AvNeil OS(Songfic) : 'Dooriyaann..!!'

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docritu99

@docritu99

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 8 years ago

👍🏼 Awesome ri. Superb.it was so emotional and painful.😭 I can totally imagine avneil in this. I loved everything u wrote. But one thing I got tears in this line.😭

A shadow(imagination) of Neil, Avni ka Neil, emerged out from his lifeless body and proceed towards Avni, while he remained rooted to his spot.

A shadow(imagination) of Avni, Neil ki Wifey, emerged out from her lifeless body and proceed towards Neil, while she remained rooted to her spot.

It was awesome. Its give me visual effects.awesome ri.👏

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Veenapai

@Veenapai

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

It's awesome.You written their pain beautifully.

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840837

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful! Waiting for updates on shades of Neil Khanna series as well. Maybe u can also have a shades of avni series. Love ur work. Look forward to many more.

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1127246

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

Ohhh noo..😭

It was such an emotional one, it made my heart weep.

Awesome job as a writer it was heart wrenching and

your writing was perfectly moulded.

With Love

Kathy ❤️

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Ri, sorry.. im in res mode..So.. bear with me

Abhi ke liye res..

Unres...

That was deep...😭

That heartwrenchingly Beautiful Ri...

Awesome...❤️

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

I'm speechless I can literally imagine and relate this scene happening in upcoming faceoff I won't be surprised you have made me dive deep into emotions which the reader can actually feel the pain and suffering they go through without even having it happen in the show as a scene

Really touched my heart

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Uff the feels. My heart goes out to these two. 💔

This was simply BEAUTIFUL. The expression, essence and emotions were captured so beautifully!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Even when AvNeil are not in a frame they just blow you up with their chemistry . When they are together it's just more than words to express 😃

Now you made me desperate what CVs have for AvNeil meeting . This was really beautiful and heartbreaking 💔 And the song was cherry on cake. I was carried away to Neil arresting her and the song played in back . Avni can never hate Neil . She can be upset with him and hurt by his actions but never hate him . Even in today's episode she remembers her promise to Neil that she will think of him before she takes any step against law .

Best part was their shadows meeting and dissolving in rain drops. You are an artist man . ⭐️ What a melancholy was it .

I loved it to bits 👏 My heart broke for the two .