Pyaar ki ek kahani suno (Viditi FF)(COMPLETED) - Page 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
#91
kya se kya ho gaya..😭
aur ye vidyut to..🀬

aur aditi royi kyu shadi ki baat sunke? πŸ˜²
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh shit!!!!! Ab aasli khaani shuru...hogi na...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: loveinshi

kya se kya ho gaya..😭

aur ye vidyut to..🀬

aur aditi royi kyu shadi ki baat sunke? πŸ˜²

Coz tab wo Raja se hate karti thi and Raja uske liye Uske parents k kaatil ka beta tha.
Vidyut pr gussa bacha k rakho aage kaam aayega
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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Oh shit!!!!! Ab aasli khaani shuru...hogi na...

Ab kahani ki ending aa rahi hai πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
#95
Oh my mata! Baby girl yeh Kya Kar dhala ab next update jaldi plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
#96
Oh no...yeh sazish to Hume mahngi pad rahi hai...!!!πŸ€”
Yeh Vidyut..maro isse maro😑
Yeh to bata diya ki noor hi Aditi hai yeh nehi baraya ki Raja hi Vikrant hai...
Ab to Raja bhi Aditi k against hai...pata nehi wo kya karegi...
Waiting for next part...please update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitras

Oh my mata! Baby girl yeh Kya Kar dhala ab next update jaldi plz

Abhi aur bhi bohot kuch karne wali hu,wait
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Posted: 6 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Oh no...yeh sazish to Hume mahngi pad rahi hai...!!!πŸ€”

Yeh Vidyut..maro isse maro😑
Yeh to bata diya ki noor hi Aditi hai yeh nehi baraya ki Raja hi Vikrant hai...
Ab to Raja bhi Aditi k against hai...pata nehi wo kya karegi...
Waiting for next part...please update soon

Vidyut pr gussa jara bacha k rakho aage kaam ayega...and usse kya maloom ki Raja hi Vik hai.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Toh ye raha the most awaited chapter. Waise iske baad aap logo ko mujh par bohot gussa ayega. Toh jara maaf karna,mujhe khud badi takleef hui hai yeh likhte hue. Bolna nahi chahiye but hopefully aapko padhte hue bhi utni hi takleef ho.
Chapter-15
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(Next evening)
Aditi: bataiyeye na hum kaha jaa rahe hai?
Raja: sabar rakhiye begum. Bas thodi der aur. Bharosa nahi hai kya hum pr?
Aditi: hai bahot hai
Raja: toh bas fir,intezaar kijiye kuch khaas hai apke liye.
(Abandoned house)
Aditi: ye kya jagah hai?
Raja: yeh bangla Abba huzoor ne Jiah k liye banwaya tha. Chaliye andar.
Aditi: ha
(Ghar k andar Raja usse ek room me le jata hai. Waha Noor ki wahi sab paintings hai jo usne unke honeymoon pr dikhayi thi)
Aditi: ye sab (happily)
Raja(woh uss painting k paass jata hai): ye painting jb maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tha
(Fir wo uss painting ko jala deta hai)
Aditi(shocked): ye kya kr rahe hai aap?
Raja: aur ye wali jb hum aapse market me mile the
(Fir usse bhi aag laga deta hai)
(Ek ek karke sab paintinpaintings ko aag lagane k baad wo last painting jo kapde se dhaki hai uske pass jata hai)
Aditi (now sobbing): yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?
Raja: ye sab toh bekar thi,sach toh ye wali hai,(painting se kapda hat kar) yeh ASP ADITI SHARMA ki painting
(Wo painting Aditi ki wardi me hoti hai)
Aditi: mtlb aapko
Raja: sab pata hai Aditi sharma (in a loud voice)
Aditi(Vik k pass jaake) dekho mai
(But Vikrant usse bohot jor se thappad marta hai aur Aditi door jaake girti hai aur uske muh se bleeding bhi hoti hai)
Aditi: ahhh...
(Aditi uthne ki koshish karti hai pr Raja uske pass ja kr uske baalo se usse pakdta hai aur uske muh me gun daal deta hai)
Raja: tune mere pyaar ka,mere bharose ka mazaak banaya...arre meri Jiah ko mara tune apni asliyat bachane k liye...chiii...pr ni ab tera khel khatam
(Wo gun prepare krta hai goli chalane k liye)
Raja: pr ni tujhe maar bhi toh ni sakta mai saccha pyaar joh kia tha tujhse,teri trh koi natak ni tha woh...
(Wo uske baal bhi chod deta hai aur uske muh se gun nikal leta hai)
Aditi (crying): mujhe maaf kardo ki maine jhoot bola lekin Jiah ko maine nahi maara...meri baat pr vishwaas karo Vikrant
(Raja slapped her again)
Raja: vishwaas ka naam bhi mat le apni zubaan se aur mera naam Raja hai Vikrant ni
Aditi: ni tum Raja nahi Vikrant ho. Vikrant singhal,IPS Arjun singhal k bete
Raja(fir usse baalo se pakad k): chup bilkul chup,mera baap Mansoor Ali khan hai aur mai uska beta Raja,Vikrant mera kal tha ek bura kal
Aditi: aahhh...Tum jisse apna baap keh rahe ho wahi tumhare asli baap ka kaatil hai,Mansoor ne hi mara tha Arjun sir ko,aur tumhari maa ko
(Again slap)
Raja: jhoot fir jhoot
Aditi: nahi mai yeh prove kr sakti hu ki mai jhoot nahi bol rahi...aur agar mai saabit na kar paayi toh (uski gun apne sir pr rakh k) mai tumhare hi saamne tumhari gun se khud ko maar lungi...
(Vikrant apna haath chudata hai aur kone me baith jata hai)
(Raja aur Aditi dono alag alag kone me rote hai)
(Teen ghante baad)
(Old and dirty house)
Vikrant: yeh kiska ghar hai?
Aditi: Singhal house,Arjun Singhal ka ghar. Ao
Vikrant: tumhare paass chabhi hai?
Aditi: nahi pr aur bhi tareeke hai
Vikrant: jaise?
Aditi: tumhari gun
(Ghar k andar)
Aditi: ye Arjun sir ka room hai,ek minute
(Woh almari ka taala tod k usme se ek album nikal ke Vikrant ko dikhati hai)
Vikrant: yeh toh mai hu,mere bachpan ki photos hai yeh,yeh yaha?
Aditi: aao dusre kamre me chale
(Chotu Vik ka room)
Aditi: yeh tumhare mera matlb hai ki Vikrant singhal ka room hai,yaha kuch toh hoga.
(Woh pure room ki talashi leti hai aur usse kuch milta hai)
Aditi: ye dekho ye file,isme Mansoor ka naam hai. Ye toh uske khilaaf ek pakka sabboot hai jaroor isi ki wajah se mara hoga usne Arjun sir aur unki wife ko...
Vikrant: mere maa baap ko maara hai
(Vikrant wahi ghutne ke bal gir jata hai aur rota hai.)
Vikrant: jisse maine bhagwaan mana usi ne mere maa baap ko...
Aditi(uske side me baith k,uske shouldershoulder pr haath rakh k): sambhalo khud ko Vikrant. Tumhari hi tarah usne mere maa papa ko bhi maar dia aur iski saza uss Mansoor ko hum dila k rahenge.
Vikrant (Aditi aage hath jod kr): mujhe maaf kar do maine tum pr hath uthaya,maaf kar do mujhe
Aditi Vikrant ko hug karti hai)
(Aditi ka phone bajta hai)
Aditi: ha joshi bolo...What!!??
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Posted: 6 years ago
It was heart melting chapter baby girl 728 and we all know that slaps were requirement of the chapter