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                        Chapter 6

It was morning and the sun shone brightly in the sky. The students of VJN University were ready to welcome the newest year and the new students. The weather was fairly pleasant, but in the college corridor, the weather was in unbearably hot for a certain boy.

Sameer Maheshwari had not felt so smitten and helpless at the same time. The not-little-anymore Naina Aggarwal has grown into a beautiful, sexy and full-of-curves woman. No matter, how much he tried, he could not divert his gaze from her, it just seemed to go back to her.
Here he was, thinking about how he would love to talk to the pigtail wali little Naina Aggarwal. And here she is, no pigtails but long hair, no childhood chubby cheeks but a extremely beautiful face with highlighted cheek bones and hazel eyes. Did he mention her curves? She had grown into such a desirable woman, and not to mention, she is driving him nuts. If seeing her gave him so pleasure, then touching or maybe kissing her would just give him heaven on earth...

His fantasy was soon interrupted when Arjun exclaimed loudly " Kaha reh gayi thi teeno?"
Preeti soon answered, "Sorry bhaiya woh rickshaw hi nahi mil Rahi thi"

Arjun's words made Sameer realise that yes, Arjun  too exists...Sameer felt extremely ashamed of himself now. He was dreaming about kissing and touching Naina. Arjun's Naina. Little Naina. God. She is out of bounds. She is still little and innocent. And he, he used to be playboy. Yes, He is changed, but she deserves so much better. She deserves a man who can love her, care for her and keep her safe. And then there is him, who is such a jerk that he will look for physical pleasure in her innocence. "No", he said to himself. "You protected her from outsiders, now protect her from yourself and your needs, you pervert".

Standing in front of him, was Naina, who was observing him closely. She noticed that time had made him even more handsome. He had grown taller now. His hair were shorter and his shoulders had broadened. He has become quite muscular now and biceps were visible. She shook herself from her thoughts and instead, tried to remember about what  he used to be. Is be still a playboy? She wondered for some time.  She doesn't know and in truth, she doesn't want to know. She controled the affections flowing from her heart for him, and focused on the conversation taking place.

Munna was staring at Swati, while Swati was blushing like a Tamato seeing him. Pandit was watching the scene with a amused grin, while Arjun was suggesting good places to look for a rickshaw, to Preeti.
Naina pretended to listen to him and said, " theek hai bhaiya agli baar se yaad rakhenge"

Arjun looked satisfied, while Sameer felt tingles inside his stomach after listening to her melodious voice.
" Chalo tum teeno ko college dikha laate hai" Pandit suggested.

Preeti nodded excitedly while Swati was looking anywhere but at Munna. Arjun followed them while Naina went with Preeti. Sameer was walking behind Naina, and that gave him a good view of her curves from the back .

They were walking through different rooms, and Naina noticed how girls were ogling at Sameer. A bubble of jealousy exploded in the pit of her stomach and she felt irritated. Sameer however, was used to all this attention and did not not pay any heed to the ogling girls.

Some time later, when the tour of the college was finished, they decided to go to the famous Red Rose Restaurant. The four boys had already marked a table as their own. It was more like a patent for them. This time however, the girls joined them too.  People were however, ogling at the three girls, wondering who they were, since they were sitting with The Sameer Maheshwari and his gang.

Sameer stood up and declared that everyone should eat whatever they like since he is paying the bill. When asked what was the occasion, he said that they are celebrating the arrival of the girls. Preeti nodded happily at that and Sameer asked everyone about their orders. Finally, Naina's turn came and Sameer went to one of his kissing fantasies, but came out 10 seconds later, seeing everyone around.

He cleared his throat and asked, "tumhe  kya chahiye Naina "
Naina felt butterflies in her stomach, after listening her name from his mouth. Her name sounded so better, now that it was coming from his mouth.
"Umm, ek sandwich mangado please"

Sameer muttered  a okay and decided to have a sandwich as well. His friends were shocked since Sameer basically lived on Samosas but Sameer insisted that he wanted to try something new. Sandwich did became a favourite of his from that day onwards...

The rest of the meal passed silently with everyone munching on their food, while Sameer and Naina were stealing glances of each other. Luckily, their eyes did not meet and it did save them from embarrassment.

Naina had always been a ketchup lover. While people ate sandwich with ketchup, Naina ate ketchup with sandwich. And the same happened today. She covered her sandwich with lots of ketchup and ate it with delight. No one could tell if she liked the sandwich, or the ketchup. Sameer, who was watching her intently, now felt uncomfortable again. The ketchup was smeared on her lips, and Sameer was controlling himself from wiping it off with his own lips.

This was the only conversation that they had in one week. Naina skillfully avoided Sameer and her feelings for him. What was the point in following a road when it does not take you anywhere? She has to shut her feelings in a box, and throw its keys away and that too forever..

On the other hand, Sameer too avoided Naina. Everyday, she came to college in jeans or knee length dresses. The dresses she wore, hugged her curves so tightly that Sameer and his male parts became suffocated. Her lips invited him to come and kiss them. Her long hair encouraged him to run his hands through them. Her waist teased him enclose her in his arms. But he can't do it. He shouldn't. She is.. she is... out of bounds. He tried his best to stay away from the not-little-anymore, Naina Aggarwal.

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One week later, the boys were at cricket practice,  while the girls were sitting in the canteen, munching on delicious samosas.
"Arey Preeti tujhe woh economics ki class mein kuch samajh aaya tha kya"
"Nahi Swati, main toh Kritik ko dekh rahi thi. Kitna cute hai na yaar" She sighed dreamily.
Naina slapped her forehead, but she smiled nonetheless.

They resumed their conversation until, Ekta, one of their classmates came running.
"Tum teeno jaldi khana khatam karo. Abhi principal mam ki surprise class hai."

Naina was shocked while Preeti and Swati looked horrified. Everyone dreaded the principal's lectures. She was strict, boring and no one wanted to attend her lectures. Preeti and Swati got up, but they noticed that Naina had not finished her samosa yet.
"Yaar Naina, main aur Preeti na class ke liye jaate hai. Tu apna samosa khatam karke aa Jana."
"Aur please pura kha liyo. Tune nashta bhi nahi Kiya tha. Waise bhi lecture mein Abhi 15 minute hai. Main aur Swati peeche ka padh lenge, tune to already padh rakha hai"

Naina reluctantly agreed and went back to her samosa, while Preeti and Swati followed Ekta.

It had been just five minutes since they had gone, when the door of canteen burst open and few second years came inside. They all looked around as if looking for a prey. The first years however, looked scared and Naina too looked for ways to escape, since she remembered the advise given to her by Arjun bhaiya.

A second year came forward and loudly declared, "Chalo saare ke saare first years line mein aa jao. Chup chaap apni haazri lagvao warna accha nahi hoga"

The first years looked around for help, but obviously, they had no choice. As for Naina, she was facing the moment, that she dreaded the most. This moment did prove more dangerous than principal's lecture.

Soon the first years followed quietly. The same second year said,
"Bahut acche, ab jaldi se rail gaadi banao. Chalo jaldi karo."

The first years quickly did what were they told and came into the formation of a train.
Then a second yaar girl came forward and said, " Ha ab gol gol ghumo aur bolo 'choti mooch lambi daadhi, chukk chukk chalti rail gaadi'. Muh kya dekh rahe ho. Chalo ghumna shuru karo"

As soon as she finished, the first year's chorus ran through the entire canteen. Naina too silently followed the crowd and sang with them, pointedly ignoring a pair of eyes that seemed to follow her.15 minutes later, finally they were stopped, but the time for individual parade had started.

A boy was told to sing a Lata Mangeshkar classic, while another boy was told to name all his body parts in hindi, which became difficult when he reached his chest.  Naina was watching all this half heartedly and wishing that her turn never comes. Also, she observed the group, and looked directly at the pair of eyes that were staring at her. When the second year noticed that she was looking at him, he just smirked at her and winked at her. Naina coloured deeply and immediately focused her gaze on the ground.

The other second years seemed to have noticed this and the second year girl, Dimple said,
"Chalo theek hai, ab woh wali ladki. Ha woh peeche wali, blue dress mein jo hai. Kya Naam hai tumhara."
Dimple pointed her finger at Naina.

Naina looked extremely scared and moved backwards. But as the others stared at her, waiting for her reaction, she shakily moved forward towards Dimple,
" Arey itna hil kyu rahi ho, thand lag Rahi hai kya. Kambal le aau" A girl exclaimed.

The other people burst out laughing and Naina felt tears forming at the corner of her eyes. Dimple noticed this and said,
"Rona band karo madam. Yahan Meena Kumari banne ka competition nahi ho raha hai. Chalo ab parade shuru karte hai, ya phir muhurat nikalwade Behenji"

The crowd tittered yet again and Naina cast a look towards them. Everyone was laughing, except the boy who was staring at her. He looked quiet apologetic.

Naina's fingers were trembling, but she still answered, "Mera naam Naina hai"

Dimple finally stopped laughing and looked at her,
"Chalo theek hai. Ab aage aao. Ha itna theek hai" She pointed towards the boy, who was staring at Naina and exclaimed,
"Yeh hai Prem. Humara dost hai. Aise mat dekho, maine sab dekha. Woh aankhon ka Nazrana, everything. Chalo ab thoda aage badhte hai. Naina, Prem Ko 'I love you' bolo. "

Naina looked horrified. How can she say ' I love you' to a random boy? She doesn't know him. What will everyone think if she says it? Most important, what will her Taiji say? Naina trembled at the mere thought of it. But if she doesn't say anything, then they might tell her to do something worse. But she can't... She won't..

"O madam pura din nahi hai. Ladke ka Dil mat todo yaar."

The crowd laughed yet again but soon a voice came,
"Chodd na Dimple. Use pareshaan mat kar. Naina tum jao" The guy, Prem said.
Naina cast him a grateful glance, but Dimple didn't looked too pleased.

"Aise kaise jaane de use, bolna toh padega hi. O Behenji jaldi bolo, pura din nahi hai humare paas."

Naina looked pleadingly at her said, "Main nahi bol Sakti. Please mujhe jaane dijiye"

At this, the first boy, Vicky came forward and moved towards her,
"Chalo theek hai. Main tumhe jaane doonga, Lekin ek kiss Lene ke Baad. Bahut cute ho yaar tum. Ek hi kiss ki toh baat hai"

The others laughed and watched excitedly. Vicky moved towards Naina, while tears were flowing down Naina's face. She quickly moved backwards. She kept enchanting the Hanuman Chalisa and kept repeating in her mind, "Bhagwan ji please aaj bacha lo, please Bach lo". She had not been so scared in her entire life. This can't happen. This can't happen. Naina looked everywhere for help, yet no one came.Vicky was just mere inches apart now. This can't happen. This should not happen...



"Band karo yeh sab"

All eyes turned at the door, only to see an extremely angry Sameer Maheshwari. His eyes were red from anger. He had clenched his knuckles so tightly that they were white. He was ready to murder anybody. 

Vicky immediately took his steps back, seeing third year and college hero Sameer Maheshwari. The other second years too moved backwards, being well aware of Sameer's punches and damage caused due to them.

Sameer moved forward and took Naina's hand in his own,
"Ek baat kaan khol ke sun lo sab, agar kisi ne bhi Naina ki taraf aankh uthakar bhi dekha, to main uski Aankhen noch lunga. Dur raho iss ladki se, warna muh todd dunga ek-ek ka. Sameer Maheshwari ka gussa toh jaante hi honge saare"

Sameer held her hand even more tightly and cast her a protective look. He glared at Vicky and Dimple, while they gulped in fear. Sameer and Naina soon exited the canteen, while Naina's hand was still in his own. The "mere" handhold, sent tingles down their fragile heart, but they kept walking nonetheless.


Sorry for being so late and keep you waiting. Exams from next week!!!!

Pls comment though...


Edited by YUDKBHT - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
acha to avoid game khel rhe hain dono
lekin kab tak
I loved the way you always referred naina as choti pigtails vali naina for sameer
it was so cute
Already following her
madam sandwich khayegi toh yeh bhi
and he desires to kiss her
abhi se
ladke pe lagaam lagaani padegi
and why do I have a feeling yeh prem ko naina se prem ho jayega
sameer saved her yet again
I love him okay
he is our hero
haye isse toh mujhe bhut pyaar hain
isly mere gaal abhi laal hain
please continue soon
and yes all the best for your exams
Edited by munchkinland - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Loved Samaina's Indirect interaction and ofcourse their reactions around eachother..
Can't wait to read next part!
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Posted: 5 years ago
Great progression! Self conversations of Sameer and Naina were my favorite part.
Sameer cant get over his attraction but doesn't forget that Naina is out of bounds and his own playboy ways in the past. His character is slowly growing on me. Him ordering sandwich was just too cute for words. Also his angry young man avtaar was welcome when Naina needed it the most. Now that he has marked his territory around Naina she is going to get a lot of jealous attention from the same sex I bet!

Naina, the girl in love since forever! Loved how you kept her character consistent...sweet, determined, and brave. Looks like she has thrown the key to her feelings but heart is searching for it anyways. Naina can't deny her attraction however remembering the past she is cautious to say the least. I am looking forward when she figures out Sameer is a changed man; then the real predicament will start.

Ragging incident remined me of the college days. No amount of courage can get you out of obeying your seniors and Naina's predicament was perfectly shown, inspite of that she stood her ground. 😆 The eye contact scene was perfect, golden rule never make eye contact is what you are told! Prem looks like an interesting character. Sameer looks like Salman and Prem is his most common screen name, coincidence or deliberate move by you. 😉

Sameer's fame and seniority was such a savior. Him saving Naina reminded of the teenage Sam saving little Naina. I was surprised he didn't punch Vicky. That handhold was perfect, nothing OTT just a natural reflex though bet it is going to open a lot of gates for the concerning parties 😊

All the best for your exams!!
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Posted: 5 years ago
I was eagerly waiting for ur update and it's finally here! Sameer beta tu toh gaya! He is so much attracted to naina! His mind is not in his control. Soon his heart also will not be in his control. He is daydreaming of kissing naina. Oh god I'm blushing! And here poor naina is thinking how to avoid him! Agar usse sameer k man ki baat pata chala to she'll be hell shock! Sameer jitna bhi try karlo avoid karne ki koi faida nahi. The last part was wow!! Ufff sameer maheshwari ka jalwa! The way he spoke it was like he is saying naina is only mine don't any of u ever stare her! Only I have the right! And the 1st hand hold! Kitne haq se sameer ne haat pakda as if she was his gf or wife. College k ladkiyaan to bohut jealous honge. Sameer u r right. U can protect her from others but how will u protect her from urself?😆 matlab control me rehna ðŸ˜³ This new guy prem I think he is interested in her. Vicky jab kiss karne ja raha tha tab kya kar raha tha yeh!!! May b in future sameer will b jealous of him! All the best for ur exam. Agar ho sake to jaldi jaldi next part de dena. I'm a lalchi reader ðŸ˜›
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wow so Amazing update 
Protective Sameer is love
Plz update soon 
All the best for your exams 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Lets see till how long can they avoid talking to each other
Loved the climax
Update soon
All the best for exams
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wonderful update.
Very happy that you made Naina a cute lovable girl in your story. Even Sameer who has seen so many sexy girls is also smitten by her. Loved the protective instinct of Sameer who knows very well that the first person from whom she has to be protected is none other than he himself. He is ready to kill anyone if they try to harm Naina.
Pls update soon. Can't wait to see how their story is progressing.