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Posted: 5 years ago

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in hospital rj nd varsha were crying.. all were worried..

rj-hamari bachi yaha aai hui thi woh bhi gussa hoke kahi kuch ho gaya toh kya jawab denge waha sabko. aur jamaisaa woh toh bhut gussa bhi the..

va-dadi kuch hoga toh nhi ak ki yeh bat sunke mujhe laga jaise meri jindagi main koi nanha mehman aane wala hai ab yeh sab kyo yeh khushi nhi aati hamare ghar..

vis-kuch nhi hoga ak ko usne aaj tak kisi ka bura nhi kiya toh kyo hoga uske sath essa.. Normal gussa aa jata hai sabko.. nk g samjhege mujhe pata hai.

da-tum dono chinta kyo karte ho woh hai na sabko dekhega hamari beti ko bhi aur uske bache ko bhi.. than doctor came...

do-woh mujhe samaj nhi aata aaj kal ki girls ko bache ki kadar kyo nhi...

rj-hamari beti thik hai na..

do-yes she is fine.. everyone got happy..

vis-dekha hamne kaha tha n... sab thik hoga hum ak se mil sakte hai kya..

do-yes aur samjha bhi dijiye y she took precaution.. kya usse pata nhi tha that she is pregnant.. itni badi laparwahi.. sry to say this but she lost her child.. everyone were shocked.. uske blood main infection ho gya nd baby ko harm kar gya nd uska miscarriage ho gya.. khair aage dhayan rakhiyega yeh teb nhi leni chahiye nuksan karti hai body ko. future main khabhi bhi essa kiya na maybe baby na ho yeh nobat bhi aa sakti so unresponsible..

rj nd all were shocked..

do-khair thodi der main unko hosh aa jayega plz samjhaiyega unko... all were shocked.. rj sat on table..

rj-yeh kya ho gya maa.. ak ne yeh kya kar diya woh toh bhut khush thi na phir.. ab nk g ko yeh lagega ki meri bachi ne janbhuj ke.. kaise kahugi ki yeh pal bhar ki khushi thi nhi maa nhi hoga mujhse.. kaise kahugi yeh nhi.. sab bikhar gya upar se ak yaha aai hui thi kyo hua essa maaa.. than she got call from gy3.. maa gy3 behen kyo phone kar rahi kya kahugi nhi sab meri bachi ko hi bolege..

da-batana padega na.. than dey heard aks voice.

va-maa bauji aap dono ko hi batana hoga hamse toh nhi hoga yeh..

rj-main..

dad-haa beta lao main bat karti hu gy3 g se tum ak ko dekho. ak loudly started crying mom... vis nd rj went inside..

vis-ak beta.

ak-maa dekho na main kitni der se puch rahi inse kya hua mujhe batate nhi. mom i m fine na mom. mujhe dard kyo hua tha.. touched her stomach main thik hu na mera bacha aap ro kyo rahe.. she stood..

dad plz tell me..

vis-woh ak woh..

rj-bas ak pagal hai kya...

ak-bataiye na i m fine n mom..

rj-haa tu thik hai.. she sat on bed..

ak-thankgod i was so worried hos aaya toh nk ka khayal aaya mom aap unko call karke bol dijiye ki unki biwi aur bacha unka wait kar rahe. rj started crying loud.. ro kyo rahi.. rj hug to her...

rj-beta tera bacha nhi raha. aks hand leg became cold.. first she was like her breath skipped from her body.. she was silent...beta tune precaution kyo liya beta tera bacha nhi.. tera miscarriage ho gya...

ak-mom aap jhut bol rahe u r wrong u r wrong main essa kyo karugi haa i was not agree but maine essa nhi socha ki main baby ko mardu.. main kyo essa karugi agar essa karna hota main batati kyo nk ko apke pass kyo aati maa. she was loudly crying. mom plz say that it is wrong..

vis-yeh sach hai beta... hug to her.. samailye khud ko nk ko samjhna hoga..

ak-woh nhi samjhte hai unhone mujhe kaha tha mat jao mat jao but main aa gai maa woh mujhe alg toh nhi main unhe kaise yakin dilaugi kaise.. woh tut jayege.. main... than dadi came..

da-maine bata diya gy3 ko sab kuch...

here gy3 runned

gy-munna ak hospital main hai.

nk-kya.. maa kahi ak ko kuch.

gy-jayada bat toh nhi hui par kuch galt hua hai ak ne kuch kha liya aur bacha..

nk-kya..

gy-chalo abhi.. dey all went.. gy3 bm nk.. nk was so worried.. he went in hospital.. ak was crying nd thinking about nk.. his talks..

ak-mujhe ek moka dijiyega nk thaki main apki god main sar rakhke ro saku kyo aai main yaha aap mujh par trust karegena nk mujhe apse bhut hops hai... suddenly she sees to nk. varsha nd rj was here.. everyone were outside..

nk-ak... a tears drop from aks eye. her hand were on nks side like hug me plz... nk starts crying.. varsha nd rj..

va-woh ak ne janbhuj ke precautions nhi li nk g.. nk was shocked to heard this...

nk-leave us alone... dey all went outside.. nk hug to ak..

ak-thanku nk i know that mujhpe trust karege aap... she held to him nd feeling lill relax..

nk caressing her hairs..

nk-us masum ne apka kya bigada tha jo apne uski jan le li... u killed my child... ak was shocked nd she broke completely that wat nk said. she stooped crying nd leave to nk.. she was not in sence..

ak-yeh apne kya keh diya..

nk-which one jo true hai.. maine apko roka tha na.. from high anger everyone came nd sees to him.. i stooped u y u came.. u killed my child.. i hate u ak.. i hate u maine kaha tha mere bache ko kuch nhi hona chahiye but apko kisi ki koi chnita nhi.. vis's blood was boiling..

vis-aap..

ak-nhi dad kehne dijiye inhe... haq hai no dad no..

nk-apse bat karna ya apka face dekhna bhi mere liye nafrat hai main ab apke sath nhi reh sakta.. everyone were shocked... he went in anger...

gy3 rj dadi varsha all were crying soo much... ak has nothing to say to nk nor she want to clear this.. vis nd shorya was in anger.. wat will happen in next part...

preacp - one year leap will ak nk stay with each..?

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 5 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
After a longgg time i am commenting :P
Coming to parts so much has happened and ak madamm is pregnant
This is very sensitive issue which u choose
There will be pros and cons in every situation and [perspective
Hope the best of decision with proper justification win
Really loking forward for next update...
Poor varsha she can never be pregnant Aww :(
It really exciting to see how naksh bonds increases and wats gonna be happen in next part
Do update soon se bhi soon 👍🏼

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 5 years ago

#203

thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally i was waiting since long haye u did it... i m admiring it again nd again ..

aww u liked this ff thanku for your support plz continue karo comments pata chalta hai that u liked or not..

i too felt bed for varsha dont worry kuch nhi hoga but haa naksh ke bich emotions aayegi hope main kuch kar saku nd everyone will like it ... naksh bond i cant say anything ..

i will do update soon se soon next part... dont know y i cant repply on ur post princess (((

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 5 years ago

#204

No words to say

Ak finally realised the true meaning of relationships and this happened

But she should atleast learn now that everything is not taken for granted

Bechari she was so excited to tell Nk but but but

Nk ki angry oMG

and ak familys love towards her was

But twist is tale is when nk ji ne ak ko chod di

Waiting eagerly for next an year leap and wats in future do reveal soon .

Update sooner se sooner shaayad tomorrow tak :P

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 5 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
No words to say
Ak finally realised the true meaning of relationships and this happened
But she should atleast learn now that everything is not taken for granted
Bechari she was so excited to tell Nk but but but
Nk ki angry oMG
and ak familys love towards her was
But twist is tale is when nk ji ne ak ko chod di
Waiting eagerly for next an year leap and wats in future do reveal soon .
Update sooner se sooner shaayad tomorrow tak :P

tqq sooo soo much i was waiting yuhuuu u gave comment soo soon i m admiring it .. 😃... yuhuuu u liked it soo muchh...

thankuu thankuu soo much for ur love nd jhatpat comments.. i thought ki pata nhi u will like this or not.. haa ak ki fault nhi thi na nk ki 😳...

haa he is angry dont worry jo hoga aur aache ke liye hoga i will try to justify this story.. i will write soon se soon next part.. maybe tomorrow 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

#206

part-34

after one nd half year... varsha was running..

va-main marugi tujhe samaj nhi aata kya.. kaki was laughing...

ka-bas bas tu itna bhag kyo rahi hai bas kar na..

va-nhi kaki kya karu sab log ninth month ke hi chalna sikh jate hai par yeh haa gave one bite.. anay aap kiske bache ho..

sa-pppaapaa ka.

va-aacha g papa mumma ka nhi kya..

sa-noo... buiii buiii..

va-are akshra.. hmm madam g aa gai bas abhi aai hu abhi jana hai.. waha ki yad aa rahi..

ak-haa kya karu life ka itna bada hissa hai jo ab meri jindagi hai phir kam bhi ho jata hai.. aap chaloge na baby aao.. mera anay.. aap bua ke bete ho..

va-haww birth maine diya aur beta bua ka haa bhai ab sona khana pina sab bua ke sath toh yeh toh hoga hi kyo..

ak-kissed to him..love u.. bacha bua ko jana hai chod do phir aaugi thik hai.. are dad..

vis-toh hamari beti ready hai jane ko..

ak-g sir are main apna duppata bhul gai..

va-ak tu yeh suit pehnna jeans top pehen na aacha lagta hai..

ak-nhi ab main Indian wear pehnugi i think its amazing.. aati hu.. meri file... she went in room.. rj nd dadi came..

rj-meri bachi..

vis-bas ab hamari beti samalna sikh gai uski tadap ab aur nhi dekhi jati thi ... ab hamari beti hamare sath kam karegi woh bhuli bisari yad hum nhi chahte woh inke sath rahe..

dad-par galti ak ki bhi thi..

vis-itni badi nhi thi jitni unki thi.. sayad hamara deasion hi wrong tha par ab ryt hoga aur hum ak ko dusari shadi ke liye mana hi lenge than ak came in hull..

ak-chale... main waha jake office aaugi dad nd today meeting hogi oki.. chale kya hua dadi kuch hua..

dad-na.. ja.. khush reh...dey leave..

dad-seher badal lo par riste pyar woh badle nhi jate sayad woh jid us din dono side se nhi hoti toh aaj ak akli na hoti..

va-haa dadi mujhe kya pata tha ki ek side meri nand ki khushi chin jayegi aur salo se meri suni god bhar jayegi..

rj-yeh hamari kismat thi ya badkismati pata nhi.. par haa dono side bache ke karan do jindagi alg ho gai..

flashback... nk was in anger.. vis nk dj were in ms house.. shorya nd omi kaka was also here..

gy3 nd rj ak varsha dadi bm were in room..

rj-dekhiye ak ne jhanbhuj ke yeh galti nhi ki hai bas galti se ho gaya..

bm-kyo hui galti hame batati beta. ak was silent..

gy-mujhe toh janne ka hak tha na ab dekh munna kitne gusse main hai..kuch bol na..

va-kuch bol ak..

ak-nk ne mujhe galt samjha hai nd i know woh nhi manege agar galti meri hai than i should pay for all this..

gy-ak tumne janbhuj ke.

rj-isne essa kab kaha..

gy-pata nhi ak ki chuppi samaj nhi aa rahi...

in hull...

nk-mujhe nhi rehna ak ke sath..

sh-ek bar ak ko samjhne ki kosish toh kariye.. she was soo happy she was confused..

nk-maine usse bataya tha kaha tha samjhaya bhi par nhi woh hame apna manti hi nhi manti toh yaha nhi aati..

vis was in ill anger..

kaka-beta gusse se bat bigad jati hai aaj aap jis jagah pe hai uss jagah pe sayad pehle ak thi..

nk-yes i m wring nd i was wrong.. meri hi galti hai ak ko maine dekha drive karte agar usse care hogi toh drive nhi karti akle yaha nhi aati.. khabhi khabhi sachai bad main dikhti hai unhone mujhe subah breakfast nhi diya i was ok khabhi mere liye uthi nhi i was ok khabhi meri choice ka kuch nhi kiya i was ok.. but now this is not possible..

dj-waise galti toh bahu ne kari hi hai par munna tumhe samjhna hoga hamare yaha yeh jaldbazi ke fesle nhi hote ab bahu munna ke anusar chalegi toh hun le jayege usse..

vis-maf kariye dj par meri beti mere liye boj nhi hai yeh baap aaj bhi apni beti ka khayal rakh sakta hai..

nk-dekha..

dj-yeh kya hai vis.. hum yaha fesla karane aaye hai..

vis-fesla one sided nhi hota nk g itna kuch bol rahe aur aap sun rahe essa nhi hota..

dj-yeh kya bat hui.. agar aapko apni beti ko yaha rakhna hai rakh lijiye galti toh ussi ki hai..

vis-bas from anger thik aap logo ko kuch sunna toh hai nhi aur aap log bat karne aaye hai..

sh-papa plz santi se bat kariye..

nk-apko kya hak hai aap mere dj se esse bat kyo kar rahe mujhe bhi sok nhi ak ko sath le jana bhi nhi.. i want devorce...

vis-thik hai agar hamri beti ke nasib mai yahi hai toh fine main dilauga divorce usse aaj abhi.. apme itni himat hai toh paper lake dijiye sign main karwauga..

nk-fine abhi nd now yeh rishta khatam..but mere maa bauji ko koi kuch nhi kahega..

gy3 bm rj dadi all were seeing..

in reality...

va-par dadi ab ak ekdom khush rehti hai i guess woh nk ko ab dhere se bula payegi aur us din usne khud sign kiya tha na..

in past... vis came with papers..

dadi-dekh maine tujhe samjhane ke liye bheja tha nk beta ko tune mafi mangi na nk beta se aur unke pariwar se dj ka gussa sant hua na... he was silent..

ak was watching to him with a hope..

rj-kya hua bataiye na...

vis sees to them paper..

vis-hum waha sirf ak ke liye gye the par unhone hamari bat suni tak nhi aur nk ne yeh divorce paper sign karke de diye.. ab bataiye kehne ke liye kya bacha hai jiske bharoshe pe hamne apni beti ko bheja woh itna tak nhi socha uski khushi ke liye aur.. ak was numb to listen this.. she broke completely..

vis-touch to ak.. beta hum apki bhalai chahte hai aap isme sign kar dijiye.. she signed d paper.. nd went in room..

rj-isne kuch kaha kyo nhi sign karke kaha ja rahi hai yeh..

vis-nhi aap nhi jayegi uske man main jitna dard hai nikal jane dijiye yahi bhala hai uske liye..

ak went in room nd sat on bed.. reminds all those memories happy sad smp day than fight... she cried loudly but put pillow..

aahhh aahhh apne mujhe samjha kyo nhi i love u mera bacha mera pati mera pariwar bikar gaya pura... she was crying like hell ab main kaha jaugi kaha jaugi kaise jiugi apke bina ek ek pal mujhe apki yad aayegi.. rj dadi vis were crying..

vis-ak..

ak-dad.. yeh kya ho gya mera pariwar sab khatam ho gaya.. sab kuch main jina nhi chahti main jina nhi chahti hu.. mar jana chahti hu..

vis-beta aap us insan ke pass jake kya kroge jisko apki kadar tak nhi hai kya karoge uske pass jake aap ab hamari jimedari hai yeh court case hone ke bad hum apko kahi dur leke chale jayege hmm..

ak-dad...

in reality..

rj-par woh salo sal uski udasi ghar main rehke kisi ke bdy main na aana party main na jana sab dikhta hai..

va-maa i think ak ko ek sathi ki jarurat hai hi..

rj-pata nhi... usse manna namumkin hai..

ak was in car..

ak-haa main kar lungi cut d cell phone... haa she sees outside one couple with their child... ak was sad.. a tears drop from her eyes..hope hope hope...

driver-maam wahi chalna hai na..

ak-hmm.. driver stooped d car... ak went inside... sshhh sshhh... she opened d door nd many children came with shout...

diii..

ak-basss.. aahhh.. dey all were shouting... aahhh..

bas sab chup apke ngo main aai hu hala kyo kar rahe aap sab..

kids-ale didi mele liye aap kilo lai ho..

ak-aww mera baby kilona bacha.. laugh lai hu see aur aap sab sab ke liye bhi bari bari kissy do..

dey all gave kisses to ak.. ak starts playing with them... vis was watching to ak from outside..

vis-ek yahi jagah hai ak jaha hum apko kul ke haste hue dekhte hai ab hamara din aacha jayega warna apki hasi toh jaise gayab si ho gai hai.. he went..

ak-bas ab mera kam ho gya time ho gya na..

kid-didi phir aaana..

ak-daily aati hu na.. di sab bache thik hai na.. ngo main koi bhi help ho batana..

di-apke hote hue kya dukh ek sal se yaha judi hai tab se koi dukh nhi hai ab toh yeh bache apko maa ki tarah mante hai..

ak-she had tears... i should leave now bye kidss bye di..

di-bache ke nam pe hamesha ro deti hai... bhagwan kare isko iski khushi mil jaye..

vis reached in office.. he was going suddenly someone asked to him.. hii uncle..

are aap kon.. hii i m rituraj...

vis-kon maine pehchana nhi..

rj-uncle main bablu apke dost ka beta udaypur se mere papa meri family yaha shift hui hai.. nd u know aaj jo meeting hai na woh main attand karne aaya hu jab dad ne apka nam suna toh pehchan gye woh nd mujhe bhej diya yaha..

vis-are haa haa aww kaise ho beta actually tumhe khabhi dekha nhi haa tum bahar padte the na..

rr-yes uncle but now apne dad ke sath business handle kar raha hu.. meeting..

vis-woh hamari beti aati hogi uske sath hai apki meeting..

rr-ooh uncle pani kaha hai main lelu.. he was going to take water.. he was watching in file suddenly he takrayofy from ak.. vis sees to both... ooh ssyy..

ak-its ok jan bhuj ke koi essi galti nhi karega..

rr-rr just looking to her. her innocent beauty.. her cute smile.. waww.. hii i m rituraj.. gave hand..

ak-namathe.. folded hand..

rr-upsss.. koi bat nhi waise yaha office bhut aacha hai aap yaha kam karti hai kya..

ak-apko kya matlb.. vis was admiring to both..

will u plz excuse me..

rr-aap bhut sant hai hmm.. nd oldd wali bat koi bat nhi hum i guess frd ban jaye..

ak-mujhe frdship pasand nhi... mujhe bhut kam hai.. soo plz than vis came..

vis-are beta yeh wahi hai jisse apki meeting hai.. rituraj.. beta pani pi liya..

rr-g uncle pyas bhuj gai... chale miss ak.. uncle ur daughter is vry beautiful..

vis-smile thanku.. ak went..

ak-dad i m waiting for meeting..

vis-beta bura mat manna kam ke time kam yeh hamari beti hai na..

rr-are dont worry uncle i dont feel bad at all.. she is soo nice... aaiye..

vis-u r also nice but buttt..

more part coming soon

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 5 years ago

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Posted: 5 years ago

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rr-g uncle kuch kaha kya..

vis-hmm nhi beta chalo.. dey leave... after that ak was in cabin...

rr was watching to ak her confidence..

all-waww ak itni choti umar main itna sara confidence nd itna sara work hard work waah great..

ak-g thankuu...

rr-hmm impassive... i liked ur work miss ak.. but..

ak-but..

rr-ek problem hai..

ak-kya..

rr-yeh delevry hame only two days main chahiye.. everyone were shocked..

ak-but..

vis-thoda time do beta atleast 4 days.. hum kaise karege..

ak-mujhe ak ka kam pasand aaya now dekhna hai business spirit kitni h boliye do nd done..

ak-hum karege.. vis was happy. i can do it.. i m ready mujhe do rat sone ko nhi milnega fine but kar lenge..

rr-it

oki ak g aap 4 days main hi kariye... vis was confused.. i was watching ki aap ready hoti hai ki nhi because sab koi ready hohi jate hai but u r different so i like u..

ak-hum 2 days main hi karege bas..

rr-aap do rat nhi soyegi toh bhi yeh nhi hogi aur aap 4 days main kariye zid mat kariye ak g... i was taking ur test oki... maja aaya meeting kareke aap hand mila lijiye...

ak-folded her hand g tqq...mera kam ho gya i m going... she went..

rr-ek din toh apko hand milna hi hoga khud apni marzi se.. dear ak g..now ak was in her room... she was working.. varsha sees to her..

va-kab tak itna kam karegi khud ko jaise bhul si gai hai.. le khana kha le..

ak-hmm she was eating are mera anay kaha hai..

va-abhi sula ke aai hu bua bua ho rakhi thi.. tu itna lad mat kiya kar toh usse..

ak-tujhe kya mera beta hai na woh pyara sa chotu sa..

va-haa tune hi toh diya hai mujhe hai na..

ak-uff tu bhi n..

va-ek bat bolu ak tu i think tumhe ab bauji ki bat man leni chahiye..

ak-varsha tu kya keh rahi h..

va-ak ek nhi do sal hone main aa gye ab toh sayad teri life se nk g ka nam mit gya hai ab i think tu dusari shadi ke liye sich sakti h apne maa baap ke kiye..

ak-pehle bhi ki thi na unke liye kya hua aur unhone mujhe apni life se nikal feka maine nhi..

va-aacha g toh abhi bhi tere dil main nk ke liye..

ak-aacha ek bat puchu tumhe..

va-kya..

ak-maine tumhe ngo se ek baby ko diya because uski koi maa nhi thi aur tera koi baby nhi tha.

va-toh..

ak-kalko agar uske maa baap aa gye then..

va-ak..

ak-dar lagta hai na soch ke waise hi ek bar koi life ka hissa ban jaye usse mithaya nhi ja sakta chah ke bhi jaise anay ko sayad tu unhe de bhi de par anay ki jagah wahi rahegi ya sayad tu usse na degi lad degi puri duniya se.. waise hi pyar ko khatam nhi kiya ja sakta..

va-toh nk g aaj bhi jinda h tere khawabo main..

ak-varsha essa qu mat kar jiska ans n de pau.. bas yeh kahugi ki kali baithe rone se aacha h ki khud ko kuch sochne ka moka hi mat do.

va-sry if u felt bad but i really cared for u i want ki tu khush rahe..

ak-i m happy aacha plz ek kam karde mujhe na woh paper dede..

va-khash tu yeh keh pati ki ek bar nk g teri bat sun le aur tu kitna pyar karti h unse yeh bata sake..

hey bhagwan ab iska dard dekha nhi jata pata nhi nk g kya kar rahe honge kaise honge..?

wat will happen in next part..

Precap - howz nk after leap nd vis insist to ak to go in wedding outside

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Posted: 5 years ago

#208

Good part

So much happpened in a single part

Ak nk ki judaai

and ak ki abortion poor baby both should have given space a lill tho evertything used to settles soon

Finally varsha maa ban gayi and ak taking care of baby soo cute

and She helping an orphanage

She becmae sooo much responsible with single incident

Hope naksh jaldi se patch up kare

and ha plss dont show much of rr now plss

Do patch up naksh soonnn Waiting eagerly when both comes face and face after 2 years almost

Interesting parts upcoming

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 5 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: _nakshi_
Good part
So much happpened in a single part
Ak nk ki judaai
and ak ki abortion poor baby both should have given space a lill tho evertything used to settles soon
Finally varsha maa ban gayi and ak taking care of baby soo cute
and She helping an orphanage
She becmae sooo much responsible with single incident
Hope naksh jaldi se patch up kare
and ha plss dont show much of rr now plss
Do patch up naksh soonnn Waiting eagerly when both comes face and face after 2 years almost
Interesting parts upcoming

oo god i was waiting since longgg yr... soo much long..

haa i want ki kuch aacha ho.. haa woh ho gaya na now story ko aage badane ke liye.. 😛.. i waana show ki hadbad is not gud be cool down.. hogi na baba again naksh ki bond increases 😃.

rr ka bhi hoga kuch i thought somthing don't worry 😆..

haa hoga na i will do update soon next part thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments i was waiting.. thanku for ur support 😳

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now in nyt ak was thinking near of window.. than dadi came nd sees to her..

da-thoda sa has le aachi lagti hai..

ak-are dadi aap kab aai yaha..

da-bas abhi abhi aai waise pehle jab tu ghar aati thi sara ghar kil uthta tha aaj pata hi nhi chalta hai ki koi hai bhi is ghar main.

ak-dadi bas kam ka stress hai na.. aur bacho ke liye is diwali main kya gift du wahi soch rahi thi... yeh rat kaisi ajib si hoti hai na kala saya.. khatarnak..

da-soch ka fark hai beta yeh kali rat ke bad ki subah hoti hai aur meri bitiya ki jindagi main bhi hogi.. beta plz tu udas kyo rehne lag gai hase jamana bit gaya tujhe man le apne maa bauji ki bat is budiya ko marne se pehle teri khushi dekhni h..

ak-dadi aap sab kuch dekhegi aur main khud ke ghar pe hu aapke pass maa dad ke pass aur mera beta anay hai aap khush nhi main bari hu aap par..

da-na beta bas yahi chahti hu khush rahe.. put aks head on her chest.. aaaram se soja beta tujhe dukh dene wale bhi chain ki nind kaise so sakte hai..

a dream sequence..

ak was standing in red saree simple.. she took a baby than nk came.. nd hug to baby...

nk-i love u baby..

ak-aur mera number kaha hai..

nk-laugh ohoo aap bhi ho kya..

ak-g yeh apka beta hoga bad main pehle main apki wife hu apki life.. nk touched aks stomach... uu.. bas yahi na i know that u loved only my body nd turned.. nk put to baby on floor...

nk-essa nhi hai dear hug to her from back... essa bilkul nhi hai hum pass rahe ya nhi par ak apka ehsas mere nas nas main jisse koi khatam tak nhi kar sakta i really love u... kissed on her cheeks..

ak-i suddenly she skipped to nk.. babu nk babu mera beta he was going nd ak was running behind of him.. nk was following to ak..

nk-ak waha mat jaiye aap gir jayegi niche.. suddenly ak nd baby falls nd nk sleep broke.. he shouted akkk... it was nks dream...

he take a deep breath... he sees in his cell phone... in flashback.

nk was crying in gy3 arms..

nk-maa ek bar bhi nhi pucha ak ne sign kiya aur paper de diya maa mera dil bhi dukha par ek qu bhi nhi kiya.. mera bacha jo hamare pyar ki nisani thi usse... ek bar agar batati wajah kyo unhone drive kiya car kyo care nhi ki.. ek jhatke main hamara rishta khatam ho gya kya rishta bachane ka haq mera tha.. maine unhe khabhi jaldi uthne ko nhi kaha na essa kaha ki mere upar dhayan dijiye..

phir bhi ek bar ek bat tak nhi ki...

gy-bas beta unke papa ko manna tha hi nhi hamne bhi ak ko khabhi nhi roka yaha tak ki itni badi bat nhi batai hum chahte the bhul jao usse beta hum hai na tere sath... hum hai..

nk-maa main khatam ho gya mujhme kuch bacha hi nhi hai ab pehle wala nk woh nhi rahega jisse log dekhna chahte the...

in reality..

nk-itna dard toh khabhi nhi mila ab toh dream main bhi chain nhi mujhe pata nhi kis janam ki saza hai.. rat ko nind aati nhi din main chain aata nhi... he took bath nd went in hull...

gy3 took breakfast.. nk was having silently...

gy-munna kuch du aur.. beta kale na aachese dekh kitna patla ho gya hai thoda sa kha le..

nk-nhi maa bas pet bhar gaya... hloo haa g sir main aa raha hu.. he stood.. suddenly he takraofy from table.. he cut d phone... saram nhi aati hai is ghar main sare staff mar gye kya esse saman pada rehta hai.. maa mujhe yeh bilkul pasand nhi ki koi bhi chiz mujhe dard de... sara din yeh log karte kya hai... suddenly one baby came..

ba-sry uncle yeh mera hai meri maa yaha kam karti hai woh upar hai yeh maine gira diya galti hai aap gussa mat kariye plz...

nk-aap smile... sry beta aap kelo khub kelo woh mujhe na gussa aa gaya... took to him in his hand.. u r soo cute aap daily yaha aaana aur esse hi kelna main kuch nhi kahuga... apka nam..

ba-ram..

nk-waww.. kelo haa... kissed to him nd leave...

gy-dekha bhabhi maa kaise gussa ho gaya.. samaj nhi aata kya ho gaya hai na puja karta hai na kuch bhagwan se visvas uth sa gaya hai ek bacho ko dekh khush rehta hai warna khana pina sab chut sa gaya hai na party main jana na kuch.. mujhse bat kare mano jamana bit gaya ek mahine kam ke liye bahar rehna.. isko bolo na khush rahe dusari shadi karle manta kyo nhi..

bm-kon kahe dekha nhi bat bat par chila deta hai gussa nak pe rehne laga... pata nhi iski kismat pe kya likha hai... suddenly someone came...

sry sry main late ho gai kya sir hai ya gye..

gy3 got happy..

gy-are bindiya tum..

bi-are touched their feet... kaisi hai aunty aap.. rukiye apke gutne main dard tha na yeh tel bhut aacha hai meri maa bhi lagati hai...

gy-tumhe yad tha beta kitni aachi ho na tum jimedar thabhi toh nk ke sath kam karke aajtak 6 mahine hone ko aaye dat nhi khai..

bm-haa ab toh hame bhi aachi lagne lag gai tum..

gy-beti jaisi..

bi-aap meri itni tarif kyo kar rahi aap log khud itni aachi hai ki main kuch nhi apne itna sikhaya mujhe pyar diya mujhe.. aap best ho waise maine yeh gujiya banai try kariyega.. nk sir kaise hai..

gy-are woh toh office gaya..

bin-kyaa shouted unko main chahiye means mujhe kojege woh byyee bye aunty ab mujhe unki aadat ho gai hai... pakdiye plzz... bye aunty... haye ram gussa ho jayege woh.. she went...

bm-pagal hai ek yahi hai jab aati hai na tab tab hasi aati hai..

gy-haa munna toh bhut empress ho chuka hai isse..

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