Ishra TS- Ishq ki khwahishon mein Last part on pg 131 on 23/9 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Congrats for new story dear
Amazing prologue 

It seem like Raman is play boy but not seem to also 

He is completely flat 

He wants her to be work with him 

Ishu boss was too much and disgusting ready to do anything for my money and business 

Eagerly waiting to read further

Update soon dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Nice waiting for the storyline to proceed further 
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Interesting prologue
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
Lovely prologue
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Congratulations for new story
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Raman's characterisation didn't sit well with me but I'm waiting for him to grow on me.
I have full faith that this story will be the best you've written because as I perceive the title, "ishq ki khwahishon mein" Raman will transform into a better person ... a person who'll be respectful of women, especially Ishita.

Keep up the good work and Pooja I'm eager to see you introduce more characters to strengthen the narrative. God bless :)

P.S. I need a deeper insight into Ishita's character and personality.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Congratulations on starting a new story ðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Play boy Raman..and smart ishuta..nice 
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Nice prologue Di..
Raman was impressed with Ishita and offered a job in his office..
But she politely asked to give her some time..
Ishita's employer is disgusting ..
How can they use someone for their benefits..
Liked Raman's deal..
Plz update soon..
Thank you..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Interesting ptologue
Update soon