Growth in love comes from a place of absence...
That so holds true to both of them.The wait and longing to talk ..to meet..to confess...Emotions described right on point.👍🏼
That Akashvani idea was such a brilliant idea.I was dying to read how he would contact her.Beautiful dialogues there..👏
Preeti bossing and wanting to know each details...perks of having a filmy sister' with curiosity of James Bond.
The undercurrent of suspense you maintained ..thats a brilliant technique and surely keeps us on cliffhangers.
Great going darling..I am in shaadi wala pyar' with this story..❤️
Keep coming with your best.
With love-
Minu
Thank you, thank you , thank you so much🤗 itna detailed comment😳Originally posted by: AlishaSyed
Loved it to the core.. amazing girl .. hahaha bachi ko gussa aaraha tha Sameer par .. aawwwh she thought woh bhi baaki boys ki tarhan hai woh kyun phone karega ofcourse any one will think like that you showed Naina's emotions so well .. phir Preeti as always angel lagi radio sunane .. and finally Sameer Ka message I loved the way you convey the message through radio it was quite romantice atleast for me .. I find things like this romantic .. <3<3<3 ..Preeti got suspicious about Naina because bachi ka mood Jo theek hogaya tha ek dum message sun ke then woh intezar Karna hayee intezar Karna bhut mushkil hota hai but uska bhi apna mazzaa
And jab finally time hone laga phone aane Ka Preeti caught her hahahahWah ...Phir the phone conversation hayeeeDil le lo ..Sameer indirectly Apne answers Nikal leta hai par phir bhi abhi kuch answers Nahi mile mil jaaiyeinge later onHayee bacha because of that plastic dadi bahar PCO se call Kar Raha tha ..My fav toh .. toh Kia .. toh kuch Nahi ..Bacha is waiting for Naina ke woh dubara jab milegi ofcourse Naina bhi milna chahti haiLet's move to Preeti and her reactions hahaha cute .Preeti Ka haaran hona was obviousNaina ko Sacha dost MilaBut Naina Ka pov about others and Sameer was Dil le lo and mere Dil ko totally Chua ..Sameer feeling all alone in that bhara hua GharCause wahan usko koi apna feel karwane Wala Nahi hai ..Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Meri jaan, aaram se pdhna, no worries🤗Originally posted by: Anmol333
Res again...
Main aaj hi padhne Ko Koshish karungi aaishaMere exam hai na 😭
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