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Priya : Chalo dohrate hai 
shaadi ke ve vachan
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jaha maaneet looking awesome stunning couple
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priya : what i say about next story 
Favo : this is painful
but beautiful
Sanju : one girl give seven years to one relation
Priya : but her husband not able to love her back
Favo : but this is not about geet
so just chillπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
priya : yes
so don't worry
you can readπŸ˜‰
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SAHANA ...A RHYTHM

 

Every love story will not b consider as fairy tale,ya having a happy ending.

It's a complex one so read at your own risk... the concept was from a Tamil movie.

 

 

Maan Singh KHURANA was a famous singer, who craved his name in the hearts of million fans, he himself compose his songs which touched the soul of his audience, his voice creates magic and his lines makes them crazy, not only in youth he created his magic in all generation people, because his song is a mixture of love,passion,music. He marked his name in people's heart. He is named as king of music, considering all his songs mostly carries love messages. But none knew he is still waiting to know what love is!!

Yes, even being married for almost 7 yrs ,he did knew what love is, he had a lovely family with his parents and siblings and a beautiful wife, he got his share of parents love sibling fight, and makeup, but still he was immune to the love which would consume yourself .he respects his wife, the way she takes care of him, his family ,she is a perfect daughter in law, perfect sil, even a perfect wife but she never was his lover.

Sameera Maan Singh KHURANA who was simple and sophisticated was married to maan before 7 yrs, like every other they're too was arranged one, Sam was maan's father choice, she can speak about business whole day but can never utter a word about music. Whenever they both shared their views Sam would end up discussing her day with him speaking about clients and meetings, being a soft spoken maan would hear her but he never tried to share his passion like she shares about hers, even after these years he respected her but love was a far fetch dream for him, but in case of Sam she openly said how much she loved him,his response always will be a smile. She always speaks her heart out to him, but he can never ever voiced his desire to her. Even when she expressed her love for kids, he gave in to her thoughts because he always does that. He never went against anyone wishes from his parents to his wife he always tried to fulfil all their wishes even its not in his like, like giving himself to Sam he locked his dream of love too in a corner of his heart. He tried a lot to find his love in Sam but she never touched that part of his heart.

But from last six months a pair of Hazel's were disturbing him, he tried his level best to forget her eyes but ended up memorizing her features in his mind, she craved her presence in his heart just by a simple smile, her thoughts about music always fascinated him, he never stopped himself from sharing his thoughts to her. She was like a breath to him when and how she became that both don't know, first she was a regular viewer of his live concerts who always comes to him to get his autograph, slowly she made her way in his heart. Both will meet regularly either at his office or her house mostly he would ended up driving her after the performance.no one knew when things changed between them...They shared from thoughts of music to love. Simple pure love the more he demand she would willingly gave herself to him. He never said he loved her not that he didn't but his eyes conveyed the words he want to convey, neither she confessed her feelings to him. Both knew what they were doing was wrong, but one never can say what is right and wrong in love. He knew he was married and was betraying sameera, but he want to fulfil his thirst for love which he got almost after 7 yrs of waiting. She knew he was someone else husband, but she can never give herself to anyone vowing the love she had for him. She is his only his from the moment their eyes met.

Days passed both were happy in their little world until Sam saw changes in maan, his most of time staying outside, smiling to himself, staring at his mobile raise a possessive insecurity in her. She made sure she kept a tab on maan and within a day she was before geet house demanding an answer for her involvement in his husband's life.

Sam took a deep sigh determined to throw the girl out of maan life thinking she rang the bell not knowing the shock waiting for her.in few minutes door was opened before Sam blast the girl smiled and politely asked

G: aap!!??

Sam: tum koun ho!!?

G: ji hum geet hai,aur aap...

Before she continue both heard a voice which ironically belong to both.

Maan: geet aavo jaldi,i composed it finally must hear now...geet where r u!!!??

Geet: aa rahi hoon,

Before Sam ya geet could utter a word maan came out and dragged Geet not even noticing who was at door making geet hold on door loose and the door was left azar making Sam look clearly inside.

Geet too momentarily forgot about the unwanted guest and gave her full concentration to maan, they both laughed, sang the song together, enjoyed the time making slight changes in the tune which mostly geet adviced. After their long conversation when geet told maan that some woman came here they both looked at door but Sam who heard them saved herself before they watch her.

Sam left from there before they notice her, glancing a longing look at laughing maan Sam heart cried, he never was this free with her, there was always a thick wall btwn them, knowing how reserved he was, she never tried to broke that, but seeing her husband with geet totally surprised her, he was a total new man with her, the blush that adorned geet for every few minutes she could see was from maan teasing, maan and teasing was itself a new information. The way he asked her suggestions for everything he wrote he sang, hedid, says how simply geet blended herself in maan life. Being his wife he never asked her, but then she knew nothing about music, she was not a music person, still she liked his songs, didn't she!

She loved him selflessly didn't she!!??she was waiting for his love from 7 years then how can he love other woman!!??If he can love other woman he must love her too, she must be the only woman in his life, hiswife! Determined she left for home to get her love all for herself...

Yes, she just liked his work, whereas music was his love, his life, vowing herself she would also love music, will discuss with him ,will spent her time with him and will make her husband fall for her, if only she knew not the discussion about music but sharing of each other heart will lead  to love she may conquer his heart much before, shewaited for him for hours and when he came ,he directly went to bed saying he had his dinner with his frnd.sam smiled to herself knowing who his frnd was!? Without asking anything she just hugged him tight fearing to lose him, fearing to let him go to his love, LOVE!!!That was what exactly he calls geet, she never asked him to respond to her I love you, thinking he was always hers and one day he will love her. He did love one day sadly not her but GEET.

Next few days Sam tried her level best to win maan, she even attend music classes to know about music  only to get distracted and everything about music went above her head. When she tried to indulge maan in some talks about his upcoming concert .he softly said without hurting her, that there is nothing that she would help him, and concert is not a business meeting, saying he left, leaving Sam in tears knowing where exactly he was going and whom can help him. She knew she is losing her husband but desperate to get him back she opted the only way which according to her was left.

A day before concert Sam came to geet very well knowing maan will be busy in his stage work, she determined to get her maan back. Once again went to meet geet. The moment geet opened door,sam introduced herself as maans wife, leaving geet to paralyze in her place.

Sam: can I come in!?

Geet(composing herself):yes, plz this way.

Both made themselves comfortable on couch for the most uncomfortable talk of their life.

Sam: mein jaanthi hoon, maan aur aap,mera mathlab,maan aapse h pyar karthey hai,par mein maan koh nahi koh sakthi,mein unnse bohoth pyar karthi hoon,inn khey liye kuch bhi karoongi, mein music bhi sikhooogi,unkhey sath saari baatey karoongi,mein unnkhi dil mein apni jagah banalongi ,aap plz mere pati muje wapas dhey dhijiye, plz

Saying Sam showed her hands before geet like begging her.

Geet: mein maan koh kabhie aapse dhoor nahi karoongi, mein toh bas...

Sam: par maan khudh humse dhoor jaa rahe hai,jab tak aap hai,maan humari taraf nahi dheykenge,aap plz chale jaaye maan ko chodkar,chale jaayiye humari aur maan khi zindagi seh, hum sab kuch pehllle jaisa kardhenge, aap chale jaayiye...

Seeing Sam crying and her efforts to get maan back made geet guilty,she thought her presence in maan life affected his perfect married life, to make things clear she agreed to Sam,and as promised after the concert there was no trace of geet, she vanished like there was never a person called geet.

Maan felt like he was running in darkness,he tried his all contacts but always met a dead end, he even asked her frnds, her workplace but none had a clue about her whereabouts.

Days turned into weeks, weeks to months but there was never a news about geet, maan drowned himself in alcohol whenever he was alone. Surely he reached new heights in his career but he was a lost person, Sam every try went in drain, she wants to get maan all for herself in her process she even lost the maan she knew, she tried every possible way to get close to him only to meet his silence, frustrated she demanded a family thinking a child would bond him to herself. She even convinced after 8 yrs of their marriage, the whole family was happy hearing news along with maan, but yet Sam couldn't get his love. With passing days doctor advised its critical for Sam to continue this pregnancy so suggested abortion but Sam was adamant to have this child as maan was giving his time to her,maybe even he treats her as just a responsibility the thought he is with her was enough to make her go through this phase.

Maan was never the person to share his views with Sam,she asked for family he gave into her and she want to continue her pregnancy knowing it's risky yet he kept his thoughts to himself and silently took care of her,if not love at least he can fulfil her wishes thinking he took care of Sam in every possible way. But she didn't failed to see maan yearning heart ...his earn for love...for geet...in solitude he only remembered his days with her...she knew she saw yet she kept on trying ,she was adamant to make him love her...

The news of maan becoming father spread like fire in media and it reached geet too. The resolve to stay away from maan became stronger ,and she promised to herself never to look back from now, she had a reason to live now, thinking a small smile played on her lips looking at her son sleeping peacefully.

It's 5 yrs from the day he lost geet ,he was still trying to get info about her whereabouts, he was on his way to London as his detective said geet was seen there, without taking any chance he left asking his spy to get more info on her. Locking his seatbelt once again he drifted to the day, where he found why geet left him. it was not more than a black day in his life as he lost both his wife and child on this day, before leaving him Sam confessed how she asked geet to b out of their lives and she accepted, Sam pregnancy was always danger but the hell broke when she slipped a step from stairs on her seventh month, doctors tried their best but complications were more leaving no chance for Sam life along with baby. Knowing her end is sure Sam asked few minutes with maan and confessed her Convo with geet.it left him no where that his wife asked his love to leave him, he can't blame Sam as a human she tried to win her love, he can't even blame geet who put his happiness before hers. He always blamed himself for hurting the two women in his life if only he didn't gave inti his father demands...if only he didn't gave into Sam ...if only he could stop his heart to beat for geet...he blamed himself for the past five years for ruining two lives, yet he had  a chance to save geet so he tried everything to get any single information about her...and to day finally afterGetting the details about geet, maan came with thudding heart to get his love back, after almost 5 yrs he got her where about, as soon as he rang the bell ,a cute little boy opened the door, a moment later he squealed in joy, shouting and addressing him as dad, it didn't took maan a minute to knew that he was his son, his symbol of love, a and felt proud of geet that she told about him to their son, a surprised geet stood rooted seeing maan at her door step and their son screaming in joy seeing his father.

A few minutes later geet to flung herself in his arms unable to control her feeling, she cried for herself,for him,for keeping away their child of father love, even knowing Sam is no more, she didn't dare to go back to him. Blaming herself for his ruined marriage, but now letting all her inhabitants she cocooned herself in his arms, tofeel safe.

Sahan clapped asking: dad u will never leave us right!!?

Before maan could answer geet answered

Geet: yes Sahan, from now he will never.

Maan : sahan

He immediately went to those moments where he said how much he loved SAHANA a melody tune, it's a symbol of love, patience, good ness which were another name to that tune. Thinking how much his love mattered to geet he engulfed her in a hug along with sahan, silently promising to himself to never let them go. Responding to his promise geet tightened her hold on his.

That's it dear's...

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Sanju : katappa ne bahubali ko kyun maara
favo : πŸ˜²
priya : sanju puri hil gyi
oh babaji
mujhe bhut dukh ho rha hai

in this sadness i want to dance
Sanju : priyaaa😑
favo : i get it
priya : what
Favo : our next post

     
geet : aap kuch smjhe maan
Maan : hmm
Geet : tell me
Maan : just seen own self
   

Na na na na, na na na na
Na na na na, na na na na

O o re raja
Veeron ke veer aa
O o re raja
Veeron ke veer aa
Naino se tu na
Door ho na

 - Daily-motion 


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priya : aa gye aap sb wapas
video dekh ke
chaliye hum ab apni ek aur kahani ki taraf bdte hai😊
Favo : you mostly all heard
jodiya upar bnti haiπŸ˜‰
priya : but sometime
kuch jodiya galat bn jaati haiπŸ˜ƒ
sanju : next story about ______________________?????????
,
how i tell you know
read kro byiπŸ˜‰
            

Geet : maan in end we surely meetπŸ˜ƒ
Maan : yes geet
its written in our destiny

             *********

Destined love

It was not monsoon season but today it was Raining heavily like all the above forces were either feeling to happy ya too sad with the happenings below, the high court was busy with people with their respective cases ,amidst of them at one corner a lady was thanking her lawyer for the hard work she put in to get her not only divorce but her child custody too, after facing a betrayal by her husband whom she loved, losing her child to him was not less than a death to her but her lawyer was successful in getting her son's custody. even her husband was not allowed to meet her son once in a while, all thanks to her husband wicked temper problems, even though she lost a relation, she gained her son, that's enough to make her breath .On the other corner a father was showing his gratitude to his lawyer for winning the custody case today he too lost a relation but got his daughter all for himself, she was only ray of hope in his otherwise deserted life after knowing how his wife betrayed him.

 

Unknown to the happenings the two kids ansh and palak was seated on a bench enjoying the rain ,they both looked at each other before they could continue their talk which was never ending they were disturbed by someone calling their names respectively.

 

ANSH

 

PALAK

 

Both looked at the source of sound on either side.

 

Boy ran and hugged her mother who was in tears yet she was smiling, and palak ran to her father who opened arms for her. Both the parents took hold of their child and walked past each other without even sparing a glance to each other or any other person ,why would they, when their life was in their arms, smiling, giggling making them forget about the cruel world. But the kids didn't forget to wave their hands to each other bidding bye.

 

 

 

...Few months later...

 

The ****** society was buzzing with activities, few where busy in their jogging, few where busy to go to their school, offices and clgs,, in midst of all these Mrs khurana and handa were yelling their lungs out, but none paid attention to them as it was daily normal thing for them, if they didn't fight a day the society people will feel that they were behaving abnormal. Sometime it was either their respective partners will end the fight ya the younger generation will do the honors but if by mistake Mr.maan khurana ya ms.geet handa tried to stop them, instead of stopping they will end up fighting with each other.

 

The society people often wonder why these four were always love to fight when Mr.khurana and handa were nothing but close frnds and the younger generation palak and ansh were adorned as cute brother sister. Many try to resolve their fight but they will find new reasons to yell at each other like yday geet had called the cops as khuranas were creating too much of noise in the name of jagratha, a few days before maan had literally wakeup all the neighbors at midnight as geet had parked her vehicle in his place of parking.

 

They can fight on everything and anything like just now Mrs khurana was blaming on Mrs handa that her dog wetted maan shirt on Mrs handa instructions. They were ranting on each other when maan and geet joined them. The sight of each other made them mad.

 

Geet: maa aap kyun iss dusht dhanav seh bath karrahe ho,iss khi dimag kahraab hai chalo app, muje late horahi hai clinic khey liye.

 

Maan: haan haan maa aap kyun iss khi Mooh lagrahi hai dentist khi naam seh insanon khi daanth tod rahi hai yeh,kahi aap khi bhi naa toh dhey.

 

Geet: how dare u to insult my profession?

 

Maan:how dare u to say I am mad?

 

Geet:sach sunn kar bura laga.

 

Maan: pagal hotha toh khudh kah business nahi samhaltha, itne bada contracts nahi milthey muje.

 

 

Geet: khudh khi tarref karthey kabhie takthey nahi ho aap,waise kisse patah contract mile ya churaya!?

 

Maan: teri jaisa nahi hoon duplicate dentist,mein sachii business man hoon. And their rattle begins one on one until they were disturbed by a voice.

 

Ansh: mama jaldi aavo mera school bus aajayenge

 

Palak: papa plz meri choti banadoh bus aajayegi giving each other a murderous glance both went to attend their kids. As usual both ansh and palak seated with each other in the bus to enjoy their journey.

 

Days were passing with their routine but maan noticed geet was not in herself from two day. She was not answering him back and was turned into mute not that he was disturbed by her but her caring nature towards palak when she was fever with no female around made him knew about her softer side, she was as caring much to his annoyance, when ansh told palak was down with fever, knowing he was alone she took no stone unturned in caring palak until his mother arrived. 

 

Not that he was ignorant to ansh, after palak he was the best child he met, whenever ansh was playing with palak he too joined them and enjoyed with kids yet he kept his war with geet.

 

Maan saw geet was walking in garden in her thoughts, deciding to know what the matter he too joined her.

 

Maan: kya bath hai bohuth khush lag rahi ho!?

 

Geet gave an annoyed look but didn't reply.

 

Maan: arey bolo toh,baat karne seh khushi dhugni hojayegi ,abh tum itna khush lagrahi ho toda hume bhi khushi doh.

 

Geet: maan plz mein ladne khi mood mein nahi hoon.

 

Maan: toh kya rone khi mood mein ho,tumhe dhek kar lagraha hai abhi rone wali ho.

 

Geet: maan plz

 

Maan: arey batavo toh sahi,kis bath seh chehra par barah Baja hua hai, mein ho sakhey toh madath karoonga pakka promise.

 

Geet :aap meri madath nahi kar sakthey, in fact iss prblm kah koi solution hi nahi.

 

Maan: aisi koi prblm hi nahi,jiskhi solution nahi hai bolo kya hua.

 

Geet taking a deep breath: kuch din mein ansh khi school mein father's son competition hai, aur ansh zid pakada hua hai uss koh part lehna hai.

 

Maan: toh,tumhari husband koh bhuladoh waise bhi itna kya kaam yaar abroad jaakar family bhool gaya

 

 

 

 

Geet kept silent,and seeing her maan knew something was there still to come. He waited for her continue and she did.

 

Geet: mein single mother hoon maan, 2 yrsback mera divorce hogaya but ansh koh maine jhoot bola uss khi papa abroad mein hai.

 

Maan just assured her to continue...

 

Geet: meri arrange marriage hui thi,mein aur dev khush they apni choti duniya mein par dev koh humesha bada admi bannatha,mehnath kah rasta chodkar uss neh kuch aur hi kiya jise mein kabhie bardash nahi karsakthi...,achanak seh woh lakhon khi paise lahne lage,kimthi jewar,bohoth kuch... poochne par ,ladne par uss neh finally accept kiya he was physically satisfying his boss nayantara who was married to an aged man. Tara meri husband koh sexually use karrahi thi aur dev paison khey liye...

 

She gulped the lump formed in her throat disgusted about the things her husband did for money,so I demanded for a divorce dev razi nahi tha uss seh ansh chahiye tha but with proof about his character I got ansh custody,aur maine poori kohshis khi ansh koh kabhie uss admi khi yaad na aaye but seems like today I failed, saying this she broke into sobs.

 

Geet: kash aap khi biwi khi tarah,dev bhi margaya hotha aaj yeh naubath hi nahi aathi.

 

Maan: meri biwi mari nahi hai geet, I was divorced too, par palak khey liye aur mere liye woh margayi.

 

Shocked geet looked at him puzzled.

 

Maan: sam koh humesha model bannatha,par uss khi papa neh uss khi shadhi kardiya,she was always complaining about life ,even tried to abort palak but I was against it. I tried very hard to make her see how beautiful our life is, but all my patience gave up when she went to audition leaving one month old palak to cry for milk, that day I decided enough to bare this woman who never cared for others let alone her own child. She was more than happy to wash hands from palak, so divorce and custody was easy for me. The woman who was never there for her child was considered as dead to me and my palak.

 

Geet: I am sorry,aap meri prblm solve karne aaye they,khudh apni past koh yaad karna pada.

 

Maan: hmm... it's ok, how about I join ansh for competition.

 

Geet: nahi maan,woh teek nahi hoga.

 

Maan: dheyko koi ehsaan nahi karrahi hoon,jab palak beemaar thi tumne rakka nah uss kah kyal toh abh meri bari.

 

Geet: lehkin...

 

Maan: meri maano toh,tumhe ansh koh batana chahiye apni papa khi bare mein,jitna chupavogi utna uss seh dard hoga.abhi khey liye prblm was solved but tum sochna zaroor, saying this maan left taking details about the day.

 

Unknown to them their father saw them sharing their past and present problems and it didn't take them more time to express their idea about marrying their children but most difficult task was making their wife's agree, they did had this idea of their kids remarry but seeing them fighting until yday they didn't dare to express their views but today they saw a ray of hope, without wasting time they tried to convince their partners even blackmailed them in name of ansh and palak so finally wife's had to bow their heads in front of their husband's wish.

 

Now as the elders were at ease they decided to talk with maan and geet but the outcome was what they expected, both refused point blank but elders didn't gave up as usual the emotional black mail in the name of ansh and palak worked. Even Mrs khurana and handa said how many more yrs they will be alive before closing their eyes they had to see their children settled.

 

So finally maan geet had to bow before them and even before father's day competition they were married. it didn't took lot of effort from geet to convince ansh as she said his father won't come ever and she lied to him about him being in abroad, and if ansh is ok maan can be his papa. it was more than the little kid could ask for even though he was hurt that his father left him but maan being to eb his father washed all his sadness and he accepted maan as his father. Palak was always fond of her geet aunty was sooo excited to get her as maa. Geet life turned a total 360 degree from geet handa to geet khurana

 

 

It was not easy to both of them to accept the changes in life but both maan and geet put their whole effort to make the kids happy, so by the end of month palak was more of geet daughter than Maan's and ansh was adorned by his hero papa.

 



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Their days passed with kids and both got involved in each other activities without their notice,geet will take care of maan clothes and his much needed things like wallet, files, laptop and his hankie, along with kids special Punjabi bf which maan hates to core but for geet he will have that without any fuss, but noticing Maan's discomfort geet slowly learning Italian food, on the other hand maan avoided non-veg for geet,knowing she can't even stand the smell. He avoided taking it, if geet had any emergency he will drop and pickup her by strictly asking her to call him. They both mingled in their life's without much effort, their budding bonding was not hidden from the elders ,which made Mrs khurana on cloud 9,mrs khurana who was in the start apprehensive about geet was now totally relaxed seeing her dil taking care of her husband and kids, yes her kids none would say palak wasn't geet daughter seeing the bond they developed in short span if time, and her worry to have a waaris to solved with ansh ,yes the khuranas accepted ansh with open arms and he was elder grandson to them who will take legacy.

 

While palak was pampered by Mrs Handa to no ends even though there were always ready to show each other down in every single chance but as a family they were happy. They were blissfully unaware about the problem about to knock on their life's...

It wasn't rocket science for geet to know that maan was disturbed from two days, she let him have his space thinking some business trouble but he was still tensed even after getting a prestigious contract, true their comfort level was good but they didn't came that close to question each other about things to share, they were parents to kids but not husband and wife still,geet was in dilemma how to ask maan about the reason for his state ,she was yet to realize why his tensed state was eating her up!?On the other hand maan decided to talk to geet it's high time he must leave the decision to her so he decided to break the ice keeping his emotions in check.

After dinner maan asked for a walk in their society garden and a look at him she knew he was finally going to reveal what was eating him with in from days...they both silently took their seat on bench and geet had a nagging feel about the thing...

 

Maan: geet doh din pehle muje sam kah phone aaya, she wants to meet me,but muje samaj nahi aaraha mein kya kahroon... plzz help me 

 

It took a while to process his words and finally when they made sense something drastically burned in her and tears threatened to fall. She tried to form a sentence biting her tears back, once again her family was going to break more or less their past was always a wall between them and their future.

 

Geet: aap muje seh kyun... I mean ...mein kaise...mein kya karsakthi hoon iss mein.

 

Maan: just guide me, she was literally begging for a chance.

 

Geet: chance!?

 

Chance to get back in your life? Are u ok with it maan, she wants to ask but decided against it

 

Maan: to meet me,to talk...!?

 

What exactly was there to talk...It was not easy for her to reply but she did

 

Geet: toh aap koh milna chahiye,bath karna chahiye shayad...

 

Maan: par uss neh jo kiya...

 

Geet: maan woh past tha, galathi insaan seh hi hothi hai ,,so I guess everyone deserves a chance..So...

 

Even though she is convincing him to meet her but her insides were boiling with the thought of her husband meeting his ex-wife...

 

Maan: kya sab koh ek chance milna chahiye,chahe woh insaan kitna bhi galath ho...

 

Geet only hummed in response, if her inner fight wasn't less he added more, next maan dropped the original bomb

 

Maan: geet sam nahi,dev tumse bath karna chahtha hai, he desperately wants to meet u for once..so...

 

Shocked would be a wrong word describe geet's state, the most hurting was maan asking her to meet Dev, the thought Dev came back was never a problem, but the mere thought of maan sending her to Dev pinched her heart. Wasn't he affected that she was meeting her ex-husband the few moments her imagination about maan and sam literally burned her but here her husband was as cool as cucumber in sending her...

 

Geet: aap chahthey ho mein Dev khey paas jaoon. The word Dev from her thought didn't even settled well with maan, here she was questioning him about going to him.

 

Maan: tumne khudh kaha everyone needs a chance...

 

The hell he faced for two days he couldn't even put in words... if not for Dev begging constantly...his misted eyes and regret state forced human in him... he will never allow Dev to see his wife let alone meeting.

 

Geet;woh insaan khey liye kaha tha shaitan khey liye nahi, Dev kisi shaitan seh kam nahi

 

Maan: jab tum muje sam seh Milne bhej sakthi ho toh ...

 

Geet: aage math bolna maan,aap neh muje bathon mein uljaya ,aur apni mathlab khi bath nikaaldhi...bas mein nahi bhej rahi aap koh kisi khey paas,aap khudh bhej rahe ho muje uss insaan khey paas...

 

Maan: nahi ,mein bas ..

Geet cut his words: aap chahthey hai mein Dev seh milon,teek hai miloongi ,par yeh bhi samaj leejiye iss khey baad hum dohno mein sab kuch badal jaayega kuch bhi pehle jaisa,nahi rahega,...

 

 

Maan:nahi geet aisi koi bath nahi,tumne khudh kaha agar sam athi, tumse poochthi toh ,mujhse milna hai...

 

Geet: ji nahi,aap neh bhulvaya mujhse ,arey aaye koi sam vam meri samne,pooch khey toh dhey khey meri pati seh milna hai,aankhey nikaal kar uss khi hath mein naa dhi toh mera naam bhi geet khurana nahi!?She huffed making him shock with her words.

 

Before he could say something she again tangled.

Geet: toh kab jaana hai muje ,uss admi she milne...

 

Maan: woh tumhara wait karraha hai *****hotel mein.

 

Geet: toh chaliye,dhekthey hai yeh drama bhi.

 

Maan: mein..mein kaise...kyun tum jaa...

 

Geet: sochna bhi math mein akeli jaoongi maan,chaliye mere sath...

 

Maan tried his level best to stay behind of course he will follow and keep an eye on her from far but he wasn't literally going to drop off geet to meet dev ...the idea itself making him burn but geet heard none she took him with her and even offered to seat with them ...he was temped for a moment to see and hear their talks but dev requested geet for few minutes alone with him making maan to take a table far from them...

 

Maan was watching from a distance seeing geet talking with dev, most of dev talking and geet glaring at him ,at one point maan was tempted to rip dev hand from his body seeing him place his hand on geet 's hand which was lying on table...,he thought after sam he can't share his heart to anyone but now at this point of life ,it was clear his heart and life was in geet's control, she not only won his heart in few days but a life without her was unimaginable to maan, all he want to do is take her back home but he kept himself same reasoning it is just a talk, but his patience and reasoning broke when geet got up from table and dev held her shoulders more of threatening her than stopping, that's it he took long strides to punch him hard but geet slap stopped him few steps before them, he knotted his brows looked at geet she was boiling in rage and then at dev who was signaling someone, he was confused whom that lady was but his thoughts were broken by geet voice.

 

Geet: don't u dare to even look at my son, I have court orders ,don't u dare!!After giving him a disgusting look, she was about to move but seeing maan she stopped for few seconds but walked past him, confused maan looked at dev who was smiling at the same woman ,showing him thumps up sign his instincts told something was drastically wrong but he decided to confront geet first.

 

He found her waiting besides their car, he wants to know why dev called her but geet kept her silence, she asked him to drive but he didn't budge and was adamant to know what dev said... so finally she blasted him.

 

Geet: uss insaan khi patni maa nahi bansakthi,iss liye uss seh ansh chahiye apni virasat koh sambhalne ke liye,,uss khi himath kaise hui meri bache,khi sauda karne...

 

Maan: sauda!?

 

Geet: haan agar mein usse ansh dhoongi toh mujhe paise dheyga,abh tara seh shadhi Jo kiya,uss khi pati khi mauth khey baadh,par bachey nahi hai toh yaad aagayi apni khudh khi bete khi,,meri bete khi sauda karne aaya ...uss khi toh mein..

 

Maan: humara

 

Geet: kya!?

 

Maan: humara beta geet

 

Geet: ji nahi,mera beta aap kah koi Barosa nahi hai,aaj dev aaya kal sam aayi toh phir aap kahenge,kya mein sam seh miloon!? Mujhse nahi hoga yeh roz raz kah natak,iss liye mein jaa rahi hoon apne ghar.aur haan palak bhi mere sath rahegi abh seh.

 

Maan: tum pagal ho gayi ho yaar,mein kyun jaoonga sam koh Milne...aur mein kaise rahoonga tumhari bina

 

Geet: yeh muje yeha laane seh pehle sochna tha..aur abh hum...

 

Geet was about to retort when maan phone cried aloud seeing the number he attended it, only to get shock of his life, watching his pale face geet asked him what happened only the thing uttered scared her to death.

 

Maan: bachey ghar par nahi hai,poori society mein kahi mil nahi rahe!?

 

Geet asked him to drive home fast but maan was stopped suddenly with the image of dev smiling. Seeing maan immersed in thoughts geet shake him few times to get his attention, she gestured him to drive.

 

Maan: muje lagtha hai hume dev koh follow karne chahiye...Hearing again Dev name was pouring ghee in fire, seeing her red face he knew she wouldn't listen until he explains why and what, so he cleared what he saw there, so both decided to follow him, with much efforts they found his room number and before entering they heard voices from slightly opened door.

 

Dev: tum pagal ho kya tara,sirf ansh koh lana tha,iss bachi koh kyun laayi!?

 

Tara: dev dhey ko kitna cute bachi hai,humara poori family banjayega,tum mein,aur humara beta,beti cute family naa.

 

Dev: ansh mera khoon hai,mera hua but yeh ladki koun hai, hum aise kaise...

 

Tara: shhh ansh tumhara beta hai,yeh bachi palak tumhari patni khi beti hai ...aur abh seh humari...

 

They kept on arguing but ground slipped from geet and maan feet knowing their kids r in danger, without wasting a second maan called his friend abhishek who was acp and explained the situation. ACP assured him to reach soon and asked them to keep an eye on dev but not to make aware of their presence, it may lead things to difficult.

 

Maan and geet were waiting impatiently but hearing next words from tara made geet to Strom in room.

 

Tara: dev dheyko iss ladki koh hosh aaraha hai... I will inject her.

 

Tara was stopped by geet who was enraged seeing her going to inject palak,she slapped tara hard few tyms making her miss her balance, it took few minutes for dev to know what exactly happened ,he was about to hold geet when he too received a strong punch from maan.

 

Dev tried his level best to fight back but maan didn't give a chance to recover, he kept blocking his punches and gifted him few more. On other side kids woke up with chaos and was terrified to see their parents slapping and kicking someone. geet saw them and quickly took them in her embrace to console them, and it had enough time for Tara to get her pistol from drawer. She pointed at maan who was beating dev while he lay half dead on ground,

 

Tara: stop beating my dev...I will shoot.

 

Tara scream did draw attention of geet and kids but maan was still beating dev to his heart's content ,the man who not only dared to hold geet hand even laid his dirty hands on their kids, he was blaming himself for bringing geet here and putting kids through this ordeal, he just wanted to kill dev and didn't paid attention to the surroundings.

 

But the noise of firing caught his attention not once but twice, he turned only to find geet was standing showing her back to him, but she was slowly crumbling and Tara hand was bleeding. He again looked at geet and saw she was bleeding from shoulder, it took him few moments to understand that tara was about to shoot him, but geet took that bullet and sametime Tara was shot by Abhishek who was there, seeing her pointed pistol he fired at her.

 

He was still looking at bleeding geet unable to react until their kids cry broke his stance he immediately rushed geet to hospital with abhishek help...

 

Maan was pacing before OT where geet was getting treated. He seemed worn-out as it took all his energy to console much terrified kids about their mother condition. He called his parents along with geet parents and narrated what happened with them. Even though they were angry on him and gave their piece of mind but noticing his condition they composed themselves and attended kids who was still asking for their mother, after sometime doctor came announcing geet was safe just needed rest, asking them to wait until they shift her to room. Kids were calm after seeing their mother sleeping however they want to talk with her but Maan consoled them saying they can meet her tmrw and with much pressure he sent them with elders who were not ready to leave. But at last they left asking Maan to look after geet and Cal them if needed anything. Geet slowly opened her eyes and it took her a minute to understand where she was, and with that whole day events played before her eyes making her shudder. 

 

She was still lost in thinking what would have happened to maan, if she didn't came btwn, the thing that bullet would have hit him scared her to death, her moment made Maan to wake and he was delighted to see her awake ,he took her hand in his to make himself believe she was fine. He was about to call doctor but geet stopped him asking.

 

Geet: bachey!?

 

maan: safe hai, bahut mushkil seh ghar gaye hai.

 

Geet: Dev?

 

maan: dev aur uss khi biwi dohno jail mein hai,tensn khi koi bath nahi sab teek hai.abh bas tum teek hojavo hum jaldi gharjayenge ...

 

Geet: hum!?mathlab

 

maan: mathlab kya hum yaani,tum aur mein,goli shoulder par lagi hai naa,dimag par asar horaha hai kya!? Azeeb sawal pooch rahi ho?.

 

Geet: meri dimag teek hai,lehkin lagtha hai aapka nahi,yaad hai Maine kaha apni bachon khey sath rahoongi apne ghar,yaad aaya!?

 

maan: geet yaar abh tum pechli bath koh kyun laarahi ho,jo beeth gaya uss koh kyun phir seh beech mein laarahi ho,abh sab teek hai naa

 

Geet: mein,mein beech mein laarahi hoon,aapne laya meri kal koh mere samne aur kya kaha sab teek hai abh,kya teek hai,aaj dev aaya aap neh bhej diya muje,kal aap khi sam aayegi toh bhi aap muje hi bheyjenge Maan, aap kah koi barosa nahi!!?

 

maan: Meri sam!? Woh kaha seh aayi,aur mein tumhe kyun bheyjoonga,yaar sach mein tumhare dimag karab hogaya hai,tum rest karo mein doctor koh bulatha hoon,azeeb bathey karne lagi ho tum..

 

Geet: nahi Maan,muje nahi hoga ,jaise aaj dev aaya hai aap khey pas,kal sam aayi toh!? Mera kya hoga,mein kahi ki nahi rahoongi ,mein...

 

 

maan: Geeet,,,geet aisa kuch nahi hoga,plz trust me.

 

But she just turned her face another side unable to keep check on her emotions, she was not sure what she was feeling towards Maan ,and why the thought of going far from him bothered her.

 

On other side Maan desperately tried to console her, he needed her to trust him always like he will with her, he couldn't afford even the thought of losing her, yet he lived that moment few hours before just to understand she holds very imp place in his life, ya it won't be wrong to even say she became his life slowly and the moment he saw her in pool of blood his life stopped for a brief moment.

 

But he doesn't want to rush things, first step he wants to make her trust him. He slowly made her look at him, looking straight in her eyes he said.

 

Maan: mein nahi jaantha pyar kya hai geet,Jo sam khey sath mera jo bhi tha,woh pyar nahi ho saktha,agar hotha woh muje chod khey nahi jaathi, muje pyar koh jaanna hai,pyar karna hai,kya tum mujhe mere  pyar  khi safar mein sath dohgi...kya barosa kar pavogi mujh par?

 

Too overwhelmed with his words she just nodded accepting to be with him ,it's not she didn't trust him, just her insecurities made her talk like that, but hearing she was the only one whom he can associate love word made all her insecurities vanish.

 

Maan slipped besides her kissing her forehead silently promising to be with her till his last breath.

 

Everything happens for good Dev re-entry in their life made them realize their feelings towards each other, even Ansh and Palak were out of trauma seeing their parents love for them, their life too filled with ups and downs but they overcame every hurdle only to become each other strength.


THE END


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Geet : now a days am seeing 
he coming late
aaj toh inki class leni padengi
.

.
sanju : oh god my poor maan
going get scold
Priya : aaj bhut pyaar aa rha hai
Favo : wah sanju di
kya baat hai
Sanju : mujhe baki sb maan pasand hai
bs is priya ke chodkeπŸ˜‰
Priya : not again sanju😑
.
.
           

Maan : ek taraf my wife is angry
another side my daughter
let see what punishment i going get
babji save me
              *************


A little girl of around 7 years was pacing up and down frowning, her face contorted in anger with the clock ticking away every minute while a lady with hazel eyes, white-milky skin, black long curly hairs with a smile to die is sitting on the bed folding the clothes, glancing towards the little girl in every 2 minutes barely concealing the smile which was threatening to erupt on her pink petals.

 

  After almost 15 more minutes the little girl glanced towards the door and upon seeing him not coming out she roared in her little yet cute angry voice "It's been more than half-an-hour Mr. Daddy Singh Khurana and if you still didn't comes out then your punishment will double-up.

 ********removed due to writer demand*****crystal_flames(modified 29.01.2018)

~THE END~

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priya : we see many animated video
sanju : one more maaneeet fan try this
Favo : ek like
ek comment uske naam
par 
humare maan - geet toh aur khi hi busy hai
           

Maan : Geet , where is my file..while searching file in cupboards.. geet ..where r u ..
Maan come from his study room , his eyes angry glare to geet .
Maan: geet.. with grinned teeth.
Geet turn look at fuming maan: what .. with angry face.
Maan: last few minutes I am asking u file but u watching cartoon film .
Geet : I love cartoon movie, why u disturb me .. go check ur file in ur cupboard as turn her face to movie once again.
Maan switch off TV through remote and geet marched to maan push him to bed while maan pulled her waist ..both fallen on bed .
Geet: maan, give me remote otherwise I don't know what I will do.. 
Maan: no .. 
Geet : last times, I am  saying give me with fuming face.
Maan naughty face : no ..


Favo: sanju di, I think maaneet not stop their cute fight .. now what we will do ..
Priya : let watch some cartoon. 
Sanju chuckled face:  u r PD not kid ..
Priya: SD & KD  , u love this cartoon .. its based on our maaneet .. let watch and then say ,

   

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iTYsmVCGxrA[/YOUTUBE]
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sanju:kalpi where r u!!??
kalpi:i am here di
priya:lets go shopping!!??
sanju:yes we need to but lots of eatables to enjoy upcoming posts
kalpi:ok
priya:we need to pick tissues too
sanju:why!!?we r not going to read your updates priya we are going to enjoy our thread postsπŸ˜†
priya:😑
kalpi:di i am hungry lets go😳
sanju:yes yes come we need to move on next post tooπŸ˜›
priya:😲

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Priya : aap logo ne gaane toh bhut sune honge
Sanju : par kya aapne kbhi koi aakhri gaana suna hai
Favo : don't shock
it's just about
priya : stop
before revealing
ye toh dekhne do reader ko
maan - geet kya sochte hai is baare mein
         

Geet : maan am seeing you
you getting ready from past an hour
chakkar kya hai
Maan : am rockstar
in next story
geet : kuch jyada excited nhi ho rhe aap
Maan : geet don't jealous
if you playing role of ghost
geet : am not ghost
Maan : oh
ya she is beautiful witch
Geet : maannn
Maan : why you shouting 
geet : aapne mujhe
.
mujhe
chudail kaha
Maan : hindi me matlab toh yhi hota hai
geet : now see
what a witch do
.
she pick comb and start beating on his head.
.
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favo : oh god our maan
priya : kalpi
ye kahani hai thodi alag
sanju : jo marke bhi na mar saki
favo : THE LAST SONG
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INTRODUCTION

 A heart without love ...An incomplete melody ...A song which needs that melody ...When the melodies find their song ...the heart find the love .


PART 1

The music of the piano filled d atmosphere, as he stopped playing he was applauded by the audience, but he was unfazed by the attention he received. It always felt empty though he had all d recognition being d best musician, he still felt lonely. He curtly nodded and left the stage.

As he was leaving a melodious voice of a girl stopped him,You did well , but u r still unhappy .Don't worry u will find ur happiness soon .He turned around but was surprised to see no one was there. "I must b dreaming I guess ", he thought warily. "Shall we head home Sir ", his loyal attendant asked him. "Sure ", he said.

He was guided to his car and d ride back home was silent again like every other day. He reached his mansion, full of servants no one to share his joy, to share his sorrows. He went back to sleep.

In his dream he saw that a beautiful young maiden was standing in front of him. Her beauty was not what attracted him but her melodious singing voice which he was drawn to. "You r here ", she said without turning back. "Do u like my song ", she asked. He recognized the voice to b d same as he heard coming down from the stage. "Who r you? he asked. "Have we met,before he could get the answer he was awaken by d sound of his alarm.

 He saw the time and decided to practice for his new concert. He thought about the dream and the girl , her song he tried to recall and tried to play it on his piano but no matter how many times he tried he ended up on d wrong note . Being tired, he decided to take a stroll. The weather was pleasant today, it was already autumn, and the leaves were spread across the path as he walked. Suddenly, he saw the same girl from his dream standing in front of him. He made a dash towards her. "Hey wait who r you ", he asked again. The girl turned to him and smiled. "I am d song to ur melodies ", she said. "What does u mean ", he asked baffled. "You will know soon ", and with that he lost his consciousness and when awaken found himself in his music room

PART 2

"How come I am here ", he thought. "Oh so you r awake Sir ", said his butler,You r working too hard for the concert, you slept here due to tiredness ". "What do u mean I slept , I was taking a stroll and then that ...oh my head hurts ...That girl where is she ", he asked. "You must have had a dream Sir, you were here and never left anywhere ", and his butler said looking weirdly at his employer. Judging by his weird looks , he thought ,I guess he is right , I am taking too much stress these days ".Although no matter how hard he tried he could not forget that girl and her song . Where could he find her? Is she real in d first place? or just a figment of his imagination.

 He looked outside his huge window admiring d nature and noticed there is still sometime for fall to b there so d butler was right , it might have been another dream , but he was getting more curious day by day to know about that girl in his dreams . "Master, should I serve the diner ", his butler asked him.

"Yeah sure, I am hungry, I will join u in a while ", he replied politely.

He turned to look through his window, the moonlight and the tranquility it always attracted him. He liked d calmness of the nature. He was gazing at the moon, when he thought he saw here there, but then let go of the thought and headed for diner. Unknown to him , this time she was actually there , gazing at the moon like him and also looking at his calm face ,We will meet soon .I promise ", she smiled and walked away in the silence of the night .

"Master, pardon my slackness, I forgot to hand over this letter to u ", his butler said apologetically handing him a letter.It's alright, I will read it later ". After d diner, he went to his study, opening d letter in hand, he was surprised to read d contents. He was asked by d principal of a prestigious music academy to teach their students. "Students ...huh ...I will think about it later , I have better things to concentrate upon , and I am doubtful these young people will show any interest in the music I play or take it seriously ", thinking he left the letter on the table and went to sleep . He found himself gazing at the moon and in the balcony he saw her standing. Her long hair covered her face as the mild wind blew.

"You think young people won't understand your art, do u, confident r we ", she smiled.

He moved closer, "And what makes u think, they will beside that who r you ". "I am the song to ur melody, ur unsaid feelings, I can put them into words for you.

Why won't u answer me without any riddles ", he demanded. "Be a little patient, you will find me, why don't u accept their offer, meeting with people will help u recover from ur loneliness ", she replied.

"Who r you, why r u in my dreams , will we meet ever ? Are u a reality ". "That is for u to decide ", saying this she vanished and again he was awake. He thought for sometime then called d academy and told them he will join after his concert.

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