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geet : maan suno na
Maan : geet please tell quick
i have work
geet : babaji inki shaadi mujhse kyun krwayi
office se krwa dete
Maan : tb tak tum is swal ka answer dundo
mein bs aaya
.
Saiyan Tu Kamaal Ka
Baatein Bhi Kamaal Ki
Saiyan Tu Kamaal Ka
Baatein Bhi Kamaal Ki 
Laaga Rang Jo Tera
Hui Main Kamaal Ki

        

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Geet : maan you remember that day
when i tell you about our baby
Maan : yes geet
this is beautiful moment in our life

Geet : maan how much you excited to learn 
how carry the baby
uska diaper change krna๐Ÿ˜ƒ
maan : hmm


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Maan : geet am not going your home town
Geet : why
Maan : i can't forget your family
how much eat my brain
am feeling like
am come from different planet๐Ÿ˜‰
geet : bs yhi tha pyaar aapka
sun rha hai tu beta๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
maan : geet he is just few months old
geet : toh
mera beta hai
mera sath denga
maan : geet stop your childish behaviour
geet : haww๐Ÿ˜ฒ
maan : close you mouth
tum kaho mein kr du๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
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sanju : yaad hai aapko wo din
jb hum sb the bekraar
maaneet ki shaadi ke liye๐Ÿ˜‰
priya : then wow what a wedding night
we blushed๐Ÿ˜ณ so much 
favo : kya magic tha wo๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

priya : par is kahani me kuch locha
sanju : bole toh maan ki bj rakhi hai band
favo : ye jaanane ke liye kre read next story
   

maan & geet : ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
ab kya kiye is writer ne humare sath
Maan : geet am telling you
am not going leave anyone
sanju : hum bhi kaha chahte hai
aap hume chode
favo : jaise hum aapko nhi chod paaye
priya : chodna hota rahenga
read story first
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Geet breath  hissed  when  his  sinful lips  touch  her  nape  of  neck  she  almost  shake  like  dry  leaf, with  his  open  mouth  ki**  he  have  ability  to  make  her  ...so  weak   with  his  sinful  torture...his  every  touch  by  his  long  finger  or  his  M shape  lips  or  his  body  ...make  her  crazy  in desire  she  want  more  ...hell  they  are  newly  married  and  today  is  their  first  day  of  HM  as  well  as  their  first  night ...because  they  want  to  become  one  in  their  place  their  destiny  place  Kashmir  heaven  of  earth.

 

After  fresh  up  she  come  inside  in kitchen  to  make  some  coffee  for  them . they  took  beautiful  cottage  come  bungalow  for  them ...for  their  HM...when  she  all  busy  to  make  coffee don't  know  he  come  from  behind  and  his  hand  rest on her  waist  ...and he slowly nuzzle  his  face  in  her  thick  hair  ...to  get  of  smell  of  her  shampoo  and  her also  ...her  smell  always  make  him  crazy ...he  place  pick  on her  head  than  slowly touch  her  ear  and  travel  small  small  kis*  on  her  shoulder  side  ...he push  her  scarf little  bit  aside  to  get  access  of  her  nude  skin  of  shoulder...his lips  touch  their  and  he  get  that  she  almost  stop  to  took  breath ...he  try  to  push  her  top  from  shoulder  to  get  more  access   ,next  moment  maaneet  jump  on  their  place  with  loud  ring  of  her  mobile  ...it's have   tune  ...Papaji  papaji  papaji  ...

 

Maan cluth  his  teeth ...but  geet  can  so  easily shift  to  daughter  mode  from  wife  mode ...she  is almost  jumping  on  her  father  call  ...

 

Oh  papa  I  miss  u  so  much  ...yes  we  reach  hear  safely  ,yes  he  is  ok  ,me  also  ok  ...ya  have  wonderful  place  ...ect  ect  she  almost  forget  that  his  husband  is  standing  near  him  they  both  are  in  between  their  closed  moment ...Their  love  their  closed desires  ...he was  on  fire  ..he  want  to  make  love  with  her  ...so  desperately  and  ...he  almost  start  his  mission  but  ...his  so  called  FIL (Gabbar of  his  love  story  come  marriage )  get  entry  on  wrong  time .

 

6  hour  main  koi kaise  kisko  miss  karta  hai  he  gritted  his  teeth  but  he  cannot  do  anything  ...till  her  chat  get  ended  with  HIS  SO  CALLED  GABBAR  means  his  FIL ...he  on fire  with  his  need  ...oh  god  ye  gabbar  ko  kahi  gaayab  kar  do  yaar he  say  in  his  mind  but  next  moment  sya  no  no  god  meri  geet  bahot  sad  ho  jaayegi  ...he  make  face on  his  thoughts .

 

Now  it's  more  than  20  min  and  chat  is  not  ending  at  last  maan  control  his  frustration  and  went  to  bathroom  side  and  thud  he  closed  bathroom  door  with  thud...  That  sound  of  door  brought  geet  from  chat  she  is  so  lost  in  papa  chat  ..she  foregt  that  she  is  with  her  husband  on  their  Hm  on their  SR pinky  already  alert  her  that  papa  ki  beti  se  jada  she  need  to  be   more husband  wife  ...it's  their  moment  ...ups  she  cut  the  call a nd  run  to  bathroom  side  to  monafy  her  angry  husband ...

 

She  mummer  babaji  please  save  me  ...and  she  with  shaking  hand  called  maanji  ...maanji ..maan  who  hell  angry  with  her  thou  he  hear  her  voice  but  ignore  it ...he  cooling  himself  mentally  as  well  as  physically also  (ahem ahem )...poor  boy ...he  make  him  dry  with  towel  and  wrap  a  towel  around  his  waist  and  come out   from  bathroom  he  passed  from  geet  like  she  is  not  present  there .totally  ignore  her ...but  poor  geet  almost  froze  in her  place  when  he  come  out  from  ...bathroom  his  aroma  plus his  soap  don't  what  he  use  ...always  make  her  dizzy  with  smell ..upon  that  he  caressed  his  wet  hair  and  result  is  come  water  drop  fall  on  geet  face  which  burn  her  more ...he  first  time  appear  on her  like  this  which  make  lsot  her  in  his  well  built  body  ...

 

She  don't  get  when  she  start  to  walk  to  his  side  and  come  really  closed  to  him  her  eyes  glued  on  his  hot body her  hand  itching  to  touch  him...it's  so  forbidden  for her  so  much ..sinful  So  dirty  thoughts  for  her  own husband  ( me saying  don't  worry  geet  u can he  is  your  own  property ).maan  smirk  on  wife  who  all  lost  in him...next  maan  clutch  his  own  palm  to  stop  his  own  moan when  her  soft  finger  touch  his  taunted  chaste...she  touching  him  like  this  first  time  so  many  cracker  bust  in his  body  ... he  so  much  want  to  closed  this  distend  and  love  her  endlessly ...next  moment  geet  rosy  lips  touch  his  skin  maan  almost  hold  her  hair  to  control  his  desire  ...he  going  to  pull  her  more  ... But  next  moment  shirk  of  mobile  and poor  geet  in  fear  harshly  bit  on  maan  chest  ...poor  boy  hissed  in  pain  and  cried  ahhh. geet teeth  almost  tear  his  skin ...

 

Geet  give  horror  look  to  maan  ...maan  gritted  his  teeth  he  going  to  say  something  mobile  get  silent  ...maan  come  out  from  geet  hug  and  walk  to  bedroom  side  with  anger  and  pain...its  again  her papaji  ...(gabbar  is  Back  )..

 

He  wear  his  cloth  but  bare  with  upper side  ...ahh  the  injury  is paining  he  feel ...like   brake  that  mobile  ...ahhh my  HM  going  to  flood  in  this  mobile  thanks  to  Gabbar .poor  maan  first  love  bite  form  geet  turn  an  injury  ...just  than  his  wife  dash  in  room  ...she  have  sorry  face ...she  come  with  medicine  before  he  stop  her  she  applied  a  medicine  on  his  ...chest  he  hissed little  with  contact  of  that  medicine  but  that  bought  tear  in  geet  eyes ...her  eyes passed  what  is  in  her  mind  ...maan  cannot  stand  for  her  tear  ...and  he  took  her  in  hug ...geet  blow  some  air  on  that  place  ...maan  push  her  more  to  himself  now  both  glued  each  other  and  both  body  start  to  react on  their  need  ...maan  once  look  to  her ...till  now  they  don't  even  share  their  ki**.

 

Maan  bend  little  to  her  lips ...but  stop  I  mid  first  he  check  for  her  mobile  and  when  he  don't  found  anything  he  took  deep  breath ...and  slowly  bend  geet  side  ...geet  closed  her  eyes  in fear .love  and  desire  their  first  k**. Maan  first  kis8*  her  forehead  than  softly  her  eyes  than  he  come  very  close  to her  rosy lips  which  is  always  tempted  him  from  first  meet  of  their ... He  slowly  brush  ...his  lips  to  her  lips  ...a  current  passed  from both  body  ...next  moment  maan open  his lips to took  geet  rosy lips inside  his  ...his  mobile  ringed  loudly  ...(  gabbar  is  back  gabbar  is  back ) ...and  poor  maan  froze  on  his  place  ..their  first  kis*  get  failed  like  anything ...

 

Geet  irritated  with  ...mobile  and  horrified   maan  gulp  hard  ...geet face  turn  hard  and  angry  with  maan  select  tune  for  her  father  number  she  ...stamp  her  feet  and  went  out  from  room ...

 

Maan  cried ahhhe  almost  pull  his  hair  ...in frustration  .

 

He  took  call  and heard  ...u  tackle  me  with  marriage  but  HM  ka  bhool  javo  MSK...its  challenge  form  Mohinder  handa  .

 

And  before  maan  say  anything  line  get  dead ...

 

Its  mg  love  marriage  geet  is  single  parent  baby  so  mr  Handa  is  always  possessive  about  her  ..and  result  is  no  kis*  till  today  he  chided  on  his  luck  . Mr.  Handa  always  hate  him.  Because  geet  love and  attention   get  divided  because  of  maan  .maan  try  his  best  to  come  in  his  good book  but  Mr.handa  aloofness  toward  him not  help it.

 

Other  side  geet  fuming  in  anger  who  could  be  give  name  as  gabbar  to  iN  law  ...she  took  deep  breath  but  he  is  not totally  wrong  na  papa  bhi  till  now  accepted  him ..she took  deep  breath .till  now  maan  also  come  down  he  want  to  say  something  but  ...geet mummer  sorry  and  hug  maan .both  seat  on  sofa  both  souls  so  much  effecting  with  each  other  closeness.  they  so  much  want  to  do  but  alas  ...both  souls  terrified  with  mobile .at  last  geet  make  mind  and  switch  off both  mobile .

 

Maan  mouth  open  in  perfect  O  shape  he  look  her  with  disbelieve  till  now  he  make  his  mind  Hm  to  dur  ki  baat  hai  sr  bhi  nahi  hogi  but  geet  action...

 

Poor  souls  before  come  out  from  shock  geet  almost  stole  their  first  k***than  next  easy to  maan  and  maan  took  geet  in  arm  ..to  bedroom  and  both  lost  in their  passion ...now  that  moment  come  when  they  going  to  become  in  one  all  sense  ...maan  once  look  to  her  like  asking  her  permission  ..  maan  bend  to  last  step   ...but  next  moment  maaneet  face  turn  white  as  ghost  when  ...hotel  landline  shirk  in  loud  voice ...

 

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago
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Maan : geet what r u doing ..with chuckling face.

Geet eating big size cake piece : wh..at ..maan.. with munching cake in her mouth.

Maan: geet , kid also eat neatly than u with rolling eyes.

Geet show her beaten cake to maan : u eat , maan..its so yummy ..while wiping her chocolate lip through her tongue.

Maan chuckled face: yuck .. u eat ..

Geet  murmur : how robot know taste of food ..


Priya: yes geet, how he knew taste of chocolate ..

sanju: then u know with raised eye brow ..

favo : uff.. maan and geet fight never ending like they also ๐Ÿ˜†..

Guys u enjoy edit , i enjoy their fighting ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


                      

Edited by maaneetfavo - 6 years ago
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Geet:maan
Maan: hmmm
Geet: maaannn
Maan: haan geet bolo mein sunn raha hoon
Geet:maan muje darr lagraha hai...
Maan:darr!?Par kyun geet kya hua...
Geet:maan yeh priya na phir se new thread open kiya humare liye..Patah nahi iss baar kya karne wali hai aap khey sath...
Maan:mere sath!?Uss bechari ne humesha mere sath accha hi kiya geet..Tum bhi na๐Ÿ˜‰
Geet: haan haan uss priya ne aap khey sath bohoth accha kiya bas muje hi humesha rulathi hai...Iss baar uss se bolo muje ek hot boy friend chahiye๐Ÿ˜†
Maan: boy friend!?Geet tumhari dimag teek hai mere hothey hue tumhe bf chahiye..Hot wale...๐Ÿ˜ก
Geet:haan kyun nahi priya ne aap koh kitni gf diya list lambi hai maan...Bas muje bhi ek doh chahiye hot and happening wale๐Ÿคฃ
Maan:geettt
Geet:maaan
Kalpi:sanju di yeh kya hai...
Sanju:yeh priya ka banaya hua khichdi...Chalo next post par chal they hai
Priya: looking confused๐Ÿ˜ฒ
 

Edited by SANJANA9167 - 6 years ago
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sanju : mujhe toh lagta tha
ye bs priya rulati hai

priya : you again started sanju๐Ÿ˜†
Sanju : don't talk with me
why you not tell me isme maaneet alag ho gye hai๐Ÿ˜ญ
priya : i love when you cry and shout ๐Ÿ˜†
i feel my day get completed
sanju : dekha tune kalpi
ye ladki humesha asa krti hai๐Ÿ˜ก
priya : am loving it kalpi๐Ÿ˜ƒ
favo : uff ho๐Ÿ˜›
di
maaneet end me toh sath hai na
             ***********
geet : suna maan aapne
ye hume alag kr rhe hai
maan : i also listen story have happy ending
geet : i don't liking going far away from you
maan : hmm
        *************

priya : don't worry readers
happy ending hai๐Ÿ˜ƒ
hum maaneet ko kaise alag chod sakte hai
ye sanju na thoda jyada react kr deti hai ๐Ÿ˜‰
see below post 
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Move  on ...

 

Maan  hand  shake  when  he  put  key to  open the door  of  his house  their  house  their dream  house .His gaze went to name  plate  of  door.

MR.Maan Singh  Khurana  MRS. Geet Maan Singh  Khurana

 

He never  force  her  to  change  her  name  but  she  is  always  bolati  thi  muje  to  apke  rang  main  rang  jana  hai  MSK..maan  somehow open door  of  house  their  house  they  make  it  with  their  love ..when  his  family  refused  to  accept  as bahu and  his  wife  .tab  muje  aur  geet  ko  papaji (geet  father ) ne hai  bahot suopport  kiya  tha  ye  chotasa  gharonda un dono  ke  sapno ka ...banane main

He  remove  his  shoes  out itself  a  soft  smile appear  on  his  face  He  remind  how  geet  hide  his  shoes  when  he  don't  removed it outside of house .after  her  strict instruction . ... Maan  ki  rukhi  suhki  zindgi  main  she come  as  beautiful  song  but today he lost ...he  gulp  in  pain he  feel his  heart  having  immune  pain.

 

He walk  to   A  big  window  of  living  room  its  geet  personal  space  she  want this  big  window  ...where  she  can  seat  and  usko  waha time  bitna  ya  fhir u  kahu  mera  intazzar karna  bahot  acha  lagata  tha ...kintne baar (how  many  time)  he  saw  her  sleeping  in  there  in  that  window edge  with waiting  for him...he  touch  that  place  he  feel  his  touch  there...do  u  he feel  this  touch  again  maan  ( maan  heart  ask  him)...few tear  gather  in  his  eyes  but  he control  that  and  move  on  from  that  place ...he  while  seat  on  sofa  ...two  seated  sofa  its  her  choice  so  whenever  they  seat  their  There  should  be  no  distance  between them  they can seat  very  closed  to  each  other .. don't  know  kaha  se  idea  aate  thei  uske  dimag  main  ...lakin  abhi  jo  distance  aa  gaya  hai  uska  kya  maan  (  again  maan  heart  ask  him)...he  stand  from sofa  that  touch  burn  him.

 

He  went  to  bedroom  side  their  bedroom  full  of  red  and  black  combination  its  he  think  always  its  world verse  combination  for Bedroom  but  black is  his  fev  and  red is  her ..he  is  ready  for  adjust  but  she  not  she  want  their  bedroom  should  be  both  choice ... Both  choice  like  now situation  also  both  choice  ...it's  their  room where  they  become  one in  all  sense  two  body  one soul.  he  chuckle  with  memory  of their  first  night  ...he

 

He seat  on  bed  and  lost  in  past ...how  much  she  make  fuss ...she  is  hell  nervous  ..thou  they  have  love  marriage  but  she  always  be  shy for  intimacy  so  maan  also never  push  her ...for  that  he  wait  for  the  day  their  first  night ...She  almost  get  terrified  when  maan  removed  his  cloth  and  she  watch ahem  ahem ...maan  almost  coo  her  like  small  kid  who  is  terrified  with  unknown  fear ...She  so  much  scared  but  want  to  fulfil their  dream  of one  soul  she  want  to  become  one  in all  sense ...she  almost  cried  in  his  hug  ...that  night  he  love  her  like  he  loving  some  delegated  flower  ...but  after that  night  she took  perfect  u  turn  always  demanding  ...  Demanding  ...maan  come  out  from  past  ...that  time  her  demand  was  Love  and  today  her  demand  was ...move...he  stand  with  shock  ...he  almost  run  out  from  room.

 

He  took  deep breath  ...he feel  thirst  he  went  to  kitchen  side  and  took  glass  of  water  his  eyes  land  on her  radio  ...kitchen  she  and  radio  deadly  combination ...he  took  that  in his  hand  and start it ...there  start  her  fev  song ...Arjit  singh ...

He  stand  their  ...

 

Tenu itna main pyaar karaan

Ek pal vich sau baar karaan

Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke

Maut da intezaar karaan

 

That  songs  lyrics  make  bleed  his  heart ...he  is going  away  she  is  going  away  ..fist  he  always  make  fun  on  this  sentence that  its  not  practical  aisa  nahi  hota   but  today  he get  the  true  meaning  of  this  words

 

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake (x2)

Yes  he  also  do same  thing  na  for  their  love  he  refuse  khurana  empire  for  their  love ...fhir  ajj kya  ho gaua  ye  itna  bada  Ego  kaha  se  aa gaya  his  heart  again  ask  him..

 

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan

Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

 

Is  he  really  live  without  her  ..jo  uske  zindgi ke  har  ek pal  main  sama  gai  hai  uski  jaan  rooh  tak  chu  gai  hai  is  he  really  going  to  move  on...

 

Just  then  his  eyes  land on  calendar  he  so  much  laugh  on  her when  she  put  calendar  on  wall  ...he  called  him outdated ...he  never  saw  that  ...now  he saw  some  word  on  it  something  written  on  it .he  took  that  in his  hand  and  move  to  living  area  he  seat  and  look  in  it  so  many notes ...milk ,newspaper  ,gas ,society  maintence  ..he  flip  to  each  page  ...last  11  month  ki  each  and  every  things  ki  ..note  it's  like  diary  . Unki  marriage  life  ki  dairy  11  month  of  their  marriage  ...he went  to  first  page ...on  one  date  she  circle  in  red  but  no  note  on  that  date  ...and  date  is 25-  he  try  to  remind  that  date  kya  tha  us  din  unki  shadi  ko  10  din  hi  hui  thei  why  she  circle  like that ...

 

He  closed  his  eyes  and  try to  remind  hardly  ...after  few moment  his  eyes  open  in shock  ..her  first period  after  their  marriage  and  his  first  fight  ...he  lost  in  past from  more  geet  behaving  different  bahot  dur  dur  baahg  rahi  thi ...and  he  have  holiday  that  he  want  to  love  her  only  but she  is  not  giving  chance  ...At  last  he  almost  cage  to  wall  and  ki**  her  heard ...he  start  to  lost  in  her but  her  body  turn  stiff  ...and  he  took  as  insulted  ..without  any  word  he  went  from there ...He  have  to  ask  but  his  nature  he  went  out  and  come  really  late  in night  ...when  he  come  he again  found  her  near  window  ...  He  thou  angry  with  her but  he  took  her  in his  arm  and  make  her lay  down  on  bed  ..she  carrying  a  paper  in hand  ...

 

With  surprised  he  took  that  and  read  ...his  eyes  winded  in  shock  she  written  (  sorry  maan  wo  mera  wo  ...my  period  get  start  in  morning  so ...)he  closed  his  eyes  in frustration  what  he  done  ...bol  deta to  ye  nahi  hota  na na  saayed tumare  relation  main  bahi  wahi  hua  na  MSK , Your so  called  khurana  family  say  something  about  her and  u  believe sometime  eyes  se  dekhi  hui  cheej bhi  sach  nahi  hoti ,  do  you  try  to  check  its  true  or  not  or  else  u discuss  with  her  about  that  bas  khamosh  (silent ) ho  gaye  may  be  your  family  is  not  wrong  laking  syaaed  geet  bhi galat  nahi  hogi  to  ...u  RE  THE  ONE   who  brought  ego  in  this  beautiful  relation  than  she  follow  same  she  is  also  GMSK  na  to  ego  main  thodi  kam  hogi   ...maan heart  again  say  yes  bola  hota  to ye  hota  nahi  na  MSK saayead

 

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin

Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley

Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

 

He  again  flip  other  page  ...every  month  25 ,26  should  be  circle  ...he  get  that  ...he  search  for  ongoing  month  circle  but  there  is  none .. circle  nahi  tha  waha  ...he  get  confused  is she  forget  ...but  next  moment  his  eyes  winded  in shock , reality  hit  him  hard  ..he  come  here  to  take  his  certificate  and  cloth  because  they  are  filing  Divorce  case  tom...

 

He  punch  some  number  on  mobile  and  start  to  wait  desperately ...his  walking  as  lion  ...fro  and  back  his  heart  ruing  in  full  speed ..in 15  min  door  bail  get  ring  ...

He  almost  run  to  door  and  before  she  react  any  way  he  took  her  to  washroom side ...He  put  somting  in  her  hand  and  show  her  washroom  side

 

Thou  she is  hell  angry  with  him..she  don't  want  to  come  here  but  his  voice  something  in it  ..and  now  his  face  ,eyes  saying  smoothing ...she  once  look  to  her  palm  that  what  he  put  in it  ..her  eyes  winded  in  shock  its  pregnancy test   kit ...Some  tear  appear  on  her  eyes  she  once  look  to  him ...he  assured  her  with his  eyes  and  ...she  entered in  washroom  ..

 

 

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

 

He  feel  like  each  moment  turn  as  year  ...for  him  ...he  wait  for  her  but  door  don't  get  open  ..but  he  heard   a  cry  and  next  moment  he  dash  inside  wash  room ...

 

Her  eyes  shining  she  crying  and  laughing...same  time ...song  playing  in  background  and  maan  took  his geet  in his  embrace ..in  his  hug ...

 

Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein

Ki chehre se teri na hatein

Neendon mein meri bas tere

Khwabon ne li hai karwatein

 

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein

Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

 

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

 

 

 

Yes  both  soul  Move  on  in true   manner  as  would  be  ma  papa ...

 

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Maan : i love to hold you close to me
geet : i also feel secure in your arms
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priya : but twist toh bnta hai
favo : no twist di
priya : but i love twist kalpi๐Ÿ˜‰
sanju : dekh priya
here no twist๐Ÿ˜ก
priya : you really think sanju i stop ๐Ÿ˜†
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geet : now from where twist come
Maan : relax geet
geet : how can i relax
maan : oh god
writer krte hai
sunana mujhe pdta hai
geet : maan 
you always take writer side
maan : then what i do
tell me
any solution
geet : ๐Ÿ˜ญ
maan : misthy i hate tears in your eyes
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sanju : we too
but kuch writer na kuch nhi smjhte
priya : what you want to say
sanju : jo tune smjha
favo : not again please
.
friends ye toh sb chalta rahenga
you all read next story

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No, please don't do this, please leave us in peace. She cries out of her helpless. Why are you behind us? Please leave him, please. I pleaded you.  She finally joined her hands infront this heartless monster, who not deserve her plead but she is helpless here to do that as she can't see her love getting beaten by this monster and she can't do anything other than pleading him. 

I don't need your pleading sweetheart but I want you fully, whole of you, by your body or soul of yours, all are mine.

He kissed her furiously saying this claiming his words on her. 

You are just mine, only mine. 

He has her cage in his arms and his men's beating her life there. Yes her life, her love. And she is crying continuously in his arms to see her love in this condition because of her. 

He was holding her close to him as he will not let anyone touch his jaan. Nor he would give pain or bruises on he soft hands by tieng her to something. Which are only to love him but she didn't and she isn't love him, why, why... he furiously heat on the soul reason with his foots.

MAAAN... SHE SCREAMS...  

 

Part 1

 

MAAN... she screams in so much anger and hatred for this man who is soul reason for her love in pain now. She looks at her love lovingly who is bleeding so much because of continues beating by his mens. 

Dare you screamed at me like that again, dare you darling, I love you madly, it's not mean you can scream on me like this. You scream as much as you want my name but that only with love for me and at the time of our honeymoon. On our married night, you get that jaan. When, I will be inside you. Will make you mine with your body and soul.

She disgustingly move her face sideways only to be taken by him harshly  ,He nibble her soft lips again, licking the blood on that, making her hissed in pain of his passion. And she wriggled yet again in his arms to get free which was not possible still she try, but all her straight leaving her body with the bleeding sight of her love.

You baster , leaved her now. Rajeev try to get up seeing his love is getting abused by this monster named MAAN SINGH KHURANA. 

As he try to stand but only got bitten again by his mens finally going into unconsciousness. 

Rajeev , no,, Rajeev, wake up. She tries to go there but he was not leaving her, he will not let her touch other man than himself. 

Rajeev... wake up lo...Before she says more got her lips lock in his own. And he passionately kissed her out of fury.

You will not call anyone these words, they are just meant for me, you understand jaan. You can call me love, dear sweetheart, whatever as your wish jaan. 

He calmly said her caressing her soft lips with his thumb. Wanting to taste them again but he have more works to do now and have her in there married night which is not so long, he smirk on his thoughts.

You are monster, you are insane. She spites her hatred on his face.

Yes jaan. I am. He calmly reply to her with pure devil reside in him which only want this angle for himself.

I am insane for you. He added roughly.

Take him out and do something of his body and make sure nothing should be finding by anyone, he ordered his mens. And geet gasp to hear like that of her love.

No, no you can't do this, she again try.

Yes I can jaan as he is hurdle in our way, he is coming between us.

No, please, maan leave him, I will do whatever 

You have to do jaan either he live or not.

No she gasp with anguish to think even on that line.

If he keep his mouth shut and don't come in between us, then I can leave him but if... He leaves his sentence glaring at her with his red eyes to see her pain for that boy. He wanted to kill that boy but he can't see her in pain. 

He took her lips again to calm down his anger. geet just lost all her all hopes now to live with her love happily.  

 

Part 2

 

khurana mansion was decorated beautifully for the marriage of only heir of family, MAAN SINGH KHURANA. This so sudden as 1 hour before only this thing was decided, their marriage, maan and geet. And all the arrangements have done in haste. But now everything is ready. Groom was in mandap and there comes a called her the bride to come down seat beside groom for further marriage rituals. 

Her parents are happy not for her but they was saved from getting humiliated in this society because of their daughter who is the reason to bring shame on them as she decline the marriage with her boyfriend whom she claimed to love  and he also don't show up. But she herself declined it first that why he also didn't come as they got called form his parents on that. They are too much furious and already had disowned her as they are on the edge of getting humiliated in guests which were present there. But khurana family who is well known in this city or business world saved them. And MAAN SINGH KHURANA got ready to married with their daughter after all this fiasco also. They are really grateful to him and his family which include his sister and his dadima along with his brother. 

Geet   got ready without any emotions, though she was ready for her previous marriage with her love. She dream so much for that. But all her dreams got crush by this monster who make his words true like he warn her before that she have to marry with him only. She cry silently again as she remember rajeev's state. 

Finally marriage take place with all people present there in front of god and fire. She take step to her parents to bide them as it is vidaai right now but her parents turn their face form her which hurt her really as what is her fault in this, this monster played his game, and here she is suffering in this with her love.

Mom. She called her once, her mother also not believing her or let her speak also , they only blamed her for their reputation, which was on high place that their love for their daughter or there is any love for he now she is suspicious or just mere responsibility which got fulfilled today with her marriage.

Her parents bless her not by heart but in the eyes of guests as they can't make them suspicious again on their behavior.

GEET just goes with her husband MAAN SINGH KHURANA. Not return again to this house as she knows her parents has abonded her now. 

 

Part 3

 

It is there marriage night now. She felt shiver run down in her spine to even think on this line but nothing can be done now as he will be here any moment to claim her. She is sweating badly in ac room also. 

Room door got open; she heard his footsteps which are coming her way. He came like lion entered his den and seat in front his pray which is sweating badly out of fear.  

Jaan.. She heard again this four words which felt like lava to her ears but she can't do anything, she have to hear this for lifelong. He lift her ghoonght and see magnificent beauty infront own eyes, he can't take his eyes off her; just continue to stared at her which make her uncomfortable. And she wriggles a bite and that got his attention. He holds her hand and she gasp with his touch.

Today I will love you like eternity, jaan. He huskily said his desire which form long time buried in his heart keeping his hand on his cheek to feel her soft touch on own self.

She quickly pulled her hands from his clutch with fear of what he said. Her chest start to move up and down with his intention and he look at it and desired filled his eyes.

He pulled her closer by her waist and almost makes her seat on his lap. She gasps with his move and try to wriggle out. But his next set of words make her stop her moves.

Geet just loved me tonight and forever and let me do also same, I will not do any bad thing with your parents nor this boy... he spoke dangerously each word speaking hatred for Rajeev. 

And she stop her moves and looked at him sacredly as she get the meaning of his words and knew that he will do what he is saying as this monster has almost killed Rajeev if nothing for her.

She sat silently there scared for his next move as she knows now there was nothing which she can do now. All things can done by him only MSK.

Maan smirk as he saw her stop on is words. His gaze turns more passionate to see her bare waist, he snake his hands there and she moan in pure bliss forgetting all things which shock her also and him. Now he will definitely make her fall for him head over heal like he is in her love insane. He smirks.

Geet look at him with opened mouth at his advancements which arouse him further. And he took her petals in his mouth giving her full mouth kiss and hold her hands keep them on his neck and she started to massaged him but not knowing how to kiss as this man only who stolen her first kiss but she didn't know how to kiss neither her boyfriend kiss her nor she let him do . They never crossed there limit before marriage. But, marriage which was never happens. 

Thinking of all this few tears flow from her eyes and he tasted that along with kiss. He at once angrily broke the kiss but control his anger for his jaan. He kissed her tears away making her looked at him surprisingly and she saw pure love and passion for her in his eyes along with care. She never notices his eyes before nor his feelings for her. But it was true now she get it. But she can't forgive for what he had done with her love, Rajeev. 

Maan again come to her lips and this time kissed them softly like eating some ice-cream.

Geet do the same which I am doing, he knows she didn't know how to kiss and he is the one to steal her first kiss and he will be the last one also. He feel proud to think that she is all his now.

Geet slowly reluctantly kiss him the way he does and she got lost in his lips and without her knowledge kissed him passionately, adding to his victory. 

He slowly makes her lay down on bed without breaking his lips forms her. And throw her dupptta on floor and started to take out  her necklace and that brought her out of her lost sense she gasp in his mouth , what she is doing. Before she comprehends he again kissed her passionately making her lost in him. 

He one by one took her all jewelries kissing on each part. And she lay there lost in his spell. He smirks on his effect on her and she was denying continuously. 

He stand up to take out his cloths and she opened her eyes getting out of his spell and immediately seat up and look at him with anger . 

What are you looking at me jaan. You should save our time by making yourself naked for me or I do that. Let me do myself as it is my right. 

He said authoratively coming closer to her. And she sacredly crawled back on bed. He gets on bed and pulled her close to own and pulled her all strings of her blouse making her back all bare for him. He took that thing throw on floor making her gasp in fear and she quickly hides her bare body from his piercing eyes with her hands. 

He pulled her hands from her ch*** and press them either side of her head on bed with his hands, and buried his face in her che**. 

MAAAN... No... Please 

She wriggles first but later got lost in his spell and reciprocates him giving him more access to her neck.

He took off her all cloths along with him and started to shower his love on her.

She was moaning continuously his name in pure bliss as he was showering her all over her body with wet kisses not leaving her single part also. And she is withering under him. She was tired of this resistance now which seems to not happening as her body was not listening her women hormones got alive with his touch which in past never happen with rajeev's one touch also though they never done like this but here maan's only single touch was doing some magic on her body blocking her brain completely. 

She finally let go of her guards as she feel truly loved by someone in her whole life which she didn't feel this feeling before which he was making her feel now, not even with Rajeev also. Not even her own parents have time for her always in their own world busy not knowing what she wants. They just disowned her which she thinking now from long time only they maybe wanted this. Few tears spilled from her hazels making maan look at her.

Jaan, he softly called her gaining her attention towards him. He kissed her ears away and she let him do that. As she really feel special when he done that.

On the other hand maan was so much enjoying their love making as she responding to his touch. He wants to love her till eternity like this. But her tears always make him restless, he feel pain. Why she didn't understand his pain to see her tears.

He again start shower of seeing he calm down. He loved her like she was some glass doll and will shatter once he will take wrong step. He kisses was soft. Bites are soft like he is controlling himself. He caressing her every part of her body with his rough hands making her moan is named in pleasure.

She just got spell bounded in his love. As he is treating her like some flower. She holds his back tightly with her hands let him know her will for making love. He got her signal and his kisses turn harsh now, he roughly started to kiss now on her every body part. He chews her b*****, nibble her. And she just is screaming his name in pure bliss like he had asked her before.

Finally he enter in her making her his with soul and body. She screams his named and few tears spilled on her cheek out of pain and pleasure.

Jaan.. You ok.. Did I hurt you.. He asked with all the worry and love in this world that she just cry out hugging him. How can someone love her insanely he proved that tonight. She thought. But will she be able to forgive for his sin; yes he did the sin only. Will she be able to forget her first love, didn't she did cheating to rajeev's love but he is her husband and it is his right, so from where this cheating come. She was in dilemma now, 

Jaan you ok. He asked her seeing her lost. He was caressing her bare back taking her in his arms. She blushes with the thought of her bare in his arms. It is the first time he see her blush for him. He feels so happy. 

She tries to move from there so that she can wear her cloths and sleep on her place but he keep his hold more strong on her not letting her moved a bit. 

Where are you going jaan. He asked lovingly.

I want to wear my cloths and sleep on my place, she coyly answer him what she want not meeting is eyes keeping her head down only.

Why you need cloths when I am here. He asked her cupping her ******. She moans with his touch and hide herself in his arms shying away with his comment...

maan please, let me go . She tries once futilely, still hiding in his arms. 

Nope. You are not going anywhere. I will not let you go away from me. You are meant to be stay in my arms. You are caged in my arms forever and ever.

With his words she looked at him lovingly and he took her lips in his own and both again got lost in their passion.

 

The end

Edited by priya_21 - 6 years ago