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#33
Chotu and cute update
Please next time Lamba update dena
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superb update
love it
cont soon
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Note
Hello friends due to my exams I am not able to update my stories

But I promise after 20th jan I will update my stories

Will also write a Ts or an os

Till then bye take care
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Posted: 5 years ago
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20th Jan or Feb?
Btw ALL THE BEST πŸ˜ƒ



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Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

20th Jan or Feb?

Btw ALL THE BEST πŸ˜ƒ




Thanks

20th jan ke baad
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Chapter -4
Flash back

Guddan's puphaji come Indore then take revati and guddan with him to manali
Other side akshat was busy in his work unware of the Strom name guddan coming theirπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Guddan revati and her puphaji reached manali and they went to the colony where her phupa and bua living

Their taxi stop out side the house all come out and start to unload their luggage gauri come out of the house guddan went to her hug her tightly

G- bua main ne apko kitna miss kiya

Ga- main ne bhi tumhe bahot miss kiya meri bachi

Then someone said from behind

P- are lagta hai mujhe kisi ne miss nahi kiya

G- are aisa ho sakta hai main apne jee ko bhul jau

Guddan hug him too he is suresh's younger brother jeevan he is a gay suresh's father mother leave him as he is not a man but suresh keep his brother with him guddan is also very close to him fondly call him jee

J- darling I know tum jhoot bol rahi ho varna 3 saal ho gaye tum yaha nahi yahi

G- sorry jee par kya karti mummy hum dono ko jyada bahar nahi bheja ti na

R- jee sara pyar di ko mujhe kuch nahi

Jeevan smile and hug revati

Ga- acha aab andar chalo sari baate yahi karni hai kya chal tumhe bhook lagi hogi na

G- ha bua chalo mere pet ke chuhe dinosaur ban gaye hai

Guddan's eye then fall on the house next to her bua's house it's windows are open like someone living their

G- puphaji wo ghar ke owner rehene aye hai kya khidki khuli hai

Su- ha beta abhi 2 din pehle hi aye hai

Guddan whenever come their see saw that house locked as the owner rarely visit it her bua and puphaji have a nice relationship with the owner whenever he visit it

All went inside just then akshat come out of the house to went back to his work as he come for lunch and saw a taxi just leave from the house next to his he thought may be some guest come to the house
( And yes guddan's bua's mysterious neighbour is non other than Akshat as he come rarely their and guddan come only for vacation so they don't meet each other their)

Guddan and revati settled down in their room yes they have a room their after fresh up they come to have their launch guddan saw her bua made her and revati's favorite dishes

G- bua I just love you humesa mere pasand ka kahana banti ho

Ga- love you too bache beth ja aab bhook lagi thi na tujhe

Ga pov- pata hai mujhe guddan geeta bhabi ki jane ke baad kaushalya bhabi ne tujhe kabhi apna nahi mana to wo tere liye yeh sab nahi banati hogi

Three days passed by both are busy in their respective work on the fourth day at evening akshat come little earlier he come out of the cab and was going inside when someone bump into him before the person can fall he hold her and saw it is non other than guddan

Revati who was cheesing guddan come their stood still seeing them she get panicked as these both whenever meet world war 3 will surely happen

Here akshan are lost in each other then both come out of their land and said together
A/g- tum aap

G -aap yaha kya kar rahe ho mere picha karte karte yahan bhi pahunch gaye

A- pagal ho kya kehe kya rahi ho mere paas aur koi kaam nahi hai kya ke main tumahara picha karoonga aur yeh baat main bhi keh sakta hoon ki tum mere piche ayi ho

G- uncle hume kya koi pagal kutte ne kata hai ki hum apka picha karien

Just then suresh gauri and jeevan also come out hearing the noise

Su- are yeh kaya ho raha hai are akshat ji aap

A- namaste suresh ji

J- hello hottie kya laga rahe ho aaj

Jeevan have a crush on akshat so he always flirts with akshat

Hearing jeevan's talk guddan just try to control her laugh

G- puphaji aap inhe jante hai

Su- ha beta yeh ghar inhika hai

A- yeh apki bhateji hai

G- hey lord krishna in uncle ko aab har din dekhna padega

A- jaise mujhe acha lage ga tumhe dekha ke

Before both can start their dog cat fight revati signal gauri to drag guddan from their so gauri drag guddan from their to home after some talk with suresh and jeevan's flirt akshat went inside his house

Here suresh and gauri ask guddan why she is fighting with Akshat revati then narrate them about akshan fight all laugh at it

G- aap hasa kyun rahe hai it's not funny

J-oo come on darling hottie itna bhai bura nahi hai

Guddan just stick out her toung at him and thought she again don't have to meet him
Other side akshat also pray he doesn't again bump to guddan
(Unhe kya pata upar wale ne unhe milane ki plan bana chuke haiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰)

That's it friend

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Posted: 5 years ago
#39
Nice one
Shandar meeting tha dono ka
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#40
Amazing update
Love it
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