Thank you so much !! I have updated the next two parts. You are right, after the kind of separation they had , its not easy to bounce back with out a discussion ...and the funny thing is they are not even shown as curious to know about what happened to each other at that time. Hence decided to write something on that and besides three days with out our show was making me restless... 😆 The end result is this write up... 😳Originally posted by: Priya2910
Awesome story.
Sameer's inner turmoil is so well dealt with. In the show despite of being rejected twice by Naina, I was surprised at the alacrity with which Sameer was shown to bounce back.In fact full marks to Munna who held his ground in favour of Sameer's welfare.Please continue the story.
Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it. Have updated part 2 and 3 on page 3.Originally posted by: NikiAries
Ashu I am happy to see you back with a story! Looking forward to how the story unfolds. I was very disappointed how the makers closed the break up track after all the build up. What we needed is conversations and confession by Sameer/Naina on how much they actually hurt each other especially Naina's initial step.
You have always done an amazing job at describing emotional turmoil of characters (My Stolen Heart still remians one of my top favs). This part gave a nice sneak peak to the initial build up. Waiting for he next updates 😊
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