Samaina OS: Aaja Meri Bike Pe Baith Ja - Page 2

it was really beautiful dear

This was very beautiful😳 Edited by Mayashika - 5 years ago

It was super sweet

Beautiful story... Felt happy that Sameer could feel the jealousy pangs that Naina always feels looking at the madhumakhis around her Sameer... Very nicely put thoughts... !!

Such a lovely OS! And you have covered so much more than just the event of the bike ride. I absolutely loved how you have laid out all her insecurities and reasons for jealousy infront of Sameer. Using Preeti to convey all those feelings is a very clever ploy!
Loved it!!! 👏

Loved it!! Loved it !! Loved it !!

Originally posted by: lakku19

it was really beautiful dear.. loved it so much..

thanks for pm :)

thanks dear!

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Such a cute update it was

Preeti and Sameer conversation was lit .. I just love this jiju sali bonding and you gave me such a cute scene

Sameer's plan backfired ..

Its so true he can handle a jealous or angry Naina but not a crying Naina indeed it was his " undone "

The bike ride .. Uff it was soo very cure and romantic

You very beautifully depicted their increasing comfort zone with each other

" main toh aise hi baithungi .. Aur sirf mein hi baithungi "

True only she has the right to sit like this on his bike

" tum aise choougi toh bike kaise chalaunga .."

This line is my favorite .. Naina is really a distraction for him

Thank you so much for this update

Waiting for more writings from you

Love

Laalchi reader

I love to show them jataving haq in each other...that is the essence of their relationship. Even when Sameer was not in love with her, she had self-gained all her rights on him & warded off the madhumakhis like Kamya!

Originally posted by: Mayashika

This was very beautiful😳

Sameer understanding there was more to the insecurity, how well he convinced and of course the bike ride along with those honest confessions...this was amazing to read!

Thanks!! I take it upon myself to give closures to all the open issues left by CVs. 😉

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Such a lovely OS! And you have covered so much more than just the event of the bike ride. I absolutely loved how you have laid out all her insecurities and reasons for jealousy infront of Sameer. Using Preeti to convey all those feelings is a very clever ploy!
Loved it!!! 👏

Thank you for liking it! Jija-Sali bond is the backbone of the relationship...