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Posted: 6 years ago
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Read both parts... Fabulous!
I wish they had shown something like this in the show instead of vishakha sending him away like that... I didn't like the way it was shown... Vishakha didn't really stand up for sameer. 

Loved the way you penned the brothers bonding... Sameer taking care of the situation and consoling his siblings as a big brother was amazing... Both brothers taking care of their mom whole night, vishaka feeling proud of her sons... Everything was amazing. 

Vishakha standing up for sameer firmly and giving it back to daadi was something i wanted to see... U wrote the part so beautifully... Loved how she decided to leave along with sameer... The best was the mature sameer... He understood how it will be wrong towards his siblings if she accompanied him... The way he made her understand was superb... Rohan even after all the instigation from daadi, never misunderstood sameer... Everything was brilliant... Loved it.

Thanks for the pm dear... Pls do continue. 
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Dearies...sorry for the delayed update...have been swamped with work. Last night I got my story idea finally and so here it is...continued to Sameer's return on popular demand. The next part, Samaina milan is on the way too in a few hours.
Part 3
Despite Dadi's palpable opposition, Rohan was adamant about seeing Sameer off to the airport. The brothers hugged and promised to communicate via phone and this time not lose the new-found relationship. This was the time that Sameer discovered that behind the Mr. timetable faade, hid a young innocent and very loving brother, who craved a normal life. He made a mental note to try and help his brother and introduce him to another life when the time was right. For now, he had a plate full of his own issues to sort out.
All during the flight, Sameer's mind was occupied with thoughts of his Nanu that this time he wouldn't see a smiling Nanu waiting for his Sameer. Also, neither MP knew about his return nor did he write to Naina, infact he wrote some advance vague letters to Naina and gave them to Amrita to post one every few days. He had also told Vishakha to not call MP as he wanted to surprise them. He also reminisced about his time in Delhi, the lessons learnt, the relationships formed, but most of all the piercing words of Dadi that he was an unlucky child. True, his mother had totally trashed such logic, but what if it was true. He couldn't deny the fact that he had lost his father, Nanu, and had come so close to losing his mother. He knew that Dadi was a super manipulative woman and she totally disliked him but what if there was an iota of truth in what she said about him. His friends, and moreover, Naina, who had led a normal life till his entry was subjected to ridicule, heartbreak, punishments and taunts all the time due to him. But what if things went to extreme and she got physically hurt or even died due to his unlucky presence in her life...Nooo, he had lost all the dearest people in his life, he left Delhi also at the first chance so that his mom would be safe, he could not let anything happen to his life, his Naina...He was ready to bear the pain of staying away from her and let her be alive and healthy rather than adding troubles to her life with his mere presence around her. Thus, while the flight landed, he made a firm resolve to stay away from his friends and Naina for their own well-being.
However, he didn't understand that his mind made the decision of staying away but his heart had other plans. The moment he got out of the airport, he mechanically asked the taxi driver to take him to PVKM, even before going home. He was still in a trance when the taxi driver announced that the school had arrived. That's when he realized that all his heart yearned was Naina and it was going to be a Herculean task staying away from her. Since he was already at the school gate, he decided to go have a look around and see his friends and Naina silently. The moment he stepped inside the premises, he realized it was the last day of Class 12, that means the farewell day, exactly a year ago, when his world shattered and life changed completely forever. All were busy hugging each other, reminiscing their school memories, writing on each other's shirts, filling each other's slam books, and making promises to stay in touch forever. Although he had been in this school only for a year, it was the best time of his life, he made friends like MP, and found the love of his life, his Naina. All the memories came flooding back. He avoided all the eyes and visited all the spots where he spent precious moments with his Naina and best times with friends. Finally, he came to the water-tap, which was an integral part of his love story. The water tap was witness to his and Naina's start of friendship, the first fight when he was apologizing for his bet, the first time he tried to say the three magical words, the day when she received the best student award, their first hand hold, the time she washed his wound and bandaged it...He was lost in beautiful memories.
On the other side, Naina was in corridor near the library when she felt the wind change, as if a special breeze blew around her. Something was different and her instincts told her it was Sameer. But how could it be possible, he was in Delhi. But she had to check. She went around the school searching, looking for him, all the possible places, library, classroom, corridors, playground, and finally, the water tap. Sameer saw her approaching and immediately hid behind a pillar. He saw Naina's eyes frantically looking around and knew she was searching for him, they both had this uncanny ability to sense each other's presence. So, now, it was even more difficult to hide from her, but he would have to do it and stay away.
Naina went to the water tap and touched the same tap, from which Sameer drank water a few minutes ago. She could feel him close, he saw that flicker of her eyes, but she couldn't see him. He was hidden. Just then Swati came to call her.
Swati: Naina, chal na, sab bula rahe hai, hamare batch ki group photo lenewale hai.
Naina was reluctant to go and was still scanning the area.
Swati was trying to pull her towards the photo area: Naina, kya hua? Chal na...kise dhoondh rahi hai?
Naina: Sameer ko.
Swati: Sameer ko? Par woh toh Delhi mein hai na? yahan kaise aayega?
Naina: Pataa nahi, mujhe aisa laga ki woh yahi hai?
Swati smiled and teased Naina: Arre meri Prem ki deewani, tujhe toh har jagah har waqt apna Prem hi dikhta hai! Woh Delhi mein hai...ab chal, sab photo ke liye intezaar kar rahe hai.
Naina walked away with Swati but kept looking backwards hoping to catch a glimpse of Sameer, magically. But he was firm and did not come out of hiding. When they reached the photo spot,
MP: Arre Bhabhi, kahan reh gayi thi? Kabse dhoondh rahe hai...
Swati: Yeh toh hamesha ki tarah Prem ko dhoondh rahi thi?
Munna's eyes rounded in surprise and brows cocked: Hainn...Prem yani Sameer? Par Sameer toh Delhi mein hai na? Kya usne letter mein likha tha ki woh aanewala hai?
Naina: Nahi, likha toh nahi, par na jaane kyon mujhe mehsoos ho raha hai ki woh aas paas hi hai...
Pandit: Aisa ho hi nahi sakta Bhabhi ki Sameer Ahmedabad aaye aur humse aur tumse na mile...Lagta hai aaj tum use jyaada miss kar rahi ho isiliye aisa lag raha hoga... tum thehro, iska ilaaj hai hamare paas. He gestured Munna to come along.
Few moments later, they brought a cut-out of Sameer and placed in between them for the photo such that he would be right behind Naina.
Rakesh: Aiye Rahu Ketu...yeh ameerzaade ki tasveer kyon lagayi hai?
Pandit: Sir, Sameer bhi toh hamare batch ka hissa tha na, aaj kuch karanon ki wajah se, woh hamare farewell mein nahi hai, pas yeh tasveer uske bina adhoori hai...woh hamara best friend aur hamare batch ki jaan hai!
Princi: Sahi kaha tumne...Rakesh ji, rehne dijiye... aaj bachchon ka aakhri din hai, unhe achchi yaadon ke saath vida karna hai!
Then they posed for a group pic. Naina had happy tears seeing that Sameer was there all along, even if absent physically. But she didn't know that he was hiding a few feet away and watched how much he was loved by his batch, best friends and Naina. It was really hard to resist to go and hug them all. He knew each would be delighted to see him there and back in Ahmedabad for good, and most of all Naina, but he couldn't take the risk of putting her in any danger. And so, he stayed put but still became a part of the farewell.
Few moments later, before anyone noticed him, he left from there with a heavy heart and teary eyes, thinking that this might be the last time he would see any of them, though he didn't know that destiny had different plans; Naina had already felt a melancholy settling around her when he was leaving and she knew, something was wrong with Sameer for sure. She could feel it in her gut.
Later he reached Nanu's house:
Ramdhari was very happy to see him. He had kept the house impeccable. More so, his and Nanu's rooms were just as they were when either left. Nothing was out of place, just clean and pristine.
Ramdhari: Achcha hua bhaiyya aap aa gaye! Malik aur aapke jane ke baad toh iss ghar ki aatma hi chali gayi. Par ab aap aa gaye hai na, toh sab theek hoga, malik ki aatma bhi khush hongi!
He took Sameer's luggage inside with moist eyes but happiness exuding.
Sameer stepped in the house but it felt empty without Nanu. All the happy memories came flooding back, since childhood, this was the only place he called home, it was here he came for vacations rather than visiting his mom in Delhi. His Nanu was his best friend, guide, teacher, mother and Nanu! How he missed him in this house? It was going to be painful to live here without him. He went to his Nanu's room, touched his things, remembering him fondly and finally hugged his photo and cried.
He dreaded going to his own room where he had seen his Nanu lying unconscious on the floor and his world had come crumbling around him. Finally, when the tears dried, he got up and moved towards the washroom to wash his face and noticed his picture missing from a frame by the study table. He called Ramdhari.
Sameer: Ramdhari, yahan meri ek photo hua karti thi na? kahan gayi?
Ramdhari: Bhaiyaa, woh aapke Delhi jane ke agle din dou didi aayi thi, naam toh nahi bataya, par jab meine kahan ki aap shayad hamesha ke liye Delhi chale gaye, toh ek didi bahut fut futkar rone lagi...mein unke liye paani lane gaya, wapas aaya, toh didi aur photo dono nahi the! baaki sab kuch apni jagah par tha, aur unhone aapke school ka uniform pehna tha, toh mujhe laga koi dost hogi! Waise Munna Pandit thode thode din mein aate rehte hai...aapke kamre mein baithte hai, aapki cheezon ko dekhte hai, aapko bahut yaad karte hai!
Sameer had a fresh bout of tears that he was hiding from his most favorite people in the world. Naina had taken his photo with her and Munna Pandit still visited this house. They loved him so deeply and now he had to stay from them, but he knew he had to do that for their well-being.
Sameer: Dekho Ramdhari, kisiko pataa nahi chalna chahiye ki mein yahan Ahmedabad wapas aa gaya hoon! Agar Munna Pandit aaye ya kisi ka phone aaye, toh keh dena ki mein Delhi mein hoon!
Ramdhari was confused: Par bhaiyaa, woh toh aapke sabse achche dost hai na? unhe kyon nahi batana chahte?
Sameer: Buss nahi bata sakta...tujhe baad mein samjhaunga...
Ramdhari shook his head in confusion and left. Then, Sam called his mom to inform that he reached home and was fine.
Vishakha: Mein kabse intezaar kar rahi thi tumhare phone ka...fir yaad aaya ki Ahmedabd pahuchte hi tum apne doston se milne chale gaye honge...woh tumhe dekhkar bahut khush huye honge na?
Sameer had to lie some: Nahi Mummy, mein abhi unse nahi mila...Buss thodi der pehle hi ghar aaya hoon...unse baad mein milonga.
Vishakha: Achcha? Somewhat confused and suspecting if all was ok with Sameer. Mujhe toh laga tum wahan pahuchkar sabse pehle MP se hi miloge, woh toh tumhare best friends hai na? Sab theek toh hai na Sameer?
Sameer: Haan Mummy, sab theek hai. Aap fikr mat karo...mein unse jaldi miloonga, pehle kuch badawala surprise toh plan kar loon...aakhir itne dinon baad mil rahe hai!
Vishakha was relieved that Sameer was being playful, his usual self. He asked about his siblings and hung up after few minutes as they weren't home yet.
Over the next few days, Sameer went around finding about colleges and filled the form for the most inconspicuous colleges to study for his graduation as it was a high chance that Naina, MP, and his school friends would try to take admissions in the best colleges hierarchically. He also had to think about Nanu's business of which, he knew nothing much. But all the while his mind and heart were occupied with Naina, he couldn't stop himself from going near her. He would visit her colony sometimes during odd hours of the day, just to feel her close and sometimes spot her in the market at her usual pani-puri stall with Preeti. He also went to the temple, every Monday to catch a glimpse of her, but always made sure, she never spotted him.
On the other hand, even Naina, always felt him around, a tingling sensation on her neck as if someone was watching her, how much ever she tried, she couldn't shake away that feeling of his proximity. Something was amiss. Even his letters seemed very vague, there were no specific replies if she asked anything or discussed or told him something. It was always the same general sentence of well being and busy with studies and adjusting with family. Though it was Sameer's handwriting, she felt as if they didn't come from his heart, there were no more endearments as previously, like meri Naina, dear Naina, pyari Naina, tumhara Sameer, etc. He never called these days and when she asked about it in the letters, there was no reply to the question as if he had not even read it. She also tried calling a couple of times, but each time Amrita would tell her that he was not at home, which was unlike Sameer. He also didn't do the radio program anymore, so there was no way she could hear his voice or feel close to him. She had full-faith in him and his love that there couldn't be anyone else, nor he would have stopped loving her, but there was something definitely wrong with him.
One day she was returning from the market at her usual hour after running errands for tayiji, when again she felt the same sensations and turned back. Sameer was following her but she could not spot him and collided with MP.
Munna: Arre Bhabhi, aakhein aage dekhne ke liye hoti hai...peeche kise dhoondh rahi thi? Seeing the trio together, Sameer had to flee before being discovered.
Naina: Munna, Pandit...kuch toh gadbad hai Sameer ke saath. Bahut din se aise lag raha hai ki Sameer aas paas hai par nazar nahi aata, ya fir uske saath kuch hua hai, isliye mujhe itni bechaini hoti rehti hai...na woh theek se letters ka jawab deta hai, buss kaisi ho, mein theek hoon, padhayi mein busy hoon aur na hi phone karta hai. mein phone karti hoon tab kabhi phone par nahi aata...Zaroor koi baat hai. Meine yahan ke ghar par phone kiya tha, par mujhe bataya gaya ki woh Delhi mein hai. Meine socha directly uske Delhiwale ghar par phone karti hoon, par na jaane uski family kya sochegi! Mein nahi chahti ki meri waja se use koi pareshani ho, isliye tum log please pataa karo Sameer ka aur mujhe jaldi se batao.
MP seeing her restlessness assured her: Bhabhi tum chinta mat karo, hum Sameer ka pataa laga lenge, woh theek hoga, bahut din se hamari bhi baat nahi hui hai, toh hum directly uske Delhiwale ghar par phone kar lenge. Aur use daatenge ki tumse baat kar le...
After she left, MP came to Munna's house, as now he had phone with STD. They called at his place in Delhi. Luckily Vishakha picked the call.
Munna: Mausi Namaste. Mein Munna, Ahmedabad se, Sameer ka dost! Aap kaisi hai?
Vishakha: Mein theek hoon beta, tum log kaise ho? Ab toh bada mazaa aa raha hoga na...Sameer ke aa jane se?
Munna: Kya... Sameer wapas aa gaya? Matlab woh Ahmedabad mein hai?
Now it was Vishakha's turn to be surprised: Haan, Sameer ko Ahemdabad aaye toh kuch din ho chuke hai...Woh ab tak tum logon se mila nahi? Usne kahan tha woh koi surprise dena chata hai...par aisa kaisa surprise hai, jo ab tak tumse nahi mila?
Munna now sensing the worry in her voice said to calm her down: Oho Mausi... Sameer ne pakka kuch toh bahut bada surprise socha hoga...sab doston ke liye... isliiye aankh micholi khel raha hai... aap fikr mat karo, hum abhi jaake uske kaan kheechte hai! Aap chinta mat karo...hum hai na uska khayal rakhne ke liye!
Vishakha was happy that the trio would he together now and there would someone who worried and cared about Sameer, may be much more than her!
Munna hung up and turned to Pandit: Yaar Ponga Pandit, mamla kuch toh gadbad hai...mausi keh rahi hai, Sameer bahut dinon se Ahmedabad mein hai. Fir humse mila kyon nahi, nahi hum phone kiya! Aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta ki Sameer yahan ho aur hume na bataye ya Naina se na mile...aur shayad mausi ko bhi hume batane se mana kar rakha hai...koi toh baat hai!
Pandit: Haan chenu, Naina farewell ke din bhi bol rahi thi ki use laga ki Sameer hai, aaj fir usne kahan ki Sameer yahi hai...Sameer ke baare mein Naina ke antenna bahut tez hai...zaroor kuch hua hai jo Sameer humse aur Naina se chupa raha hai...Pataa karna padega! Chal uske ghar chalte hai...wahi se maloom hoga...
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Fantastic story. Feeling very bad for Sameer. Hoping that his friends will bring him out of his depression very soon.
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Very nice update! Waiting for the Samaina Milan now!!
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Very nice update. Love the concern the friends have for Sameer. Now its time for them to get Sameer out of hos depression. Thank you for the pm and eagerly awaiting the next part.
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Can't wait for the next part, described the emotions and bonds between them so beautifully.

The friends visiting sameer's place even if he wasn't there just to remember the memories with him. And naina feeling the restlessness about sameer instinctively. A very well written piece. Good going dear, please keep writing.

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Lovely update love the concern mundit have for sameer looking forward for the next update update soon
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Dearies, this is a short part but I wanted all of Samaina in one...so read this and enjoy...next part is on the way too!

Part 4
Both hurried out and reached Sameer's place. Ramdhari opened the door and said as taught that Sameer was in Delhi.
Munna: Haan haan, hume pataa hai, hum toh bus bahut din se aaye nahi the, toh socha Sameer ke ghar chalte hai, hamesha ki tarah thodi der uske kamre mein baithenge fir chale jaayenge.
Ramdhari tried to stop them, but MP jostled their way inside, already suspecting that Ramdhari was not his usual welcoming self. The moment they entered Sameer's room, they were shocked to the core. Sameer was sitting on the bed, lost in thoughts, eyes teary and an air of melancholy surrounding him. The commotion at his door jarred him out of his reverie...Ramdhari came running behind MP.
Ramdhari: Bhaiya, meine inhe rokne ki koshish ki, par yeh nahi mane, seedha andar aa gaye.
Sameer: Koi baat nahi. Tum jao! He got up from the bed and stood facing them.
MP: Astonished, shocked, angry, but first very happy to finally see their best friend back. Toh tu sach mein Ahmedabab mein hai and they hugged him.
Sameer did not embrace them and the earlier warmth in the trio hug was missing. After the initial happiness wore off, MP took to their angry mode.
Munna: Toh tu sach mein yahan hai? Kitne din se? Aur aane ke baad humse mila kyon nahi? Naina se bhi nahi mila, kyon?
Sameer: Mein buss kisise nahi milna chahta, tum log bhi jao yahan se! Aur Naina ko batane ki zaroorat nahi hai ki mein yahan hoon...
Pandit: Use batane ki zaroorat nahi hai, use toh waise hi pataa chal jaata hai. Tujhe achchi tarah pata hai ki Naina ko teri kitni fikr rehti hai, tere baare mein uske antenna apne aap kaam karne lagte hai.
Sameer: Woh jo bhi ho, mein Naina ki samne nahi aana chahta, buss...aur tum log bhi use nahi batatoge aur mujhse bhi nahi miloge.
Saying this he turned away, as he could not meet the penetrating gaze of his friends.
Munna held his elbow and jerked him back: Hua kya hai Sameer? Naina bahut din se bol rahi thi ki tujhe aas paas mehsoos karti hai, par hume laga woh tujhe bahut miss kar rahi hogi...fir aaj humne Mausi se bhi baat ki aur pataa chala, tu bahut dinon se yahan hai aur ab yahi rahega. Unhe bhi ashcharya hua ki tu ab tak hum se nahi mila. Unhe toh meine taal diya, par tu bataa, hum sabse chup kyon raha hai? Ramdhari bhi hume andar aane se rok raha tha. Isse pehle toh tu jab Delhi mein tha, hum kayi baar aaye hai, woh hamesha khush hota tha, aaj roka kyon?
Sameer averted his gaze and stayed silent.
Pandit came in front of him: Muh ferne se kuch nahi hoga Sameer. Tujhe batana padega ki aisa kya hua hai ki tu humse aur Naina se milna nahi chahta? Kya Delhi jaakar itni rayisiyat chadh gayi ki ab yeh gareeb dost khatakte hai tujhe? Sharam aati hai tujhe hume apna dost kehne mein? Aur Naina? Haan, woh bhi toh ek saadharan parivaar ki ladki hai, koi apsara jaisi bhi nahi dikhti...toh tujhe Delhi mein koi fataka type raees ladki pasand aa gayi hogi na? Ab hum jaise chote logon se tujhe rishta thode hi rakhna hoga? Theek hai ameer Sameer Maheshwari, yeh gareeb dost ab tujhe pareshan nahi karenge, and they started to go away.
Sameer couldn't bear that his friends belittled themselves so much as he refused to talk to them. He stopped them and hugged them tight. Yaaron, Sameer agar ameer hai toh tum jaise doston ki dosti ki wajah se, Naina ke pyaar ki wajah se, warna mujh jaisa badnaseeb aur manhoos toh shayad ki koi aur hoga duniya mein.
Munna: Yeh kya bol raha tu Sameer?
Sameer then explained what had happened in Delhi and how he was made to realize that he was an unlucky child, who lost his father, Nanu, and how his mom had taken severely ill. If he and Rohan had not cared for her vigilantly, he might have lost her too! Now he couldn't afford to lose his Naina. She was always on the receiving end of troubles due to him. At least she would be spared that and stay safe and alive if he wasn't around her.
After Sameer finished his rant, MP looked at each other and a second later burst out laughing.
Sameer was amused that he was taking such a serious decision of his life and here his friends were fooling. Finally, after they controlled their mirth, they patted his shoulder.
Pandit: Mast hai Sameer! Humne toh suna tha ki Naina achchi kahaniyan likhti hai, par lagta hai chithityan aur kavitaein likhte likhte, tu bhi kahaniyan likhne laga hai...waise toh aisi kahani ka shirshak hona chahiye, "Saas Peedit Bahu, par tere mamle mein iska naya shirshak hoga, "Dadi Peedit Pota and they chortled again.
Munna: Arre Sameer, teri dadi ek number ki chalu aur chudail type aurat hai, maaf karna, kisi bade ke baare mein aisa bol raha hoon, par yahi sach hai...unhone toh tujhe taane marne mein Naina ki tayiji aur tere sasurji ko bhi peeche chod diya. Chal ab yeh bakwas bandh kar aur chalke Naina se mil le.
Pandit: Haan Sameer, farewell ke din se aaj tak bechain hai, use baar baar lagta hai ki tujhe koi pareshani hai. Preeti ne bataya tha, na who theek se kha paati hai, na so paati hai...bahut fikr karti hai kyonki tune dhang se chitthi bhi nahi likhi.
MP started to tug him to go to Naina, but Sameer removed his hold from them.
Sameer: Nahi MP, mein Naina se nahi milonga. Mein nahi chahta ki mere manhoos saaye ki wajah se use kuch bhi ho, aur tum logon ko bhi mujhse durr rehna chahiye.
Munna: Dekh Sameer, tera bahut ho raha ab, chup chap hamare saath chal. Yeh bakwas khatam kar aur Naina se mil. Kitni dukhi hai, tere liye kitni pareshan hai! Tu uske saath aisa kaise kar sakta hai? Kitna pyar karti hai tujhse...Kaisi haalat ho gayi hai bechari ki tere ghum mein!
Sameer: Nahi, meine taiy kar liya hai mein Naina se nahi milonga, aaj woh dukhi hai, par dheere dheere mujhe bhool jayegi, fir khush rahegi.
Munna: Tu pagal hai agar tujhe lagta hai ki Naina tujhe bhool jaayegi. Aur usine humse kaha tha tera pataa lagane ke liye. Jab poochegi toh hum kya batayenge use? Teri yeh manhoosiyat ki kahani? Aur bata bhi denge toh kya woh tujhe chod degi?
Sameer: Nahi chodegi, janta hoon, isiliye tum log use kuch nahi bataoge. Koi bhi bahana bana dena.
Pandit: Sameer yeh bahut galat hai, hum Naina se jhooth nahi bol sakte...aur waise bhi kabhi na kabhi use pataa chal hi jaayega. Tu galat kar raha hai, iss sab bakwas ki wajah se uska dil dukhakar. Hum aisa nahi hone denge, abhi jaakar use sab kuch sach batayenge. Fir wahi tujhe theek karegi.
MP started to go but Sameer immediately held their hands and placed on his head. Tum logon ko meri kasam hai, tum Naina ko kuch nahi bataoge aur yeh bhi nahi ki mein yahan hoon.
Munna: Yaar Sameer yeh kya kar diya? Hume apni Ksam de di...tu bahut galat kar raha hai...Theek hai, hum Naina ko nahi batayenge, par tu dekh lena, uska pyar itna gehra hai ki ek din use khud hi pataa chal jaayega, tab hum dekhte hai ki tu kaise bhaagta hai apne pyar se?
They were disheartened that Sameer could not see beyond Dadi's manipulation. But for the moment they couldn't do anything. They had to find a way to instill some sense into his head before he broke Naina's heart completely. But now they had to think what to tell Naina. She would be waiting for news of Sameer.
Later in evening Naina called Munna:
Naina: Hello Munna, kuch pataa chala? Baat hui Sameer se? Kaisa hai who? Kya hua hai use?
Munna didn't like it but had to lie for now: Nahi Naina, humne baat karne ki koshish ki, par woh ghar par nahi tha. Tum chinta mat karo, hum fir koshish karenge.
Both decided that Sameer had to come around before Naina suspected something.
Over the next few days, they avoided meeting her and on phone also tried to make excuses about being able to get through Sameer. One day they were caught outside a college after submitting their application forms.
Naina: MP, kya hua Sameer se baat hui? Kabse koshish kar rahe ho? Kahi woh sach mein toh yahan nahi hai? Uske ghar jaake dekho na...
Pandit tried to divert the conversation: Arre Naina, hum toh pehle hi Sameer ke ghar jaake aaye hai, woh yahan nahi aaya, agar aata toh hume pataa nahi chalta? Woh Delhi mein hi hai, buss baat nahi ho paa rahi hai, and he averted his gaze.
Naina suspected something, MP were not their cheerful self. They usually made all efforts to bring a smile on her face whenever she was sad remembering Sameer, but right now, their own smiles had faded, and it seemed they put an effort to try to convince her that he was ok. But she kept it to herself and walked away in dismay.
Munna: Yaar Pandit, Naina se kab tak jhooth bolenge? Hum kabse koshish kar rahe hai, Sameer ko samjhane ki, par uske dimmag mein dadi ne bhusa bhar diya hai jo saaf hone ka naam hi nahi le raha hai!
Pandit: Yaar kisi tarah bhagwan inn dono ko ek baar amne saamne le aaye toh sab kuch apne aap thik ho jaayega. Naina ko samne dekhkar Sameer khud ko rok nahi paayega, woh chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le, Naina se durr nahi reh payega.
Munna also thought the same that some divine intervention was now indispensable.
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Part-3

Amazing update dear.. Loved it!! 👍🏼

It was a little emotional part to read.. 

Naina sensed him, and she felt that he is around to her.. 😃

Finally, both of them came to know his whereabouts.. 😃

Going to read next part.. Thanks for the PM dear

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Thanks for the lovely quick update dear! Weekend is feeling too dull and looong...