AvNeil OS(Songfic) : "Dooriyaann..!!" - Page 3

Originally posted by: Kathy_927

Ohhh noo..😭

It was such an emotional one, it made my heart weep. The sadist in me is satisfied though

Awesome job as a writer it was heart wrenching and

your writing was perfectly moulded. Thank u so very much.

With Love

Kathy❤️

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Ri, sorry.. im in res mode..So.. bear with me

Abhi ke liye res..

Originally posted by: Afsana103

I'm speechless I can literally imagine and relate this scene happening in upcoming faceoff I won't be surprised Aww. Thats such a big compliment. I am so grateful to u for that you have made me dive deep into emotions which the reader can actually feel the pain and suffering they go through without even having it happen in the show as a scene The sadist in me is grinning as mission accomplished. I am so glad u liked the story and can relate to it.

Really touched my heart

Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

Uff the feels. My heart goes out to these two.💔

This was simply BEAUTIFUL. The expression, essence and emotions were captured so beautifully!

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Even when AvNeil are not in a frame they just blow you up with their chemistry . When they are together it's just more than words to express😃 Truly.! Their chemistry just ooze out so naturally and effortleessly

Now you made me desperate what CVs have for AvNeil meeting . Lets c what their percpective is. Even i am intringed This was really beautiful and heartbreaking💔And the song was cherry on cake. Thank u so very much. I was listening to the song and this idea struck me I was carried away to Neil arresting her and the song played in back . Avni can never hate Neil . She can be upset with him and hurt by his actions but never hate him . Cent percent. Nobody has a doubt about it. But that doesnt mean Neil cant be insecure about it Even in today's episode she remembers her promise to Neil that she will think of him before she takes any step against law .

Best part was their shadows meeting and dissolving in rain drops. You are an artist man .⭐️What a melancholy was it . Omg. Now that was a biggiee. Somebody plz bring me back to earth. I am flying without wings. Thank u so much dear

I loved it to bits👏My heart broke for the two . I am glad u liked the story

Originally posted by: Afsana103

Please update Neil Khanna different shades wala ff too I just love all the shades you have enlightened till now waiting eagerly for next shade

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Superb writing pretty emotional 😭

Originally posted by: basket_101

Hey Riya! Heya buddy.!!

First of all, perfect song choice! I've always loved this song, and the fact that you wrote on it for AvNeil made it even better! Aww. Felt so good to hear that. I was listening the song and this suddenly struck me. The lyrics were so apt for Avneil's present situation

The pain you've described was so raw, and it really brought out the hurt that both of them have been experiencing since the night of the arrest. Thank u so much. I am glad u found it realatable. Also i dont exactly know where this is the exact thing which u refer to as songfic. I just tried.

Great job with this OS!!

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing job, could feel their emotions play out