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Chapter-16
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(Mansoor ka room)
(Ammi almaari saaf kar rahi hoti hai ki tabhi)
Ammi: ye kya,Jiah ka locket? Ye yaha kaise aya,sarkaar k kapdo me? Ye toh police ko mila ni tha. Ya Allah kahin Sarkaar ne...
Mansoor: sahi samjhi aap begum
Ammi: sarkaar aap ne apni hi beti ko maar dala,kyu??
Mansoor: apni beti ko nahi uss Raja ki behen ko mara hai maine...
(Flashback)
(Noor's room)
(Suresh sir ka call yaad hai na wahi)
Suresh: hello ha Aditi Arjun Singhal ka case maine khulwa dia hai tumhare kehne pr lekin ab tumhe waha reh k uss bomb blast k alawa Arjun Singhal k murder se jude saboot bhi jama karne hai,sun rahi ho na?
Jiah: hmmm...
Suresh: hmmm? Bs hmmm? Acha chalo ab rakho aur..
(Jiah call cut kar k apne room me ja rahi hoti hai ki tabhi Mansoor ko kisi se baat karte sunti hai)
Mansoor(on call): Ye Aditi sharma kon hai pata lagao aur khatam karo uska kissa,usne Arjun Singhal yani Raja k asli baap ka murder case khulwaya hai. Agar ye case khula toh Raja ko ye maloom ho jayega ki uske maa baap ko maine maara hai. Aur sun us Aditi k baad Noor ko bhi thikane laga,Raja iski wjh se mere hath se nikal raha hai.
Jiah(POV): ni ye Noor ne bhale jhoot bola ho pr bhaijaan isse bohot pyaar karte hai,mai aise kisi ko bhi bhaaijaan ki khushi cheeenne nai dungi. Abhi bhaijaan ko call karti hu.
(Ek ghante baad,jahan jia ki body mili thi)
Mansoor: Jiah
Jiah(shocked): abbu aap? Yaha?
Mansoor: mai toh apne dushmano ki bhi khabar rakhta hu fir kya apni beti ki khabar ni rakhunga? Tujhe pata hai maine hamesha tujhe wo sari chize di hai jo kabhi Raja ko ni mili kyu? Kyunki tu meri sagi beti hai,mera khoon hai. Tera ye locket dua padha banwaya tha maine tere paida hone pr taaki tu humesha surakshit(safe) rahe,kyunki mai apni beti pr ek aanch ni aane dena chahta aur tu hai ki
Jiah: aap ka khoon jaroor hu mai but usse jada mere bhaijan ki behen hu,mai apko unki khushiyo k sath khelne ni dungi. Chahe marna hi kyu na pade iske liye mujhe.
Mansoor: jaisa tu chahe meri bacchi
(Mansoor Jiah k gale se wo locket kheechta hai or fir usse 5-6 goliya maar deta hai)
(Present)
Ammi(shocked,crying and angry): chiii kaise baap ho tum Mansoor Ali apni masoom si bacchi ko maar dala
Mansoor: maine...
(Vikrant ki entry chillate hue)
Vikrant: Mansoor bahar nikal. Meri behen ko maara tune ab nikal bahar aur kar uske bhai ka ssaamna
Mansoor: Aaj tera beta bhi marega
(Drawing room)
Mansoor: Aa gya tu Raja?
Raja: Vikrant Arjun Singhal naam hai mera,Mansoor Ali khaan
Mansoor: acha toh teri ASP biwi ne sab pata laga lia.
Vikrant: kyu mara meri Jiah ko? Arre mai tera saga ni lekin wo toh khoon tha tera,teri apni beti.
(Flashback)
(Singhal house)
Aditi: ha Joshi bolo
Joshi: madam Mansoor ka phone Jiah k khoon wale din usi jagah tha,aur Jiah ko phone band hone k turant baad waha se gaya hai.
Aditi: what? Lekin usne toh kaha tha ki woh uss time navi mumbai me tha,yani usne jhoot bola tha,og God,yani Mansoor ne hi maara Jiah ko.
Vikrant: kya??
(Present)
Mansoor: Aditi sharma bohot nuksaan kia hai tune mera ab tu gyi
(Mansoor Aditi ko maarne ke liye goli chalta hai lekin Ammi saamne aa jati hai aur unhe goli lag jati hai. Aur woh mar jaati hai)
Vikrant: Ammi...Ammi aankhen kholiye,uthiye na
Aditi: Vikrant ammi...ni rahi
Vikrant (super angry): Mansoor...
(Pehle Vikrant Mansoor ko bohot maarta hai aur fir ussi ki gun se saari goliya uski body me daal deta hai)
Aditi: Vikrant ye kya??
Vikrant: Ek rakshas ka ant(end) kar dia. Lekin ab humme yaha se nikalna hoga,Mansoor k aadmi kabhi bhi aa jayenge,chalo.
(20 minutes later,somewhere in Mumbai)
(Viditi in car)
Aditi: Vikrant hum kaha jaa rahe hai?
Vikrant: pata nahi? Lekin tumhe kahi safe jagah chod dunga aur fir chala jaunga
Aditi: kahan?
Vikrant: police ko surrender kar dunga,itne gunaah kiye hai ab unki saza bhoogatne time hai
Aditi: pagal ho gye ho? Aare puri zindagi kaatni padegi jail me. Nahi tum aisa ni kar sakte
Vikrant: Aditi lekin
Aditi: nahi tum aise mujhe chod nahi sakte,jab tumse door jana chahti thi tab toh ekdum chipke rahte the,lekin ab tumhare sath rehna chahti hu toh aise chod k jane ki baat kar rahe ho. Nahi mai tumhe aise nahi jaane dungi,kabhi ni.
Vikrant: maine bohot takleef di hai na tumhe Aditi,maaf kardo
Aditi: nahi tumne toh hamesha mujhe khush rakhne ki koshish ki hai,dukh toh humesha mujhse door rakha hai. 
(Aditi ka phone bajta hai)
Aditi: ha joshi kya hua ab?
Joshi: madam  kisi Vidyut naam k aadmi ne aapke aur Raja mtlb Vikrant k khilaaf saboot dia hai ki aap dono pichle mahine hue bomb blast me shamil hai. Proofs hai bade pakke aur sab ko yakeen bhi ho gya hai,ab puri police force aapke piche padi hai.
Aditi: oh no,ab kya kare?
Joshi: madam aap ko ek address bhejta hu waha aa jayiye,waha koi ni hoga.
Aditi: thik hai
(Viditi Joshi k batayi jgh pahuchte hai)
Vikrant: ye konsi jagah hai?
Aditi: Yeh Shaitaan Chowki hai. 
Vikrant: yaha koi aata nahi?
Aditi: Yeh unsolved cases ka murdaghar hai,joh bhi case solve nahi hota uska yaha antim sanskaar kia jata hai. Ab chalo andar
(Humara favorite Viditi ka desk room)
Aditi: Joshi kya hua hai? Yaha kyu bulaya?
Suresh: usne nahi maine bulaya hai tum dono ko yaha
Aditi(shocked): sir aap yaha? Joshi tumne...
Joshi: sorry madam 
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mujhe ye mansoor pe na pehle hi shaq tha 
end me 2 sec ke liye mujhe laga ke viditi kahin kisi ghar me akele rahenge kuchh din ðŸ˜† par ye to shaitan chauki nikli
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Chalo yeh mansoor to mar gaya..tnk god...
Viditi is now together...She wants to live with him..pyaar jo karti hai...
Yeh Vidyut...yeh pitega...bohot pitega yeh to...
Ab yeh suresh kahan se aa tapka!!! 
Kya hoga ab!!! Can't wait to read more...
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Originally posted by: mitras

Oh my God yeh Kya Kar diya baby girl jaldi update karna

Ha bilkul 
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

mujhe ye mansoor pe na pehle hi shaq tha 

end me 2 sec ke liye mujhe laga ke viditi kahin kisi ghar me akele rahenge kuchh din ðŸ˜† par ye to shaitan chauki nikli

Tumhe pata haina mai shitan chowki se kitna pyaar karti hu 
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Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

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Awww...don't worry jald hi karungi
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Chalo yeh mansoor to mar gaya..tnk god...

Viditi is now together...She wants to live with him..pyaar jo karti hai...
Yeh Vidyut...yeh pitega...bohot pitega yeh to...
Ab yeh suresh kahan se aa tapka!!! 
Kya hoga ab!!! Can't wait to read more...

Ha ab karo Vidyut pr khoob gussa...
Jald hi dungi next part ðŸ˜›
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Chapter-17
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(7 years later)
(Australia)
(House)
Voice: wifie kaha ho yaar?
Voice 2: yaha hu kitchen me Vikrant
Vikrant(back hug dete hue): kya yaar aise subah subah bina mile direct kitchen me mat aaya karo,tum janti ho na aankh khulne k baad sabse pehle mujhe tumhara face dekhna hota hai aur tum ho ki aise mujhe bed pr akele chod k aa gyi 
Aditi(uski taraf turn hote hue): awww...my sweet hubby, raat bhar pyar kar k apka mann ni bhara ki subah subah shuru ho gye? 
Vikrant: tumhe pyaar karne se mera mann kabhi nahi bharta
(Vikrant Aditi ki neck pr ek deep kiss deta hai)
Aditi(moans): ahhh...Vikrant
Vikrant (husky voice): Aditi
Voice: dadda!!! Dadda!! Where are you?
Vikrant: kitchen,Jiah
Jiah: goodie good morning mom and dadda
Viditi: good morning princess
(Dono Jiah k cheeks pr kiss karte hai)
Jiah: dadda I want noodles
Aditi: Jiah,Hindi practice 
Jiah: oh yeah,sorry. Dadda noodles banao na,book lagi hai
Vikrant: sweetheart it's bhook not book. And ha chalo banate hai noodles, but apko meri help karni hogi. Done?
Jiah: done
(Vikrant and Jiah noodles banane me joot jate hai aur Aditi unhe dekhti hai aur beeti baatien yaad karti hai)
(Flashback)
(Shaitan chowki)
Aditi: Joshi tumne?
Suresh: nahi Aditi Joshi ne nahi maine tumhe yaha bulaya hai
Aditi: but sir humne kuch nahi kia,woh Vidyut
Suresh: jhoot bol raha hai,yahi na? Mai janta hu Aditi. Aur isi liye tumhe yaha bulaya hai.
Aditi: mtlb?
Suresh: tum log ye kapde pakdo aur get up kar ke joshi k sath jao,pehle wo tumhe puna chod dega fir waha se do din baad Bangalore jana aur fir ek hafte baad Kolkata aur fir end me ek mahine baad Australia. Tab tk tum dono ka passport mai banwa dunga. Waha tum log apni ek new life shuru karna. And Vikrant Aditi meri beti ki trh hai usse hamesha khush rakhna wrna jaise bhej raha hu waaise hi arrest kar dunga.
Vikrant: sir mai hamesha Aditi ko khush rakhunga,don't worry.
Aditi (teary voice): thanks a lot sir.
Suresh: thanks gairo ko kehte hai apno ko nahi.
(Viditi sab plan k mutabik karte hai aur Australia aake ek nayi zindagi shuru karte hai. Aditi as a Yoga teacher and Vikrant as a Painter. Kuch saalo baad unki ek pyaari si beti hoti hai,jiska naam wo Jiah rakhte hai.)
(Present)
Jiah: mom,chalo na kaate hai
Aditi: Jiu kaate nahi khaate hai
Jiah: yeah right now let's eat
Vikrant: Jiah dadda noodles kaise banate hai
Jiah: joop joop
Vikrant: aur hum kaise khate hai usse?
Jiah: suup suup
Aditi: hahaaahhhaa...
(Jiah noodles leke dining table pr jati hai aur Vikrant Aditi k face pr tension dekhta hai)
Vikrant: Adu kya hua jaan? Preshan kyu ho?
Aditi: Vikrant darr lag raha hai ki kahin kisi ki buri nazar na lag jaye humari khushiyo ko
Vikrant (uske dono gaal pr hath rakh k): Aditi agar kisi ne humari khushiyo pr buri nazar daali toh jiss Raja ko ab bandh k rakha hai usse azad kar dunga. Kisi ko bhi apni iss duniya ko barbaad nahi karne dunga,chahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi kyu na karna pade.
Aditi: isme tumhara sath ASP Aditi bhi degi.
Vikrant: ASP...hmmm kabhi kabhi mujhe Noor ki badi yaad ati hai,uski saadgi aur masumiyat
Aditi: acha? Mr. Vikrant Singhal,ab aaj raat ko bedroom me milo tum,dikhati hu sari masoomiyat aur saadgi ab...
Vikrant: uff ye raat jaldi se aaye,intezaar mushqil hai ab
Aditi: intezaar karo hubby,aur abhi chalke breakfast karo suup suup kar k
Jiah: oho mom n dadda ap log fir romance me lag gye,pehle breakfast to kar lo 
Vikrant: jo hukum mere aaka
Jiah: what? Hukku? Aaka? Dadda easy language please
Vikrant: I mean yes ma'am
(Viditi & unki princess suup suup karke noodles khate hai)
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THE END
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Thanks a lot everyone itne sare support k liye. Ye story mere liye bohot special thi coz maine pehli baar suspense and drame & twists k sath story likhi hai,hopefully sab ko mai ache se apni imagination express kar payi hu.
Thanks Again.