Mit Sakti Hain Ye Dooriyan {These distance can be erased}?

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Hello My Lovely Readers, I was having this idea from a month and then on friendship day this got intensify and now i had to write it down, here.
I want to know Do you guys believe in the below statements?
What do you think about this new idea of mine? Should I continue writing it or not.?
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Prologue



Relationship, every relationship had to face the almost similar situation at one or the other point to prove it's worth and strength. It could be of any kind - relation between lovers, husband-wife, siblings, parent-child or it can be of true Friends - Two Best buddies.


There is always a notion that Once A crack, a gap has taken place in any relationship among the people then no circumstances, situations or thing can refill that crack or bridge that gap. No one or nothing can be done to make the relationship as it was earlier.



It is said that the famous proverb 'Once Bitten Twice Shy' is usually used for broken relationship. It means once the person whom you trusted the most betrays you, then you think thousand times to participate in another relationship, you start having a commitment phobia, as you are afraid that the person with whom you try to make new relation will also betray you or leave you at one or other point of life which you wouldn't be able to face again.
The betrayal had such an impact that the victim fears to make any type of commitment, Let alone he/she would even think of rebuilding the earlier relationship where they faced betrayal.




'Dooriyan' a known Hindi word which is called 'Distances' in english has alot of meanings behind it.

*Dooriyan rishte ko mazboot Karti hai. Do insaanon ko ek dusre ke qareeb laati hai. Distance brings people closer as thoughts about your loved once became constant in his/her absence.*
Here it is about physical distance among people, we were talking.


But distance IN a relationship creates a gaps and misunderstanding between two people due to many reasons, one of them is loss of hearty communication faced by two people. These distance are not physical but mental and it is a worst nightmare which means the end of the relation. And it can never be erased.
"If mental distance has formed among the two people in a relationship because of any betrayal then it may not be reduced forget about removed/ erased."





But if the person whom you had trust more than anything, for whom you can go to any length betrayed you, left you to face the cruel world all alone in the situation where your heart is already broken into million pieces as you had lost your love, your life, your wife. That person left you when you needed him the most, when you needed his shoulder to cry, to share your grief. When you needed him to be beside you but he left you after shouting his lungs out on you, blaming you for your own condition, accusing you being the reason of your own loss.



What would be your response? Would you be able to be that close to anyone again? Or would you be strong enough to rebuild your trust on that same person, to refill the crack formed in your relationship again?

Would you be able to erase those distance between you and him, at one point after years where that person showed up suddenly and said that his betrayal was for your good, to make you independent, to make you stand on your own and to punish your culprit.?



Could you be able to erase those distance form in between you and him? Are those distance, like earlier said, non-erasable?
Ya phir ... Mit sakti hain ye dooriyan?


What will Arjun do, as he has faced alot in his life already and is afraid of facing anything more which will be the death of his left over emotions as well as his already dead heart?




Above lines are exactly describing the emotions and dillema what Arjun is feeling right now.



ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte. A tough, no non-sense, rebellious cop who is breathing, yes breathing not living for only one reason. That is, to avenge his wife's murder and avenge his only relation he had other than his wife. His Friendship, which he had lost on that same fateful day.





To Be Continue...
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INDEX

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Posted: 7 years ago
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very deep prologue
continue with the update soon
pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice prologue
Cont soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful prologue dear
Lines were very true
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice prologue
Waiting for the update
Do post all the other updates too
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice
waiting
thnx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A very interesting prologue
The meaning of friendship and distances has been beautifully described.
Thanks for the pm
Continue the story soon please
Edited by Aquabutterfly - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome concept ..
Like to read more..
Continue soon..
Thanks for PM Dr..
Waiting for updates..

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