#pyar bhari takrar ff#. naksh ff part-43/38 - Page 23

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: tomori
lovely update . waiting fr more1540865926065

thanku so much for ur comments.. 😳.. wats ur name?

Quote

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: forrest
lovely update . waiting fr more1540867312240

thanku soo much.. i m soo happy that i got soo much appreciation.. i will do update soon next part 😃

Quote

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

part-36

nk returned house nd he was packing things with gy3. he was working in laptop.. gy3 sees to him... suddenly some pics open in laptop.. nk started admiring to ak. he reminds all those memories with ak.. he had tears.. he lost in dream.. gy3..

gy-dekh munna sab pack kar diya beta.. beta plz is bar jaldi aana tere bina hamara man nhi lagta hai bilkul bhi..

nk-he was in his thoughts.. gy3 sees to him.. pics of ak nd his pain..

gy-munna..

nk-haa.. came in reality are hospital.. maa main..

gy-main janti hu beta tu pain main hai tera dard mujhse jayada kon samaj sakta hai... agar usse alg nhi reh sakta tha toh alg kyo hua pucha toh sachi..

nk-uska farz bhi toh tha waise bhi woh ek bhula hua sa rishta tha.. see deleted all pics.. esse hi..

gy-toh phir dusari shadi karle na..

nk-maa.. shouted..

gy-beta tu mane ya nhi par mujhse teri udasi dekhi nhi jati aur bindiya bhut aachi hai tu bolega toh main.. pooja karti hai saree pehnti hai khana banati hai ekdom tere jaisi is bar tujhse alg ladki lake teri life barbad nhi karne dungi... beta pehle jaise has le yahi icha hai.. maa hu kya itna bhi nhi soch sakti..

nk-wat u saying.. maine aajtak bindiya ko dekha tak nhi aachese sochu kaise.. mujhe shadi word se gin aati hai bhut jayada faltu main apna time waste kyo karu bhut kam hai mere pass..

gy-karna kam par mere liye ek ladki pasand karle tere bacho ko dekhne se pehle mar jaugi warna main.. kitni girls hai duniya main..

nk-aacha in anger hongi bhut par ak jaisi ek bhi nhi.. gy3 was shocked..

gy-tu aaj bhi usse itna pyar..

nk-nhi means she broke my heart my house bas delete na pics.. bas..

gy-thik h teri jid sachi main hi faltu hu went in anger.. uff... nk went in recyclebin nd restore all pics...

nk-pata nhi kyo par main kisi aur ko apni life main wapas nhi la sakta jo bit gya badal nhi sakta par apka pain har pal mere dil main rahega...

here ak was also packing things... she sees in cupboard... she put her nd nks pics in her suitcase at d same time varsha came in room..

va-hogga

packing tumhari..

ak-ak hided nks pic with clothes...haa tujhe mujhe fasane main bhut maja aata hai na..

va-wahi jo tera dil chahta hai kitne sal bit gye tujhe kahi gye atlest tera man toh alg hoga na.. aur tera work bhi ho jayega lage hath waise jo tune chupaya maine dekh liya..

ak-kya main kya chupaugi kuch bhi toh nhi..

va-aacha throwed clothes nd sees nks puc.. yeh kya hai ak... kyo us yad ko pakad ke rakhti hai jiska koi matlab hi nhi teri life main.

ak-varsha nk ne mujhe apni life se nikal feka maine nhi.. kya ek galti ki mafi nhi ho sakti aur yad to yad hoti hai..

va-par ak jab is yad ko chodegi nhi toh bani rahegi chod ke dekh waise i absorb ki rr tujhe like karta hai jis tarah tujhe dekh rahatha..

ak-varsha from anger. mere man main essa kuch nhi even i didnt think about it.. maine usse dekha tak nhi hai..

va-y not aacha hai gud looking hai.. apne liye soch sakti hai na..

ak-varsha main yaha se jau kya..

va-i m sry par i want ur happiness bas.. aachese jana phir kya pata tujhe teri manjil mil jaye waha aur apne mom dad ke liye thoda sa soch bas yahi kahugi ak... put her hand on aks shoulder.. ja rahi hu soch...

in nyt both ak nd nk were thinking about each other nd gy3 nd varshas thought..

naksh-main essa nhi kar sakta kar sakti.. kisse kahe hum apne man ki bat koi nhi jo mujhe samaj sake... life bina chahe bhi badal si gai hai... god ab bardast nhi hota kyo apne yeh din dikhaya ab jine ki icha khatam ho gai hai...

in morning ak got ready nk too.. nk went near of gy3..

he touched gy3 feet..

nk-chalta hu maa sry agar apka dil dkukhaya ho toh..

gy-khush reh agar bhagwan meri sune toh yahi mangugi ki mera pehle wala munna mujhe mil jaye..

nk-hug to gy3 i m sry maa i m really sry.. started crying maa main jina nhi chahta maa mar jana chahta hu..

gy-kya hua beta..

nk-maa mujhe nind nhi aati mujhe ekdom icha nhi jine ki..

gy-munna tujhe is halat main dekh ke ham kaise g rahe tu khud soch..

nk-apko dard dena nhi chahta par kya karu jisse sabse jayada close hote hai usse hi dard dete hai na..

gy-wada kar royega nhi.. wiped his tears.. tu strong hai beta aur aachese ja aur wapas aana wahi smile leke haa..

nk-i will try par plz maa aap log mujhe dubara shadi karne ko mat kahiye..

gy-thik h par aaj ke bad weak pada toh main khud teri dusri shadi karwa dungi aur meri pasand ki ladki se wada kar..

nk-wada... kosish karuga..

gy-ja beta khush reh khas teri sari khushi tujhe fat se mil jaye..

here ak got ready. she wore suit nd duppata with pallzo..

rj-kitni pyari lag rahi rr aata hi hoga uska phone aaya tha..

ak-main chali jaugi na..

vis-are beta tum unke sath bus main jaogi.. hamne kaha hai hamara man nhi manega akle bhej ke..

ak-main bachi nhi hu na..

vis-haa hamare liye aap hamesha rahoge..

ak-thik hai..

varsha kaha hai..

rj-woh bahar anay ko khana kila rahi..

ak-main aati hu... she went in outside nd sees to anay.

took to him mera betu..

an-bbb bettt..

ak-ale baba..waise mom kharab hai hain na.

an-haa..

va-nalayak.. bua beta ek saman..

ak-varsha tujhe bhut gussa aata hoga na mere upar kitna gussa karti hu..

va-aata hai bhut sara..

ak-sry haa if u felt bad..

va-isliye ki tu kush nhi rehti khud ka sochti nhi..

ak-kya..

va-haa i love u plz ek bar soch na is bare main.. sab kitne khush honge dekh maa bauji sab teri khushi chahte hai..

ak-this is impossible meri life tum sab aur bache hai..

va-aur hamari tu.. ja khushi se ja aur maine jo kaha soch..

kya sochna said rr to both..

rr-hii bhabhi hii ak ggg..

ak-hii..

va-are aap aa gye meri dost ko le jane..

rr-hmm hope main hi le jau..

va-it would be a great idea..

rr-are waah aap toh meri jodi wali nikli..

ak-hum chale mujhe bhut kam hai..

rr-mujhe bhi.. sabko bye nhi kahegi itni hadbad mere sath jane ki..

ak-i know meri family ko.. aati hu.. she said to all bye..

rj-aachese jana..

vis-bye aachese aana hmm khush hoke..

rr-dont worry ak g ko smile main sikhuga..

dadi-yeh to bhut aachi bat hai..

rr-ek din aap sab kahege mere jaisa koi nhi..

all were laughing but not ak..

ak-with irritating voice chale..

rr-g... thinking yeh hasti kyo nhi ek din hasauga bhut..

vis-khash rr hamesha yaha ki khushi ban jaye...

ak went with rr in car.. she was silent nd rr was watching to her..

rr-are hamari bus..

ak-fake smile..

rr-waise ek din sach wali smile bhi dikha dijiyega..

aaiye new safar ke liye.. dey went in bus.. ak was feeling strange nd all were watching to ak..

rr-yeh ak hai hey meri beheno aaj se inko full on company dena nd ak she is my mother..

mo-kitni pyari ho aao beta baitho..

ak-g tqq aunty.. she sat on seat..

rr-kaisi hai.. all girl-thumbsup..

rr mother - super hug to him..

rr-tqq.. ak tunred nd dey were normal..

rr sis-aap bhut sundar ho really... aap first time waha ja rahi..

ak-nhi ja chuki hu kya main thodi der solu i m getting sleep plz..

sis-sure koi bat nhi.. ak slept.. she was in deep sleep..

rr sis-bro y u choose her... bolti nhi so gai.. r u sure she will be gud..

rr-i m 100 percent sure.. tu bhi kahegi dont worry..

dey reached in place..

more parts coming soon..

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago

Quote

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

aks sleep broke.. rr got call..

rr-hloo haa nk tu pahuch gaya..

nk-hloo haa abhi aaya hu hotel ja raha hu..

rr-are yaha tujhe ek room mil jayega na aa ja raha.. ak croosed to rr nd felt nks voice..

nk-are nhi main apne hotel main rahuga na phir auga..

rr-aaj sam ko meri behen ki sagun hai tumhe aana hoga..

nk-sure i will be there... ak stooped nd sees to rr..

ak-kuch mera..

rr-kuch kam hai apko.. nk was stooped..

ak-nhi bas yuhi... she went..

rr-haa so aa jana nk hmm... bye..

nk-bye.. he went in hotel room.. here everyone wlcmed to ak.. nd she went in her room.. got fresh up..

she changed her clothes wore suit with banasi duppata.. big earrings nd went in hull.. rr was arranging things here nd der.. sees to ak.. she was looking simply pretty he passed smile.

rr-bor ho gai..

ak-nhi bas yuhi.. rr mother was coming..

mo-pata nhi yeh kaise banega mera set tut gya kanchan dekh toh.. ak sees to her..

ak-are aunty main karti hu wait.. haa thread hai.. she again fixed it.. ho gya..

mo-waww tqq beta.. khush raho..

rr was soo happy.. than rr father came.. he was coughing..

rr mo-yeh rr ke papa hai.. thode bimar hai..

rr fa-are ak beti khush raho kaisi ho beta... kitni pyari h..

ak-g aachi hu aap kaise ho... tqq uncle..

suddenly boy came..

rr-are aa gye sab.. it was so much crowded ak stooped der nd all were on door.. it was soo much crowd.. ak was not interested she sat on chair..

here nk reached outside..

nk-soo much crowd yr i really hate it soo much..

rr was busy..

nk-rr... he didn't watch to nk..

uff yeh rr bhi na he went in crowd... waana croosed it..

uff yeh bhi na..

nk watched to rr.. he also..

rr-hii nk sry yr sab gadbad tu idar aa ek kam kar.. he came inside nd took a deep breath..

nk-thank god aa gya hii hug to him..

rr-finally u came haa mujhe yakin nhi ho raha just kidding meri behen se milwata hu aur ek khash member se bhi..

nk-kon..

rr-are woh suddenly power gone..

ak sees here nd der.. are power gai..

nk-are.. all were running here nd der..

rr-sab ruk jao.. nk ak also going here nd der..

nk tu thik hai na..

nk-are rituraj tu kaha hai..

ak-koi hai.. ssh bache plz stop esse mat run karo gir jaoge..

nk-koi hai.. everyone were worried..

rr-main power check karata hu.. he went..

nk nd ak were going here nd there suddenly some voice came in aks ear.

ak-aah she grabbed to nk..

nk-dont worry aap dariye mat.. ak was fearing... she put her head on nks chest.. nk felt this touch..

nk-yeh koi jani pehchani..

ak was hided her head in shout voices..

ak-aahhh... she was feeling relaxed... suddenly power came..

nk opened his eyes nd sees a girl.. he didnt touch to her.. ak didnt realized that power came.. swlly swlly she sees to that boy.. their eyes meet from both eyes..

dey were hell shocked to sees to each other nd rr was also shocked to sees to both..

naksh had teras in their eyes..

there lips were shivering soo much waana tell their names but but byt no dey cant say..

ak starts crying to seees to nk...

she waana hug to nk.. he waana also.. after an years dey sees to each other.. dey forget all past waana talks with each other.. time was stooped...

dey waana ask wat happened in their lifes..

ak-nn...??

wat will happen next.. will dey talk with each..

tqq soo much to all who r reading my ff.. i want dey will comment also in this part..

tqq soo much guyzz...

Precap - nk is following to ak nd sees her ngo work...

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago

Quote

_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 5 years ago

Nice udpate

Both Face off finally after a longgg time and woh bhi hugging

Party mein itne log but y should naksh only hug each other 😆

Both Naksh are still loving for each other and cannot accept any other as their partner

But ego is stopping them to resolve issues

Uffo

Gay3 wants nk to marry Bindiya and Varsha want ak to marry RR

Hope so they will sort of differences in the wedding and hoping to see cute Naksh moments in Shaadi

Nk following ak aaha Do udpate sooner se sooner

Quote

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

aww u said ryt after alonggg time dey meet... thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally.. i m admiring it ..

haa party main bhut log the but naksh milti kaise nd god wants so dey hug to each ... haa dey will never accept but i will try to write some fun haa ego end hogi na.. ..👍🏼

haa i will write cute moments i will do update soon next part..

❤️...

Quote

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

part-37

ak was just saying..

nk-aaa..

rr-are stop everyone.. naksh sees to rr.. are nk...

nk-hmm..

rr-are ak.. held aks hand.. nk was shocked... dar gai thi kya..

ak-haa woh power nhi hai na so... ab aa gai..

rr-aur aap nk g ke upar gir padi.. sry nk tujhe aacha nhi laga hoga.. ak g yeh nk hai jinko apke jaise shadi ka mahol pasand nhi. ak was lill shocking...nd koi girl inki life ka filhal hissa nhi par main inka dil yaha hila ke rakhuga..

aur nk yeh ak g hai mere papa ke frd ki beti aur meri frd.

ak-kya..

rr-hone wali..

nk made face..dey were silent..

rr-nk.. ak.. r u der.. naksh were seeing to each..

nk-hii..

ak-hloo.. gave hand to nk... rr was shocked..

rr-are waah ak g bhut khubb.. nk g ko hand haa..

ak-g namaste folded hand..

nk-g namaste.. than someone called to rr..

rr-are sagun start hone wala hai aao na al g nd nk aa na.. mere sath reh. seneha ak ke sath raho.. nk went with rr.. ak was watching to nk.. dey wiped their tears..

nk was swlly swlly watching to ak.. she cant meet her eyes..

ak-thinking kitne duble ho gye hai ekdom change se.. kitne sal ho gye nk apki aankh main dard hai... god yeh kya kar diya main kahi kamjor na pad jau..

nk-thinking khabhi jo socha bhi na ho woh kyo jata hai.. ak toh ekdom murja gai hai kahi yeh meri soch hai ya.. kya meri galti hai ya unko god itne salo bad kyo... ab hamare bich rishta hi kya hai... he was thinking.. rr was calling to nk..

rr-kaha khoya hai..

nk-are bas yuhi kaho.

rr-meri behen nd jiju... he is nk abhi kuch din pehle hi hum close frd ban gye business ke bahane se because hum dono apne balbute pe kuch banna chahte hai na so. thoda bolna aur hasna sikh gya aur bat karna bhi.. than bindiya came.. nk was shocked..

bi-are waah hii sir..

nk-are tum yaha kaise bindiya.. ak was watching to nk... she didnt like that wat bindiya is saying..

ak-yeh kon hai...

rr sis-wat happened aap bar bar bhaiya ke side kyo dekh rahi.. u liked him..

ak-kya... nhi woh bas esse hi..

rr sis-are aap di jiju se mili aao main miwati hu..

ak-haa chlao na... dey went near of bride.. nk sees to ak.. ak sees bindiya..

bi-sir khabhi khabhi duniya bhut choti ho jati hai na really waha bhi ek sath aur ab yaha bhi ek sath hi.. aks heart skip a little.. her hand leg were cold to listen this... wat she said..nk sees to ak. she sees to nk from anger..

rr-are ak aap.. chutki tu yaha kyo aai..

sis-are ak g ko di jiju se milwane lai hu... di jiju yeh ak hai..

ak-hii..ak was about to know relationship between nk nd bindiya..

rr-are nk aa main tujhe khana kilane le chalta hu are bindiya g aap bhi aaiye na kyo nk..

nk-hmm... dey went in table..

ak-bas main room main jau..

sis-are enjoy karo na y u dont enjoy khana kha lijiye na plz...

bi-are sir main apki plate lati hu..

nk-are nhi main le lunga..

bi-i know well apki choices... its ok..

rr-hmm hmm gai... ak was watching to nk only... she took plate... she didnt like that y bindiya is soo close of nk...waise nk yeh bindiya aachi ladki hai kahi koi bat..

nk-shutup bas girls nd all..

rr-kyo koi bhi sochega yr kon employees itna care karti h khana lati hai khas tere jaise meri employee bhi mere liye khana laye. sees to ak.. nk noticed that he watched to ak.. he hitted on fire..

nk-rr wat happened to u i mean yeh ak ko kaise..

rr-yr woh abhi mai papa ka hotel business ki meeting ke liye gya tha aur wat a great girl mujhe pura work karke di... means wat a attitude she has.. i really like her.. dekh tere piche ladki padi hai aur tu dekh bhi nhi raha aur mujhe ek din meri aur uski frdship hoke rahegi..

nk-i guess mujhe leave karna chahiye rr..

rr-are than bindiya came.. she gave food to nk... ak burnt soo much..

nk-nhi tum bhi kha lo na bindiya plz tum enjoy karo tumhare bhai ka program hai yaha koi sir nhi plzz...

ak was passing nd hearing.

bi-are aap bhi toh hamare guest hai na koi bat nhi i know apko kya like hai aur kya nhi nd safar ke bad aapko kitni thakan ho jati hai i know jab hum meeting pe gye the tab.. nk was feeling embraced soo much he noticed that ak is hearing..

sis-ak g aap kya loge..

ak-she had tears in her eyes pet bhar gya mera woh main washroom ja ke aati hai.. she went in public washroom inside.. she started crying... nk aap mujhe bhul gye nk... aap us ladki ke itne close ho gye sabke samne itna dikhawa aur... she was hell crying try to hide her shout voice..

here nk-mujhe bilkul bhuk nhi actually maine aate hue hotel main order kar liya tha plz enjoy party bindiya plz..

rr-are aap itni sweet ho nk is ryt aap jao nd enjoy karo..

bi-haa thankuu sees to rr nd went..

nk-woh washroom kaha hai main aata hu..

rr-woh left side.. nk went in washroom. he was just besides of ak.

n-ak kyo life ne hame esse mod pe la diya rr aur aap. nhi main soch bhi nhi sakta hu chii gin aati hai mujhe... main us rr ko.. par haa ab mera haq bhi kya hai.. yeh sab thik nhi ho raha.. bindiya bhi itna sir sir kar rahi.. pata nhi ak kahi kuch galt na soch le.. yeh bindiya ko meri choice ke bare main itna pata kaise chal gya... both were worried... ak cried nd she wiped her tears..

nk too came outside at d same time ak too came outside.. both sees to each..

dey were silent... ak was seeing to nk from anger..

nk-he waana say something to ak but who will say first?

no both egoo nd aks confusion...

nk reminds about baby pain... but.. just he was opening his mouth.. ak passed away... nk was shocked..

ak was crying still.. went behind..

ak-aap mujhse bat nhi karege nk i know aapko main aachi nhi lagti par haa mere dil ki bat main nhi bataugi bilkul nhi..

nk-ak ab main itna anjan ho gya ek word tak nhi.. itne sal par mujhe laga aap badal gai par no i was wrong.. i was totally wrong... thik h nhi bat karni toh na sachi..

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago

Quote

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

ak wiped her tears.. suddenly someone touched to her.. she thought to nk..

ak-chodo.. turned nd sees to rr..

rr-r u fine i guess kuch gadbad hai aap happy nhi lag rahe.. sab chale ja rahi aur aap yaha..

ak-kya main room main ja sakti hu.. i m getting tired soo much.. rr touched to aks hand... r u. i mean kuch galt hai kya.. suddenly nk came nd sees to both.. he was fire on anger.. ak sees tonk nd skipped rr hand..

ak-took distance kya hua hai i m fine..care kar sakti hu weak nhi hu plz.. it is non of ur business...

nk-rr i m going plz phir tumhe jo karna h karo i have no problem tc..

rr-bye yr i m really sry woh thoda sa busy... ak sees that in nks eyes lotss of quuu... she went in room in anger...ak..

nk-bye.. he also went..

rr-apko khush toh karna h kya pain h pata nhi but kuch toh hai... in nyt... ak was thinking soo much.

ak-nk aap mujh par shak kaise kar sakte hai nk aaj apne mera trust bhi tod diya sab tut gya sab bikhar gya.. she laid on bed.. nk was watching aks pic..

nk-he thought about rr nd ak.. ak pata nhi main kya karuga but but but really bhut galt ho raha yeh sab kuch.. rr ko main esse pal pal aap mere sath rahegi aur main kuch nhi kar pauga kuch bhi nhi.. nhi apko mujhe face karna hoga main bhi dekhu rr se kitni dilchaspi hai apko.. in morning everyone were soo happy.. rr was ready.. ak was in garden.. she was admiring beauty of nature..

rr watched to her..

rr-aap itni khoyi khoi kyo rehti ho sabse milo batiee karo.. apka pain aap bata sakti ho laugh... jindagi jine ka nam hai har pal..

ak-aur agar jite g jindagi chin jaye tab..

rr-are yeh kya bat hui... amm jindagi mili h toh aas rahegi aur aas hai toh pyas pyas se bhuk banegi aur bhuk se jine ki icha..

ak-confused.. matlb..

rr-umid milti h swlly swlly realized hoga na tab pata chalega waise main itna bura hu kya..

ak-are apki file puri kardi hai.. nd i m sry par aapko itna nhi gusna chahiye meri life main mujhe akle choddo..

rr-life main kon aa raha just normal frdship only kuch nhi kuch bat nhi.. bas normal dosti bas ek bar... gave hand to ak..

ak-aacha do hardwork ek din success milegi hmm.. mehnat ke bina kya milta hai.. went...

rr-uff aasan nhi apse milna... suddenly he sees to nk.. are yr waah subah subah..

nk-i thought aacha atmosphere hai.. so i came wat u doing..

rr-kuch rasam i guess girl ki aao na dekhte hai come..nk was seeing here nd der... rr nd nk went inside...

nk was searching to ak all over...

rr-are kisse dekh rahe bindiya ko woh alg hotel main hai laugh..

nk-sach a bad joke.. bas dekh raha yeh ladki bor nhi hoti hai kya yeh sab..

rr-bilkul nhi.. are aaya nk wait i m coming..

nk went here nd der. he was searching to ak..

nk-hope she will be fine sab room locked hai.. kaha gai woh.. he sees from upstairs that ak was going in car.. kaha ja rahi yeh.. nk running in garden.. ak went in her car.. nk sat in car nd following to ak.. in hide position..

ak stooped d car..

ak-haa sir main pahuch gai.. came outside.. nk was seeing to ak..

nk-yeh aadmi kon hai.. ak went with that men.. nk came outside nd was following to ak... ak went inside..

nk-yeh kya hai aur ak kaha gai hai.. nk also went near of door.. he was watching to ak..

ak-g dont be tqq yeh main apne bacho ke liye kar rahi hu meri duniya..

nk-bache duniya... he was listening...

ak sign d paper..

me-maam aajse aap yaha ki malkin..

ak-main bas puri kosish karugi ki yaha sab bacho ko woh khushi mile jisse woh feel karna chahte h kya main bacho se mil sakti hai...

men-aaiye na... ak went inside to meet with kids... nk also took permission nd went inside...

ak-waww itne sare bache... hloo to all kids dey came near if ak..

nk was feeling soo happy to sees to ak..

ak-chocolate lai hu ek ek kiss nd name batao..

one baby give kiss to ak..

ba-aap bhut pyari ho bhut jayada really.. aapka nam aap kon hai..

men-yeh apki new owner hai.. yeh jaha se aai h waha bhut bache h now aap log se bhi milegi... waha ka ngo now yaha koi dikat ho aap didi ko kehna.. yeh apke liye god ki tarah.. nks heart fullfilled with emotions..

nk-great work really..

ak-beta bhul ke bhi koi bhul mat karna warna bhut pachtana pachtana padta h... aap sab bhut khush raho aur aache insan bano changes lao.. mere jaise jidi nhi layak bano apne ghar ko chalao..

nk starts crying..

nk-oo god she changed a lottt.. i mean how.. main..

tahts really gud i m..

kya kahu..?

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago

Quote

_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 5 years ago

My like is not working properlyy

Firstlyyy Happy diwali

And was coming to part u potrayed every emotion of naksh face off very welll

Both left each other but still are jealous and curious for each other

and are unable to accept the truth that someone has interest in them

Waiting eagerlyyy ab for next parts

Nk relaised ak has chnaged with time

Rr becoming chipkali to ak

Haahha

Waitng for jealousy Ego and love war ahead

Do update soooner se sooonn

Will be waiting

Loved nk going back of ak and still curious about her...

Quote

nakshkidiwani

@nakshkidiwani

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
My like is not working properlyy
Firstlyyy Happy diwali
And was coming to part u potrayed every emotion of naksh face off very welll
Both left each other but still are jealous and curious for each other
and are unable to accept the truth that someone has interest in them
Waiting eagerlyyy ab for next parts
Nk relaised ak has chnaged with time
Rr becoming chipkali to ak
Haahha
Waitng for jealousy Ego and love war ahead
Do update soooner se sooonn
Will be waiting
Loved nk going back of ak and still curious about her...

aww it was so admiring comments for me...just thinking that aww u liked this part nd their emotions aww how sweet. i just lovedd ur comments cant express in words 😃..

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😊.. happy diwali to u too... haa ab ayr maja aayegi wen hak aayegi aur jayada😳...

jealous will be more high😆.. kuch nhi rr will be funny guy😆..

heheh..

haa thoda likh ke emotions i waana put aachese i will do update soon next part ⭐️

Quote

1 ... 21 22 23 24 25 26

topics	author	replies	views	reply
Armaan-Abhira SS: Parting \| Part 5 (Last part): Page 5 whimsical 45 11914	whimsical	45	11914	17 days ago whimsical >
Abhira Sharma/Samridhii Shukla AT\|\| DT Note P. 23 Agni_Jytsona 237 21864	Agni_Jytsona	237	21864	14 hours ago Pinecone >
AbhiMaan ss - heartless sweetheart -Part 2 UPDATED on PAGE 2 Shanaya1526 23 5716	Shanaya1526	23	5716	7 days ago Gurveen >
Abhimaan TS - Jealous Armaan ( chapter 3 -last part updated) Shamitashah1001 25 6721	Shamitashah1001	25	6721	1 months ago alekhika20 >
AbhiMaan/MaaHira FF : Jealous Junkie Part 5 on pg-7 Ambii 81 16236	Ambii	81	16236	1 months ago 8Lucky88 >

#pyar bhari takrar ff#. naksh ff part-43/38 - Page 23

Related Topics