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Posted: 5 years ago
Dearies... Since all of us have different perspectives about Vishakha sending Sam back, I thought to pen my own idea here. Kaash, aisa hota! Hope you guys like this concept. For now, it's a TS.
This story will begin from when Vishakha took slightly ill. I haven't watched the episodes recently, but since the concept is slightly different, it wouldn't matter.
Part 1
Bobby: Vishakha, mujhe do din ke liye Chandigarh jaana hai ek deal final karni hai. Client London chala jaaye usse pehle personally milna hoga. Mummy ko ek party mein Chattarpur chodke wahi se nikal jaunga. Car aur driver mein le ja raha hoon, agar tumhe kahi jana ho toh Keshav se kehkar taxi bulva lena.
Vishakha comes coughing slightly: Theek hai, mein aapka saaman pack kar deti hoon.
Bobby hears her coughing: Kya hua Vishakha, tum khans kyon rahi ho? Tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na! and he places his hand on her forehead to check. Arre tumhe toh bukhar hai. Now worry evident in his voice, Tumhe aaram karna chahiye. Pehle kyon nahi bataya? Mein jaana cancel kar deta hoon aur tumhe doctor ke paas le jaata hoon!
Vish: Nahi nahi, iski zarrorat nahi hai. Halki si sardi khaansi hai, mein dawaii lekar aaram kar loongi toh theek ho jaoongi. Aap chinta mat kijiye aur aaram se jaayiiye. She assured him of her well-being.
Bobby: Par vishakha, agar tumhara bukhar badh gaya toh, mummy bhi nahi hai, who bhi Ladies Club ki weekend party ke liye Chattarpur mein hi rahegi. Agar tumhe kisi cheez ki zarrorat huyi toh?
Vish: Aap chinta mat kijiye, agar zaroorat huyi toh doctor ko bula loongi, warna mummyji ko phone kar doongi. Mein theek hoon. Aap please fikr mat kijiye.
Finally, she managed to assure Bobby that she wasn't very sick and would be fine. She helped him pack and an hour later he left with dadi.
Vish: Keshav, bachche aa jaaye toh khana khila dena. Mein thodi der aaram kar leti hoon.
Keshav: Ji memsahib!
Few hours later: Rohan came on bike from his tution, and Sameer returned at the same time from Radio station, picking Deepika up from her classes on his way. It had started to drizzle already and all were starting to get wet.
Rohan addressing Sameer: Achcha hua hum ghar pahuch gaye. Warna iss bin Mausam barsaat mein puri tarah bheeg jaate. Tumhe pataa hai Sameer, Delhi mein jab baarish hoti hai, bahut jyaada hoti hai. Ek baar shuru ho gayi roh tukne ka naam hi nahi leti.
Just then as if to prove him right, big fat drops started to pour down and all three ran inside the house.
Rohan: Mummy, hum aa gaye.
Keshav came from the kitchen: Memsahib so rahi hai. Aap log kapde badal lo, mein khana garam karta hoon!
Sameer: Mummy so rahi hai, iss waqt?
Keshav: Haan, who memsahib ko thodi sardi khansi thi, isliye aaram kar rahi hai.
Rohan: oh! Aur papa aur dadi kahan hai?
Keshav: Ji sahib toh 2-3 din ke liye Chandigarh gaye hai aur malkin weekend party ke liye Chattarpur.
Rohan: Theek hai, tum khana garam karo, hum aate hai!
All three went to their respective rooms to freshen up but Sameer wanted to check on his mom.
Sameer: Rohan, chalke mummy ko uthate hai hamare saath khana khane ke liye and both went to their mom's room.
The door was slightly ajar and they saw Vishakha's sleeping form. She was in a deep sleep. Both entered her room stealthily and switched on a small lamp, which lightened the room but didn't fall on her eyes, disturbing her sleep.
Sameer placed his hand on her forehead and his eyes widened in shock. He immediately called out.
Sameer: Rohan...mummy ko toh bahut tez bukhar hai, the worry evident in his voice.
Rohan came to the bedside and also checked his mom's forehead. It was burning hot. Sameer lightly tugged at Vishakha's shoulder to try and wake her up calling out, Mummmy Mummy...Rohan also called out in a harried tone, but on receiving no response, he seemed to be scared.
Panic started settling on both boys as they were 17 and 18 respectively. Deepika, who was watching this from the door, came running inside and stood beside her brothers.
Deepika: Sameer bhaiya, kya mummy mar gayi?
Sameer was shocked to hear such doomed words from his 9-year-old sister, but being the eldest, he had to control the situation and not show his fear. He consoled his sister who was on the verge of breaking out into tears.
Sameer: Nahi Deepika. Mummy ko kuch nahi hua hai. Unki thodi tabiyat kharab hai na, toh woh so rahi hai...hume unhe disturb nahi karna chahiye...subah tak theek ho jaayegi. Tum ro mat, jao khana khao, aur so jao.
Sameer called Keshav and sent Deepika with him instructing him to feed her and put her to sleep.
Then, with great courage, he checked his mom's pulse and breaths, though it was weak, it was there and he breathed a sigh of relief.
Sameer: Rohan, hume mummy ko turant doctor ke paas le jaana hoga, inki tabiyat bahut kharab hai.
Rohan: Par Sameer, bahar dekho, kitni baarish ho rahi hai! Papa car aur driver lekar gaye hai. Hum mummy ko bike pe toh nahi le ja sakte na. Itni baarish mein taxi bhi nahi milegi aur kahi raaste mein fans gaye toh?
Sameer: Toh fir kisi doctor ko ghar bulana padega. Tumhare paas kisi doctor ka number hai?
Rohan: Haan hamare family doctor hai, mein call karta hoon.
Rohan tried calling a few times but could not reach the doctor. He also tried calling a couple of other doctors in the vicinity but either some were not available or did not answer the phone. After a few attempts, even the phone connection broke down and now the two were left without communication with the outside world. Their next-door neighbors, Khannas were also out of town for the weekend.
Sameer came down hurriedly after a few moments.
Sameer: Kya hua Rohan? Doctor se baat hui? Kab aa rahe hai?
Rohan: Nahi Sameer, ya toh doctor available nahi hai ya toh koi phone nahi utha raha hai. Meine sabko try kar liya. Ab kya karenge? Ab toh phone bhi kharab ho gaya hai ki hum dadi ya papa ko contact kare? Ab kya karenge? Mummy toh aakhein bhi nahi khol rahi hai. Unhe kuch ho gaya toh?
Sameer: He placed a strong hand on Rohan's shoulder and pressed it. Nahi nahi... Mummy ko kuch nahi hoga. Ab jab tak bahar se madad nahi mil jaati, hume hi unka khayal rakhna hoga!
Both boys tried to calm themselves and then decided.
Sammer: Thande paani ki pattiyan karenge toh bukhar neeche laaya ja sakta hai aur thoda soup pilakar, mummy ko Metacin khila dete hai, use bhi bukhar kam hona chahiye! His years of leaving alone in the hostel had taught him to take basic care of himself.
He called Keshav and asked to prepare tomato soup.
Next, they went upstairs and Rohan started doing cold water wraps on her forehead. Sameer checked her temperature, which was 103 and slightly escalating.
Sameer panicked: Rohan, Mummy ko ek sau teen bukhar hai aur aisa lag raha hai ki badh raha hai... agar aur badha toh dimaag pe chadh jaayega aur yeh behosh ho jaayengi. Hume ise jaldi neeche lana hoga.
Just then Keshav brought hot tomato soup.
Rohan continued with the cold-water wraps and Sameer propped her up slightly and fed her some soup, blowing on it every time so it was not too hot. Next, he brought a tablet of Metacin, and in a small cup, dissolved it in a minimum amount of water as she might not be able to swallow it in her present state. He made her drink it with a spoon and lastly fed her a spoon of honey syrup to cut down the bitterness.
For the rest of the night, the brothers took turns with cold wraps and checking temperature. Neither slept a wink and stayed vigilant by their mother's side. By early morning, her fever had subsided to almost 100 and she opened her eyes and saw both boys on either side of her with head resting on the headboard. She was so happy to see them together and vaguely remembered them taking care of her last night as a duo. She wanted to get up and hug both of them...Finally, she had managed to build that sibling bond between Sameer and Rohan, who although step-brothers, now actually accepted each other as brothers. She coughed lightly and both awoke with a startle.
Sameer: Mummy... aap theek hai? He immediately placed his hand on her forehead and was satisfied that the fever was much less than the previous night.
Rohan hugged Vishakha: Thank god Mummy aap theek ho...kal raat ko toh mein darr hi gaya tha! Agar Sameer nahi hota toh pata nahi kya hota, mujhe toh samaj hi nahi aa raha tha ki mein kya karu. Sammer ne ek bade bhai ki tarah mujhe aur Deepika ko sambhala.
Sameer: Smiled at Rohan. Both boys hugged their mom.
Rohan: Sameer tum Mummy ke paas raho, mein Keshav ko kuch khane ke liye bolta hoon, bahut bhookh lagi hogi na, aur doctor ko bhi phone try karke aata hoon.
Vishakha was very happy seeing them bond so beautifully. Now only if her husband and MIL would accept Sameer whole-heartedly, she would have her family complete.
An hour later:
Bobby walked in the house tailed by his mom calling out Vishakha.
Keshav informed them that Vishakha had taken severely ill last night and a doctor was checking her right now.
Bobby and his mom hurried to his room and saw the doctor checking her. The siblings were patiently waiting just near the threshold.
Bobby hurried to the bedside: Vishaka, kya hua tumhe? Tum theek toh ho?
Doctor: Chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai...Viral infection lag raha hai...Meine check karke dawaiyan likh di hai, aap samay par dete rahiye aur meine etihaat ke liye blood sample le liya hai. Kal tak report aa jayegi.
Bobby thanked the doctor and asked Keshav to seen him out. Then he tuned back to Vishakha: Tumhari tabiyat itni kharab ho gayi...agar kuch ho jaata toh!
Vishakha: Mein bilkul theek hooon, aap pareshan mat hoyiye...Sameer aur Rohan the na mere saath, unhone bahut khayal rakha mera, raat bhar ek palak nahi jhapkayi...
Bobby acknowledged both the boys...though he didn't think of Sameer much, he couldn't deny that after all he was Vishakha's first-born and how much ever strained relationship they shared, he would not not care for his mother.
Vishakha: Par aap aur Mummyji itni jaldi kaise wapas aa gaye?
Bobby: Arre hum toh pahuch hi nahi paaye, mushkil se Chattarpur pahuch rahe the ki bahut tez baarish shuru ho gayi aur traffic mein fans gaye...Subah raasta saaf hote hi wapas aa gaye.
Dadi: Vishakha tum aaram karo, Bobby, tum bhi fresh ho jao! Rohan, tumhare school ka waqt ho gaya hai...jao tayyar ho jao!
Rohan: Nahi Dadi, aaj mein kahi nahi ja raha...aaj yahi mummy ke paas rahoonga!
Dadi was furious that slowly her hold on her household was loosening ever since Sameer came. She had to think something to remove him from here at the earliest. She had also noticed that Bobby had started softening towards Sameer too and if he actually transferred a third part of their shares to Sameer, then that would mean, a piece of less pie for Rohan and Deepika, which she couldn't allow. What she failed to understand that the siblings had started to bond and there was no feeling of "step amongst them. She wickedly pushed her nakli hair behind her ear and devised an evil plan.
Both boys had taken turns to sit beside their mom whole day to make sure she ate and took her medicines on time. She was still too weak to get out of her room or do anything else by herself. Vishakha was overwhelmed by how much they cared for her, specially Sameer. He did not hold any grudge that she had failed him all these years as a mother, in sickness and health, in happy times or sorrow. Today he was there for her, a rock/solid support and had also assumed the role of the eldest brother without even realizing it. He was a strong, spirited, kind-hearted boy, thanks to her father's upbringing and she remembered her promise to her dying father that she would always stand by him and always support him.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice start dear.. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Loved the bonding between Sameer and Rohan ๐Ÿ˜Š
Excited about what will happen next.. 
Update soon..
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update. Wish we could have seen more of Sameer-Rohan in the show though..
Cant wait for the next part.
Thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Nice start my dear ..
Vishakha and sameer's equation has changed a lot upside down in Delhi ..
The scenario you put up was really heartwarming ..loved it 
Waiting to read the next part and witness mother son love and sibling bond

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Posted: 5 years ago
This was an extremely touching update dear...I'm very eager to read the next one now...such a beautiful thing to show Sameer take stock of the situation n care for his mom.
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Part 2
Later in evening after everyone had dinner:
Bobby to both boys: Aaj tum log aaram se so jao, kal raat se jaag rahe ho. Ab tumhari mummy pehle se theek hai...mein hoon unke saath.
Both nodded and said: Theek hai, hum mummy ko dekhkar aate hai, fir so jaayenge!
Rohan followed Bobby. While Sameer was about to go with them,
Dadi: Sameer, tum roko! Tum mat jao Vishakha ke paas!
Sameer was angry that how dare she stop him from going to his mother but was confused too.
Dadi: Tumhare aur Vishakha ke liye yahi achcha hai ki tum usse durr raho warna tumahara manhoos saaya padne se na jaane kya ho jaayega!
Sameer: Yeh aap kya bol rahi hai?
Dadi: Bilkul sahi bol rahi hoon, manhoos ho tum, unlucky child... dhyan se socho, jinhe tum duniya mein sabse zyaada pyar karte ho, kya hota hai unke saath? Ya toh kuch bahut bura ya fir maut? Khud hi socho? Tum chote the, jab tumhare papa ki death ho gayi...Vishakha ne bataya tha mujhe ki tum unse kitna pyar karte the, aur woh mar gaye. Yaad karo, tum apne Nanji ke saath akele the, aur who bhi chal base. Tumhare doston ko bhi tumhari wajah se thappad pada, kitni baatein sunni padi. Aur kal raat, yeh toh shukar manao ki Rohan bhi tumhare saath tha, agar tum Vishakha ke saath akele hote toh shayad kal Vishakha bhi...and she stopped knowing she had already seeded the self-loathing seeds in the mind of an 18-year-old.
Vishakha had heard this from the ajar door and came out finally, walking haggardly towards Sameer. Sameer caught her but she put her hand out and steadied herself with the help of the sofa.
Vishakha: Buss kijiye Mummyji...yeh kya anab shanab bole ja rahi hai? Yeh kya manhoos manhoos laga rakh hai? Bachcha hai Sameer!
Dadi: Par manhoos bachcha hai...pehle uske papa, fir tumhare papa guzar gaye...ab tumahri baari ho sakti thi Vishakha!
Vishakha: Buss mummyji! Apne Sameer ke khilaf mein ek bhi aur bakwas baat nahi sunna chahti! Uske papa ki death accident mein hui thi, kisine signal toda aur uski laparwah driving ki wajah se, usme Sameer ki galati kaise hui? Mere Papa ko kaafi samay se blood pressure ki problem thi, unhe heart attack aaya apni umar ki wajah se, usme Sameer ki galati kaise hui? Aur Sameer toh unhe sahi waqt par hospital lekar gaya tha...isliye kam se kam ek aakhri baar mein apne papa se mil payi, agar woh akele hote, toh na jaane kab tak ghar mein bejan pade rehte? She shuddered at the thought. Aur aap meri baat kar rahi hai na...Doctor ne khud kaha ki woh ek viral infection tha, ab mein theek hoon...aurr kal raat Sameer ne hi sab kuch sambhala, Rohan ne bataya mujhe, ki woh aur Deepika mujhe aise dekhkar kitna darr gaye the, agar Sameer na hota, tab shayad mein mar jaati!
Hearing Vishakha's raised voice, all the members had now come to the hall to know what the commotion was about and why wasn't Vishakha resting?
Aap ko kya lagta hai mummyji, mujhe dikh nahi raha hai, ya mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki Sameer aapki aankh mein kitna khatakta hai! Pehle mein chup thi, yeh sochkar ki abhi who naya hai, pehle kabhi hamare saath nahi raha hai, thoda shararti hai, par dheere dheere sab theek ho jaayega, aap bhi use apna legi! Meine dekha hai, Sameer ab aapse koi badtameezi nahi karta, par aap use pareshan karne ka koi mauka nahi chodti... ab tak bade chote ka lihaaz karte huye mein chup thi... par aaj aapne saari haddein paar kar di... aap khud ma hai, aapko pata hona chahiye ki ek maa ke sabr ka bandh jab toot jaata hai, toh sailaab aa sakta hai!
Dadi: Rohan, Deepika tum log andar jao!
Vishakha: Nahi, koi kahi nahi jaayega, aaj sabko pata chalne dijiye ki iss pyari dadi ke chehre ke peeche ek nirdayi aurat hai jo apne swarth ke liye ek bachche ke mann ke saath khel sakti hai!
Bobby: Vishakha, tum shaant ho jao, yeh sab kya bol rahi ho? Tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai, tum chal kar aaram karo, yeh baatein toh baad mein bhi ho sakti hai na!
Vishakha boomed: Nahi...baad mein nahi, yeh baatein aaj aur abhi hongi! Aap ko jab bolna chahiye tha tab toh chup rahe, ab mujhe bolne dijiye! Jab hamari shaadi huyi, toh aap achchi tarah jaante the ki meri pehli shaadi se ek beta hai, humne aapse kuch bhi nahi chupaya tha! Fir bhi aap apni Mummy ki shart ke samne jhuk gaye ki Sameer iss ghar mein kabhi nahi aayega! Agar papa ne Sameer ki zimmedari lekar mujhe aapse shaadi karne ke liye nahi manaya hota, toh mein Sameer ko kabhi apne se alag nahi karti.
Sameer was stunned to hear this, he had never fathomed how his mom could have abandoned him for a new family.
Vishakha: Ek bin maa ke bachche ki ma banne ke liye, meine apne bete ko khud se durr kar diya! Aap hamesha kehte hai na ki Sameer laparwah hai, badtameez hai, toh agar aisa hai toh yeh Sameer ki nahi, meri galati hai. Rohan ki ma bante bante mein Sameer ki ma banna bhool gayi! Arre kya ho jata agar woh iss ghhar mein pehle se rehta, kya aap ko sach mein laga tha ki mein sage aur satele mein fark karti? Sameer ko Rohan se zyaada pyar karti? Arre kya ho jaata agar aap Sameer ko uske birthday par shares mein teesra hissa de dete? Mere liye toh saare bachche ek barabar hai...sage aur sautele mein bhed bhaav toh aap logon ne kiya hai...
Bobby was ashamed and embarrassed that years ago he should have tried to understand Vishakha's point of view as a mother too, not only his mom who instilled in him that she would treat Rohan as a step-son if ever Sameer came to live with them and that might be the root cause of some issues in his family.
Vishakha continued to vent out all her pent up anger and frustration: Par ab buss...bahut chup reh liya meine aur bahut seh liya mere Sameer ne! Iss ghar ke prati aur aapke bachchon ke taraf meine bahut farz nibha liya, aur ab waqt aa gaya hai ki mein apni 14 saal pehle ki gayi galati ko sudharu...Rohan aur Deepika ki ma tou mein hamesha rahoongi, she gave a loving look towards her two Somani children, but turning to Sameer, she said "par ab mujhe Sameer ki ma banna hai. Mummyji Sameer ko kabhi nahi apnayengi, roz use bahar nikalne ki koshish karti rahengi...isliye meine taiy kiya hai ki Sameer aur mein khud hi yeh ghar chodke chale jaayenge, Ahmedabad, wahan jo hamesha se Sameer ka aslli ghar raha hai!
Everyone was flabbergasted, but most Sameer... He could not believe what his mother had just said... once upon a time she had left him for a new life, new family and today she was ready to give up everything once again just to be with him, be his mom... Did she actually love him so much? She had seen how much she loved and adored her other two children. Deepika was still his blood sister, but Rohan was only a Somani, but his mom really cared and loved him as her own...
He started to say something but Vishakha's words halted him: Chalo Sameer, apna saaman pack karo, hum subah hote hi Ahmedabad ki pehle flight lenge! Jao...
Bobby and Rohan were too stunned to say anything at all...
Deepika: Rohan bhaiya, mummy hume chodke chali jaayengi? Rohan bent down and hugged his little sister. The look in their eyes wrenched Sameer's gut, though he was very young, he had vivid memories of how he held on to his mom, when she was leaving him in a hostel at a tender age of 4-5 years. Only Nanaji used to visit him at regular intervals and be there for him whenever needed. Now, given the current situation in this family, may he could understand some why his mom did what she did. She was young and alone with a child and mostly did what others told her to, may be it wasn't her fault completely...but today may be she was not right again... He had to talk to her...
With a firm resolve he came to Vishakha's room, she was trying to pack her belongings painstakingly.
Sameer: Mummy, aapse baat karni hai. He held her hand and made her sit on the bed. Mummy, yeh aap kya kar rahi hai? Aap mere liya apna ghar aur parivaar chod rahi hai?
Vishakha: Mere parivaar mein tum sabse ahem ho Sameer, aur jis ghar mein tumhari jagah nahi, wahan ab mein bhi nahi reh sakti. Ab mein tumhe aur yahan rakhkar, itna dukhi nahi dekh sakti. Papa se vaada kiya tha, ki hamesha tumhara khayal rakhoongi, tumahre chehre ki hansi ko hamesha sambhalke rakhoongi... par meine dekha hai, jabse tum yahan aaye ho, shayad hi kabhi hanse ho! Tum Ahmedabad mein kitne khush rehte the, papa ke paas, apne doston ke saath...
MP and Naina's memories flooded his mind and he knew his mom was right, though he had learnt to adjust in Delhi, a part of him always yearned to be back to his real family...
Sameer: Mummy...yeh sach hai, ki mein Ahmedabd mein zyada khush hoon aur agar aap chahti hai ki mein khush rahoo, toh mein Ahmedabad wapas chala jaata hoon, par aap mere saath nahi aayengi!
Vishakha started to say something but Sameer stopped her.
Sameer: Mummy, agar aaj aap mere saath gayi toh aap fir se wahi galati daurayengi jo aapne 14 saal pehle ki thi. Uss waqt aapne Roahn ke liye mujhe chod diya tha, aaj aap mere liye Rohan aur Deepika ko chod rahi hai...Mummy ke hote hue, bina mummy ke rehna pade, toh kaisa lagta hai, mujhe pataa hai...Mein nahi chahta, ki un donon ko bhi meri tarah aapke bina rehna pade.
Rohan was hearing this from the doorway and he couldn't stop himself. He came in and hugged Sameer and cried on his shoulder...He thanked god that he had never misjudged him despite Dadi's repeated accusations on his upbringing and mannerisms.
Sameer too hugged him, and then, wiped his tears: Mummy, Rohan se mera khoon ka rishta nahi hai, par yeh mera bhai hai. He let go of him and again held his mother's hands. Mummy, mujhe aapke bina rehne ki aadat ho gayi hai... pehle mein sach mein akela tha, par ab aap mere saath ho, Paas nahi huye toh kya hua? Mujhe pataa hai ki jab bhi mujhe aapki zaroorat hogi, aap mera saath dogi. Mujhe hamesha se buss itna hi chahiye tha, ki meri mummy mujhe pyaar kare, mera saath de...He continued light heartedly, swinging one hand on Rohan's shoulder...aur ab toh bonus mein mere paas bhai aur behen bhi hai!
Vishakha: Lovingly caressed his cheek. Kabhi kabhi mein apne aap ko kosti thi, ki tumhe akela chod diya papa ke paas...par ab lagta hai sahi kiya, jaisi parvarish tumhe papa ne di hai, mein bhi nahi de paati...tumhari yeh soch, yeh samajdaari, sab papa ki vajah se hai. Then furrowing her brows, par Sameer, tum akele kaise rahoge? Pehle toh papa the, par ab, uss ghar mein bilkul akele?
Sameer: Aap fikr mat karo! Aapko yaad hai na, Nanaji kya kehte the...Ki Sameer shararti ho sakta hai, gussail ho sakta hai, bhavuk bhi ho sakta hai, par kamzor kabhi nahi ho sakta! Bharosa rakhiye Mummy, aapka Sameer kamzor nahi hai... Jab Nanu ka Ashirwad aur aapka pyar mere saath hai, toh na hi mein akela hoon aur na hi kamzor.
Finally satisfied with his assurance, Vishakha decided something: Theek hai Sameer! Mujhe yakeen hai ki tum sab kuch manage kar loge. Fir ab sahi waqt aa gaya hai, tumhe sabse badi zimmedari dene ka! She went to a drawer and withdrew a few files and handed them to Sameer. Yeh lo Sameer. Tumhare Nanaji ki business se related saari files, unki poperties aur assets ki saari details aur unki vasiyat bhi isme hai. Papa ki will ke mutabik, tumhare 18 ke hote hi, sab kuch tumhara ho chuka hai! Waise toh meine munshiji se kehkar sab kuch yahi mangwa liya tha, yeh sochkar ki jab tak tumhari padhayi puri nahi ho jaati, aur tum apne future ke baare mein decide nahi kar lete, papa ka business tumhare papa sambhalenge. Par ab mujhe lagta hai ki sahi waqt aa gaya ki iska faisla bhi tum khud hi karo...Ahmedabad jao, apna samay lo aur iske baare mein socho. Agar tum yeh business sambhalna chaho, toh mein tumhare saath hoon, agar nahi toh ise bechne mein bhi mein tumhari madad karoongi. Fir unn paison se tum jo karna chaho kar sakte ho!
She got a little emotional: Papa ki aakhri khwahish toh yahi thi ki tum Sameer Maheshwari se Sameer Jaiprakash Maheshwari bano...
Nanu's last words echoed in his ears: Sameer, ab waqt aa gaya hai, zimmedari lene ka, Sameer Maheshwari se Sameer Jaiprakash Maheshwari banne ka!
But this was a huge responsibility and suddenly he felt like he had aged 10 years. How could he ever step into his Nanu's shoes? He always wanted to be his Nanu's chota sa Sameer. His eyes filled reminiscing about his Nanu.
Vishakha hugged him: AB jao, jane ki tayyari karo, tumahri nayi aur achchi zindagi tumhara intezar kar rahi hai. She smiled patted his cheek and blessed him. Then hugged both her boys...some relations were not by blood but by heart and she knew now that her sons had built that foundation.
P.S: This is last part... Let me know if you want me to continue with Sameer's return and Samaina milan!
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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful part dear.. loved it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Vishakha gave a perfect slap to Dadi by her bitter words.. ๐Ÿ‘

Loved the Sameer and Vishakha's conversation..

Please make it three shot.. would love to see Sameer's return and SamAina's Milan.. 

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Posted: 5 years ago
Please add one more shot ...would love to see Sameer's return and SamAina's Milan..
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Posted: 5 years ago
What an emotional update. Had me in tears. 
Vishaka gave dadi what she deserved, and Sameers maturity in thing of his siblings just proves how well he was raised. 
Would love for you to continue this please
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Posted: 5 years ago
Read both the parts at one go...that was absolutely brilliant๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘
I wish they had shown something like this in the show too๐Ÿ˜ƒ
But nevertheless we could get that through your story atleast๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘

Vishakha taking a stand for Sameer was a brilliant scene and later Sameer Vishakha conversation...so heart touching...this is our Sameer who had grown in love and we always praised his character growth...which got lost somewhere at the hands of poor writing in the show๐Ÿ˜ณ

But you were bang on๐Ÿ‘

I want you to continue further and wanna read Samaina meeting too๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thanks for the pm dear๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—