Originally posted by: moumita04
Muskan - First of all, thank for that note on top... You are inspired by me? You do know, right, that I started writing stories from March of this year... Lights of Eternity is my first story ever... 😃
You never fail to amaze me! First story in March and so much talent already! CVs are missing out on this talent big time! 😳
Another thing, I have already read your FF, it's exceptional... Though based on a old track, the language is so sharp and pure that it has the power to bring out that pain all over again... I will comment on that thread soon...! 😳
Thank you so much! I did start it quite a long time ago, thus the track it follows. However, I've tried to link past with present along with both perspectives. This was my first time writing in third-person, and it felt so weird. 😆 Thank you so much for your words of appreciation! I'll definitely be waiting 😃
Now coming to the OS - the manhoos track has surely succeeded in making the creative juices of the fandom flow... Everyone is attempting to find ways to bring Sameer out of this trap... 😆 And each and every idea is amazing... I loved this story...!! 👍🏼
Seriously show dekhne se lagta hai ki Sameer bohot bhau kha raha hai, so thought of changing the track slightly. Actually this is what I had imagined upon seeing recent precaps 😆
The excitement of Naina, the glee, the smile, the blush, the dance with pillow... all adorable antics of a heart in love... And then, the unexpected pain caused by Sameer's indifference. You brought out the girlish attempts to woo her love so beautifully... Also the jealousy and how she tried to ignore it, trying to believe her heart that Sameer was still hers and that there was a reason behind his behavior...
I don't know how I wrote that...but I somehow was able to visualize Naina doing all of this simultaneously. 😆 Credits to Ashi Singh's acting skills 😳 Jab characters aise ho toh feelings don't take long to surface...I guess that's what happened with me too.
How foolish he is to think that he could survive by causing her pain... whenever he tries to break her heart, it is him who suffers the most... yet he doesn't understand that both their happiness lies with each other...
Exactly what I was trying to explain; he can't cause her pain without hurting himself. Hats off to Randeep for he has portrayed ignorance with pain and guilt beautifully! Hayeee...Jaise ek baar Naina ki voiceover ne kaha tha na, 'pyaar mein jeet bhi pyaar ki hoti hai aur haar bhi pyaar ki hoti hai' 😆Absolutely loved the confrontation...👏 The facade of strength she tried to put up and the wall of indifference he tried to maintain... Both had to crumble... But I liked how Naina, despite being in tears, tried her best to show her strength and gave him the ultimatum... That was what he needed, to question himself, that he wanted Naina to go far away from him, but could he indeed survive if she truly did go away... No, he could not... and his heart compelled him to accept this fact...
Thank you so much! I'm dying to see a hug in the show now. Especially now that I've read your FFs...kiss ka toh pata nahi lekin ek hug toh banta hai na 😆 Naina has always been strong and knows how to remain invulnerable. For example, right after the Mt. Abu fiasco, her responses to his attempts were stunning! So thought of bringing the same element here too...I'm glad it worked. 😆The brain can forget the promises of love, the heart cannot... ❤️
Hahaa... Superstitious since he fell in love with her... man, he deserved that punch... and maybe another one too for being such a foolish jerk... 😆
Which is why Sameer listened to his heart! Thank God! 😆 I thought of ending the OS on a light note, yet a positive one... 😃
Thank you for this lovely story... and keep coming with more..!
Thank you for your comments...they really mean a lot to me! I'll try to update by this weekend...thank you so much once again! 😆😳
Love,
Mou
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