Firstly Shravya, I am sorry. I am so late to read and comment but I have crisis of time right now. Hope you will understand. 😊
Part 2
Wow! I hope you could have seen my blushing state☺️ You would have been proud as a writer😉
Jokes apart, this one was hell, evoking many emotions. known and unknown, in Naina. The highlight was surely Naina, she was dominant one here without doubt but Sam's buttery words made her initiate those romantic advances and well, Bold Naina is my favourite. 😳
Just how it should be, she surrendered and gave in to her desires, she had no other choice than to act upon it.
The dialogues were on point, the poetic way you represented it added onto the feelings for the readers and I guess, Samaina too, surely we have seen the result. 😉
I can see the third part, glad that you didn't stop, rushing to read the next one. 😃
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