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Posted: 6 years ago

#121

what she faced he can never understand
although he is getting right treatment from his family .
he hurt geet badly
thnx for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#122

Thanks for pm lakshmi..

I am yet to read this..

Will read soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

#123

Finally maan came to know that geet had left...

Now he is feeling guilty after seeing the indifference of shantimaa , nakul and dadima... He forgot abt his pari and started thinking abt geet and her words ... Her words are constantly ringing is his head... He searched her everywhere and a fear surrounded him... For once he never thought abt her pain .. If he faced forced marriage then she also faced it... It could have been easier if he talk face to face with her . But he everytime blamed her.. Now he is realising his doings... But there is a long way to go maan babu 😆

Waitimg for next update eagerly...

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Posted: 6 years ago

#124

Happy valentines day akka 😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hey Varthika...How are you? 😃 Main Aapko kaise bhool sakthi hoon? 😳

You are most welcome to my FF world...🤗

Have read all your comments for all 3 parts...Thanks a lot dear 😳

Yes...here Geet is receiving all his love invisibly as his PARI and she is also at the receiving end because of his blind foldedness...

Will be updating mostly tomorrow.😉

Thank you once again for your lengthy comments dear 😳🤗

Awee... Glad that u do remember me 😊

waiting... 😊

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#126

Congratulations

the prologue and Character Sketch is Interesting

going to read the rest of the chapters now

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Posted: 6 years ago

#127

Chapter 1

Okay Maan fell in love at first sight with Geet whom he refers to as his Pari , thats great but now she is there in his home and he never not once even looked at her face

even if he does not like his wife the disrespectfulness he holds for his wife is terrible yet at the same time he only wants his Pari it seems he truly only loves her so its difficult at this moment to judge him fully

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#128

Chapter 2

Maan's parents and Geet's parents has decided when both reach marriageable ages they will marry each other but now Maan is interested in his Pari he has lost his heart and mind to her

and worst he thinks and assumes the Handa family have emotionally blackmailed his Daadima

both Maan and Geet gets married but he never not once glanced at her face and now living in the same house she does not exist for him

while she has bonded with his family members surely unknown to him

it now seems like Geet does not want to return to her husband's home again

and I'm now only looking forward to the day Maan learns that Pari is Geet and she has been living with him as his astrange wife wonder then what emotions he'll go through

Geet I really do feel bad for her she has held it together for so long and sure its not her fault , though Maan had once told her the elders of both families had forced them into marriage still he treats her

as no one and nothing

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Posted: 6 years ago

#129

Chapter 3

A Realization knock on Maan's door

firstly the fact that he has been only thinking about Geet , her words that's surprising and he has heard her voice but its only now that he realizes her voice carries innocence and is soft her touch itself is soft he has been so involved in his mind with Pari that overlooked the fact just how he has been treating his wife and now when Daadima throws his words back at him its sore now he realizes his home is dead without Geet he realizes he had always heard her anklets and bangles and without it his home is silent his Daadima is angry and hurt

but the strangest fact is that he been a businessman could not back and search for his Pari yet he lived this secluded lonely life while his wife carried on with her duties and respecting all his conditions

I'm waiting to see what will he do when he sees his wife's face

what redemtion or punishment he'll give himself

but he reaction now towards Daadima when she tells him he did want Geet away from him so he achieved that now he can be happyt in his life why is he denying suddenly surelu just one night thinking about Geet cannot change his one year emotions

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Jasmine

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Posted: 6 years ago

#130

maan seeing geet with dove and envying the dove for being with geet was lovely. maan naming her pari was cute.shocking that maaneet are married and he doesn't know that pari is geet and insults geet without even willing to hear what she says.poor geet going back home.nice pics

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