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Originally posted by: NikiAries
A friend on forum recommended this story to me and so glad to have read it! Special thanks to that friend 😊I like how you have chosen a slightly different way to narrate the story and changed the settings of the characters. Read all parts in one go today. Sameer and Naina's interactions were small and impactful, nothing OTT. Poor Naina, you portrayed her turmoil, heartbreak, and fight back so well.TBH I was disappointed in Part 4. I did not agree with Sameer's playboy ways since loneliness cannot be an excuse for losing control on self and behaving out of character, that is what separates the good from bad, the strong from weak. Had part 5 not be been posted today I might have given up from reading further. but you did a good job at redeeming Sameer's character atleast partially. Loved how friends, Naina or Nanu directly did not have to pull him out of his mess; he himself realized and rectified after hearing of Nanu's trust in him. That was the saving grace and spoke of Sameer's character.Sameer is clearly besotted by Naina. Special mention to you giving Naina a make over instead of putting her through Behenji routine in college, it is nice to read a different take!However, at this point what will be Naina's take after seeing him with other girls in the past is what I look forward to. Love is necessary but not enough alone to keep a relationship alive, trust and respect is needed as well. Sameer has shown concern and understanding for little Naina; now it will be interesting to see how to tackles this Naina or rather she deals with him😉
Thank god I posted, or I would have lost a good reader...
Thank u very much and u will see samaina conversations and further relationship..
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